goodbye wrote:

Nice song

Leorda wrote:

goodbye wrote:

Nice song

thx, and that's all?

goodbye wrote:

Pokie said she will mod it

1. Remove lyric template.psd and t3.psd from SB/ folder. (strange, AIBat didn't found this...)

1. 00:04:783 (3) - I just wish you could make a better encircle here:
   
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   244,136,4783,2,0,B|219:84|256:27|311:28,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:15:569 (3) - In order to make this 1-2-3 pattern symmetrical, you probably would like to place (3) at 377;115 position.
   
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3. 01:05:457 (9) - According to the music, this is not 1/4. That should be 1/2. Something like that:
   
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4. Kiai is a pure overmap. Most of the triples, doubles, streams do not make any sense.
   1. 01:51:637 (3,4,5) - There is no triple in the music.
   2. 01:52:395 (2,3) - Same here.
   3. 01:52:901 (5) - Same here.
   4. 01:53:575 (2) - Same here. Actually, all the triples are not mapped to the music. You just set them there without a valid reason. I'll not point out any triples anymore since they all are the same.
   5. 01:53:996 (4,5) - These doubles do not represent anything from the music, additionally, they miss a really loud bass sound at 01:54:165 -
   6. 01:54:839 - The slider should end here (or at 02:06:805 (1) - ). There is nothing at the blue tick.
   7. 01:56:019 (1) - 02:01:412 (1) - 02:05:457 (1) - 02:06:805 (1) - Same here.
   8. 01:59:389 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is the biggest issue here. Totally overmapped and unneeded stream which doesn't sound in the music at all.
   9. 02:03:603 - The slider should end here, you miss a loud bass sound again.
   10. 02:04:783 (4,5,6,7) - Same issue with doubles and missed bass.

1. 00:21:637 (1,2,3,4,1) - If you want to fit instrumentals better (which are the most preferrable to follow here due to their high accent), change the rhythm that way (claps are at end and start of (3)):
   
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2. 01:03:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is really cluttered and hard to understand. One of the problems is that first 1/4 slider is closer to (3)'s start but not end. That confuses and makes people feel that (3) should be reversed slider too. I'd suggest to change it that way to make it more readable and playable:
   
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3. 01:05:457 (5) - Same as in Lunatic, this is not 1/4 but 1/2.
4. 01:05:457 (5) - This is really very insane. Place sliders at least somewhere. It's hard to read and play when it's just a mess of 1/2, some of which are stacked and some not. Way too hard for this diff. Additionally, you should make a difference in rhythm between 01:22:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:24:333 (1,2,3,4) - because of the difference in music (as you did in Lunatic).
5. 01:26:356 - This note is too loud and important to be ignored. Place a circle here and move the spinner later.
   
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6. 01:43:041 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is wrong. The triples are not on the right places, try this:
   
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7. 02:05:962 (2,3) - Spacing error.

1. 3.20 stars is way too high for me for an easiest diff. I'd like to see an Easy with something around 2 stars in every map. Beginners also want to play nice songs c: Even if not talking about star rating, the diff overall looks too hard for an easiest one.
2. 00:39:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd not place such a pattern in the easiest diff. If you are going to make another Easy, then it's fine, but I'd make more sliders here.
3. 01:28:041 (1) - This is really too close to the spinner! I'd remove this note and would add another one at 01:28:378 - (as closer to the screen center as possible)
4. And this is the only diff that doesn't have a spinner in the end. That's quite strange since this diff should be easier than the rest.

grumd wrote:

01:53:996 (4,5) - These doubles do not represent anything from the music, additionally, they miss a really loud bass sound at 01:54:165 -

I don't know how to fix this.... can you show me an example?

SPOILER

Pokie wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Hello R.D.A.L.E.O, a further modd- wait, eveless didn't mod this xD

　General

1. Please remove those psd backups before uploading!

　Storyboard

1. Lyrics checks:
   
   • - 1.png - 翻弄されてゆく
     - 5.png - 鼓動はやがて
     - 33.png, 34.png - 引き寄せ is a complete word. // I seprate it for following vocal part
     - 37.png - 重なってゆく

　Normal

• 00:39:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It's not recommended for a overusage of stacking. I'd wonder if you can change them into 1/1 sliders instead.
  [list:6e820]- If you're lazy:
  

  416,220,39165,6,0,P|440:176|440:128,1,90.0000005960464
  384,72,39839,2,0,P|360:116|360:164,1,90.0000005960464
  296,224,40513,6,0,P|192:232,1,90.0000005960464
  160,152,41187,2,0,P|249:145,1,90.0000005960464,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  320,88,41861,6,0,P|280:56|224:56,1,90.0000005960464
  152,56,42535,2,0,P|114:51|74:19,1,90.0000005960464,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  16,88,43210,6,0,P|40:184,1,90.0000005960464,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  120,144,43884,2,0,P|144:240,1,90.0000005960464,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  232,256,44558,5,4,0:0:0

01:03:434 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know if you're mapping with grid snap, disable it and place these with a constant spacing?
01:28:041 (1) - 1/1 beat space for a song with over BPM 160 isn't friendly for an easiest difficulty imo, I'd suggest to delete this single note.
01:54:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 1/1 circles*7 seems quite much, how about swapping 01:56:693 (3,4) - to solve this problem? // I don't think so

　Hard

• 00:33:771 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking these manually too? It's the only combo which using auto-stack from this part.
  

  0,40,33771,5,4,0:0:0
  0,44,34108,1,0,0:0:0
  0,48,34446,1,0,0:0:0
  0,52,34783,1,0,0:0:0

  
  01:22:311 - Current AR7 can't really deal with these 1/2 streams imho, instead of doing changes of AR, try this suggestion?
  
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  440,284,82311,5,4,0:0:0
  380,344,82479,2,0,P|352:372|312:372,1,60
  364,264,82816,1,4,0:0:0
  292,232,82985,2,0,P|292:192|312:172,1,60
  288,312,83322,5,4,0:0:0
  212,268,83490,2,0,P|140:252,1,60
  60,316,83828,1,4,0:0:0
  32,152,83996,2,0,P|90:165,1,60
  204,140,84333,5,4,0:0:0
  128,56,84502,2,0,P|69:42,2,60,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  
  01:26:019 (4) - Extend this slider by 1/4 beat, so it could have a finish on slider's tail? (And move the starting point of 01:26:440 (1) - this spinner 1/4 forward for sure)
  
  
  01:37:648 (2) - How about using Normal sample set to coodinate with the music?
  01:57:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Reminds me Rondo of fantasy <3 // Reminds me of Rondo of gay
  01:59:221 (2) - Same with 01:37:648
  02:05:962 (2) - Probably a spacing error appeared, please fix it properly.
  02:08:153 - Similar suggestion with 01:26:019, I'd like a note here.
  
  
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　Lunatic

1. Complicated rhythm, low spacing, high AR. :notreallyokay:
2. On my own sight, AR8 performs well enough. // No, because I want this diff is more challenging
   01:22:311 (1) - I was expecting for a jump here, since you just had some triples on previous combo.
   
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   02:08:153 - Same opinion with Hard c:

I'll keep the following opinion here since you're doing changes.

Epic storyboard

YGOkid8 wrote:

just dropping in to say that i think 1st two breaks should be mapped. the small sections afterwards are essentially the same as the breaks beforehand, so it shouldn't be difficult to do. i think so because break 3 is more or less dead middle of the map, so it's placement is perfect.

Garven thinks contrarily and says that breaks 1 and 3 should be mapped, but the 2nd break stay.

YGOkid8 wrote:

well i start uni tomorrow, i may not have time to mod. anyway:

00:33:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i still can't get over this. there's plenty of things in the vocals and rhythm you can map to, rather than just the synth going 1/1. the synth isn't even going 1/1 all the way through. every 2 bars, it uses quite a bit of 1/2s. listen from 00:35:120 to 00:36:468 carefully, and you might hear what i mean.

otherwise, there's always the drum track or the vocals. even if they're repetitive, it can't be any more than it is right now. anyway i'm free to discuss this in-game if you want. i haven't really looked over the map in detail, but that part sticks out quite a bit, and not in a good way.

SPOILER

1. 02:09:502 - Starting the spinner here instead, or
2. 02:10:850 - Start the spinner here, and end at 02:13:547 and silence the spinner. Naturally, map up to before that point as well.

YGOkid8 wrote:

Easy:
00:33:771 (1,2,3) - How about shortening all of these by 1/1? That way, you don't get icky overlap, and easy players also have more time to prepare before the next long slider. // That's useless
00:39:165 (3) - And NC.
01:02:086 (2,3,4,5,6) - I know I said to move the (6), but something's still doesn't feel too right... perhaps move them all into a more smooth arc? Here, let me show you:

SPOILER

288,240,64108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,64783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,264,65457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,66131,1,4,0:0:0:0:

01:19:614 (1) - No NC.
01:38:490 (1) - I thought I mentioned something like this, but normal head? And anywhere else where you had a combo of normal hits but when you used a soft finish you didn't use... you get what I mean, yeah?
01:43:884 (1) - Normal head and end.

Normal:
01:28:715 (1) - Didn't expect this when test playing. Reason I missed is because I expected more spinner recovery. Could just be me, but hey just thought I'd point it out in case it wasn't. Delete or keep, up to you.

Hard:
00:42:872 (4,1) - Ergh, I think this jump is a bit big for this Hard. 4.7x spacing O.o? Changing this would mean having to change this section though. It's a minor problem, but yeah. // I don't think so~ If someone say this, I'll fix
01:26:018 (4) - I think would be more intuitive if you -1 return and add Hitcircle instead.

Should be ready for bubble after changes.

Leorda wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

Easy:
00:33:771 (1,2,3) - How about shortening all of these by 1/1? That way, you don't get icky overlap, and easy players also have more time to prepare before the next long slider. // That's useless

168,76,63434,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,120,63771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,208,64108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,292,64446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,324,64783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,284,65120,2,0,B|300:244|272:182,2,90.0000005960464
320,360,66131,1,4,0:0:0:0:

1. Snapping the timing points about kiai time on Lunatic plz~ (honestly the all inherited points on that diff should be delayed 2ms for snap~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. Circle size 2 is really excessive even for a Easy diff.. it looks swollen and really weird during play.. imo CS 3 is totally enough~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:55:346 (1) - maybe make a upward curve can solve this properly~ or more simple, just bring it upward movement since the present slider is so low that such awkward to play~
      SPOILER

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:37:144 (3) - consider to set a finish on that repeat?~ sounds pretty for me. :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:23:830 (3) - the spacing increased suddenly, and i can't find any reason about it from music.. consider to move the circle onto x.39 y.266 for consistent spacing with 01:24:335 (1) -? would be much more reasonable imo..
      ---
   2. 01:35:122 (5) - yea i'd rather make it downward for flow better either~
      ---
   3. 02:09:167 (5) - adjusting the spacing here? better on x.280 y.52.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:05:459 (9) - the spacing here should be fixed. consider to move it onto x.451 y.144 for consistency with the previous stream. oh don't forget to move the following slider (10) for 1.3x spacing with previous one, because the present looks really confusing like 1/4 rhythm.. orz
      ---
   2. 01:29:054 (1) - i'd prefer to make an upward curve for better flow~ just like this. (don't forget to restack the head of following slider (4).
      SPOILER

      
   3. 01:51:976 (1) - make the blanket better? since there should not be an obvious blemish..
      SPOILER

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:58:043 (1) - useless whistle on that start because you are using whisltes for electric wave sounds~ so the whisltes sound a bit redundant. consider to remove it?~ (also the same thing at 01:00:740 (1) -

Strawberry wrote:

Hey Leo~

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1. Snapping the timing points about kiai time on Lunatic plz~ (honestly the all inherited points on that diff should be delayed 2ms for snap~

　
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1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. Circle size 2 is really excessive even for a Easy diff.. it looks swollen and really weird during play.. imo CS 3 is totally enough~ // I think it's fine, bigger circle should be fine

　
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1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:55:346 (1) - maybe make a upward curve can solve this properly~ or more simple, just bring it upward movement since the present slider is so low that such awkward to play~
      SPOILER

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:37:144 (3) - consider to set a finish on that repeat?~ sounds pretty for me. :3 // Finish sound awful, I add the normal-sampleset

　
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1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:23:830 (3) - the spacing increased suddenly, and i can't find any reason about it from music.. consider to move the circle onto x.39 y.266 for consistent spacing with 01:24:335 (1) -? would be much more reasonable imo..
      ---
   2. 01:35:122 (5) - yea i'd rather make it downward for flow better either~
      ---
   3. 02:09:167 (5) - adjusting the spacing here? better on x.280 y.52.

　
[]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:05:459 (9) - the spacing here should be fixed. consider to move it onto x.451 y.144 for consistency with the previous stream. oh don't forget to move the following slider (10) for 1.3x spacing with previous one, because the present looks really confusing like 1/4 rhythm.. orz
      ---
   2. 01:29:054 (1) - i'd prefer to make an upward curve for better flow~ just like this. (don't forget to restack the head of following slider (4).
      SPOILER

      
   3. 01:51:976 (1) - make the blanket better? since there should not be an obvious blemish..
      SPOILER

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:58:043 (1) - useless whistle on that start because you are using whisltes for electric wave sounds~ so the whisltes sound a bit redundant. consider to remove it?~ (also the same thing at 01:00:740 (1) -

　
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Should be fine. call me back~

NoHitter wrote:

[Normal]
- 01:50:290 (2,4) - The overlap between (2) and (4) doesn't look quite good aesthetically. I suggest changing it to something like this.
- 02:09:504 (1,1) - I don't quite see the points of the new combos here. Maybe 02:10:852 (1) to emphasize the end of the song, but not 02:09:504 (1). Remove them?

[Hard]
- HP + 1?

[Insane]
- AR - 1?
- AR 8 fits the map better IMO.

That's all.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Oh yes!! Hitter's 1st rank
Btw, Congratulations Leo!!

Philippines wrote:

NoHitter's rank virginity is gone!! Anyway, grats XD

Sonnyc wrote:

Grats~ This is a nice map

Dai wrote:

Satori Satori :3