1. Easy (0.3 stars, 75 notes)
2. Hard (4.85 stars, 267 notes)
3. Lunatic (5 stars, 442 notes)
4. Normal (2.9 stars, 145 notes)

~ Mapset ~
Easy : 100%
Normal : 100%
Hard : 100%
Lunatic : 100%
SB : 100%

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~ Special Thanks ~
Mod (1) : TicClick
Mod (2) : DJPop
Mod (3) : NoHitter
Mod (4) : xxheroxx
Mod (5) : HellDawn
Mod (6) : TheVileOne
Mod (7) : gdeath
Mod (8) : Sonnyc
Mod (9) : inverness
Mod (10) : Natsume
Mod (11) : merchat7
Mod (12) : Mixagji
Mod (13) : Niva
Mod (14) : jaehn215
Mod (15) : grumd
Mod (16) : Baby Strawberry
Mod (17) : Pokie
Mod (18) : YGOkid8
Mod (19) : Strawberry
Mod (20) : NoHitter

1. 100% volume is way too loud, please reduce by 20% or more
2. Fix slider velocity on Normal manually using Notepad (round it lol)
3. Add Subterranean Animism to tags

1. 00:01:412 (1) - mind addin
   g a quiet finish?
2. 00:55:344 (1) - whistle of finish fits here, I think
3. 01:03:434 (1,2,3,4) - apply the same spacing for the whole pattren please
4. 01:04:783 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/1oeui?
5. 01:43:884 (1) - missed a finish?
6. 02:01:412 (2) - I wouldn't skip these beats, since you put claps on them in the past sections (not sure, though)

1. 00:02:086 (4,1) - increase the distance between these two to make them look better
2. 00:55:344 (1) - add a finish or a whistle
3. 02:08:153 (1) - add finish!

1. 00:05:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd avoid these straight lines
2. 00:1З:547 (1,2) nevermind
3. 00:22:648 (5) - I'd shorten it and add a note on the big white tick; plays better
4. 01:02:086 (5,6) - not sure if my thoughts are better, but anyway: http://puu.sh/1oeJM
5. 01:05:794 (10) - I would bend it! http://puu.sh/1oeKx
6. 01:19:614 (1,3,5,7) - how about creating some kind of wide-spaced stack? I mean, move each slider down a bit, not only to the right
7. 01:28:547 (5) - non-curvy slider doesn't look nice together with curvy triplet, mind bending him too?
8. 01:33:097 (1) - make a jump?
9. 01:37:142 (5) - looks a bit strange and disbalanced; the bottom part is bigger than the top one
10. 01:38:490 (8) - place new combo here (I would also denote it by adding a little jump)
11. 02:00:063 (12) - ^ (pretty much the same)
12. 02:02:423 (7) - bend to the right, please

TicClick wrote:

General

1. 100% volume is way too loud, please reduce by 20% or more
2. Fix slider velocity on Normal manually using Notepad (round it lol) // I don't think this one is having a big issue...
3. Add Subterranean Animism to tags

Normal

1. 00:01:412 (1) - mind addin
   g a quiet finish?
2. 00:55:344 (1) - whistle of finish fits here, I think
3. 01:03:434 (1,2,3,4) - apply the same spacing for the whole pattren please
4. 01:04:783 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/1oeui?
5. 01:43:884 (1) - missed a finish?
6. 02:01:412 (2) - I wouldn't skip these beats, since you put claps on them in the past sections (not sure, though) // I don't know what you mean

Hard
OD +1? // I won't change, if someone say this again, i'll change

1. 00:02:086 (4,1) - increase the distance between these two to make them look better
2. 00:55:344 (1) - add a finish or a whistle
3. 02:08:153 (1) - add finish!

Lunatic

1. 00:05:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd avoid these straight lines
2. 00:1З:547 (1,2) nevermind
3. 00:22:648 (5) - I'd shorten it and add a note on the big white tick; plays better
4. 01:02:086 (5,6) - not sure if my thoughts are better, but anyway: http://puu.sh/1oeJM // It breaks the flow, so no
5. 01:05:794 (10) - I would bend it! http://puu.sh/1oeKx
6. 01:19:614 (1,3,5,7) - how about creating some kind of wide-spaced stack? I mean, move each slider down a bit, not only to the right // I really don't know what you mean
7. 01:28:547 (5) - non-curvy slider doesn't look nice together with curvy triplet, mind bending him too? // Nah, I like the pattern. Bended to the left make overlap the next note
8. 01:33:097 (1) - make a jump? // That makes break the flow
9. 01:37:142 (5) - looks a bit strange and disbalanced; the bottom part is bigger than the top one // That fit to the rhythm
10. 01:38:490 (8) - place new combo here (I would also denote it by adding a little jump) // I guess not
11. 02:00:063 (12) - ^ (pretty much the same) // ^
12. 02:02:423 (7) - bend to the right, please

I hope it helps.

Leorda wrote:

TicClick wrote:

Hard
OD +1? // I won't change, if someone say this again, i'll change

• • Audio Lead-in: 1
  • 00:45:000 (break) - This break is useless imo, you can easily map this part.

• • 00:33:771 (1,2,1,2) - Try to do this:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 01:03:434 (1,2) - Remove one repetition on each slider then add a new one to better follow the music.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:22:479 (2) - Move this circle under (3).
  • 01:22:985 (5) - Move this circle under (6).
  • 01:23:490 (2) - Move this circle under (3).
  • 01:23:996 (5) - Move this circle under (6).
  • 01:24:333 (2,3) - Move (2) under (3) then move (3) under (1).

• • Approach rate: 9

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Audio Lead-in: 1
  • 00:45:000 (break) - This break is useless imo, you can easily map this part. // This part are hard to map for me, because there is no rhythm sound

[Normal]

• • 00:33:771 (1,2,1,2) - Try to do this:
  
  SPOILER

  

[Hard]

• • 01:03:434 (1,2) - Remove one repetition on each slider then add a new one to better follow the music.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:22:479 (2) - Move this circle under (3).
  • 01:22:985 (5) - Move this circle under (6).
  • 01:23:490 (2) - Move this circle under (3).
  • 01:23:996 (5) - Move this circle under (6).
  • 01:24:333 (2,3) - Move (2) under (3) then move (3) under (1).// What do you mean?

[Lunatic]

• • Approach rate: 9

That's all, awesome SB!

HellDawn wrote:

Heyyyy <3

General

00:44:558- I think normal finish gonna fit if you put to all diffs // If someone say this, i'll change


Normal

00:56:693- missing whistles (begining repeat and last)
00:59:389- ^
01:02:086- ^

Other diffs perfect for me <3

gdeath wrote:

[Normal]
01:28:715 (1) - I dont think here should have a new combo. but if you insist, you are suppose to add new combo at 01:39:165 (2). As you see, the rhythms for both parts are similar.
01:44:558 (2) - ^

[Hard ]
I dont wanna be picky, this diff is all fine to me.

[Lunatic]
01:00:738 (1) - remove whistle // No, it follows the sound on the song
01:31:075 --->01:31:580 Sound empty, try adding whistle on the start of slider at 01:31:075 (3) &01:31:580 (5) // I don't think it's necessary to add
01:34:024 (7) - add whistle // ^
01:41:861 (5,7) - add whistle on the start of slider. // ^

Good job on hitsound buliding.
I'm looking forward to seeing it ranked soon!
here is my star~

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1. Consider using muted sliderslide because the default one rather disturbs the music
2. 00:33:771 - 00:44:558 - with only using finish, this section feels empty. Why don't you add more hitsounds?
3. Storyboard
   
   1. Satori.png moves too slow and unnoticeable (looks static), while technically it also uses SB load. Why don't you make the movement more noticeable?
   2. For such dots effects like Sakura big.png it eats up the SB load until 5.00x especially on 01:16:917 - 01:26:356 - I don't recommend using one big sprite as the dots, I'd rather use small individual dots like this. This method is rather hard and takes more time to do but it saves more performance on gameplay and reduces SB load.
   3. 24.png moves too fast that the ring pulses goes off sync on last words

1. Tick rate 2 seems too much. I'd rather use 1 imo
2. 00:02:423 (2,3) - Somehow the blanket doesn't look perfect
3. 01:16:917 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'd rather use symmetric design and placement here, just opinion
4. 01:24:670 (2,1,2,3,4) - Polygon maybe?
5. 01:28:041 (1,1) - It'll be nice if you could stack these
6. 01:28:041 - 02:10:850 - I rarely hear whistle sound here, why?
7. 01:50:288 - Without note here it feels empty
8. 01:54:670 (1,2,3,4) - Umm... not recommended especially on Normal. Please unstack
9. 01:56:019 (5) - NC
10. 02:05:457 (1) - x:328 y:352 for better flow
11. 02:09:502 (5) - NC

1. Mmm... the diff setting spread for this diff is wide against Normal and narrow against Insane. Maybe you could try lowering some diff settings or more 1/1 sliders (less 1/2 pattern utilization)
2. 00:12:535 (1,2) - Combine into one slider to follow the music better
3. 00:16:243 (1,2) - Not symmetric and delicate. Note: If you want to fix the blanket, make sure you also fix this one 00:15:569 (3) -
4. 00:33:771 (1,2,3,4) - Properly stacking them is not a good idea, since it'll looks rather different than the next notes (see http://puu.sh/1H8CN) Try move them a real little bit, if you feel hard doing it try turning off the Grid snap
5. 00:58:041 (1) - Could you use the new slider algorithm here?
6. 01:03:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Volume too loud, lower them
7. 01:22:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - These stacks breaks flow pretty much. Unstack them please or use a different pattern
8. 01:49:277 (1,2) - Combine into one slider
9. 01:59:726 (3,1) - Fix blanket

1. AR -1
2. 00:13:547 (1,2) - Not a perfect circle form.
3. 00:58:041 (1,2) - Not a good place to do such slidercross.
4. 01:00:738 (1) - asymmetric
5. 01:04:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe wavy shape?
6. 01:21:974 (5,1) - spacing breaks flow
7. 01:35:120 (5) - Why not just split these into 2 sliders?
8. 01:37:142 (5) - Use new slider algorithm here, this shape looks rather asymmetric
9. 01:50:625 (1,2) - Not a perfect blanket
10. 01:51:721 (4) - Remove? Feels unecessary
11. 01:51:805 (5,1) - Blanket maybe?

1. Add SATORARE as a tag. because.. well.. it'll help us to find map easier, anyway.
2. 3 breaks on 2 minutes long map? Huh.. Well. It's ok here, anyway.

1. 00:10:850 (4) - A bit overlaped with HP-Bar. So, 1 grid down will solve this little problem. :/ (nazi)
2. 00:39:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I see, that you're following vocals. And it's pretty good but 17 circles in row! In easiest diff! It's REEEEALLY CONFUSING for beginners. You can fix it [url]this way[/url], for example.
3. 01:28:041 (1) - too soon after spinner for easiest diff :< you can remove (1) and end spinner at 01:28:041 -or try to fix it in another way >3< but it's confusing for beginners now. :<
4. 01:49:951 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - since it's easiest diff you can re-arrange this pattern a bit to avoid overlap just like this

1. 01:04:783 (4) - rhythm goes faster here, so NC for rhythm changes will be reasonable here.
2. 02:08:153 (1) - I'd remove finish hitsounds. It sounds too loud here, imo. :<

1. 01:51:974 (1) - nazi - you can make cute blanket slider here ;_;

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merchat7 wrote:

M4M

[General]

Nothing

[Normal]

00:02:760 (3) - Middle point one grid left looks better to me.
00:04:108 (1) - 20-40% volume drum-samplset finish sounds perfect here. Applies to all diff.
00:06:805 (1) - ^
00:09:502 (1) - ^
00:14:895 (1) - ^
00:17:592 (1) - ^
00:20:288 (1) - ^ // I don't think this drum-sampleset fits....
00:33:771 (1,2,1,2) - Hmm, whistle on repeat and end seem perfect with background music here. If you don't really like the sound of default whistle, try a custom whistle perhaps. Applies to all diff (put whistle in the same places) // default whistle makes sounds worse
00:39:502 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2,4) - Normal samplset on these notes for clap rhythm to follow snare drum in music http://puu.sh/1Pkz1 // Normal sound goes worse because this currently in silent part of music
00:55:344 (1,1,1) - Extreme hitsounding nazi, whistle slider slide would fit better here imo, so whistle on slider body of these sliders? // Whistle sound in slider body is annoying
01:04:783 (5) - I really don't like how the red tick sound here, really prefer if you keep rhythm to the white ticks instead e.g. this http://puu.sh/1PkYD. I notice star rating is already slightly high for easiest diff in mapset, but I don't think adding one hit circle will make this beatmap that much harder.
01:16:917 - 01:26:019 - I really think Normal hitsound fits better. I suggest deleting the timing point on 01:16:917 so that the hitsound here is Normal-sampleset and adding a soft-samplset after this part. Applies to all diffs. // I don't think so
01:28:041 (1) - While testing above suggestion, I feel normal-finish fits better than soft here. // No, hard to explain orz
01:29:052 - end - drum-samplset finish on the stanza (don't put on places where there are soft-finish already), use whatever volume you think fits. Highly recommended suggestion as I only hear clap for hitsound here, feel like it needs something more, applies to all diff. // Really? I never heard of drum-sampleset....
01:29:052 - 01:47:255 - Whistle every 1st and 3rd white tick, applies to all diff. // sorry, clap is enough

Really had to nitpick, this is already quite nice already, please consider the hitsound suggestions through and remember that they apply to all diff. I will not mention them again.

[Hard]

00:03:266 (2) - You didn't use the same slider shape as (1), intentional? // I think yes
00:13:547 (1,2) - Hmm, slider shape feel a bit off to me, if it looks fine to you then it's fine. // It's fine for me
00:16:749 (2,3) - 2 1/1 slider seem better to me, you have an end of a slider on a strong sound in music, so it felt a little weird here. http://puu.sh/1PliW
00:19:446 (2) - Hmm, don't see a reason to increase spacing here. If you really want to increase spacing here, you should increase it more. 0.1x difference is not very noticeable.
00:58:041 (1) - [And similar pattern, e.g. 01:00:738 (1) -...] I notice you add a whistle at begin here, but you didn't do it in Normal. I personally think it sound better without whistle at begin here. My main point here is the inconsistency through. // No, I don't like whistle in this part of music

I haven't really nazi mod in ages, sorry if I miss some stuff like 00:03:266 (2) - or 00:19:446 (2) -

[Lunatic]

00:01:749 (2) - Hmm, I find a jump here (try placing at x:300 y:96 (or y:112, but this cause overlap)) feel better. // This is not jump
00:34:107 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2,4) - Be sure to do normal samplset on this notes too. // As I said, normal sampleset make sound worse in this part
00:55:344 (1) - No finish at begin here? :S // No
00:58:041 (1) - Same as Hard regarding whistle usage in comparison to Normal // No
*01:17:423 (2) - I don't like this 5.42x jump at all // But it makes the pattern goes pretty, I don't know if someone can able to play this
*01:19:277 (2) - And this jump feel too small for me // I don't think so
**So my suggestion is to start from a smaller spacing and go higher. It's easier to let you just replace the code, so try this // I'm lazy to add the code, sorry

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01:32:086 (2) - Hmm, I feel jump is too much, reduce a bit by placing at x:392 y:312. // That jump is following the music
01:34:446 (1,2,3,4) - I think starting jump immediately on (1) rather than doing the jump on (2) would be better so something like this. http://puu.sh/1PlO6
2.0x distant snap on (1) and (2) is stacked with 01:34:277 (8) - // No, hard to explain orz
01:35:120 (5) - I'm not fond of this kick slider, music feel to me like it stop so the repeat always catch me by surprise. I really think you should remove a repeat and add a hit circle instead. Something like this? http://puu.sh/1PlQQ. Assuming you follow my previous suggestion. // No
01:43:041 - Should have a jump here like 01:32:255 (3) - // No

Mixagji wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:01:412 - Normal's finish is better imo
00:12:198 - ^
00:22:985 - ^
00:44:558 - ^ // These normal finishes are not fit to the calm part
00:33:771 ~ 00:42:872 - put the clap on All (2,4) // I don't think it's fits
01:47:929 - add note and finish. spin is started 01:48:013. It should unite same as 01:26:356
01:40:429 - add note?

[Hard]
00:01:412 - Normal's finish is better imo
00:12:198 - ^
00:22:985 - ^
00:44:558 - ^ // These normal finishes are not fit to the calm part
00:33:771 ~ 00:42:872 - put the clap on All (2,4) // I don't think it's fits[/color]

[Normal]
nothing/_\

didn't find a lot orz
good luck~

1. 00:01:412 (1) - Move to ~x:166 to make it centerly symmetrical? Shouldn't hurt...
2. 00:12:198 (1,3) - Are you sure about making this slider fully linear? It just doesn't really sustain (4)'s shape much imo... Perhaps try this (:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:18:266 (2) - Move to ~x:270 y:349? I know it won't be spaced out consistently, but (1,2,3) will look balanced instead - yes, this part won't be hard to catch while increasing this part's beauty~
4. 00:20:288 (1,2,3,4) - ...rather than forcing symmetry something like this would be more beautiful imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:21:637 (5) - ...so then you can arrange this as a slider wave or something :3
6. 00:35:120 (2,2) - On both (2) you can try Sampleset : Drum on slider's start here, to give something different and splashing (:
7. 00:39:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I highly recommend to select all then move to ~x:416 here - due to stacking's nature, the first (1) will weirdly overlap (2), which doesn't look good in play mode...
8. 00:39:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Also with this, as you can see in the image below this arc is look poorly bent... (also you can try combo color hax here as well, there's a lot of potential here though~)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:55:344 (1) - Considering the yellow (1)'s position here, I don't really recommend to approach (2) from the up, as it results in clustering - you have a lot of free space below though, therefore you can get a freer flow this way (:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:05:120 (6) - New Combo
11. 01:15:569 - Drag break end here manually? o.o
12. 01:16:917 (1) - I have an idea which might actually work excellent here - how about making this slider encircle the circle shown in the storyboard like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:28:041 (1) - Start this post-spinner note in ~x:256 y:278?
14. 01:35:794 (1) - Umm, I wonder why are you trying to make such a complicated slider wave here... Something simple like this should do~
    
    SPOILER

    

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15. 01:44:895 (2,3,1) - Would be better imo if these three is placed in a straight line, but it should be barely noticeable
16. 01:55:344 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, why you arranged these in such a complicated zig-zag arrangement with unequal angle... Simple arc should do imo xD
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:00:063 (1) - Hmm idk, you could try this variation so (3) looks somehow encircled though:
    

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    192:272,1,270.000001788139,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 00:07:479 (2,3) - Select both and move to ~x:126 y:211 form a perfect diamond here? Again, you don't have to follow dist. snap and grid snap to the very exact actually, sometimes you have to sacrifice a little bit of them to get a much rewarding beauty (:
2. 00:11:861 (3) - Minor stuff here, move to ~x:195 y:37 for center symmetry?
3. 00:21:637 (1,2,3) - Due to this part's emphasize from the song, how about making this as a small jump...
4. 00:22:816 (4,1) - ...then delete (4) while stacking (1) to previous (3)? There are nothing to follow on (4) anyway, plus it should deliver more soul to players~
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:33:771 (1,2,3,4) - Actually stacking it perfectly would result in (1) being placed incorrectly, with some math magic (~y+4) you can do a small manual stack though :3
   

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   0,44,34108,1,0,0:0:0
   0,48,34446,1,0,0:0:0
   0,52,34783,1,0,0:0:0

6. 00:55:344 (1) - Make this encircle (3) instead? Should leave better impression imo...
7. 00:59:389 (2,3) - You can do something like this for variation imo (fits the electro sound sample though xD)
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:18:940 (1) - ...using another repeating slider here doesn't feel correct at all imo, as 01:19:277 is hitsounded with finish two 1/2 sliders facing back-to-back should give a better feeling from the song~
9. 01:21:637 (1,2) - Same as above
10. 01:24:502 (2,3) - Here also, stacking them doesn't give a correct feeling from the song... A small jump would do brilliant here, one pattern I can think of is stacking (3) with 01:23:828 (4) instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:26:356 (1) - Sampleset : Drum to get a more splashing sound?
12. 01:29:389 (2) - Here also, I'd move to ~x:77 y:11 to get a much better diamond
13. 01:36:468 (3,4) - Umm, why they are placed this close (compared to (1) and (2))? Barely noticeable though
14. 01:46:580 (1,2,3,4) - If you played around with small jumps and CTRL+G it would be amazing, seriously >_<
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:57:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is completely optional but I'd like to suggest anyway - try manual stacking like this, looks and plays cute actually :3 (plus gives more spacing consistency in play mode actually)
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:06:468 (5) - Use tilted slider wave here perhaps? The flow fits the vocals:
   

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2. 00:13:041 (2) - Move lower to ~y:345 to let (1,2,3) be an arc?
3. 00:21:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - Due to the vocals intensifying here, I suggest to intensify the spacing a bit here...
4. 00:22:985 (1) - ...and you can use a sudden jump here as well to leave a better impression toward players before the break, as example:
   
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5. 00:44:558 (1) - I really recommend Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft here
6. 00:55:344 (1) - Just a suggestion here, you can encircle it to make it stack with green (2)'s end actually:
   
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7. 00:59:389 (1,2,3) - Umm, why don't you just create a jump to make it feel similar with 00:56:693 (1,2) o.o... Currently they feel really different for a part which has a same sound orz
   
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8. 01:05:794 (10) - This slider really don't fit at all imo (sudden slow part after the previous hectic stream) - I'd make a jump here with two circles, with the second circle (01:06:131) being around ~x:443 y:368 xD
9. 01:16:917 (1,2) - This jump's distance feels really different among other jumps you used on your map... (not a problem though, just noticing)
10. 01:27:704 (1) - Again, personally I think slider wave fits here considering how the synth sounds...
11. 01:34:951 (4) - Hmm, move this to ~x:424 y:288 to make the parallelogram's distance equal?
12. 01:35:120 (5) - imo using two repeats directly after the jump won't be too much fun to play, how about continuing the jump like this:
    
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13. 01:37:142 (5) - It's HIGHLY recommended here to reduce this slider by 1/4 and add clap - currently you're ending the slider at the place which has no beat/synth progression at all, while missing a clap which should occur 1/4 before
14. 01:52:901 (5,6) - How about deleting (5) and CTRL+G (6) here to get a wonderful circular flow? :3
15. 01:53:575 (2) - Short 1/2 slider usage doesn't really look good here, how about using manual-stack instead? You might want to move previous (5) a bit higher if you use this though~
    
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Niva wrote:

-> As this is -technically- a drum'n'bass song, there are a lot of places where you can use Sampleset: Normal Addition: Soft to fit the bass, for example 00:04:108 (1) - on Normal, 00:06:805 (1) - on Normal, and so on

Leorda wrote:

// Really? I never heard of drum-sampleset....

goodbye wrote:

Nice song