1. Hard (2.68 stars, 374 notes)
2. Normal (1.69 stars, 267 notes)
3. Style (3.03 stars, 564 notes)

1. Hmm, maybe you want to try using this hitsound for the claps?
   http://puu.sh/dBTIl/50f0074b7e.wav
2. No kiais? :<
3. I'm not really good at timing but I think the offset is VERYYYY SLIGHTLY early, it might be just my soundcard (never hurts to double check)
   nvm it was cus of 1/8s
4. The video at the last chorus is quite flashy, maybe you can put in epilepsy warning? (idk if thats only allowed for storyboards)

this?

this KINDA works

im honestly am not sure since there are a lot of 1/4s and random sounds flying around everywhere in this song

this rhythm

like this

guineaQ wrote:

From modding queue

Niiiice song
Why rin bg
nvm i watched the video now

[General]

1. Hmm, maybe you want to try using this hitsound for the claps?
   http://puu.sh/dBTIl/50f0074b7e.wav
2. No kiais? :<
3. I'm not really good at timing but I think the offset is VERYYYY SLIGHTLY early, it might be just my soundcard (never hurts to double check)
   nvm it was cus of 1/8s
4. The video at the last chorus is quite flashy, maybe you can put in epilepsy warning? (idk if thats only allowed for storyboards)

[Normal]
Seriously nothing much to say about this normal since its very simple.
The only *potential* issue this map might have is that it has no pattern involving 1/2 breaks between objects so the spread between hard and normal could be problematic (although imho it shouldn't be) add more rhythm~

[Hard]
00:17:865 - I think you should put something here since there is a kick, but its no big deal if you don't
00:50:865 (2) - you could make this like 00:49:365 (3,4) -
00:54:865 (2) - ^^
01:37:740 (1,2,3) - not entirely sure about having quadlet (including slider head) in a hard diff but i guess its k cus of bpm
02:59:615 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps you can change this into 1/4 multi reverse slider :<

Ughhh there is nothing much to point out after the first minute. The only thing that bothers me is during the quiet verse. You missed a lot of vocals on the blue tick intentionally and it does feel awkward when you catch them perfectly with some patterns like 00:41:615 (4,5) - yet miss them somewhat with 1/1 sliders in places like 00:46:115 (1,2) - . It also feels weird when you use a LOT of 1/2s and quite a number of 1/4s when your normal didn't use a single 1/2 pattern :<

oh yeah nazi blanket mods list
I'm only going to point out blankets that will be noticeable when played
00:21:115 (3,4) -
01:45:365 (5,7) -
02:04:115 (1,2) -
02:10:115 (1,2) -
02:34:115 (1,2) -

Suggestion: Change the current normal to Easy and find a normal GD or map yourself a normal that uses a lot more 1/2s

[Style]
Listening to this for the 3rd time i can hear that some snares are on 1/8 :< lol really？
00:12:615 (2,4) - ctrl + g? fix
00:29:490 (5,6) - you could just make this into mini stream, felt awkward for me when i was playing it since you missed a clap at the white tick
00:41:115 (3,4,5,6) - maybe you can try

this?

00:50:865 (2,3,4) - personally this doesn't make sense to me. The vocal is a single long slider, and the drums are on the red/white ticks and you mapped it out like other plain vocal rhythm :<

this KINDA works

im honestly am not sure since there are a lot of 1/4s and random sounds flying around everywhere in this song

00:51:865 (1,2,3) - I find the rhythm below more fitting

this rhythm

00:53:490 (7) - this slider could just be all circles :<
aaaaahhhh the rhythm on this song is so complex
00:53:990 - you missed a vocal here :>
00:54:865 (2,3,4) - same as 00:50:865 (2,3,4) -
00:55:865 (1,2,3) - same as 00:51:865 (1,2,3) -
00:57:490 (6) - personally this sounds better as 1/4 slider
01:54:115 (1) - Supposed to be

like this

01:54:865 (2,3,4) - like 00:50:865 (2,3,4) -
02:59:615 (1) - ehh you put this as 4 circles in hard diff, why use reverse slider here? :>
Summary for this diff is that you need to review your rhythms in general because there are some parts where mappable places are covered up by the slider hold or some places left out which should be covered by sliders D: I think the diff could be made harder without being it overmap (actually you undermapped here :3) well...actually I dont really pay attention to some part has really tiny rhythm change...also..hmm because the main rhythm I following is vocal so...well is fine for me now but if some modder say that again I may change it <3
But in general it was comfortable to play :> thanks <3

groovy music =w= <3

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.

1. 各diff的widescreen support没统一
   /list]
   
   [Normal]
   
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     没找到可以说的T.T
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:36:865 (2) - 这个note跟后面有点别手，加上间距变大了，比较不舒服，建议00:37:115 (3) - 这个拉近一点或者这个note放左边
   2. 01:10:115 (1) - 这个也是别手，如果顺手应该放左边.-.
   3. 01:37:740 (1) - 这里overmap了，应该是1/3的地方，我不知道这是唱错了还是咋滴...
   4. 02:41:865 (5) - ^ 看来不是唱错啊...我不知道这样放可不可以
   5. 01:46:240 - 这里加个note好一点（好像不加也可以;w;）
   6. 03:31:615 (5) - 这个是不是太远了..放近一点吧.或者说这个间距在这里不太舒服
   7. 03:23:115 (2) - 这个滑条会碰到下面的击打偏差条，不知道会不会有事，以防万一还是动一下，万一有哪个家伙闲的蛋疼呢
   
   [Style]
   
   1. 00:31:115 (2) - 这个建议换成1/2滑条+单点，3/4滑条如果尾巴后面没东西会很难受，而且这个仇恨值很高（
   2. 03:29:990 (3) - 这个note删掉吧，感觉有点多余
   3. 02:29:115 (1,2) - 这两个可以变成一个滑条，否则会给人一直1和前面是一个parttern的错觉（
      大概这样？

      http://puu.sh/dCph0/e6e51c0e5b.jpg
   4. 02:37:115 (1,2,3) - ^一样..但是这个地方大概可以这样...
      参考

      http://puu.sh/dCpsS/99dad3128e.jpg
   
   只能写这些了Orz
   顺便 这个bg...怎么不是我ID;w;

zorefire wrote:

From Queue

[Normal]
01:45:115 (3,1) - Maybe make these curve into each other for better appearance just a suggestion
02:20:115 (1,2) - this could be designed better
[Hard]
00:25:115 (1) - I would make that straight
01:05:740 (3,1) - this jump is a little too hard for hard reduce a little bit
01:37:740 (1,2,3) - would recommend you separate these
01:54:990 (2,3) - reduce jump a little bit
01:58:990 (2,3) - slightly reduce jump
02:09:490 (4) - would recommend you move this up a little bit
02:41:865 (5,6,7) - I don't know why but it would sound better with one note at a further distance
[Style]
00:11:365 (4,5,6) - use this same pattern here 00:15:365 should be fine_(:зゝ∠)_
01:04:115 (1,1,1,1,2) - I would recommend making a criss-crossing pattern to give the map a nicer feel_(:зゝ∠)_...no idea what are you talking about

Overall good map hardly any mistakes thanks
Good luck

Shad0w1and wrote:

整體：所有難度滑條速度都可以考慮再加快一些
[Style]
00:24:865 (3) - 單點更好？咦...还ok拉我觉得
00:25:115 (1,2) - DS稍微有點大？（好像也不是不行）还ok拉..
像01:30:115 - 這裏開始其實就可以處理note了（也是無所謂的）
01:05:490 (1,2) - 跟打擊聲的話沒跟準，跟人聲又沒對，最好改下改啦

00:58:115 - 這裏開始感覺簡單點更好，人聲很亂第一次打絕對很惱火这个...嘛hard+嘛

（黃色3也可以是單點）
02:02:115 (1,2,3,1,2) - 同上^
02:28:615 (2,1) - 不要stack ok

其他難度感覺沒什麼問題，有些建議感覺出來也不會更好想想就不寫了谢谢摸摸大
我的Mod沒用的話不用給kd

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

general

首先why are you so kind for players _(:зゝ∠)_

3.02的难度的话OD7HP7似乎没必要...建议都-1吧

整体感觉挑不出毛病，就是有点单调。。。player打起来估计有点平淡无聊，我觉得1/4滑条可以间距放大一点，比较好玩

Style

这算是hard+么。。。感觉说是Ins有点太简单了_(:зゝ∠)_恩hard+hard+

00:12:115 (1,2,3,4) - 开头这边的一段1/2有点无聊单调，第一个小节加了三连感觉还不错，建议前奏部分都加上三连_(:зゝ∠)_加了

00:17:615 (2) - 这根应该是1/3吧？放25%听觉得鼓点是1/3_(:зゝ∠)_估计是，改啦

00:24:865 (3,1) - 没必要头接尾吧这毕竟不是hard orz 好歹间距放大点啊_(:зゝ∠)_亚达

00:31:615 这里漏了鼓点？在00:31:115 (2) - 滑条结尾加个note感觉不错跟人声呢

01:02:490 (2,1,2,3) - 类似这样的间距都可以放大点吧orz_(:зゝ∠)_亚达

01:04:115 (1,1,1) - 这里vocal挺明显的，用1/2舒服些吧..跟后面好点我觉得

01:05:490 (1,2) - 也是1/3吧 （后面有类似的就不书了;w;改啦

01:08:615 漏鼓点？ 这里放个二连挺好..还ok拉

01:16:615 同上，后面不一个个讲了主要是跟人声嘛..

01:21:115 (2) - 这个遮挡有点难读， ctrl+G一下试试改啦

01:41:115 (1,2,3,1) - 间距大一点厚不厚啊爷爷orz不好啦(;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)

02:08:115 (1,1,1) - 跟前面那个地方一样一样

02:50:115 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 啊，单点再考虑一下吧orz 这样有点单调单调有时候玩的超带感的你不懂我手残心理

02:59:615 (1) - 第一次打的时候这个折返差点没读出来，改成两个1/4滑条也不错改啦

剩下没啥了，作为良心图还是很顺，不过就是有点单调吧orz你不懂我！

Hard

00:17:615 (5) - 1/3同上

01:05:740 (3) - 同上

01:37:740 (1,2,3) - 这里突然四连有点奇怪

02:09:490 (4) - 1/3同上 （顺手找出来了orz

02:16:865 (2,3) - 这边flow突然停顿有点奇怪，曲子这里还是很流畅的

02:40:615 (2) - 这里可以ctrl+G一下，flow比较顺一点

03:24:115 (1,2,1,2,1) - 好多好多好多好多折返11111111 打起来有点无聊嘛1111111

Normal

哦豁，楼上摸的这么细，摸不出东西来了，就这样吧w good luck

顺便这曲子好洗脑啊

Rakuen wrote:

As requested!

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Normal

1. Widescreen

Hard

1. 00:17:490 (4) - Wrong snap, put at 00:17:531 - (1/6)
2. 00:25:115 (1) - Not sure which you follow, if it's drum means wrong snap. 00:25:031 - and 00:25:281 -
3. 00:32:865 (2) - Tail snap at 00:33:031 -
4. 00:33:115 (3) - Tail snap at 00:33:281 -
5. 01:12:865 (2,3) - :3 snap
6. 01:21:115 (3) - ^
7. 02:09:490 (4) - Snap 1/6 at 02:09:531 -
8. 02:17:115 (3) - 02:24:865 (2,3) - 03:07:115 (3) - 03:14:865 (2,3) - 03:23:115 (2) - 03:30:865 (3,4) - 03:38:865 (2,3) -
9. If possible decrease the jumps for better spread...

Style

1. 00:17:115 (1) - Snap on 00:17:531 -
2. Check the other snaps too... orz

不太敢泡，麻烦另找人

抱歉了

Kenterz wrote:

Hello, mod as requested


[notice]

Hard

00:20:115 (1,3) - The overlap could be kind of annoying, I suggest to stack these slider's tails, like this :

SPOILER

Mei wrote:

好歌❤射点星支持下
听了遍发现是男声的，我听的是＊あいり妹子的，不过这个也很棒

Regraz wrote:

这也太快了 prpr

2ha姐姐带我啊 ;w; 【拽衣角