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Updated!
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Whoop Static Noise Bird -> best avatar xD
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I know sorry Deni no kawaii gurls anymore
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Here from the queue, as requested!

[Beginner]

  • No comments really.

[SNB's Normal]

  • Same here. Looks good.

[GamerX4life's Hard]

  • This is ridiculous. Either my head is bonkers or this map is just plain good.

[Insane]

  • I quit. I can't find anything to comment on. I'm still learning, don't judge me!


Well done! You've got me stumped. Sorry I couldn't be of any help at all.
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Hey! M4M from your queue

Mostly suggestions

Beginner

I feel like the beginning section (00:06:867 to 00:31:295 ) is way too densely mapped for such a low star rating. After it the rhythms are much easier
00:09:867 (4) - remove this note
00:11:152 (2) - make this just a circle
00:13:724 (1,2) - why are there red ticks on the ends? little thing but they don't need to be there. Also, these should be parallel
00:15:867 (4) - remove
00:18:438 (4) - remove
00:23:581 (3) - remove
00:27:009 (6) - remove
I would stick to one or two slider curves from 00:34:295 to 00:45:438 to make it a lot neater
00:34:295 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner, if you select it then you'll see that it doesn't have the nc highlighed. it's actually unrankable like this
00:51:010 (3) - move this to 00:51:438 and delete 4
01:08:152 (5) - move to x308 y84 to stack on 3

SNB's Normal

I would go with an SV of 1.1 or 1.2, the jump from beginner is huge.

00:23:581 (4,1) - Fairly nazi, but move to x276 y136 for triangle
00:54:010 (4) - I would put this to the right and under 3, around x416 y144 ish
01:24:010 (3) - move to x168 y48

GamerX4life's Hard

Replay

This diff had an uncomfortable combination of a lower ar and offbeat hits that ended up making hitting 300's harder than it should.

00:10:010 (9) - awkwardly placed and misleading
otherwise fine

Insane

Replay

00:23:152 (5) - Make this the same angle (just flipped) as 2
00:43:724 (4,5) - I really don't like this awkwardly shortened distance spacing, it's hard to read and disrupts flow, especially with your high sv
01:07:724 (5,6) - can you adjust these so that they're even? one leg of the v is longer than the other

All I got, Good luck!
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remind me to check this after school, Deni
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captin1 wrote:

GamerX4life's Hard

Replay

This diff had an uncomfortable combination of a lower ar and offbeat hits that ended up making hitting 300's harder than it should. offbeat objects all need to be there/ would change AR if this would be an Insane :/

00:10:010 (9) - awkwardly placed and misleading changed the first slider a little bit, rest of it is cool imo.
otherwise fine I used this pattern more than 1 time/ the others are fine to you?!
thx

http://puu.sh/2wbbx
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First fixed, other two adjusted in own way, thanks :-)

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posted

Static Noise Bird wrote:

remind me to check this after school, Deni
I have school too :3/

captin1 wrote:

Hey! M4M from your queue Hi!

Mostly suggestions

Beginner

I feel like the beginning section (00:06:867 to 00:31:295 ) is way too densely mapped for such a low star rating. After it the rhythms are much easier I know, but the beginning is still Easy so I don't see a big problem here.
00:09:867 (4) - remove this note
00:11:152 (2) - make this just a circle
I want to keep the rhythm here, so no. It's still Easy. If somebody else mentions this, I will probably change.
00:13:724 (1,2) - why are there red ticks on the ends? little thing but they don't need to be there. Also, these should be parallel The red ticks don't matter at all, but yes I made them now symmetrical.
00:15:867 (4) - remove
00:18:438 (4) - remove
00:23:581 (3) - remove
00:27:009 (6) - remove

I would stick to one or two slider curves from 00:34:295 to 00:45:438 to make it a lot neater I'll think about it, but it's fine as it is now imo.

00:34:295 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner, if you select it then you'll see that it doesn't have the nc highlighed. it's actually unrankable like this Fixed


00:51:010 (3) - move this to 00:51:438 and delete 4 Current rhythm is fine imo
01:08:152 (5) - move to x308 y84 to stack on 3 This would break the spacing consistency!

Insane

Replay Nice!

00:23:152 (5) - Make this the same angle (just flipped) as 2 My current one fits better to the following (6)
00:43:724 (4,5) - I really don't like this awkwardly shortened distance spacing, it's hard to read and disrupts flow, especially with your high svYou're right, fixed.
01:07:724 (5,6) - can you adjust these so that they're even? one leg of the v is longer than the other Fixed... I think

All I got, Good luck! thanks
Also, updated SNB and Gx4L diff's.
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Request on queue years ago ;_; Sorry

Beginner:

00:08:152 (2,3) - 1 Grid left
00:30:010 (4) - Clap at the start
00:40:724 (5) - Well, though this may break the pattern, adding a clap will fit the song better.
00:52:295 (1) - Clap at the end
00:54:438 (2) - Clap
00:58:295 (3) - Clap at the end
01:06:010 (4,5) - Similar Clap suggestion
01:08:581 (1) - Make a linear slider as 01:10:295 (2).
01:14:581 (2) - Clap

SNB's Normal:

00:27:009 (4) - Make a 1/3 reverse slider?
00:30:867 (1) - Just my thought : the third red dot made the slider shape weird
00:33:438 (2) - I think people can be confused. consider NCing or deleting
01:27:724 (1) - Start at 01:27:867 to follow the lyric.

GamerX4Life's Hard:

00:11:581 (4) - I think you are following a different part of the instrument. Try NCing
00:12:010 (2) - :3 my first time to see a wiggled slider with a curve.
00:21:009 (2) - Add Whistle in the slide?
00:27:438 (1) - ^?
00:34:581 (3,1) - Uhhhhhh... a speed change with a symmetry is too confusing for me :(
00:41:438 (1,2) - Swap combos because of speed change.
00:48:867 (3) - Another interesting shape :3
01:01:724 (3) - Imo, deleting the reverse sounded better
01:03:438 (2) - NC

Insane:

00:24:867 (3) - NC
00:31:724 (2) - Reduce one reverse, and add a note at 00:32:581.
01:15:295 - Add a note.
01:21:295 (3) - NC? Unless 01:21:724 (5) will be too confusing.
posted

Sonnyc wrote:

GamerX4Life's Hard:

00:11:581 (4) - I think you are following a different part of the instrument. Try NCing Ok
00:12:010 (2) - :3 my first time to see a wiggled slider with a curve. i'm glad that you like it :)
00:21:009 (2) - Add Whistle in the slide? No doesn't fit so good imo.
00:27:438 (1) - ^? same^
00:34:581 (3,1) - Uhhhhhh... a speed change with a symmetry is too confusing for me :(I think its ok with NC isn't it? :(
00:41:438 (1,2) - Swap combos because of speed change. Ok
00:48:867 (3) - Another interesting shape :3 :3
01:01:724 (3) - Imo, deleting the reverse sounded better Ok
01:03:438 (2) - NC Ok


thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/2xx42
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144,140,33867,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,276,37581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,224,42724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,76,43581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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268,280,44438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,124,45867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,220,47867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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436,204,50867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,292,51295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,144,52724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,272,54295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,152,56438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,56581,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,240,56867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,57295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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460,196,58295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,59581,12,8,61295,0:0:0:0:
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128,324,63438,2,0,B|80:244,1,93.3333333333333
212,196,64152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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372,140,65010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,140,65152,6,0,B|448:86,1,93.3333333333333
496,220,65867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,196,68010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,68152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,124,68438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,124,68581,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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72,32,77010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,356,80438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,140,81867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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posted

Sonnyc wrote:

Request on queue years ago ;_; Sorry It's okay.

Beginner:

00:08:152 (2,3) - 1 Grid left Fixed
00:30:010 (4) - Clap at the start Ok!
00:40:724 (5) - Well, though this may break the pattern, adding a clap will fit the song better. I think without it's better
00:52:295 (1) - Clap at the end Fixed
00:54:438 (2) - Clap No, without it's better here
00:58:295 (3) - Clap at the end No, here's a finish like in the song
01:06:010 (4,5) - Similar Clap suggestionAdded clap to end of (4)
01:08:581 (1) - Make a linear slider as 01:10:295 (2). Current is fine imo
01:14:581 (2) - Clap Added clap to head of (2)

Insane:

00:24:867 (3) - NC Ok ...
00:31:724 (2) - Reduce one reverse, and add a note at 00:32:581. Current is fine imo
01:15:295 - Add a note. Added
01:21:295 (3) - NC? Unless 01:21:724 (5) will be too confusing. It's not confusing imo..
Thanks, also updated SNB and GX4L diff's.
posted
Hi, Deni

Mod request from Fumika & Nichiyouki's Modding Queue
and sorry for our mod delay

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Okay, clear.

Easy

  1. 00:12:010 (3,4) - hmm... Remove (4). Then move slider end (3) to replace (4) will be fit the vocal and rhythm
  2. 00:24:009 (1,2) - It will be better if you remove (2). Then move slider end (1) to replace (2) instead, which will be better to use note to follow vocal

Normal

  1. 00:05:581 (1) - This spinner is too short, since I have seen this spinner can get only 3000. So please change into other note such as slider, or remove it.
  2. 00:44:581 (1) - I think you forget add clap on slider end. So please add it.
  3. 01:08:010 (4,5,6,1) - I'm not sure that it cause confused or not? but it will be better if you change (5,6) into slider imo.

Hard

  1. 00:40:724 (6) - Finish hitsound isn't fit to use here. I suggest that change hitsound into whistle instead.
  2. 00:54:867 (1) - This, too. Use whistle hitsound instead of finish.

Insane

  1. 00:00:438 (2) - This note isn't follow the rhythm. Please move it at 00:00:295 instead to follow the rhythm.
  2. 00:02:152 (3) - This, too. Move at 00:02:010.
  3. 00:03:867 (1) - This one. I doute why you add a note here? which I think it isn't follow the rhythm. However, please move it at 00:03:724.
  4. 00:05:581 - This is empty spacing, which no good idea to that. So I suggest that add spinner to replace this empty spacing.
  5. 00:24:010 (1) - Do you forget add finish here? Please add it.
  6. 00:32:724 - Add spinner here, too. To replace this empty spacing imo.
  7. 01:13:581 (1) - It isn't necessary to add NC. Please remove it.
  8. 01:28:152 (6) - Move to up 2 grid to increase the spacing between (5,6), which it's weird.

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
posted
Hey Deni could you please fix those two hitsounds?
Saves time for both of us :)

thx for mod, Nichiyouki
posted
Same for me @ 00:44:581 end clap, please fix it the deni the nice :-). Changing the other two is unnecessary.
posted

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Deni

Mod request from Fumika & Nichiyouki's Modding Queue
and sorry for our mod delay It's okay.

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

Easy

  1. 00:12:010 (3,4) - hmm... Remove (4). Then move slider end (3) to replace (4) will be fit the vocal and rhythm Ok, fixed.
  2. 00:24:009 (1,2) - It will be better if you remove (2). Then move slider end (1) to replace (2) instead, which will be better to use note to follow vocal
No, my current rhythm fits better here imo.

Insane

  1. 00:00:438 (2) - This note isn't follow the rhythm. Please move it at 00:00:295 instead to follow the rhythm. It actually fits to the rhythm of the song if you listen closely.
  2. 00:02:152 (3) - This, too. Move at 00:02:010. same here.
  3. 00:03:867 (1) - This one. I doute why you add a note here? which I think it isn't follow the rhythm. However, please move it at 00:03:724. Maybe turn your volume higher to hear that there's "something" in the song which this circle is mapped to.
  4. 00:05:581 - This is empty spacing, which no good idea to that. So I suggest that add spinner to replace this empty spacing. It's not that bad since there's no rhythm or something but I will think about adding a spinner here...
  5. 00:24:010 (1) - Do you forget add finish here? Please add it. Added.
  6. 00:32:724 - Add spinner here, too. To replace this empty spacing imo. Same as with the spinner above.
  7. 01:13:581 (1) - It isn't necessary to add NC. Please remove it. You might not have noticed but I always used new combo on the slow sliders and on the slider/circle after that.
  8. 01:28:152 (6) - Move to up 2 grid to increase the spacing between (5,6), which it's weird.
Fixed.

GamerX4life wrote:

Hey Deni could you please fix those two hitsounds?

Static Noise Bird wrote:

Same for me @ 00:44:581 end clap, please fix it the deni the nice :-). Changing the other two is unnecessary.
Updated everything. Thanks for your mod! ;)
posted
From Modding Queue



[General]

I'm a newbie modder, pls respect this

[Beginner]

00:26:152 (4) - unsnapped
00:30:010 (4) - unsnapped
00:51:867 (4) - imp this circle sounds weird at this point
01:14:303 (1) - maybe a little bit right and down


[SNB's Normal]

01:04:152 (4) - unsapped
01:05:010 (6) - ^

[Insane]

00:02:010 - Add a circle
00:08:152 (5) - perfect stack to (8)
00:59:438 (1) - should start 00:59:295

I hope I can help you ^^
Sry that I'm more then late, but I was not really inspired to mod this map/song
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