Flux Pavilion & Doctor P - Superbad · forum

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-02-23T17:24:17+00:00

the :-)

E: fug i cant delete posts (-:

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-02-23T21:20:38+00:00

hai

General
looks fine

Easy
00:24:009 (1) - Finish on head like every other time she says superbad
00:48:867 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; feels like new stanza
01:06:010 (4) - Whistle on this whole slider, it kinda fits the bg music imo
01:15:438 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note
01:27:438 (1) - Move this up to blanket the orange (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626788

SNB's Normal
00:05:581 (1) - this feels too short, especially for beginners so maybe delete this; if not, lower the volume at the end of it
00:12:010 (3) - making a slider until the next red tick seems nice for the held out saxophone
00:42:724 (2) - 1 grid up for perfect stack
01:20:581 (5) - i think you can make this prettier like the rest of them

GamerX4life's Hard
00:03:438 (4) - NC
00:05:152 (8) - Add note here, hear the bg music closely
00:07:152 (2) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626809 Code if you want the slider:

164,224,7152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,7295,2,0,P|256:264|352:224,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:35:152 (4) - NC to indicate SV change, then NC on note right after i guess; i think the change is significant enough
00:55:724 (3) - ^
01:02:581 (4) - ^
01:09:438 (3) - ^
01:15:438 (1) - Finish on head
Nice diff

Insane
00:03:867 - Add note, to keep the rhythm flow, like 00:02:152 (3) -
00:14:010 - Stack a note on the head of (1) here (now (2)) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626826
00:30:867 (7) - NC, and maybe finish on head
01:04:581 (4) - Rotate clockwise like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626833, looks nicer with (6) imo
01:05:152 (5) - Stack on head of (2) (also in above screenshot)
fun sliders

this map is superbadass

GamerX4life

589 posts

Joined January 2010

GamerX4life 2013-02-24T12:02:18+00:00

SPOILER

LunarSakuya wrote:
hai

GamerX4life's Hard
00:03:438 (4) - NC Ok
00:05:152 (8) - Add note here, hear the bg music closely I don't hear anything here, so No
00:07:152 (2) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626809 Code if you want the slider: Ok i fixed the rhytm
164,224,7152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,7295,2,0,P|256:264|352:224,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:152 (4) - NC to indicate SV change, then NC on note right after i guess; i think the change is significant enough
00:55:724 (3) - ^
01:02:581 (4) - ^
01:09:438 (3) - ^
01:15:438 (1) - Finish on head fixed all^
Nice diff yay

this map is superbadass

thx for mod

http://puu.sh/27y5F

Deni

Topic Starter

Deni 2013-02-24T12:46:51+00:00

LunarSakuya

LunarSakuya wrote:
hai hai

General
looks fine \:D/

Easy
00:24:009 (1) - Finish on head like every other time she says superbad ok!
00:48:867 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; feels like new stanza The current NC is better imo
01:06:010 (4) - Whistle on this whole slider, it kinda fits the bg music imo No, since I haven't used Whistles at all..
01:15:438 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note ok!
01:27:438 (1) - Move this up to blanket the orange (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626788 I don't think that's needed here because if you click the last slider you don't even see the (3) anymore.

Insane
00:03:867 - Add note, to keep the rhythm flow, like 00:02:152 (3) - you're right, added
00:14:010 - Stack a note on the head of (1) here (now (2)) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626826 ok!
00:30:867 (7) - NC, and maybe finish on head ok, did both
01:04:581 (4) - Rotate clockwise like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626833, looks nicer with (6) imo yeah, fixed!
01:05:152 (5) - Stack on head of (2) (also in above screenshot) ok!
fun sliders

this map is superbadass lol

Thanks for your helpful mod.

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-03-01T20:53:20+00:00

the (not late) update?!?!?! :-)

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Superbad.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 33877
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Superbad
TitleUnicode:Superbad
Artist:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
ArtistUnicode:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
Creator:Deni
Version:SNB's Normal
Source:
Tags:Dubstep Static Noise Bird GamerX4life
BeatmapID:188434
BeatmapSetID:63413

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:3

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Deni

Topic Starter

Deni 2013-03-01T20:58:58+00:00

Thanks, updated. :-) !?!?!?

GamerX4life

589 posts

Joined January 2010

GamerX4life 2013-03-29T10:45:26+00:00

bump :/

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-03-29T10:54:08+00:00

bimp :-)

Deni

Topic Starter

Deni 2013-03-29T10:55:46+00:00

bomp!

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-04-03T11:06:44+00:00

the adju :-) stments

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Deni

Topic Starter

Deni 2013-04-03T11:19:38+00:00

Updated!

GamerX4life

589 posts

Joined January 2010

GamerX4life 2013-04-03T12:45:03+00:00

Whoop Static Noise Bird -> best avatar xD

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-04-03T12:52:00+00:00

I know sorry Deni no kawaii gurls anymore

Honeybadger_old

22 posts

Joined March 2012

Honeybadger_old 2013-04-06T16:10:59+00:00

Here from the queue, as requested!

[Beginner]

No comments really.

[SNB's Normal]

Same here. Looks good.

[GamerX4life's Hard]

This is ridiculous. Either my head is bonkers or this map is just plain good.

[Insane]

I quit. I can't find anything to comment on. I'm still learning, don't judge me!

Well done! You've got me stumped. Sorry I couldn't be of any help at all.

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2013-04-07T20:28:57+00:00

Hey! M4M from your queue

Mostly suggestions

Beginner

I feel like the beginning section (00:06:867 to 00:31:295 ) is way too densely mapped for such a low star rating. After it the rhythms are much easier
00:09:867 (4) - remove this note
00:11:152 (2) - make this just a circle
00:13:724 (1,2) - why are there red ticks on the ends? little thing but they don't need to be there. Also, these should be parallel
00:15:867 (4) - remove
00:18:438 (4) - remove
00:23:581 (3) - remove
00:27:009 (6) - remove
I would stick to one or two slider curves from 00:34:295 to 00:45:438 to make it a lot neater
00:34:295 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner, if you select it then you'll see that it doesn't have the nc highlighed. it's actually unrankable like this
00:51:010 (3) - move this to 00:51:438 and delete 4
01:08:152 (5) - move to x308 y84 to stack on 3

SNB's Normal

I would go with an SV of 1.1 or 1.2, the jump from beginner is huge.

00:23:581 (4,1) - Fairly nazi, but move to x276 y136 for triangle
00:54:010 (4) - I would put this to the right and under 3, around x416 y144 ish
01:24:010 (3) - move to x168 y48

GamerX4life's Hard

Replay

This diff had an uncomfortable combination of a lower ar and offbeat hits that ended up making hitting 300's harder than it should.

00:10:010 (9) - awkwardly placed and misleading
otherwise fine

Insane

Replay

00:23:152 (5) - Make this the same angle (just flipped) as 2
00:43:724 (4,5) - I really don't like this awkwardly shortened distance spacing, it's hard to read and disrupts flow, especially with your high sv
01:07:724 (5,6) - can you adjust these so that they're even? one leg of the v is longer than the other

All I got, Good luck!

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-04-08T03:34:06+00:00

remind me to check this after school, Deni

GamerX4life

589 posts

Joined January 2010

GamerX4life 2013-04-08T09:59:11+00:00

captin1 wrote:
GamerX4life's Hard

Replay

This diff had an uncomfortable combination of a lower ar and offbeat hits that ended up making hitting 300's harder than it should. offbeat objects all need to be there/ would change AR if this would be an Insane :/

00:10:010 (9) - awkwardly placed and misleading changed the first slider a little bit, rest of it is cool imo.
otherwise fine I used this pattern more than 1 time/ the others are fine to you?!

thx

http://puu.sh/2wbbx

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-04-08T10:25:00+00:00

First fixed, other two adjusted in own way, thanks :-)

the nice box

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Deni

Topic Starter

Deni 2013-04-08T15:07:14+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
remind me to check this after school, Deni

I have school too :3/

captin1 wrote:
Hey! M4M from your queue Hi!

Mostly suggestions

Beginner

I feel like the beginning section (00:06:867 to 00:31:295 ) is way too densely mapped for such a low star rating. After it the rhythms are much easier I know, but the beginning is still Easy so I don't see a big problem here.
00:09:867 (4) - remove this note
00:11:152 (2) - make this just a circle
I want to keep the rhythm here, so no. It's still Easy. If somebody else mentions this, I will probably change.
00:13:724 (1,2) - why are there red ticks on the ends? little thing but they don't need to be there. Also, these should be parallel The red ticks don't matter at all, but yes I made them now symmetrical.
00:15:867 (4) - remove
00:18:438 (4) - remove
00:23:581 (3) - remove
00:27:009 (6) - remove

I would stick to one or two slider curves from 00:34:295 to 00:45:438 to make it a lot neater I'll think about it, but it's fine as it is now imo.

00:34:295 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner, if you select it then you'll see that it doesn't have the nc highlighed. it's actually unrankable like this Fixed

00:51:010 (3) - move this to 00:51:438 and delete 4 Current rhythm is fine imo
01:08:152 (5) - move to x308 y84 to stack on 3 This would break the spacing consistency!

Insane

Replay Nice!

00:23:152 (5) - Make this the same angle (just flipped) as 2 My current one fits better to the following (6)
00:43:724 (4,5) - I really don't like this awkwardly shortened distance spacing, it's hard to read and disrupts flow, especially with your high svYou're right, fixed.
01:07:724 (5,6) - can you adjust these so that they're even? one leg of the v is longer than the other Fixed... I think

All I got, Good luck! thanks

Also, updated SNB and Gx4L diff's.

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-04-10T15:54:08+00:00

Request on queue years ago ;_; Sorry

Beginner:

00:08:152 (2,3) - 1 Grid left
00:30:010 (4) - Clap at the start
00:40:724 (5) - Well, though this may break the pattern, adding a clap will fit the song better.
00:52:295 (1) - Clap at the end
00:54:438 (2) - Clap
00:58:295 (3) - Clap at the end
01:06:010 (4,5) - Similar Clap suggestion
01:08:581 (1) - Make a linear slider as 01:10:295 (2).
01:14:581 (2) - Clap

SNB's Normal:

00:27:009 (4) - Make a 1/3 reverse slider?
00:30:867 (1) - Just my thought : the third red dot made the slider shape weird
00:33:438 (2) - I think people can be confused. consider NCing or deleting
01:27:724 (1) - Start at 01:27:867 to follow the lyric.

GamerX4Life's Hard:

00:11:581 (4) - I think you are following a different part of the instrument. Try NCing
00:12:010 (2) - :3 my first time to see a wiggled slider with a curve.
00:21:009 (2) - Add Whistle in the slide?
00:27:438 (1) - ^?
00:34:581 (3,1) - Uhhhhhh... a speed change with a symmetry is too confusing for me

00:41:438 (1,2) - Swap combos because of speed change.
00:48:867 (3) - Another interesting shape :3
01:01:724 (3) - Imo, deleting the reverse sounded better
01:03:438 (2) - NC

Insane:

00:24:867 (3) - NC
00:31:724 (2) - Reduce one reverse, and add a note at 00:32:581.
01:15:295 - Add a note.
01:21:295 (3) - NC? Unless 01:21:724 (5) will be too confusing.

GamerX4life

589 posts

Joined January 2010

GamerX4life 2013-04-10T17:18:08+00:00

SPOILER

Sonnyc wrote:
GamerX4Life's Hard:

00:11:581 (4) - I think you are following a different part of the instrument. Try NCing Ok
00:12:010 (2) - :3 my first time to see a wiggled slider with a curve. i'm glad that you like it
00:21:009 (2) - Add Whistle in the slide? No doesn't fit so good imo.
00:27:438 (1) - ^? same^
00:34:581 (3,1) - Uhhhhhh... a speed change with a symmetry is too confusing for me I think its ok with NC isn't it?
00:41:438 (1,2) - Swap combos because of speed change. Ok
00:48:867 (3) - Another interesting shape :3 :3
01:01:724 (3) - Imo, deleting the reverse sounded better Ok
01:03:438 (2) - NC Ok

thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/2xx42

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-04-10T17:40:34+00:00

SPOILER

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Deni

Topic Starter

Deni 2013-04-10T18:23:37+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Request on queue years ago ;_; Sorry It's okay.

Beginner:

00:08:152 (2,3) - 1 Grid left Fixed
00:30:010 (4) - Clap at the start Ok!
00:40:724 (5) - Well, though this may break the pattern, adding a clap will fit the song better. I think without it's better
00:52:295 (1) - Clap at the end Fixed
00:54:438 (2) - Clap No, without it's better here
00:58:295 (3) - Clap at the end No, here's a finish like in the song
01:06:010 (4,5) - Similar Clap suggestionAdded clap to end of (4)
01:08:581 (1) - Make a linear slider as 01:10:295 (2). Current is fine imo
01:14:581 (2) - Clap Added clap to head of (2)

Insane:

00:24:867 (3) - NC Ok ...
00:31:724 (2) - Reduce one reverse, and add a note at 00:32:581. Current is fine imo
01:15:295 - Add a note. Added
01:21:295 (3) - NC? Unless 01:21:724 (5) will be too confusing. It's not confusing imo..

Thanks, also updated SNB and GX4L diff's.

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-04-23T13:14:31+00:00

Hi, Deni

Mod request from Fumika & Nichiyouki's Modding Queue
and sorry for our mod delay

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

Okay, clear.

Easy

00:12:010 (3,4) - hmm... Remove (4). Then move slider end (3) to replace (4) will be fit the vocal and rhythm
00:24:009 (1,2) - It will be better if you remove (2). Then move slider end (1) to replace (2) instead, which will be better to use note to follow vocal

Normal

00:05:581 (1) - This spinner is too short, since I have seen this spinner can get only 3000. So please change into other note such as slider, or remove it.
00:44:581 (1) - I think you forget add clap on slider end. So please add it.
01:08:010 (4,5,6,1) - I'm not sure that it cause confused or not? but it will be better if you change (5,6) into slider imo.

Hard

00:40:724 (6) - Finish hitsound isn't fit to use here. I suggest that change hitsound into whistle instead.
00:54:867 (1) - This, too. Use whistle hitsound instead of finish.

Insane

00:00:438 (2) - This note isn't follow the rhythm. Please move it at 00:00:295 instead to follow the rhythm.
00:02:152 (3) - This, too. Move at 00:02:010.
00:03:867 (1) - This one. I doute why you add a note here? which I think it isn't follow the rhythm. However, please move it at 00:03:724.
00:05:581 - This is empty spacing, which no good idea to that. So I suggest that add spinner to replace this empty spacing.
00:24:010 (1) - Do you forget add finish here? Please add it.
00:32:724 - Add spinner here, too. To replace this empty spacing imo.
01:13:581 (1) - It isn't necessary to add NC. Please remove it.
01:28:152 (6) - Move to up 2 grid to increase the spacing between (5,6), which it's weird.

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

GamerX4life

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Joined January 2010

GamerX4life 2013-04-23T19:01:50+00:00

Hey Deni could you please fix those two hitsounds?
Saves time for both of us

thx for mod, Nichiyouki

Birdy

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Joined April 2011

Birdy 2013-04-23T19:21:22+00:00

Same for me @ 00:44:581 end clap, please fix it the deni the nice :-). Changing the other two is unnecessary.

Deni

Topic Starter

Deni 2013-04-25T18:25:37+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:
Hi, Deni

Mod request from Fumika & Nichiyouki's Modding Queue
and sorry for our mod delay It's okay.

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

Easy
00:12:010 (3,4) - hmm... Remove (4). Then move slider end (3) to replace (4) will be fit the vocal and rhythm Ok, fixed.
00:24:009 (1,2) - It will be better if you remove (2). Then move slider end (1) to replace (2) instead, which will be better to use note to follow vocal
No, my current rhythm fits better here imo.

Insane
00:00:438 (2) - This note isn't follow the rhythm. Please move it at 00:00:295 instead to follow the rhythm. It actually fits to the rhythm of the song if you listen closely.
00:02:152 (3) - This, too. Move at 00:02:010. same here.
00:03:867 (1) - This one. I doute why you add a note here? which I think it isn't follow the rhythm. However, please move it at 00:03:724. Maybe turn your volume higher to hear that there's "something" in the song which this circle is mapped to.
00:05:581 - This is empty spacing, which no good idea to that. So I suggest that add spinner to replace this empty spacing. It's not that bad since there's no rhythm or something but I will think about adding a spinner here...
00:24:010 (1) - Do you forget add finish here? Please add it. Added.
00:32:724 - Add spinner here, too. To replace this empty spacing imo. Same as with the spinner above.
01:13:581 (1) - It isn't necessary to add NC. Please remove it. You might not have noticed but I always used new combo on the slow sliders and on the slider/circle after that.
01:28:152 (6) - Move to up 2 grid to increase the spacing between (5,6), which it's weird.
Fixed.

GamerX4life wrote:
Hey Deni could you please fix those two hitsounds?

Static Noise Bird wrote:
Same for me @ 00:44:581 end clap, please fix it the deni the nice :-). Changing the other two is unnecessary.

Updated everything. Thanks for your mod!

AnimeStyle

648 posts

Joined December 2012

AnimeStyle 2013-05-04T16:26:33+00:00

From Modding Queue

[General]

I'm a newbie modder, pls respect this

[Beginner]

00:26:152 (4) - unsnapped
00:30:010 (4) - unsnapped
00:51:867 (4) - imp this circle sounds weird at this point
01:14:303 (1) - maybe a little bit right and down

[SNB's Normal]

01:04:152 (4) - unsapped
01:05:010 (6) - ^

[Insane]

00:02:010 - Add a circle
00:08:152 (5) - perfect stack to (8)
00:59:438 (1) - should start 00:59:295

I hope I can help you ^^
Sry that I'm more then late, but I was not really inspired to mod this map/song

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LunarSakuya wrote:

LunarSakuya wrote:

captin1 wrote:

Static Noise Bird wrote:

captin1 wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

General

Easy

Normal

Hard

Insane

Nichiyouki wrote:

Easy

Insane

GamerX4life wrote:

Static Noise Bird wrote:

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