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Static Noise Bird wrote:

ohai helo* :-)

[SNB]
best diff 2012 xD

[GamerX4Life]
00:09:438 (6) - y:268 Ok
01:19:295 (2) - End is too close to previous one's end. fixed

That's it, good lfuck! haha


thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/1TnSO
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Static Noise Bird wrote:

ohai helo* :-) helo:-)

[Beginner]
00:18:867 (5) - End on 19:724 and add circle to current end. ok!
00:46:295 (4) - Make it bun dem blanket the next one. hmm well, I curved it a bit so that it looks better but I can't blanket it because that would disturb the spacing consistency.. skillex :-)
01:08:581 (1) - Could be symmetrical with the previous (4). ok!
01:10:295 (2) - Make it bit more open and put sliderpoint on the tick. ok!


01:12:010 (3) - Move red point one square left for better symmetry. ok!
01:21:438 (2,3) - Adding claps works better, these sound empty at the moment. ok!

[SNB]
best diff 2012 10/10

[Insane]
00:16:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move (5) down a bit, it looks off from the rest of this part. ok!
00:24:867 (3,4,5) - Overall shape is not the best one, and the (4) is unfitting anyway. Here's a suggestion, which might be even worse, though:
I will think about this..

00:52:295 (1) - It turns a bit up compared to previous one, and it gives a slight, uncomfy bump. Move it a bit down, and move the middle sliderpoint a bit left to make it nicer. can't do that since the next slider is the same just mirrored.
00:59:295 OR 00:59:581 - Agent Spin H- I mean, add spinner here. ok!
01:09:438 (1) - Make cuter curve with either 2 points or new slider system. ok!
01:12:867 (1) - Make symmetrical. help mee
01:20:010 - Add something. no since I mapped this part to the kick's / drums whatever in the song ;P
01:20:867 - ^

That's it, good lfuck!


thanks, and updated!
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Deni wrote:

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[Insane]
01:12:867 (1) - Make symmetrical. help mee


thanks, and updated!
amidointhiscodethingyrite
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hai

General
looks fine

Easy
00:24:009 (1) - Finish on head like every other time she says superbad
00:48:867 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; feels like new stanza
01:06:010 (4) - Whistle on this whole slider, it kinda fits the bg music imo
01:15:438 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note
01:27:438 (1) - Move this up to blanket the orange (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626788

SNB's Normal
00:05:581 (1) - this feels too short, especially for beginners so maybe delete this; if not, lower the volume at the end of it
00:12:010 (3) - making a slider until the next red tick seems nice for the held out saxophone
00:42:724 (2) - 1 grid up for perfect stack
01:20:581 (5) - i think you can make this prettier like the rest of them

GamerX4life's Hard
00:03:438 (4) - NC
00:05:152 (8) - Add note here, hear the bg music closely
00:07:152 (2) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626809 Code if you want the slider:
164,224,7152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,7295,2,0,P|256:264|352:224,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:152 (4) - NC to indicate SV change, then NC on note right after i guess; i think the change is significant enough
00:55:724 (3) - ^
01:02:581 (4) - ^
01:09:438 (3) - ^
01:15:438 (1) - Finish on head
Nice diff :lol:

Insane
00:03:867 - Add note, to keep the rhythm flow, like 00:02:152 (3) -
00:14:010 - Stack a note on the head of (1) here (now (2)) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626826
00:30:867 (7) - NC, and maybe finish on head
01:04:581 (4) - Rotate clockwise like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626833, looks nicer with (6) imo
01:05:152 (5) - Stack on head of (2) (also in above screenshot)
fun sliders

this map is superbadass
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LunarSakuya wrote:

hai

GamerX4life's Hard
00:03:438 (4) - NC Ok
00:05:152 (8) - Add note here, hear the bg music closely I don't hear anything here, so No
00:07:152 (2) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626809 Code if you want the slider: Ok i fixed the rhytm
164,224,7152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,7295,2,0,P|256:264|352:224,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:152 (4) - NC to indicate SV change, then NC on note right after i guess; i think the change is significant enough
00:55:724 (3) - ^
01:02:581 (4) - ^
01:09:438 (3) - ^
01:15:438 (1) - Finish on head fixed all^
Nice diff :lol:yay

this map is superbadass


thx for mod

http://puu.sh/27y5F
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LunarSakuya wrote:

hai hai

General
looks fine \:D/

Easy
00:24:009 (1) - Finish on head like every other time she says superbad ok!
00:48:867 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; feels like new stanza The current NC is better imo
01:06:010 (4) - Whistle on this whole slider, it kinda fits the bg music imo No, since I haven't used Whistles at all..
01:15:438 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note ok!
01:27:438 (1) - Move this up to blanket the orange (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626788 I don't think that's needed here because if you click the last slider you don't even see the (3) anymore.


Insane
00:03:867 - Add note, to keep the rhythm flow, like 00:02:152 (3) - you're right, added
00:14:010 - Stack a note on the head of (1) here (now (2)) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626826 ok!
00:30:867 (7) - NC, and maybe finish on head ok, did both
01:04:581 (4) - Rotate clockwise like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626833, looks nicer with (6) imo yeah, fixed!
01:05:152 (5) - Stack on head of (2) (also in above screenshot) ok!
fun sliders

this map is superbadass lol


Thanks for your helpful mod.
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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Superbad.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 33877
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Superbad
TitleUnicode:Superbad
Artist:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
ArtistUnicode:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
Creator:Deni
Version:SNB's Normal
Source:
Tags:Dubstep Static Noise Bird GamerX4life
BeatmapID:188434
BeatmapSetID:63413

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:3

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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320,96,18438,2,0,B|276:32|188:48,2,140
212,188,19724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,284,20152,2,0,B|152:316,2,46.6666666666667
72,312,20581,6,0,B|0:276|12:196,2,140,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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140,112,23152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,120,23581,2,8,B|336:96,2,46.6666666666667
260,164,24009,6,0,B|240:248|316:312,2,140,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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276,92,33438,2,0,B|184:124,1,93.3333333333333,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,140,33867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,276,34295,6,0,B|164:292|204:264|204:264|236:316|308:336|368:288,1,280,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,35867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,36009,2,0,B|248:76|232:144,1,93.3333333333333
112,192,36724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,36867,2,0,B|124:248|192:264,1,93.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,37581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,37724,6,0,B|334:230|382:222|382:222|368:162|405:97|480:89,1,280,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,39009,2,0,B|296:44|256:72,1,93.3333333333333
252,120,39438,2,0,B|172:96|116:128,2,140,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,40581,2,0,B|352:204|352:204|292:204|248:240|240:272,1,186.666666666667
156,228,41438,6,0,B|124:280|148:356|232:372,1,186.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,224,42724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,224,42867,2,0,B|432:120,1,93.3333333333333
296,76,43581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,76,43724,2,0,B|233:144,1,93.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,280,44438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,280,44581,6,0,B|356:300|356:300|368:232|448:204|508:252,1,280
440,124,45867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,52,46152,2,0,B|272:32|212:140,1,186.666666666667
132,92,47010,2,0,B|108:148|152:224|232:216,1,186.666666666667
320,220,47867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,220,48010,6,0,B|372:228|380:280|380:280|320:284|264:324|232:384,1,280,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,288,49295,2,0,B|108:240|132:192,1,93.3333333333333
176,196,49724,2,0,B|176:136|216:116|216:116|252:152|304:164|352:160|384:128,1,280,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,204,50867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,292,51295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,292,51438,6,0,B|276:283|237:308|237:308|201:243|124:232|69:294,1,280,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,52724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,64,53152,2,0,B|256:8|324:44|324:44|384:132,1,233.333333333333
336,140,54010,2,0,B|320:200|368:240,1,93.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,54438,2,0,P|328:324|248:308,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,364,55152,6,0,P|176:264|256:224,1,186.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,56438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,56581,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,240,56867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,57295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,57438,2,0,B|284:192|284:192|324:228|380:232|420:208,1,233.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,196,58295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
484,104,58581,2,0,B|448:64|396:64|360:88|360:88|312:72,1,186.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59581,12,8,61295,0:0:0:0:
392,112,61724,6,0,B|316:168|316:168|256:124|172:144|148:220,1,280,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,324,63295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,324,63438,2,0,B|80:244,1,93.3333333333333
212,196,64152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,196,64295,2,0,B|234:105,1,93.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,140,65010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,140,65152,6,0,B|448:86,1,93.3333333333333
496,220,65867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,66010,2,0,B|432:292|376:308|336:296|336:296|320:332|268:360|216:348,2,280,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,68010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,68152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,124,68438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,124,68581,5,4,0:0:0:0:
240,44,68867,2,0,B|184:76|180:152|224:192,1,140
204,165,69438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,240,70152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,70295,2,0,B|124:296,1,93.3333333333333
264,292,71010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,71152,2,0,B|188:236,1,93.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,140,71867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,140,72010,6,0,B|348:128|380:156|380:156|336:224|368:284|432:304,1,280,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,73295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,344,73581,2,0,B|160:344|160:344|196:300|192:240|152:204,1,186.666666666667
92,156,74438,2,0,B|108:112|108:112|148:136|212:128|236:84,1,186.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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72,32,77010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,32,77152,2,0,B|168:32,1,93.3333333333333
72,140,77867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,248,78724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,248,78867,6,0,B|165:248,1,93.3333333333333,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,356,79581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,356,79724,2,0,B|165:356,1,93.3333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,356,80438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,140,81724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,81867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,140,82152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,82295,6,0,B|232:92|212:124|212:124|232:184|192:256|116:264,1,280,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,196,86581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,152,87010,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,228,87295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87724,12,4,89152,0:0:0:0:
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Updated!
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Whoop Static Noise Bird -> best avatar xD
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I know sorry Deni no kawaii gurls anymore
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Here from the queue, as requested!

[Beginner]

  • No comments really.

[SNB's Normal]

  • Same here. Looks good.

[GamerX4life's Hard]

  • This is ridiculous. Either my head is bonkers or this map is just plain good.

[Insane]

  • I quit. I can't find anything to comment on. I'm still learning, don't judge me!


Well done! You've got me stumped. Sorry I couldn't be of any help at all.
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Hey! M4M from your queue

Mostly suggestions

Beginner

I feel like the beginning section (00:06:867 to 00:31:295 ) is way too densely mapped for such a low star rating. After it the rhythms are much easier
00:09:867 (4) - remove this note
00:11:152 (2) - make this just a circle
00:13:724 (1,2) - why are there red ticks on the ends? little thing but they don't need to be there. Also, these should be parallel
00:15:867 (4) - remove
00:18:438 (4) - remove
00:23:581 (3) - remove
00:27:009 (6) - remove
I would stick to one or two slider curves from 00:34:295 to 00:45:438 to make it a lot neater
00:34:295 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner, if you select it then you'll see that it doesn't have the nc highlighed. it's actually unrankable like this
00:51:010 (3) - move this to 00:51:438 and delete 4
01:08:152 (5) - move to x308 y84 to stack on 3

SNB's Normal

I would go with an SV of 1.1 or 1.2, the jump from beginner is huge.

00:23:581 (4,1) - Fairly nazi, but move to x276 y136 for triangle
00:54:010 (4) - I would put this to the right and under 3, around x416 y144 ish
01:24:010 (3) - move to x168 y48

GamerX4life's Hard

Replay

This diff had an uncomfortable combination of a lower ar and offbeat hits that ended up making hitting 300's harder than it should.

00:10:010 (9) - awkwardly placed and misleading
otherwise fine

Insane

Replay

00:23:152 (5) - Make this the same angle (just flipped) as 2
00:43:724 (4,5) - I really don't like this awkwardly shortened distance spacing, it's hard to read and disrupts flow, especially with your high sv
01:07:724 (5,6) - can you adjust these so that they're even? one leg of the v is longer than the other

All I got, Good luck!
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remind me to check this after school, Deni
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