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wa_
Random suggestions and nazi mods :p
[Beginner]
00:09:867 (4) - move to x318, y320 (spacing)
00:13:724 (1,2) - make it parallel?
00:35:152 - clap
00:36:867 - ^
00:36:010 (2) - make it symmetrically to 00:34:295 (1) like this: http://puu.sh/1KVYU
00:39:438 (4) - what about to repleace it by rotated 00:37:724 (3)?
00:35:152 - clap
00:40:295 - ^
00:44:581 (3) - I think "straighted" slider could look better http://puu.sh/1KW5R
00:48:867 (5) - clap
00:50:581 (2) - x299 y336? (spacing) and clap
00:52:295 - clap
00:54:010 - ^
00:55:724 -
00:56:581 (2) - reverse for better flow
00:58:295 (3) - overlap with (1) tail? http://puu.sh/1KWp1 It's far from (1), so I think there's no problem with bad overlapping
01:02:581 - clap
01:04:295 - ^
01:06:010 - ^
01:07:724 - ^
01:08:152 (5) - x306 y55 (nazi spacing)
01:09:438 - clap
01:10:295 (2,3) - I don't like sliders with sharp angle :D
01:11:152 - clap
01:12:867 - ^
01:14:581 - ^
01:15:438 (3) - blanket like this? http://puu.sh/1KWBL
01:18:010 - guess what :3
01:19:724 - ^
All claps are only suggestion.
[SNB's Normal]
What about AR4? Maybe it will be a little easier?
00:31:724 - clap
00:40:581 (4,1,2) - It's a bit difficult to read, try to make like this http://puu.sh/1KWYZ
[GamerX4life's Hard]
00:10:010 (8) - I think one slider with reverse http://puu.sh/1KX8P or same circle at 00:10:152 - looks better
00:16:867 (9) - ^
Looks good, it's quite hard ;)
[Insane]
This diff needs more hitclaps as in Easy.
00:02:152 (8) - move it to 00:02:010 - it fits better melody
00:28:152 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - arghh I hate 1/3 streams but I don't care. Fits the music.
00:32:724 - Break?
00:36:009 (2) - only circle?
01:28:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - failed :D

Great job ;) I like this slider shapes :3
UnitedWeSin
Hello Deni~
Modding via M4M from my queue.

[Beginner]
Map Design/Rhythm
  1. I think it's a bit difficult to be called Beginner because there are so many circles. Maybe change the name to Easy.

  2. In general about this map, you can tell that much less time was spent on it than the others. It's a very boring map because you did not include any sort of creative sliders that you did in the Insane difficulty. I suggest going through and playing around with sliders here and placements to make it reflect your other maps.

  3. 00:08:581 (3,4) - Pretty large spacing increase here between the two.

  4. 00:16:724 (6) - I really advise against using this upbeat slider because it feels very awkward in play. After a stream of notes such as 00:15:438 (3,4,5) the player will be anticipating the downbeat, but because the downbeat is on the end of the slider at 00:17:152 -, it is unstressed and feels confusing. I really suggest switching the placement of the 5 and 6 here so that we can have a new combo circle on the downbeat like this:
    00:15:438 (3) to 00:18:438 (4). New combo at 00:17:152.
  5. 00:18:867 (5,6,1) - Again this rhythm is very strange and is disconnecting the player from the rhythm of the song. The 6 is an upbeat slider. I suggest deleting the 5 and moving the 6 to 00:18:867. Then move the 00:21:009 (1) to 00:20:581 and increase it's length so that it ends at 00:21:867. You would have this:

    00:17:581 (2) to 00:22:295 (2).
    You have the NC at 00:20:581 on the downbeat and we get to smash the slider there. This rhythm is very powerful with this section of the song.
  6. 00:49:724 (1,2,3) - Make sure this spacing is consistent. As of now it's noticeably different.
Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:010 (1,3,4) - This section is a bit barren on hitsounds to me. Try making the tail of the 1 a normal hit using the sample set sector on the left side of the screen. Also try doing the same thing with the heads of the 3 and 4. So a normal hit at 00:00:867 and 00:01:724 and 00:02:581. Maybe even one at 00:04:295. These hits would hit along side the loud clashes in the music.

  2. 00:10:295 (1) - Remove the finish here because it's sort of unnecessary and it's inconsistent with your hitsounding pattern used later. I suggest adding a finish at 00:13:724 instead. A finish every 4 measures makes more sense musically with this song. A finish at the beginning of every other measure can be boring in an easy imo.

  3. 00:22:295 (2) - Maybe add a clap on the end of this slider to continue your pattern of claps used earlier.

  4. 00:24:009 (1) - Remove the finish from the head. It's not really necessary.

  5. 00:34:295 (1,2,3,4) - I think claps on the ends of these sliders would fit very well with the claps in the music.

  6. 00:41:152 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, I think some claps on the ends would be nice.

  7. 00:48:867 (5) - No clap here? There is a large clap in the music.

  8. 00:50:581 (2) - Clap fits well imo.

  9. 00:52:295 (1) - Clap on the head to fit the musc.

  10. 00:54:867 (1,2) - Claps on the ends. I'll stop mentioning claps. Just add one when you hear a clap in the music just like at the end of these sliders.

  11. 01:27:438 (1) - Maybe consider making your clap the slidertick in a Normal Sample Set 2 so that you could have claps on the sliderticks for this slider.
[SNB's Normal]

Map Design/Rhythm
  1. 00:04:295 (2) - This slider is just awkward to me and the huge finish at 00:05:010 happens in the middle of the slider and is sounds strange. I really suggest shortening this slider so that it ends at 00:05:010. That way we could have the finish there and the gap until 00:06:867 feels great because the only thing in the music is the vocal "damn." Honestly it feels better if that vocal line is not mapped, a short break makes much more sense to me with this genre when the beat stops like that.

  2. 00:12:867 (4) - I really don't like this rhythm. Can I suggest something that might be really fun and fit along well with the sax here?

    I made the 3 into a slider leading into the 4. Then i shrunk the 4 so that we can hit a circle on the downbeat at 00:13:724. This feel much stronger with the music here because that is a very accented downbeat. But of course, don't use that straight slider. :)

  3. 00:15:438 (3,4,5,1) - This rhythm is a bit strange. I think it may be a bit difficult because the polarity is bad. I really recommend just simplifying it by extending the 3 and the 4 and deleting the 5 like this:

    This fits so well with the music and it plays really fluidly after the 00:14:152 (2) and the 00:18:438 (4) because everything lands on the dark red ticks.

  4. 00:28:724 (2,3) - These two notes would play much nicer as a slider just like 00:27:009 (4) imo.

  5. 00:35:867 (2,3) - I really disagree with this antijump here. I think this varied spacing here can make spacing later in the map harder to read because the player might assume something is an antijump when it isn't. It would be much better if spacing was constant here.

  6. 01:06:010 (3) - How about flipping this slider over to avoid that overlap and make a blanket?

  7. 01:23:867 (3,4,1) - I can't figure out what these sliders are following and it's very confusing in gameplay. Maybe consider repeating the same pattern as 01:10:152 (4,5,6,7,8,1) here.
Hitsounds
You could try and use more whistles from the default normal set just like Gamerx4life does in his hard diff. It sounds very nice with this song.


[Gamerx4life's Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm
  1. 00:10:010 (8) - I really don't like how this plays. It feels awkward because it's following the drums, but before that we were following the melody. I suggest deleting it and replacing it with a single circle at 00:10:010 at the same place.

  2. 00:16:867 (9) - Again, it's just very awkward to play. Replace it with a single circle so we can continue following the melody there and avoid confusion.

  3. 00:20:009 (7,8) - This is super confusing and feels awful in play. The building drums and the repeating slider 7 are creating this tension that is leading us to the down beat, but when we get to it, it's unstressed on the end of the slider 8. I always want to just hit the 00:20:867 (1) as if it were at 00:20:581 on that downbeat because that is what would make sense musically. Maybe replace the 8 slider with 2 circles and have the new combo on the downbeat there. You need that downbeat to be stressed.

  4. 00:30:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - This would be much more fun and would fit the music better if you increased spacing gradually between these sliders.

  5. 00:35:152 (4) - Maybe consider making these slowed down sliders a single combo on their own just like is done in the Insane.

  6. 01:19:295 (2) - Move to (160,272) to fix spacing.
Hitsounds
Nice!

[Insane]

Map Design/Rhythm
  1. 00:04:724 (3,4) - Make this spacing larger so it's easier to read.

  2. 00:20:009 (1) - Remove combo here and add it to 00:20:581 (5). That would take some of the shock out of the first slider here because the SV is very large.

  3. 00:30:152 (1) - Remove the NC here and add it at 00:30:009 (7) to keep consistent with 00:29:009 (8,1).

  4. 00:37:152 (5) - Why not just reflect the 00:36:295 (3) here? It's weird that the 5 and the 3 are different sliders here. You should copy paste the 3 and flip it over.

  5. 00:41:152 (8) - I'd say NC here to keep consistent with 00:34:152 (1,2,3).

  6. 00:45:438 (1) - This slider looks a little funky, can you remake it as a symmetrical slider?

  7. 01:03:295 (1) - You shouldn't break your pattern here of 01:01:581 (1,2). It should repeat because the music is repeated.

  8. 01:29:152 (7) - NC imo. It would fit nicely and accent that finish.
Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:867 (4,10) - These should be claps and not whistles imo just like in the other diffs.

  2. 00:20:581 (5) - Missing finish on the head I think.

  3. You use a lot of whistles instead of claps. I guess it sounds alright, it's just not consistent with the other difficulties that use claps.
Anyways, that's all I guess. I hope it's helpful. I'm not a big dub-step fan. :o
GamerX4life
SPOILER

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Gamerx4life's Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm
  1. 00:10:010 (8) - I really don't like how this plays. It feels awkward because it's following the drums, but before that we were following the melody. I suggest deleting it and replacing it with a single circle at 00:10:010 at the same place. I really like this pattern/rhytm and i think a circle would make it more confusing... Maybe i will change it if another modder

  2. 00:16:867 (9) - Again, it's just very awkward to play. Replace it with a single circle so we can continue following the melody there and avoid confusion. same again. I also think, that it is very monotonous with only one circle

  3. 00:20:009 (7,8) - This is super confusing and feels awful in play. The building drums and the repeating slider 7 are creating this tension that is leading us to the down beat, but when we get to it, it's unstressed on the end of the slider 8. I always want to just hit the 00:20:867 (1) as if it were at 00:20:581 on that downbeat because that is what would make sense musically. Maybe replace the 8 slider with 2 circles and have the new combo on the downbeat there. You need that downbeat to be stressed. I fixed the pattern problem by deleting the repeat at the first sldier and adding it to the second slider

  4. 00:30:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - This would be much more fun and would fit the music better if you increased spacing gradually between these sliders. This would be too hard for a hard diff :/ , but the idea is great

  5. 00:35:152 (4) - Maybe consider making these slowed down sliders a single combo on their own just like is done in the Insane. no

  6. 01:19:295 (2) - Move to (160,272) to fix spacing. this is just a small spacing error and it would destroy the pattern :/
Hitsounds
Nice! Thank you

Thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/1LcoY
Lally
o3o/ haiiii in-game req :3

[General]
i'll suggest to add kiai time from 00:34:295 - to 00:59:152

[Beginner]
  1. 00:01:724 (3) - one grind left (grind lv 4)
  2. 00:08:581 (3,4,1) - spacing is not consistent
  3. 00:18:438 (3,4) - spacing
  4. 00:46:295 (4,5) - try something like this: http://puu.sh/1LCHa
  5. 01:03:438 (2) - a little bit to far from prev slider
  6. 01:12:010 (3) - make it more simmetrical
[SNB]
  1. 00:02:581 (4) - i don't really like this stacked try to move is somwhere else
  2. 00:12:867 (4,1) - i think in the middle it will be better >.< like: http://puu.sh/1LCPU
  3. 00:33:867 (3) - same as i sad before with stacking
  4. some not cute sliders but all semms ok o3o
[GamerX4life]
  1. 00:03:438 (4) - one gring left, it to a perfect blanket then
  2. 00:15:295 (5,6) - do it a little bit better : http://puu.sh/1LCY9 and 00:16:152 (7,8) - too
  3. 00:27:010 (11) - new combo
  4. 00:58:152 (9) - new combo
[Insane]
  1. I think in the first 20 sec of diff are to many circles try to add some sliders
  2. fom 00:00:010 - to 00:05:010 - spacing is really inconsistent
  3. 00:35:152 (1) - useless red point at slider end
  4. 01:12:867 (1) - useless red point at end of the slider
Hope it can be helpfull ;_;
Topic Starter
Deni
@GamerX4life: Updated your diff, so that you can apply Lally's Mod.

Thanks you 3! Looking into your mods now. (Will post what I fixed and what I didn't...)
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Lally wrote:

o3o/ haiiii in-game req :3

[General]
i'll suggest to add kiai time from 00:34:295 - to 00:59:152 i will ask Deni for this

[GamerX4life]
  1. 00:03:438 (4) - one gring left, it to a perfect blanket then Ok
  2. 00:15:295 (5,6) - do it a little bit better : http://puu.sh/1LCY9 and 00:16:152 (7,8) - too Ok
  3. 00:27:010 (11) - new combo yea
  4. 00:58:152 (9) - new combo Ok

Thx for mod!

EDIT: Totally forgot to answer to wa_:

SPOILER

wa_ wrote:

[GamerX4life's Hard]
00:10:010 (8) - I think one slider with reverse http://puu.sh/1KX8P or same circle at 00:10:152 - looks better I really like this rhytm and pattern :/
00:16:867 (9) - ^ same
Looks good, it's quite hard ;) its "hard" ^^

Nothing changed

http://puu.sh/1LEip
Topic Starter
Deni
UnitedWeSin:

SPOILER

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Beginner]
Map Design/Rhythm
  1. I think it's a bit difficult to be called Beginner because there are so many circles. Maybe change the name to Easy. It's rreeally for beginners since it's a lot more easier than some other Easy's. No problem here.. (might change if another modder has a problem with this)

  2. In general about this map, you can tell that much less time was spent on it than the others. It's a very boring map because you did not include any sort of creative sliders that you did in the Insane difficulty. I suggest going through and playing around with sliders here and placements to make it reflect your other maps. yes, it's probably boring for you, but I wanted to make it as Easy as possible for newbie players. Also, the slider velocity is so low that I can't create big creative sliders here.

  3. 00:08:581 (3,4) - Pretty large spacing increase here between the two. Fixed!

  4. 00:16:724 (6) - I really advise against using this upbeat slider because it feels very awkward in play. After a stream of notes such as 00:15:438 (3,4,5) the player will be anticipating the downbeat, but because the downbeat is on the end of the slider at 00:17:152 -, it is unstressed and feels confusing. I really suggest switching the placement of the 5 and 6 here so that we can have a new combo circle on the downbeat like this:
    00:15:438 (3) to 00:18:438 (4). New combo at 00:17:152. Good Idea, Fixed!
  5. 00:18:867 (5,6,1) - Again this rhythm is very strange and is disconnecting the player from the rhythm of the song. The 6 is an upbeat slider. I suggest deleting the 5 and moving the 6 to 00:18:867. Then move the 00:21:009 (1) to 00:20:581 and increase it's length so that it ends at 00:21:867. You would have this:

    00:17:581 (2) to 00:22:295 (2).
    You have the NC at 00:20:581 on the downbeat and we get to smash the slider there. This rhythm is very powerful with this section of the song.

    Good Idea, Fixed!

  6. 00:49:724 (1,2,3) - Make sure this spacing is consistent. As of now it's noticeably different. Fixed!
Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:010 (1,3,4) - This section is a bit barren on hitsounds to me. Try making the tail of the 1 a normal hit using the sample set sector on the left side of the screen. Also try doing the same thing with the heads of the 3 and 4. So a normal hit at 00:00:867 and 00:01:724 and 00:02:581. Maybe even one at 00:04:295. These hits would hit along side the loud clashes in the music.

    Added!
  2. 00:10:295 (1) - Remove the finish here because it's sort of unnecessary and it's inconsistent with your hitsounding pattern used later. I suggest adding a finish at 00:13:724 instead. A finish every 4 measures makes more sense musically with this song. A finish at the beginning of every other measure can be boring in an easy imo. Fixed! // Funny fact: These hitsounds were suggestions in mods, lol.

  3. 00:22:295 (2) - Maybe add a clap on the end of this slider to continue your pattern of claps used earlier. Ok!

  4. 00:24:009 (1) - Remove the finish from the head. It's not really necessary. Ok!

  5. 00:34:295 (1,2,3,4) - I think claps on the ends of these sliders would fit very well with the claps in the music. Ok!

  6. 00:41:152 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, I think some claps on the ends would be nice. Ok! // Except for (4)

  7. 00:48:867 (5) - No clap here? There is a large clap in the music. Added!

  8. 00:50:581 (2) - Clap fits well imo. Ok!

  9. 00:52:295 (1) - Clap on the head to fit the musc. Ok!

  10. 00:54:867 (1,2) - Claps on the ends. I'll stop mentioning claps. Just add one when you hear a clap in the music just like at the end of these sliders. Ok! // Added a lot more claps to the rest!

  11. 01:27:438 (1) - Maybe consider making your clap the slidertick in a Normal Sample Set 2 so that you could have claps on the sliderticks for this slider. Don't sounds too well..

[Insane]

Map Design/Rhythm
  1. 00:04:724 (3,4) - Make this spacing larger so it's easier to read. Remade that part ...!

  2. 00:20:009 (1) - Remove combo here and add it to 00:20:581 (5). That would take some of the shock out of the first slider here because the SV is very large. Didn't remove the new combo, but added a new combo to the slider. ;)

  3. 00:30:152 (1) - Remove the NC here and add it at 00:30:009 (7) to keep consistent with 00:29:009 (8,1). Ok!

  4. 00:37:152 (5) - Why not just reflect the 00:36:295 (3) here? It's weird that the 5 and the 3 are different sliders here. You should copy paste the 3 and flip it over. Ok!

  5. 00:41:152 (8) - I'd say NC here to keep consistent with 00:34:152 (1,2,3). Ok!

  6. 00:45:438 (1) - This slider looks a little funky, can you remake it as a symmetrical slider? Ok!

  7. 01:03:295 (1) - You shouldn't break your pattern here of 01:01:581 (1,2). It should repeat because the music is repeated. Actually I don't see a problem with using another pattern here, maybe some alternation? :)

  8. 01:29:152 (7) - NC imo. It would fit nicely and accent that finish.
Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:867 (4,10) - These should be claps and not whistles imo just like in the other diffs. I didn't use claps in Insane.

  2. 00:20:581 (5) - Missing finish on the head I think. Added!

  3. You use a lot of whistles instead of claps. I guess it sounds alright, it's just not consistent with the other difficulties that use claps. Not every difficulty has to use the same hitsounds!
Anyways, that's all I guess. I hope it's helpful. Very helpful. Thanks!


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wa_:

Well, I already applied the claps from UnitedWeSin's Mod, so no reason to write "fixed!" again xD.
Also fixed some suggestions.


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Lally:

SPOILER

Lally wrote:

o3o/ haiiii in-game req :3 haiiiii \:3/

[General]
i'll suggest to add kiai time from 00:34:295 - to 00:59:152 I think about it with GamerX4life :3

[Beginner]
  1. 00:01:724 (3) - one grind left (grind lv 4) oke!
  2. 00:08:581 (3,4,1) - spacing is not consistent made more consistent!
  3. 00:18:438 (3,4) - spacing I changed the hitobjects here with UnitedWeSin's mod so I don't know what you mean sorry^^
  4. 00:46:295 (4,5) - try something like this: http://puu.sh/1LCHa Code would have been useful or at least the coordinates^^
  5. 01:03:438 (2) - a little bit to far from prev slider fixed!
  6. 01:12:010 (3) - make it more simmetrical no I don't want to have only symmetrical slider..
[Insane]
  1. I think in the first 20 sec of diff are to many circles try to add some sliders the circle fit good..
  2. fom 00:00:010 - to 00:05:010 - spacing is really inconsistent ok remade that part!
  3. 00:35:152 (1) - useless red point at slider end whats the problem with that?!
  4. 01:12:867 (1) - useless red point at end of the slider ^
Hope it can be helpfull ;_; don't worry! thanks :3


Ok! Thanks very much! 3 helpful mods :3

Also updated GamerX4life's diff. Now waiting for Static Noise Bird.
Birdy
most fixed

SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Superbad.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 33877
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Superbad
TitleUnicode:Superbad
Artist:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
ArtistUnicode:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
Creator:Deni
Version:SNB's Normal
Source:
Tags:Dubstep Static Noise Bird GamerX4life
BeatmapID:188434
BeatmapSetID:63413

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:3

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Superbad3.JPG"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Topic Starter
Deni
Updated!
Birdy
ohai helo* :-)

[Beginner]
00:18:867 (5) - End on 19:724 and add circle to current end.
00:46:295 (4) - Make it bun dem blanket the next one.
01:08:581 (1) - Could be symmetrical with the previous (4).
01:10:295 (2) - Make it bit more open and put sliderpoint on the tick.


01:12:010 (3) - Move red point one square left for better symmetry.
01:21:438 (2,3) - Adding claps works better, these sound empty at the moment.

[SNB]
best diff 2012

[GamerX4Life]
00:09:438 (6) - y:268
01:19:295 (2) - End is too close to previous one's end.

[Insane]
00:16:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move (5) down a bit, it looks off from the rest of this part.
00:24:867 (3,4,5) - Overall shape is not the best one, and the (4) is unfitting anyway. Here's a suggestion, which might be even worse, though:


00:52:295 (1) - It turns a bit up compared to previous one, and it gives a slight, uncomfy bump. Move it a bit down, and move the middle sliderpoint a bit left to make it nicer.
00:59:295 OR 00:59:581 - Agent Spin H- I mean, add spinner here.
01:09:438 (1) - Make cuter curve with either 2 points or new slider system.
01:12:867 (1) - Make symmetrical.
01:20:010 - Add something.
01:20:867 - ^

That's it, good lfuck!
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Static Noise Bird wrote:

ohai helo* :-)

[SNB]
best diff 2012 xD

[GamerX4Life]
00:09:438 (6) - y:268 Ok
01:19:295 (2) - End is too close to previous one's end. fixed

That's it, good lfuck! haha

thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/1TnSO
Topic Starter
Deni
helo

Static Noise Bird wrote:

ohai helo* :-) helo:-)

[Beginner]
00:18:867 (5) - End on 19:724 and add circle to current end. ok!
00:46:295 (4) - Make it bun dem blanket the next one. hmm well, I curved it a bit so that it looks better but I can't blanket it because that would disturb the spacing consistency.. skillex :-)
01:08:581 (1) - Could be symmetrical with the previous (4). ok!
01:10:295 (2) - Make it bit more open and put sliderpoint on the tick. ok!


01:12:010 (3) - Move red point one square left for better symmetry. ok!
01:21:438 (2,3) - Adding claps works better, these sound empty at the moment. ok!

[SNB]
best diff 2012 10/10

[Insane]
00:16:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move (5) down a bit, it looks off from the rest of this part. ok!
00:24:867 (3,4,5) - Overall shape is not the best one, and the (4) is unfitting anyway. Here's a suggestion, which might be even worse, though:
I will think about this..

00:52:295 (1) - It turns a bit up compared to previous one, and it gives a slight, uncomfy bump. Move it a bit down, and move the middle sliderpoint a bit left to make it nicer. can't do that since the next slider is the same just mirrored.
00:59:295 OR 00:59:581 - Agent Spin H- I mean, add spinner here. ok!
01:09:438 (1) - Make cuter curve with either 2 points or new slider system. ok!
01:12:867 (1) - Make symmetrical. help mee
01:20:010 - Add something. no since I mapped this part to the kick's / drums whatever in the song ;P
01:20:867 - ^

That's it, good lfuck!

thanks, and updated!
Birdy

Deni wrote:

helo

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[Insane]
01:12:867 (1) - Make symmetrical. help mee

thanks, and updated!
amidointhiscodethingyrite
412,248,72867,6,0,P|380:292|348:308|296:304|256:272|256:272|220:304|168:308|136:292|100:244,1,360
Topic Starter
Deni
ty :)
Birdy
the :-)

E: fug i cant delete posts (-:
LunarSakuya
hai

General
looks fine

Easy
00:24:009 (1) - Finish on head like every other time she says superbad
00:48:867 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; feels like new stanza
01:06:010 (4) - Whistle on this whole slider, it kinda fits the bg music imo
01:15:438 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note
01:27:438 (1) - Move this up to blanket the orange (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626788

SNB's Normal
00:05:581 (1) - this feels too short, especially for beginners so maybe delete this; if not, lower the volume at the end of it
00:12:010 (3) - making a slider until the next red tick seems nice for the held out saxophone
00:42:724 (2) - 1 grid up for perfect stack
01:20:581 (5) - i think you can make this prettier like the rest of them

GamerX4life's Hard
00:03:438 (4) - NC
00:05:152 (8) - Add note here, hear the bg music closely
00:07:152 (2) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626809 Code if you want the slider:
164,224,7152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,7295,2,0,P|256:264|352:224,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:152 (4) - NC to indicate SV change, then NC on note right after i guess; i think the change is significant enough
00:55:724 (3) - ^
01:02:581 (4) - ^
01:09:438 (3) - ^
01:15:438 (1) - Finish on head
Nice diff :lol:

Insane
00:03:867 - Add note, to keep the rhythm flow, like 00:02:152 (3) -
00:14:010 - Stack a note on the head of (1) here (now (2)) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626826
00:30:867 (7) - NC, and maybe finish on head
01:04:581 (4) - Rotate clockwise like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626833, looks nicer with (6) imo
01:05:152 (5) - Stack on head of (2) (also in above screenshot)
fun sliders

this map is superbadass
GamerX4life
SPOILER

LunarSakuya wrote:

hai

GamerX4life's Hard
00:03:438 (4) - NC Ok
00:05:152 (8) - Add note here, hear the bg music closely I don't hear anything here, so No
00:07:152 (2) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626809 Code if you want the slider: Ok i fixed the rhytm
164,224,7152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,7295,2,0,P|256:264|352:224,1,210.000000596047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:152 (4) - NC to indicate SV change, then NC on note right after i guess; i think the change is significant enough
00:55:724 (3) - ^
01:02:581 (4) - ^
01:09:438 (3) - ^
01:15:438 (1) - Finish on head fixed all^
Nice diff :lol: yay

this map is superbadass

thx for mod

http://puu.sh/27y5F
Topic Starter
Deni
LunarSakuya

LunarSakuya wrote:

hai hai

General
looks fine \:D/

Easy
00:24:009 (1) - Finish on head like every other time she says superbad ok!
00:48:867 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; feels like new stanza The current NC is better imo
01:06:010 (4) - Whistle on this whole slider, it kinda fits the bg music imo No, since I haven't used Whistles at all..
01:15:438 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note ok!
01:27:438 (1) - Move this up to blanket the orange (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626788 I don't think that's needed here because if you click the last slider you don't even see the (3) anymore.


Insane
00:03:867 - Add note, to keep the rhythm flow, like 00:02:152 (3) - you're right, added
00:14:010 - Stack a note on the head of (1) here (now (2)) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626826 ok!
00:30:867 (7) - NC, and maybe finish on head ok, did both
01:04:581 (4) - Rotate clockwise like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626833, looks nicer with (6) imo yeah, fixed!
01:05:152 (5) - Stack on head of (2) (also in above screenshot) ok!
fun sliders

this map is superbadass lol

Thanks for your helpful mod.
Birdy
the (not late) update?!?!?! :-)
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Superbad.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 33877
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Superbad
TitleUnicode:Superbad
Artist:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
ArtistUnicode:Flux Pavilion & Doctor P
Creator:Deni
Version:SNB's Normal
Source:
Tags:Dubstep Static Noise Bird GamerX4life
BeatmapID:188434
BeatmapSetID:63413

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:3

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Superbad3.JPG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Topic Starter
Deni
Updated!
GamerX4life
Whoop Static Noise Bird -> best avatar xD
Birdy
I know sorry Deni no kawaii gurls anymore
Honeybadger_old
Here from the queue, as requested!

[Beginner]

  • No comments really.
[SNB's Normal]

  • Same here. Looks good.
[GamerX4life's Hard]

  • This is ridiculous. Either my head is bonkers or this map is just plain good.
[Insane]

  • I quit. I can't find anything to comment on. I'm still learning, don't judge me!
Well done! You've got me stumped. Sorry I couldn't be of any help at all.
captin1
Hey! M4M from your queue

Mostly suggestions

Beginner

I feel like the beginning section (00:06:867 to 00:31:295 ) is way too densely mapped for such a low star rating. After it the rhythms are much easier
00:09:867 (4) - remove this note
00:11:152 (2) - make this just a circle
00:13:724 (1,2) - why are there red ticks on the ends? little thing but they don't need to be there. Also, these should be parallel
00:15:867 (4) - remove
00:18:438 (4) - remove
00:23:581 (3) - remove
00:27:009 (6) - remove
I would stick to one or two slider curves from 00:34:295 to 00:45:438 to make it a lot neater
00:34:295 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner, if you select it then you'll see that it doesn't have the nc highlighed. it's actually unrankable like this
00:51:010 (3) - move this to 00:51:438 and delete 4
01:08:152 (5) - move to x308 y84 to stack on 3

SNB's Normal

I would go with an SV of 1.1 or 1.2, the jump from beginner is huge.

00:23:581 (4,1) - Fairly nazi, but move to x276 y136 for triangle
00:54:010 (4) - I would put this to the right and under 3, around x416 y144 ish
01:24:010 (3) - move to x168 y48

GamerX4life's Hard

Replay

This diff had an uncomfortable combination of a lower ar and offbeat hits that ended up making hitting 300's harder than it should.

00:10:010 (9) - awkwardly placed and misleading
otherwise fine

Insane

Replay

00:23:152 (5) - Make this the same angle (just flipped) as 2
00:43:724 (4,5) - I really don't like this awkwardly shortened distance spacing, it's hard to read and disrupts flow, especially with your high sv
01:07:724 (5,6) - can you adjust these so that they're even? one leg of the v is longer than the other

All I got, Good luck!
Birdy
remind me to check this after school, Deni
GamerX4life

captin1 wrote:

GamerX4life's Hard

Replay

This diff had an uncomfortable combination of a lower ar and offbeat hits that ended up making hitting 300's harder than it should. offbeat objects all need to be there/ would change AR if this would be an Insane :/

00:10:010 (9) - awkwardly placed and misleading changed the first slider a little bit, rest of it is cool imo.
otherwise fine I used this pattern more than 1 time/ the others are fine to you?!
thx

http://puu.sh/2wbbx
Birdy
First fixed, other two adjusted in own way, thanks :-)

the nice box
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Topic Starter
Deni

Static Noise Bird wrote:

remind me to check this after school, Deni
I have school too :3/

captin1 wrote:

Hey! M4M from your queue Hi!

Mostly suggestions

Beginner

I feel like the beginning section (00:06:867 to 00:31:295 ) is way too densely mapped for such a low star rating. After it the rhythms are much easier I know, but the beginning is still Easy so I don't see a big problem here.
00:09:867 (4) - remove this note
00:11:152 (2) - make this just a circle
I want to keep the rhythm here, so no. It's still Easy. If somebody else mentions this, I will probably change.
00:13:724 (1,2) - why are there red ticks on the ends? little thing but they don't need to be there. Also, these should be parallel The red ticks don't matter at all, but yes I made them now symmetrical.
00:15:867 (4) - remove
00:18:438 (4) - remove
00:23:581 (3) - remove
00:27:009 (6) - remove

I would stick to one or two slider curves from 00:34:295 to 00:45:438 to make it a lot neater I'll think about it, but it's fine as it is now imo.

00:34:295 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner, if you select it then you'll see that it doesn't have the nc highlighed. it's actually unrankable like this Fixed


00:51:010 (3) - move this to 00:51:438 and delete 4 Current rhythm is fine imo
01:08:152 (5) - move to x308 y84 to stack on 3 This would break the spacing consistency!

Insane

Replay Nice!

00:23:152 (5) - Make this the same angle (just flipped) as 2 My current one fits better to the following (6)
00:43:724 (4,5) - I really don't like this awkwardly shortened distance spacing, it's hard to read and disrupts flow, especially with your high svYou're right, fixed.
01:07:724 (5,6) - can you adjust these so that they're even? one leg of the v is longer than the other Fixed... I think

All I got, Good luck! thanks
Also, updated SNB and Gx4L diff's.
Sonnyc
Request on queue years ago ;_; Sorry

Beginner:

00:08:152 (2,3) - 1 Grid left
00:30:010 (4) - Clap at the start
00:40:724 (5) - Well, though this may break the pattern, adding a clap will fit the song better.
00:52:295 (1) - Clap at the end
00:54:438 (2) - Clap
00:58:295 (3) - Clap at the end
01:06:010 (4,5) - Similar Clap suggestion
01:08:581 (1) - Make a linear slider as 01:10:295 (2).
01:14:581 (2) - Clap

SNB's Normal:

00:27:009 (4) - Make a 1/3 reverse slider?
00:30:867 (1) - Just my thought : the third red dot made the slider shape weird
00:33:438 (2) - I think people can be confused. consider NCing or deleting
01:27:724 (1) - Start at 01:27:867 to follow the lyric.

GamerX4Life's Hard:

00:11:581 (4) - I think you are following a different part of the instrument. Try NCing
00:12:010 (2) - :3 my first time to see a wiggled slider with a curve.
00:21:009 (2) - Add Whistle in the slide?
00:27:438 (1) - ^?
00:34:581 (3,1) - Uhhhhhh... a speed change with a symmetry is too confusing for me :(
00:41:438 (1,2) - Swap combos because of speed change.
00:48:867 (3) - Another interesting shape :3
01:01:724 (3) - Imo, deleting the reverse sounded better
01:03:438 (2) - NC

Insane:

00:24:867 (3) - NC
00:31:724 (2) - Reduce one reverse, and add a note at 00:32:581.
01:15:295 - Add a note.
01:21:295 (3) - NC? Unless 01:21:724 (5) will be too confusing.
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Sonnyc wrote:

GamerX4Life's Hard:

00:11:581 (4) - I think you are following a different part of the instrument. Try NCing Ok
00:12:010 (2) - :3 my first time to see a wiggled slider with a curve. i'm glad that you like it :)
00:21:009 (2) - Add Whistle in the slide? No doesn't fit so good imo.
00:27:438 (1) - ^? same^
00:34:581 (3,1) - Uhhhhhh... a speed change with a symmetry is too confusing for me :( I think its ok with NC isn't it? :(
00:41:438 (1,2) - Swap combos because of speed change. Ok
00:48:867 (3) - Another interesting shape :3 :3
01:01:724 (3) - Imo, deleting the reverse sounded better Ok
01:03:438 (2) - NC Ok

thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/2xx42
Birdy
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268,280,44438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Deni

Sonnyc wrote:

Request on queue years ago ;_; Sorry It's okay.

Beginner:

00:08:152 (2,3) - 1 Grid left Fixed
00:30:010 (4) - Clap at the start Ok!
00:40:724 (5) - Well, though this may break the pattern, adding a clap will fit the song better. I think without it's better
00:52:295 (1) - Clap at the end Fixed
00:54:438 (2) - Clap No, without it's better here
00:58:295 (3) - Clap at the end No, here's a finish like in the song
01:06:010 (4,5) - Similar Clap suggestionAdded clap to end of (4)
01:08:581 (1) - Make a linear slider as 01:10:295 (2). Current is fine imo
01:14:581 (2) - Clap Added clap to head of (2)

Insane:

00:24:867 (3) - NC Ok ...
00:31:724 (2) - Reduce one reverse, and add a note at 00:32:581. Current is fine imo
01:15:295 - Add a note. Added
01:21:295 (3) - NC? Unless 01:21:724 (5) will be too confusing. It's not confusing imo..


Thanks, also updated SNB and GX4L diff's.
Nichiyouki
Hi, Deni

Mod request from Fumika & Nichiyouki's Modding Queue
and sorry for our mod delay

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Okay, clear.

Easy

  1. 00:12:010 (3,4) - hmm... Remove (4). Then move slider end (3) to replace (4) will be fit the vocal and rhythm
  2. 00:24:009 (1,2) - It will be better if you remove (2). Then move slider end (1) to replace (2) instead, which will be better to use note to follow vocal

Normal

  1. 00:05:581 (1) - This spinner is too short, since I have seen this spinner can get only 3000. So please change into other note such as slider, or remove it.
  2. 00:44:581 (1) - I think you forget add clap on slider end. So please add it.
  3. 01:08:010 (4,5,6,1) - I'm not sure that it cause confused or not? but it will be better if you change (5,6) into slider imo.

Hard

  1. 00:40:724 (6) - Finish hitsound isn't fit to use here. I suggest that change hitsound into whistle instead.
  2. 00:54:867 (1) - This, too. Use whistle hitsound instead of finish.

Insane

  1. 00:00:438 (2) - This note isn't follow the rhythm. Please move it at 00:00:295 instead to follow the rhythm.
  2. 00:02:152 (3) - This, too. Move at 00:02:010.
  3. 00:03:867 (1) - This one. I doute why you add a note here? which I think it isn't follow the rhythm. However, please move it at 00:03:724.
  4. 00:05:581 - This is empty spacing, which no good idea to that. So I suggest that add spinner to replace this empty spacing.
  5. 00:24:010 (1) - Do you forget add finish here? Please add it.
  6. 00:32:724 - Add spinner here, too. To replace this empty spacing imo.
  7. 01:13:581 (1) - It isn't necessary to add NC. Please remove it.
  8. 01:28:152 (6) - Move to up 2 grid to increase the spacing between (5,6), which it's weird.

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
GamerX4life
Hey Deni could you please fix those two hitsounds?
Saves time for both of us :)

thx for mod, Nichiyouki
Birdy
Same for me @ 00:44:581 end clap, please fix it the deni the nice :-). Changing the other two is unnecessary.
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