Honda Mariko - Zettai Kaicho Sengen!

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Rotte

Natsu wrote:

Insane:
  1. HP +1 for better diff spread also 6 so low for a Insane ok~fixed
  2. 00:18:556 maybe you should try to map the important sounds here like 00:18:660 since you map this 00:18:972 with exactly the same sound I modded it
  3. 00:26:056 add circle then start the spinner on 00:26:160 Is better for gameplay and music imo added.
  4. 00:51:056 this should be a NC NC
  5. 01:37:097 (6) - god add a new combo so the pattern can be more readable plz x_x (I fail here orz) NC :)
  6. 01:28:347 same as above ok
  7. 01:47:722 same suggestion on 00:26:056 also adding a circle here 01:47:618 gonna be cool I think I am flowed vocal.
  8. 02:37:514 - 02:37:618 maybe you wanna try adding some circle there making a nice triplet with 02:37:722 that represent the music better imo I think I don't take any circle in this place you mentioned,because I am flowed beat.
  9. 02:57:722 same suggestion about add circle and start spinner later since in this place feel alot better imo ok~
  10. 00:56:056 NC following the pattern of previous? ok
  11. 02:50:639 add clap thx
  12. really fun diff <3
http://puu.sh/3IQFa.osu
sammy711
Nothing to say and 1 star
Good map and taught me something more valuable than 1SP
Flower
23456789

[Insane]
怎么说呢……图看不出什么槽点但是莫名的不爽,所以下面没有啥重要的,只是鸡蛋里挑骨头罢了
00:22:722 (3,4) - 感觉这里用note+1/1的组合比较贴合歌曲
00:31:056 (1,2,3,4) - 改成圆滑的弧形比较适合
00:39:389 (1,2) - 距离太近有点像是1/4
00:43:972 (7) - ^
01:03:347 (4,5,6,7,1) - 增大距离,因为auto-stack让排列有些打乱
01:10:847 - 加个note?
01:11:993 (4,5) - 换个方向 现在auto-stack让他完全隐藏在滑条下面
01:20:917 - 这里莫名有个1/3,可以考虑把01:20:639 (4) - 延长
01:32:514 (8,1) - 跳得有点莫名……
01:50:639 (2) - 改成折返4次而不是1次?
02:01:056 - 02:12:722 - 感觉这里间距是overmap了。

[Hard]
00:21:681 (2) - 建议不要跳
00:34:597 (5) - 可以NC
00:37:722 (6) - ^ 之后同理。10combo对hard来讲是不是有点长了。
00:47:722 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 突然横平竖直貌似有点奇怪。
01:07:514 (8) - 放到x:80 y:180?正好有个跳
01:43:972 (9,10,11) - 不如改成1/2
02:46:889 (7,8,9,10) - 也是莫名横平竖直

[Normal]
00:13:972 (4,1) - 莫名不爽 但可以不改 看你的
00:37:722 (3,4) - 分开一些
00:41:056 (4,5,6) - flow有点怪 但是我说不出怎么改
00:42:722 (1,2) - 没包好
01:26:056 (3,4) - 分开。我感觉你这个是隐藏的懒……
01:37:722 (1) - 这个3/4感觉有点莫名了
01:41:056 (1,2,3) - 这大弧度丑

没了 good luck~
Hollow Wings
random mod
00:18:556 (5,6) - 这遮挡也太严重了吧233,建议往左上再移一点。。。
00:33:972 (8) - 这个可以跟前面的串摆在一条曲线上。。。或者干脆再往右下移动一点
01:15:014 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个串可以离前后都远一点

没啥好说的233,作为insane会不会太简单了噗
啥都mod不出来233
00:14:181 (1,2) - 1和2的折返次数统一一下?
00:41:889 (6,1,2) - 不来一发blanket么
00:46:889 (2,3) - ^
01:26:056 (3,4) - 折返朝左上?尾别靠太近。。。
02:13:556 (3) - 折返朝右上
02:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段感觉音效有点响
02:46:056 (3,4) - 这折返和头靠的太近了。。。

直来直去的滑条好多,似乎不太喜欢blanket

blabla
good luck
Topic Starter
Nymph

Natsu wrote:

HI~ Nymph

General:
  • clear :D
Hard:
  1. 00:20:639 (5,6,7,8,9) - this was bother me when I play this since is hard to read try 0.50 distance for making easy to read or stack they perfect orz k
  2. 00:22:306 NC? since you add a NC here 00:24:389 just for consistency :D/ k
  3. 00:47:306 maybe convert this in 1/2 slider this part 00:47:514 sound really weird without somethink k
  4. 00:52:722 add circle and start spinner on 00:52:826 since you did on previous one also I feel weird after the pause just start spinning
  5. 01:16:056 (7,1) - swap NC
  6. 01:47:722 same as 00:52:722
  7. 02:25:847 finish in the tail?k
  8. 02:57:722 add clapk
  9. nice diff just that stream bother me when I play it >.<
Normal:
  1. 00:07:722 whys is this the only diff who start with whistle? better remove it for consistency k
  2. 00:10:222 - 00:08:556 ^
  3. 00:07:722 (1,2) - maybe a little nazi but the distance is not the correct k
  4. 00:20:222 (5,6) - avoid the stack since is 1/1 new players tend to click so fast also take in consideration they can think is a 1/2 like you did before k
  5. 00:29:389 same about whistle you just use random they o.o imo is better remove they k
  6. 00:43:556 can you redo this slider the curve look a little weird maybe im being nazi :/k
  7. 02:26:056 spinner should start here so you can map the pprevious part gonna be better k
Nice song and nice map take a start C:
thanks~
Topic Starter
Nymph

Hollow Wings wrote:

random mod
00:18:556 (5,6) - 这遮挡也太严重了吧233,建议往左上再移一点。。。
00:33:972 (8) - 这个可以跟前面的串摆在一条曲线上。。。或者干脆再往右下移动一点
01:15:014 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个串可以离前后都远一点

没啥好说的233,作为insane会不会太简单了噗
啥都mod不出来233
00:14:181 (1,2) - 1和2的折返次数统一一下?
00:41:889 (6,1,2) - 不来一发blanket么
00:46:889 (2,3) - ^
01:26:056 (3,4) - 折返朝左上?尾别靠太近。。。
02:13:556 (3) - 折返朝右上
02:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段感觉音效有点响
02:46:056 (3,4) - 这折返和头靠的太近了。。。

直来直去的滑条好多,似乎不太喜欢blanket

blabla
good luck
全改勒 thanks~
Topic Starter
Nymph

Flower wrote:

23456789

[Insane]
怎么说呢……图看不出什么槽点但是莫名的不爽,所以下面没有啥重要的,只是鸡蛋里挑骨头罢了
00:22:722 (3,4) - 感觉这里用note+1/1的组合比较贴合歌曲
00:31:056 (1,2,3,4) - 改成圆滑的弧形比较适合
00:39:389 (1,2) - 距离太近有点像是1/4
00:43:972 (7) - ^
01:03:347 (4,5,6,7,1) - 增大距离,因为auto-stack让排列有些打乱
01:10:847 - 加个note?
01:11:993 (4,5) - 换个方向 现在auto-stack让他完全隐藏在滑条下面
01:20:917 - 这里莫名有个1/3,可以考虑把01:20:639 (4) - 延长 略奇怪
01:32:514 (8,1) - 跳得有点莫名……
01:50:639 (2) - 改成折返4次而不是1次?4次听着很别扭
02:01:056 - 02:12:722 - 感觉这里间距是overmap了。玩着还行

[Hard]
00:21:681 (2) - 建议不要跳 太近了难受
00:34:597 (5) - 可以NC
00:37:722 (6) - ^ 之后同理。10combo对hard来讲是不是有点长了。我不咋在乎nc
00:47:722 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 突然横平竖直貌似有点奇怪。
01:07:514 (8) - 放到x:80 y:180?正好有个跳
01:43:972 (9,10,11) - 不如改成1/2
02:46:889 (7,8,9,10) - 也是莫名横平竖直

[Normal]
00:13:972 (4,1) - 莫名不爽 但可以不改 看你的
00:37:722 (3,4) - 分开一些
00:41:056 (4,5,6) - flow有点怪 但是我说不出怎么改
00:42:722 (1,2) - 没包好
01:26:056 (3,4) - 分开。我感觉你这个是隐藏的懒……
01:37:722 (1) - 这个3/4感觉有点莫名了
01:41:056 (1,2,3) - 这大弧度丑

没了 good luck~
其余都改了多谢~
wcx19911123
[General]
fine

[raririn's Normal]
02:57:722 - 这里用note好点

[Hard]
01:41:056 (1) - 这地方感觉可以跳更大点0.0

[Insane]
01:41:056 (1) - 同H
02:57:097 - 感觉没必要NC

“老衲法号梦遗”
Topic Starter
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
fine

[raririn's Normal]
02:57:722 - 这里用note好点 hao

[Hard]
01:41:056 (1) - 这地方感觉可以跳更大点0.0 这diff纯送 算了

[Insane]
01:41:056 (1) - 同H 改了下slider位置 距离大了点
02:57:097 - 感觉没必要NC

“老衲法号梦遗”
我在深圳火车站了
wcx19911123
bubbled
以后开queue的姿势我觉得我掌握了
popner
香草


[Rotte's Insane]
00:36:681 (5,6,7,8,9) - 手动stack把,不是正方形啊

00:45:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 5连以上最好手动堆叠
01:16:056 (1,2) - 手动堆叠

[raririn's Normal]
01:41:056 (1,2,3) - 这几个也太难看了吧!
Topic Starter
Nymph

popner wrote:

香草


[Rotte's Insane]
00:36:681 (5,6,7,8,9) - 手动stack把,不是正方形啊

00:45:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 5连以上最好手动堆叠
01:16:056 (1,2) - 手动堆叠

[raririn's Normal]
01:41:056 (1,2,3) - 这几个也太难看了吧!
hao a quan gai le
popner
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