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ChouCho - Yasashisa no Riyuu

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Frostmourne
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 ธันวาคม 2555 at 20:42:10

Artist: ChouCho
Title: Yasashisa no Riyuu
Source: Hyouka
Tags: opening kyoto animation kyoani
BPM: 177
Filesize: 7414kb
Play Time: 04:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.85 stars, 620 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 757 notes)
  3. Normal (2.96 stars, 289 notes)
Download: ChouCho - Yasashisa no Riyuu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kini Narimasu !!

Finished, Hope it can get ranked orz
Ready for mod , Thank you !!!


My first anime map =w= , hope you enjoy \:D/
Thank you for playing very much !!
new BG by Milkshake , Thank you again !!!!!!
Mythol
ki ni narimasu!
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
thanks for that suggestions : )
Phixgar
;) ;) new bg!!! >< , good luck Frost-chan น่ารักซะไม่มี~ 555 :)
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

Phixgar wrote:

;) ;) new bg!!! >< , good luck Frost-chan น่ารักซะไม่มี~ 555 :)
-_-

ขอบคุณครับพี่ผึ้ง :D

updated bg ~~
wring
いい譜面でした :D
nice
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
yess wring :D

Thank you for stars : )
rickyboi
omg can I make SUPER EXTRA HARD diff? just kidding.

good luck with this!
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

rickyboi wrote:

omg can I make SUPER EXTRA HARD diff? just kidding.

good luck with this!
HAHAHAHA , AND I WILL BE THE FIRST ONE WHO FC YOUR EXTRA HARD DIFF (like Boot :>)

Thank you ricky /o/
S o r d a
<33
Quilt
great
alacat

Mythol wrote:

ki ni narimasu!
(ノ*・ω・)ノ ☆
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

S o r d a wrote:

<33
<3<3<3

Quilt wrote:

great
Thank youuuu : )

alacat wrote:

Mythol wrote:

ki ni narimasu!
(ノ*・ω・)ノ ☆
Thank you for star very muchhhh !!!

also intoon,lolcubes , Thank youuu !!
h3k1ru
choucho ♥
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

h3k1ru wrote:

choucho ♥
>w< ChouCho <3<3

Thank you for star h3k1ru : )
NewRulerNA
hi

[General]
  1. add "opening" in tag
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:632 (1,2,3) - seem cramped placement.
    I suggest this.
  2. 00:23:106 (1) - this spinner have halfway timing.
    spineer start move to 00:22:767. will become better than now.
  3. 00:54:632 (2,3) - this flow is bad.
    try this
    flow will be more easy to play.
  4. 01:02:089 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these note do not follow song and hard to understand.
    suggest this rhythm.

    01:02:089 (1) - 01:02:598 - 3/2 slider
    01:02:937 (2) - circle
    01:03:276 (3) - 01:03:615 - 1/1 slider
    01:03:954 (4) - circle
    01:04:293 (5) - 01:04:632 - 1/1 slider
    01:04:971 (1) - 01:05:310 - 01:05:649 - 1/1 reverse slider
    01:05:988 (2) - circle
  5. 01:49:886 (3,1) - this flow is also bad.
    try this
  6. 02:20:056 (3,4) - make same angle is better.
  7. 02:55:649 (4) - add finish at start
    02:55:649 - should be emphasized imo
  8. 03:21:920 (2,3) - not follow song. current rhythm seemed Hard to understand.
    I could not suggestion to partial fix. this suggestion affects 03:21:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3)

    03:21:920 (2) - 03:22:259 - 1/1 slider
    03:22:598 (3) - 03:22:937 - 1/1 slider
    03:23:276 (4) - circle
    03:23:615 (1) - 03:23:954 - 1/1 slider
    03:24:293 (2) - 03:24:801 - 3/2 slider
    03:25:140 (3) - 03:25:479 - 1/1 slider
  9. 04:03:784 - move spinner start here
placement is good, but I worry rhythm. KIAI start timing have some problem about rhythm.

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:513 (5,1,2,3) - these note placement is narrowed under the influence of stack.
    00:07:852 (1,2,3) - few grid right
  2. 00:22:852 (1) - move spinner end in 00:24:123
  3. 00:59:039 (2,3) - gradually lower the volume.
    00:59:039 - 50%
    00:59:378 - 40%
  4. 01:06:666 (1) - clean the triangle by adding more angle would be better.
    like this
  5. 02:06:496 (2) - touch HP bar.
  6. 02:10:903 (1,2) - same as 00:59:039 (2,3)
  7. 02:44:462 (3,4,5,6) - placement the diamond will be clean.
    02:44:632 (4) - move to x:164 y:136
    02:44:801 (5) - move to x:248 y:160
    02:44:971 (6) - move to x:180 y:216
  8. 03:29:039 (5,6) - Change the order of the circle and slider.
    will be follow more songs by this.
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:988 (2) - move to x:140 y:312
    Triangle will be made ​​from the B and C and D. and 00:35:479 (5,6,7,1,2) become clean halfback.
  2. 00:59:039 (3,4) - same as hard
  3. 02:10:903 (2,3) - same as hard
This is all

gl
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:23:106 (1) - this spinner have halfway timing.
    spineer start move to 00:22:767. will become better than now. I intended to add note on 00:22:767 because I want this to have a note on Finish+Bass sound so I fixed by moving spinner 1/2 back also others alike sliders too (hope it will be fine for normal diff) to make it follow the music better xD
  2. 02:20:056 (3,4) - make same angle is better. fixed by adding a slider and remove a note
  3. 03:21:920 (2,3) - not follow song. current rhythm seemed Hard to understand.
    I could not suggestion to partial fix. this suggestion affects 03:21:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3)

    03:21:920 (2) - 03:22:259 - 1/1 slider
    03:22:598 (3) - 03:22:937 - 1/1 slider
    03:23:276 (4) - circle
    03:23:615 (1) - 03:23:954 - 1/1 slider
    03:24:293 (2) - 03:24:801 - 3/2 slider
    03:25:140 (3) - 03:25:479 - 1/1 slider
    I fixed the first part, and follow the suggested rhythm by your(which is following the vocal, popular,and everyone are familiar with)
    But for the second part, I would like to follow on drum and instruments to make it have various rhythms in the diff so
    The third part has been fixed according to your suggestion though !
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:852 (1) - move spinner end in 00:24:123 I end this one due to snare sound (clap) here so leave it here T.T
  2. 01:06:666 (1) - clean the triangle by adding more angle would be better. move up a bit otherwise it will touch hp bar =_=a
    like this
  3. 02:44:462 (3,4,5,6) - placement the diamond will be clean.
    02:44:632 (4) - move to x:164 y:136
    02:44:801 (5) - move to x:248 y:160
    02:44:971 (6) - move to x:180 y:216
    will leave it here because I would like to let them stack this note 02:45:818 (3) - and 02:46:327 (4) - intentionally :3
This is all

gl
The rest that I didn't mention were fixed accordingly

Thank you very much : ) !!!!!
BeatofIke
Hello Frostmourne! Mod request via Forum PM!
After spending over 3 hours on modding this map, I can not seem to find much to point out orz!
Here's a star for now. Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
-_-

thanks for checking and star !!
Backstep
มาแปะดาว =w=/
hoLysoup
Frostmourne! :>

[Insane]
00:35:479 (5,6,7) - I just think these default softclaps sound bad... I think add greenline here at 40% with S:C1 is much better :>
01:12:598 (1) - make this a different SV? like higher sv maybe? since it's NC also
02:00:056 (1) - make finish at the end of slider louder? just the end of slider
02:13:954 (8) - NC here?
02:19:293 (6) - remove this clap?
02:40:903 (x) - why not start a slider here with finish on the head? because you did earlier for the guitar accents I think it fits very well
02:56:073 (1) - add default soft whistle at end of this spinner? (40%)
04:03:615 (6) - mm maybe remove the clap? just have the finish
04:03:700 (1) - 70% for last spinner is too loud I think, just do 40% or lower


random mod :>
!! nice nice~
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

hoLysoup wrote:

Frostmourne! :> hoLysoup <:

[Insane]
00:35:479 (5,6,7) - I just think these default softclaps sound bad... I think add greenline here at 40% with S:C1 is much better :> fixed \:D/
01:12:598 (1) - make this a different SV? like higher sv maybe? since it's NC also from its shape and direction (goes up) I think it can be odd to hit next note because distance is quite short (I don't know where I should put the next one on=_=) anyways, I fixed the new combo at 01:13:106 (2) - and 01:13:784 (1) - to make it proper : )
02:00:056 (1) - make finish at the end of slider louder? just the end of slider fixed :>
02:13:954 (8) - NC here? jump without followpoint is kind of strange to me for this part =_=" , I don't know why orz,sorry, leave it here ~~~
02:19:293 (6) - remove this clap? I think it sounds imperfect if I remove clap because I intend to add stream here xD
02:40:903 (x) - why not start a slider here with finish on the head? because you did earlier for the guitar accents I think it fits very well agree ! , fixed but I don't know that my new placement will be better or worse xD
02:56:073 (1) - add default soft whistle at end of this spinner? (40%) added :D
04:03:615 (6) - mm maybe remove the clap? just have the finish , pure finish is quite empty I think , so I removed clap but I add clap together with finish , I think it fits xD
04:03:700 (1) - 70% for last spinner is too loud I think, just do 40% or lower fixed


random mod :> gladdd...
!! nice nice~
Thank you hoLysouppp \^^/
Laurier
request as PM

General
-clear

Normal
00:04:462 (1) - the first slider is overlapped by spinner osu. It's not big problem. but I think you can move away this slider.If first slider is so, I do not remain in the good impression.
00:15:988 (3) - 00:14:632 (1,3) is not look to good balance. maybe make smooth slider? or add more waypoint http://puu.sh/1tGxl
00:32:259 (3,4) - and 00:47:344 (3,4) - in this place,your stacking 2 notes. but those not same rhythm. please move any one.it be confusing to beginners.
01:02:089 (1) - changing to whistle on slider end. you use whistle on 2nd kiai
01:24:123 (1) - why start at this timing ? start at 01:25:140 is better for me
03:17:683 (1) - remove clap . little noisy to sound

Hard
00:31:073 (1) - make same angle as 00:30:564 (3)
01:07:513 (5) -just suggestion http://puu.sh/1tGUb
01:23:954 (1) - same as normal
01:39:039 (6) - add clap
02:53:106 (5) - same angle as (4)
03:28:361 (3) - add clap

Insane
00:04:293 (3,4) - please keeping spacing. this note not want to small spacing .
00:48:869 (1) - nazi. like this 2nd waypoint http://puu.sh/1tH5a
02:08:106 (2,3,4) - why not make straight ?
01:58:022 (1,2,3) - little volume down and add clap
02:35:818 (2) - add clap on reverse ?

That's all good map and love this song <3
I hope to you get ranked
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

Laurier wrote:

request as PM Thank you : )

General
-clear

Normal
00:04:462 (1) - the first slider is overlapped by spinner osu. It's not big problem. but I think you can move away this slider.If first slider is so, I do not remain in the good impression. fixed accordingly : )
00:15:988 (3) - 00:14:632 (1,3) is not look to good balance. maybe make smooth slider? or add more waypoint http://puu.sh/1tGxl more smooth for now I guess ~~~
00:32:259 (3,4) - and 00:47:344 (3,4) - in this place,your stacking 2 notes. but those not same rhythm. please move any one.it be confusing to beginners. rearrange the whole rhythms !
01:02:089 (1) - changing to whistle on slider end. you use whistle on 2nd kiai ok : )
01:24:123 (1) - why start at this timing ? start at 01:25:140 is better for me no for this because I want to follow on guitar sound orz.. sorry
03:17:683 (1) - remove clap . little noisy to sound other diffs I used clap+finish so sorry =_=" , leave it here

Hard
00:31:073 (1) - make same angle as 00:30:564 (3) .. I think it's ok =_=" , not a big deal to change it because I feel it plays better
01:07:513 (5) -just suggestion http://puu.sh/1tGUb really nice xD
01:23:954 (1) - same as normal same...
01:39:039 (6) - add clap add whistle instead as I did in Insane diff , I also added clap according to drum : ) /
02:53:106 (5) - same angle as (4) fixed
03:28:361 (3) - add clap added ~~

Insane
00:04:293 (3,4) - please keeping spacing. this note not want to small spacing . don't know how to fix=_=" but tried already !
00:48:869 (1) - nazi. like this 2nd waypoint http://puu.sh/1tH5a don't know that I fixed better or worse -_-"
02:08:106 (2,3,4) - why not make straight ? doesn't that look good xD? , previous is curved one so I think linear slider on the next will look cool :P
01:58:022 (1,2,3) - little volume down and add clap clap only 3 4 5 is ok I think xD , but I down the volume a bit too xD
02:35:818 (2) - add clap on reverse ? I think my sound is ok ^^ , yours is also good too =w=b

That's all good map and love this song <3
I hope to you get ranked
I hope so x.x

and really thank you for your mod !! : )
Flask
Maybe M4M? >w<

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Add kyoto animation kyoani to tags. You can check the ranked TV Size version of this song, they all add that~
  2. Tick the letterbox during breaks since there're no SB?

[ Normal]
  1. 00:04:462 (1) - NC Bug
  2. 00:22:767 (1) - It's better if you add finish -v-
  3. 01:34:632 (1) - ^
  4. 00:35:649 (2) - whistle to make this pattern's whistle consistent
  5. 01:14:123 (1) - Remove nc since you don't nc at 01:03:276 (3) -. They are just same part!
  6. 01:47:852 (3) - Missing clap? There's a strong clap sound lol
  7. 02:39:886 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to add finished on these objects because you add on 02:40:903 (1,2,3) - too :3
  8. 02:44:971 (2) - I feel that end at 02:45:649 - would be great and fits the music atm :3
  9. 02:48:022 (2) - (begin,end) Add whistle since there's some sound :\
  10. 02:56:327 (1) - finish I think, whistle is not enough !!!
  11. 03:17:005 (3) - (end) clap? Well just make them consistent ~

[ Hard]
  1. 02:39:378 (4) - Overlap it with (3)'s end. It's not all overlap :<
  2. 00:24:632 (2) - 03:55:310 (2) - NC Bug
  3. 02:56:157 (1) - Finish. Same reason in Normal \o-o/
  4. 03:19:208 (1,2,4) - I'd suggest you to add clap, since there's a sound in the music~
    Great ~~

[ Insane]
  1. 00:03:784 (2) - NC bug
  2. 01:45:140 (1,2) - Try like this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/503293 (nazi)
  3. 02:24:547 - Add a note here? It's very nice if it's a stream imo owo
  4. 02:56:073 (1) - Finish~ same reason in Normal
  5. 03:06:835 (3) - (reserve,end) unsnapped!!
  6. 03:21:581 (2) - (begin) Why finish? sounds really unfit here.

Nice map ><!! Really like your mapping style xD
Stared!!!!!
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

Flask wrote:

Maybe M4M? >w<

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Add kyoto animation kyoani to tags. You can check the ranked TV Size version of this song, they all add that~ added them all
  2. Tick the letterbox during breaks since there're no SB? I always tick letterbox out because I don't like it xD (every my maps are)

[ Normal]
  1. 00:04:462 (1) - NC Bug added
  2. 00:22:767 (1) - It's better if you add finish -v- whistle as I did on others instead xD
  3. 01:34:632 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 00:35:649 (2) - whistle to make this pattern's whistle consistent ok !!
  5. 01:14:123 (1) - Remove nc since you don't nc at 01:03:276 (3) -. They are just same part! -_- , ok !
  6. 01:47:852 (3) - Missing clap? There's a strong clap sound lol added custom clap for now :D
  7. 02:39:886 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to add finished on these objects because you add on 02:40:903 (1,2,3) - too :3 I don't think so because all finish sounds will replace all guitar sounds and will make it lost what I want to present =_=" so, leave it here~~
  8. 02:44:971 (2) - I feel that end at 02:45:649 - would be great and fits the music atm :3 ah.. I will leave it here because I want to follow on pure drum ^^/
  9. 02:48:022 (2) - (begin,end) Add whistle since there's some sound :\ all whistle \:D/
  10. 02:56:327 (1) - finish I think, whistle is not enough !!! awww ;_; , I think it fits with guitar sound much... orz
  11. 03:17:005 (3) - (end) clap? Well just make them consistent ~ I didn't add on hard and insane and clap is too loud I think =_=~~~

[ Hard]
  1. 02:39:378 (4) - Overlap it with (3)'s end. It's not all overlap :< o_o", it's fine xDxD
  2. 00:24:632 (2) - 03:55:310 (2) - NC Bug fixed : )
  3. 02:56:157 (1) - Finish. Same reason in Normal \o-o/ noooo /o/~~~~
  4. 03:19:208 (1,2,4) - I'd suggest you to add clap, since there's a sound in the music~ whistle instead to make it various xD
    Great ~~

[ Insane]
  1. 00:03:784 (2) - NC bug fixed~~
  2. 01:45:140 (1,2) - Try like this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/503293 (nazi) aww.. that's ok , stylish stylish xDxD
  3. 02:24:547 - Add a note here? It's very nice if it's a stream imo owo orz , I think it's ok , don't want to add too much stream xD
  4. 02:56:073 (1) - Finish~ same reason in Normal :o
  5. 03:06:835 (3) - (reserve,end) unsnapped!! fixed !!
  6. 03:21:581 (2) - (begin) Why finish? sounds really unfit here. if you try to listen on that point, it sounds finish on the background of music there xDxD ( I was trying to listen them carefully many times to decide to add finish there /o/)

Nice map ><!! Really like your mapping style xD Big Thank youuu Flaskkk \:D/
Stared!!!!!
Thank you for modding and star very much xDxD
10nya
I'll do M4M from your queue c:
Hi Frostmourne-san! I love your maps :)

[General]
  1. there's 2 spaces between opening and kyoto in tags please check :)
[Normal]
  1. 01:16:157 (1)- : how about move this 1grid down and last slider point 3 grid down to make a mirror from previous slider?
  2. 03:34:462 (4)- : 2nd slider point 1grid down? nazi >_<
  3. 03:40:395 (2)- : last slider point 3 grid down and 2nd point 1 grid down >_<
[Hard]
  • ]
  1. 00:31:073 (1)- : suggestion >_< last slider point 1grid up to make a straight line with previous slider
  2. 01:09:717 (2)- : 2nd slider point 1 grid to right? ><
[Insane]
  1. 00:56:157 (5)- : add clap on 00:56:327- here?
  2. 04:00:395 (3)- : add clap on slider tail? suggestion tho
that's all I can find, good luck also ~/'w')/~*
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

- t e n n y a - wrote:

I'll do M4M from your queue c:
Hi Frostmourne-san! I love your maps :) hi tennya ! , Thank you x.x !!

[General]
  1. there's 2 spaces between opening and kyoto in tags please check :) fixed them
[Normal]
  1. 01:16:157 (1)- : how about move this 1grid down and last slider point 3 grid down to make a mirror from previous slider? I don't quite like symmetry much and it will move to next slider a bit strange imo =_="/ , so leave it here
  2. 03:34:462 (4)- : 2nd slider point 1grid down? nazi >_< not a big deal but ok... fixed~~
  3. 03:40:395 (2)- : last slider point 3 grid down and 2nd point 1 grid down >_< oh.. looks better, fixed
[Hard]
  • ]
  1. 00:31:073 (1)- : suggestion >_< last slider point 1grid up to make a straight line with previous slider since Flask mentioned on this once, ok fixed..
  2. 01:09:717 (2)- : 2nd slider point 1 grid to right? >< I think it's ok now because I copied from previous slider :>
[Insane]
  1. 00:56:157 (5)- : add clap on 00:56:327- here? oh.. sounds better .. added xD
  2. 04:00:395 (3)- : add clap on slider tail? suggestion tho sound in music is decreasing the volume,adding clap will make it noisy :(
that's all I can find, good luck also ~/'w')/~*
Thank you for modding \o/
S o r d a
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