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Melone (Ryoko Shintani) - Kira Kira Serenade

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__Ag

sahuang wrote:

I will do this to Doyak if he is still unsatisfied xP
Me tooXD
Doyak
Yes, I am not satisfied yet.

@moonlightleaf: I'm talking about the hitsound 'delay', not the total length.




You can see that there's no noticeable 'beat' until around 5.8ms, and the ranking criteria says no hitsound should have more than 5ms of delay. So you should cut the intro a bit to remove the quiet part. Use this if you want.

Btw, why does the 'thanks for playing' look like 'playiny'? y and g are drawn same lol

Also can I ask you one thing on your diff? From 02:19:478 - to 02:32:110 - , many of the sliderends are overmapped and I think at least 5% volume is needed to not give unnecessary feedback to players.

@__Ag: Hey, you didn't add BG3.jpg in the folder...
Doyak
I forgot to add this. I have no knowledge about the song's source, but Wafu told me that it's 100% unrelated to the source and is a random loli. So we suggest you to find a source-related BG instead.

and __Ag, I'm going to persuade you one more time. I think all the triplets on 01:03:689 - this part is unnecessary. There's nothing on the 1/8 ticks and it is emphasizing a quiet part. It's better to avoid overmapped clicks, as the players are reacting to something that doesn't exist on the song.
Topic Starter
__Ag
ok, Ill fix them later
sahuang
Some suggestions are made because of the latest update so don't complain much about this -_-#
moonlightleaf
to Doyak :

disturb you so many times for sorry :?

fix all ,and thanks for making the finsh22.wav (sorry my mistake :?

lol , y->g

and 02:19:478 - 02:32:110 i really think it is ok :)

Edit : https://puu.sh/qJTgj.rar

include ->

to __Ag : check again , then update ,make sure this time no lose any file or others ,thank you
Topic Starter
__Ag
@Doyak:
all fixed except BG
we dont want to change the BG,because we R LOLICONS:p
moonlightleaf
all diff :

LetterboxInBreaks: 0
Doyak
That's not a proper reasoning. Why do you choose a BG that's not related to the song at all only to satisfy your preference? Anyway, if you really really do not want to change it, at least use a higher resolution of that BG. http://puu.sh/qK2H3/cd8693e3cd.jpg (Provided by Wafu)
Doyak
Also maximum BG size allowed (and recommended) is 1366x768, just in case you didn't know.
Doyak
On my first post


please remove ',' s on the tags.
Topic Starter
__Ag
fixed again
Doyak
Rebubbled.
Kencho
  • Black is Personal comments.
    Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
    Red is Unrankable that you should fix.

[sahuang's Easy]
  1. Looks fine.

[Narcissu's Normal]
  1. Looks fine.

[ErMei's Hard]
  1. 00:23:820 (3,1) - 沒疊好
  2. 00:30:531 (1,2) - 包好一點
  3. 01:19:281 (5,1) - ^
  4. 01:47:110 (3) - 可以ctrl+G
  5. 02:02:110 (5) - NC
  6. 02:55:399 - 這裡空了好難受,我覺得和02:55:597 (4) - 組成一個1/4滑條比較好,或者你可以選擇原地加個圓圈
  7. 03:17:505 (4,1) - 這flow卡手,我建議你先把03:17:899 (1) - ctrl+G,然後03:18:491 (2,3) - 移到03:17:110 (3) - 滑條尾的地方,當然形狀還有後面物件也要稍微改一下,給個截圖讓你參考一下
  8. 03:27:965 (2,3) - 沒疊好
  9. 03:30:136 (4,1) - 包好一點
  10. 03:53:820 (4,1) - 沒疊好

[Kira]
  1. IRC mod
    Log
    2016-08-26 21:31 Kencho: 直接IRC好不好
    2016-08-26 21:32 __Ag: 可以
    2016-08-26 21:32 Kencho: 00:46:715 (1,1) - 這些地方NC是有什麼原因的嗎
    2016-08-26 21:32 Kencho: 因為你前後3/4滑條的地方也沒有NC
    2016-08-26 21:33 __Ag: 因为滑条的粘连,这种的地方我全部NC了,doyak也是这个意思
    2016-08-26 21:33 Kencho: 所以說用了相同梗的滑條梗就NC了?
    2016-08-26 21:33 __Ag: 对
    2016-08-26 21:34 Kencho: 這個理由也可以,我就是覺得同樣節奏的地方一些NC一些不NC比較神奇
    2016-08-26 21:35 __Ag: 这个没事,很多图都会这样做
    2016-08-26 21:35 __Ag: 排列梗会nc
    2016-08-26 21:36 Kencho: 00:48:294 (3,4,5) - 這個的話我建議間距大一點,像00:41:584 (1,2,3) -
    2016-08-26 21:36 __Ag: 可
    2016-08-26 21:37 Kencho: 然後01:53:820 (5,1,2) - 這個間距不明顯我不太喜歡,就是說51是1/1,12是1/2但是間距看起來是一樣的
    2016-08-26 21:38 Kencho: 想不到怎麼改的話http://puu.sh/qP5KD/21e199c5d2.jpg
    2016-08-26 21:38 Kencho: 01:53:820 (5) - 疊在01:54:215 (1) - 上面
    2016-08-26 21:39 Kencho: 02:49:083 (1) - ctrl+G怎樣
    2016-08-26 21:40 Kencho: 03:09:610 (9) - 可以再放遠一點,現在這個距離容易誤認成1/2
    2016-08-26 21:40 __Ag: 可
    2016-08-26 21:42 Kencho: 01:04:084 (3,4,5) - 01:05:662 (2,3,4) - 01:10:400 (3,4,5) - 這幾個鈍角我希望可以改一下,不太好打
    2016-08-26 21:43 Kencho: 01:06:057 (4) - 比如說這個,你可以試試這樣http://puu.sh/qP68a/ebfd590305.jpg
    2016-08-26 21:45 Kencho: 01:41:189 (9) - 這個和03:09:610 (9) - 一樣,放遠一點,看上去是複製貼上的
    2016-08-26 21:46 __Ag: 改好了
    2016-08-26 21:47 Kencho: 好,你先傳一下
moonlightleaf
你那个03:17:505 (4,1) - 排版2号DS不对,我重新弄了其他排版, 顺带修了flower-sb

其他都fix了,

diff 代码太长不给po,

https://puu.sh/qP98S.rar
Kencho
Talk with the creator to fix some green line problems,
and my 500 post!

Qualified!


Enjoy!
Topic Starter
__Ag
三颗丝
Pata-Mon
才第一次看主难度
感觉很好 是我喜欢的类型
Narcissu
rip my best bg
moonlightleaf

Narcissu wrote:

rip my best bg
me too ;w;;
Sync
Good map, but the offset is really fucked. I was able to SS with +25
Okoratu
that seems way more accurate, added that as an online offset
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