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DJ YOSHITAKA - VALLIS-NERIA [Taiko|Osu]

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MineC24
Go~ :D
OnosakiHito
Requested bubble check by spboxer3(a bit late sorry).

[ DangYang's Muzukashii]

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  • DangYang_shushu wrote:

    aabc271 wrote:

    I notice the SV of this muzu diff is 1.5, which is higher than oni (1.4). Unless you have special reasons for using 1.5, I'd personally suggest you changing it into 1.4 so as not to be faster than oni.
    因为我的风格就是SV1.5,我想这和谱子本身的好坏是没有关系的。
  1. Such SV shouldn't be used in a Muzukashii, especially with a BPM of 185. In Oni this can be somehow acceptable, but in a Muzukashii this is not recommendet. After all, people should play on the normal SV to get used to it. If they really want a higher SV, they are able to use ばいそく(baisoku) / hardrock, which makes the usage of SV 1.50 rather needless.
    Calling this as your own style is vague, since the SV dosen't representate mappers style at all(if we don't look at speed ups). Style of a mapper is rather marked by the patterns he is using, so right now I can't find a real reason which would justify the use of SV 1.50. To me it dosen't even fit well enough, especially when considering that Oni has SV 1.40.
    Is there any other reason why you wanted to keep this? If not, this should be SV 1.40.
  2. Recomending to use a constant audio volumen, about ~80%.
  3. 00:01:235 - Green-line not in use.
  4. If you changed the audio volumen, you can remove this green-line as well 00:17:126

Notes

00:31:559 (65) - Consider deleting this note or change the pattern constalation a bit. This pattern is a bit long and contains 1/4.
00:56:694 (32,33,34,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suggesting to follow here the song. We have 3/4 beats but it has been mapped on 1/2. This can confuse players.
- second kiai is a copy-paste, but that's fine -
00:35:289 (82,83,84) - Maybe k d k? Not a must.
00:36:262 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - having kdkdkdk could be a good solution. It fits to the song and its ending would alternate with the upcoming 00:37:559 (1) - don.
01:39:019 (61) - Same as above.
00:40:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddd k D would fit better and sound better.
00:50:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:42:749 (78,79,80) - Maybe k d k? Not a must.
01:43:721 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Same as above.
01:47:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddd k D would fit better and sound better.
01:57:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:04:154 (32,33,34,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above.

Muzukashii is so far okay. Pattern are a bit complicated, but that's not much of a problem. Next time you could make them more simple, like mapping them lineal.
But okay, good job anyway.


[ Andy's Oni]

00:37:559~00:42:748 - Well, having less notes here would be actually nicer + no kiai. So you could emphasize the upcoming part at 00:42:748 way better and give the player a feeling as the second kiai got harder.
00:44:451 (88) - trying moving this note to 00:44:289. how does that sound?
00:45:505 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - how about kdk dk kk?
01:52:965 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - ^
00:58:316~01:18:748 - Recommending to have some gaps and finisher here. Patterns are good, but too less break time for player.

Well that's all. Oni is overal fine. I even like it. But you should take care of not having an overuse of notes, else this can have a bad effect on the map, like overlapping the song it-self.

I think both diffs are on its own way nice. Just change the SV in the Muzukashii, please. Reasons are given.
So yeah, good luck with rank.
- SB DangYang -
[*] Such SV shouldn't be used in a Muzukashii, especially with a BPM of 185. In Oni this can be somehow acceptable, but in a Muzukashii this is not recommendet. After all, people should play on the normal SV to get used to it. If they really want a higher SV, they are able to use ばいそく(baisoku) / hardrock, which makes the usage of SV 1.50 rather needless.
Calling this as your own style is vague, since the SV dosen't representate mappers style at all(if we don't look at speed ups). Style of a mapper is rather marked by the patterns he is using, so right now I can't find a real reason which would justify the use of SV 1.50. To me it dosen't even fit well enough, especially when considering that Oni has SV 1.40.
Is there any other reason why you wanted to keep this? If not, this should be SV 1.40.

You're right

Recomending to use a constant audio volumen, about ~80%.
ok
00:01:235 -Green-line not in use.
ok
If you changed the audio volumen, you can remove this green-line as well 00:17:126
OK


Notes

00:31:559 (65) - Consider deleting this note or change the pattern constalation a bit. This pattern is a bit long and contains 1/4.
This map is in muzukashii more difficult. I think this place do not change, because it is enough to reflect the rhythm of the music.
00:56:694 (32,33,34,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suggesting to follow here the song. We have 3/4 beats but it has been mapped on 1/2. This can confuse players.
Because I do not understand English, I can not understand your words very well, but I think I have no problems.
- second kiai is a copy-paste, but that's fine -
thank。
00:35:289 (82,83,84) - Maybe k d k? Not a must.
I think it really is k d k better.
00:36:262 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - having kdkdkdk could be a good solution. It fits to the song and its ending would alternate with the upcoming
good
00:37:559 (1) - don.
no..I think ooo Not bad
01:39:019 (61) - Same as above.
Same as above.
00:40:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddd k D would fit better and sound better.
That the previous 1/4 NOTE same. Nothing new.
00:50:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
^
01:42:749 (78,79,80) - Maybe k d k? Not a must.
^
01:43:721 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Same as above.
ok
01:47:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddd k D would fit better and sound better.
^
01:57:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
^
02:04:154 (32,33,34,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above.
Same as above.


Muzukashii is so far okay. Pattern are a bit complicated, but that's not much of a problem. Next time you could make them more simple, like mapping them lineal.
But okay, good job anyway.




I do not speak English,
But I want to say:
Thank you!!(Google Translate)
Kagami Yuki
[ Andy's Oni]

00:37:559~00:42:748 - Well, having less notes here would be actually nicer + no kiai. So you could emphasize the upcoming part at 00:42:748 way better and give the player a feeling as the second kiai got harder.
00:44:451 (88) - trying moving this note to 00:44:289. how does that sound?
00:45:505 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - how about kdk dk kk?
01:52:965 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - ^
00:58:316~01:18:748 - Recommending to have some gaps and finisher here. Patterns are good, but too less break time for player.

Well that's all. Oni is overal fine. I even like it. But you should take care of not having an overuse of notes, else this can have a bad effect on the map, like overlapping the song it-self.

Thanks for your modding , OnosakiHito :3/
But I think It doesnt need so much break time for a song shorter than 4 mins .I will take care of it ,sure:3/
OnosakiHito
@DangYang_shushu: Hahaha, no problem.
@AndyRucas: Ah, I didn't ment breaks, like 10 seconds long. I was talking about having more 1/2 gaps between patterns.
MineC24
Umm...

Add tag : SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-

If you accept this :D
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

MineC24 wrote:

Umm...

Add tag : SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-

If you accept this :D
oh..sorry but I want to keep current patten atm
wcx19911123
we fixed a little patterns in taiko diffs and Extreme diff, time to go
Flask
野牛破人家處啊
Flower
卧槽老公rank图了都不跟我书 来抱抱
fanzhen0019
gratz!!
RikiH_
Great!
alacat
gratz :)
Azure
omedeto (。・ω・。)ノ♡
mutual啦(´;д;`)
Cihyaa
gratz :D
OnosakiHito
congratulation
- SB DangYang -
自己的谱面已SS
Satellite
Congratz~~!! Sagisawa-Yukari !!
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari
oh,thanks of all! :)
Aqo
This mapset makes me happy. Three maps that I enjoy. Very fun :3 grats to all mappers
CSY the corrupt
GJ
RLC
this is very cool

grats
TKS
awesome mapset 8-)
grats!!
Megurine Luka
恭喜坠毁
MineC24
My best map! :D :) :D :)
val0108
Hard diff...
Sigh orz
Strawberry
终于rank了. 功洗 p/
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