1. Break (3,65 stars, 232 notes)
2. Un-Break (1,01 stars, 124 notes)

1. БПМ - 55. Я проверял, и даже с МАТом это обсудил.
2. Обрезка - говно, но я исправдю.
3. Замапил брейк.
4. Выправил все слайдеры на [Un-Break]
5. Добавил хс к замапленному брейку
6. Не менял слайдеры на [Break] (провисания = обводка)
7. Попытался выпрямить себе руки.

L_P wrote:

[Break]
00:11:719 (1) - too loud on playing with the bonus sound!! really annoyed me in this beauty song ~
00:15:265 (2) - remove body whistle? or lower the volume plz... ~
00:48:537 (4) - actually i think you mapped this on rhythm as well, it does not follow vocal at all (head starts at middle of nowhere, vocal ends middle part of slider 00:49:356 - ) it works perfectly fine to me but just to point it out ~
01:12:265 (4) - feel like slider would be better to start here, up to you~ 1/2 slidr here
01:21:265 (1) - a bit too boring... but.. i think it fits D:
01:46:901 (4) - a bit awkward when vocal start on next blue tick but nothing else makes it feel like place a note here.. ~
01:47:447 (5) - finish and NC ~
01:51:265 - a note? feel too long for next slider and next slider have no NC ~
02:22:356 (5) - maybe a 20% volume finish? whistle
02:31:083 (1) - ^ ^
02:31:083 (1) - if you does not remove whistle on 00:15:265 (2), add body whistle here

my father loved this song, so do i~

like it. song and the map

384059043 wrote:

hey! from in-game PM request :3

nice song!
[Un-Break]
* 00:09:748 (4) - suggestion 0.0 http://puu.sh/1jfHN but i can't make blanket without ruining flow >.<
* 00:33:748 (3) - i'm not sure whether it should be new combo It follows vocals :V
* 01:21:748 (1) - haha :O

[Break]
I guess this is hard diff right? :3 right :3
so here we go 0.0
* HP+1 sure
* 01:08:384 (4) - do not look so good if you select the current time between 01:07:566 and 01:07:839. 01:08:384 (4) - can be similar with 01:06:475 (1) -
e.g. http://puu.sh/1jfV6 tried to fix. looks better
* 01:26:111 (1) - P(536,256) to P(528,256) ~

that's all
good map and i can't find any issues lol

edit: perhaps you can try some other heart styles :3

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

le mod

1. Add The World's Greatest Love Songs to tags due to the album name
2. Is this short ver? Add to (Short Ver.) to title... maybe? lol

1. 00:34:839 (4,5) - I suggest you to make rhythm like this. It's a litttle bit fit with the vocal, and I think the hitsound problem will be solve if you do like this :3
2. 00:54:475 (1) - (reserve) Finish here please, I've heard a finish sound in the music. (Or you can use N-finish here)
3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^
4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish instead whistle? There's a finish sound, too lol
5. 01:30:475 (1) - ^ (nazi)
6. 02:31:566 (1) - clap this to keep inconsistency :3
7. 02:35:930 - I'd suggest you to add a 1/1 slider + a reserve here. Clap at the reserve ofc then Finish at end please

1. 00:26:111 (1) - I hate this jump. put on x:264, y:136?
2. 00:55:566 (1) - finish instead whistle?
3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^
4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish? Same reason as Un-Break lol
5. 01:38:111 (2,3,4,5,1) - Make like a star? Such like this. I think you can do it by yourself <3
6. 02:35:930 - Same as Un-Break.

Flask wrote:

Mod Request via In-Game PM <3

[General]

1. Add The World's Greatest Love Songs to tags due to the album name
2. Is this short ver? Add to (Short Ver.) to title... maybe? lol

[Un-Break]

1. 00:34:839 (4,5) - I suggest you to make rhythm like this. It's a litttle bit fit with the vocal, and I think the hitsound problem will be solve if you do like this :3 ~
2. 00:54:475 (1) - (reserve) Finish here please, I've heard a finish sound in the music. (Or you can use N-finish here) ~
3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^ ~
4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish instead whistle? There's a finish sound, too lol ~
5. 01:30:475 (1) - ^ (nazi) ~
6. 02:31:566 (1) - clap this to keep inconsistency :3 ~
7. 02:35:930 - I'd suggest you to add a 1/1 slider + a reserve here. Clap at the reserve ofc then Finish at end please how about moving spinner to a bit later? o3o

[Break]

1. 00:26:111 (1) - I hate this jump. put on x:264, y:136? something else. but still cute :3
2. 00:55:566 (1) - finish instead whistle? ~
3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^ ~
4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish? Same reason as Un-Break lol there's no any sound in the end of spinner o3o
5. 01:38:111 (2,3,4,5,1) - Make like a star? Such like this. I think you can do it by yourself <3 <3
6. 02:35:930 - Same as Un-Break. done in different way :3/

About the mapset: I've ask some of my friends, they said E-N mapset could be rank. But your mapset is like E-H. Your Break diff is such like Hard-. Maybe try to make a diff between Easy and Hard-? Or just do something on your Break lol personally I think that my diffs are [Normal] (consistent 1/2 flow and N-diff settings) o3o + [Hard] (slow one but still Hard)

Good luck, star :3!

1. offset
2. some nazis
3. some whistles \ (instead of finishes I use whistles. much softer)
4. Of course finishes (one or two) but they're fit here
5. missed/extra claps

1. some nazis

Saten wrote:

so calm

[Break]
01:12:998 - end the kiai here instead? no, because.. I like it the way it is
01:50:089 - why 30%? why not? changed to 45%, anyway.
02:22:817 (1) - finish on head. Also shouldn't the kiai end here instead? whistle. kiai fixed
02:34:817 - move this timing section to 02:38:089 - where it actually starts to fade ~

[Un-Break]
00:40:271 (2) - too close the edge. But meh, this usually pass anyway fixed
01:12:998 - end the kiai here? same as [break]
01:47:908 (4) - finish. I hear a small resemblance of a finish here, and your other diff has a finish here I noticed ~
02:22:817 (3) - finish & end the kiai here as well? same as [Break]


Nothing wrong really with this mapset o3o
Goodluck

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi there :3

[General]
* i find a new offset is 990~ Remember to double-check. xD ~

[Un-Break]
00:13:544 (4) - downward one grid? x:16 y:200 ~
00:19:544 (2) - suggest end this slider at 00:20:635 ?~ ~
01:41:362 (3) - downward one grid? x:356 y:92 ~
01:45:180 (2) - this slider looks weird @.@ ~.~

[Break]
00:39:998 (2) - hmm.. move it to grid x:108 y:136 ? ~
00:42:998 (3) - start this slider at 00:43:271 ? ~
00:54:180 (2,3,4) - change them like this? --> http://puu.sh/1mk27 ~
00:57:726 (1,2,3) - ^ --> http://puu.sh/1mk3f same as below V
01:20:362 (3,4) - ^ --> http://puu.sh/1mk5l Sorry, i'd keep my pattern. for now >.<
01:53:635 (4) - upward one grid? x:348 y:236 ~
01:57:453 (x) - add a circle at here? we don't want to click many circle song is calm. And that's why I think it's ok to skip some beats
01:59:635 (2,3) - reverse both of them? --> http://puu.sh/1mkb0 ~
02:31:544 (1) - hmm.. try to make this slider looks perfect? >.< it's already
02:36:726 (x) - add a circle at here? ~
02:36:726 (x) - add a circle at here? ~

-----
Awesome !~
Hope this map can fast to rank!!~ xD
Btw, why just have two diff?? Q.Q

Lally wrote:

I have a pizza from My Q \o3o/

well you find the sicret word, ''amore'' love ...so here with love took this (/°\\\\°)/

[General]
I love it :3 :3

[Un-Break]

00:50:626 (4) - x: 344 y: 256 :3 ~
01:21:171 (4) - stalk it with 01:18:989 (2) ~

[Break]

00:02:080 (3) - just 1 grind right ~
00:27:444 (2,3,4,5) - try something like this: http://puu.sh/1mFxO ~
00:31:808 (4) - try to stalk it with 00:30:717 (2) but.. but I want it to be that way >.</
00:39:989 (2) - replace this with a slider that start at 00:39:717 but it follows vocals :V
00:40:262 (3) - x: 107 y: 248 so you have a perfect line with 00:37:808 (8) ~
00:41:626 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - try something like this : http://puu.sh/1mFSL it's Andrea-style'd and it's cute but I think people will expect something softer, sorry
02:35:899 (1,2,3,4,5) - i aspected a spinner here i think you should think to replace this with a spinner ~

good luck Baka C:

1. Why does the first kiai in the refrain finish 3/2 later than the second one? It doesen't really make sense,as they are pretty much the same :\

1. 00:23:899 (3,4) - What do you think on making 00:23:899 (3) - a curved slider like the next slider? If you make both of them encircle 00:23:353 (2) - ,you will get a really nice pattern with a pretty much natural flow. That's pretty much optional,though!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   164,208,23353,1,0,0:0:0
   56,200,23899,2,0,B|56:152|96:120,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   200,108,24989,2,0,B|242:118|261:162,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   252,272,26080,5,8,0:0:0
   360,300,26626,1,0,0:0:0
   364,188,27171,2,0,B|420:116|368:12,2,170,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:42:444 (1,2) - This transition feels a bit weird to play because 00:44:080 (2) - is placed right above 00:42:444 (1) - ...That's a really little thing,but anyways what do you think on using instead a curve slider encircling 00:44:080 (2) - 's end? That would definitely solve the problem!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   308,108,42444,6,0,B|292:60|328:16,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   248,200,44080,2,0,B|308:244|372:216|412:180|424:140|416:92,2,255,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:47:899 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern actually works as it is,but It would be pretty cool if you used an arc-shaped pattern,as it flows absolutely good within
   00:44:080 (2) - ...Here's an example of what I have done:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   192,104,47899,6,0,B|164:66|117:54,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   204,212,49535,1,0,0:0:0
   112,276,50080,1,8,0:0:0
   8,240,50626,1,0,0:0:0

4. 01:02:080 (1) - What about using a "3" shaped slider there instead of using just a circular one? The circular slider you used is ok, but the flow with 01:03:717 (2,1) - continues in a bit strange way. It could be only me,but anyways see if you like it
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   120,336,62080,6,0,B|84:304|80:252|80:252|40:260|8:232,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   68,136,63717,1,0,0:0:0
   164,84,64262,6,0,B|248:56,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:04:262 (1) - Did you forgot a whistle here? I see that there's a whistle played right here in the second refrain,but it's missing here...
6. 01:12:990 (3) - What do you think on using a whistle here at the beginning? It fits really well to emphatise the vocal's high pitch there,and it fits pretty good too!
7. 01:15:171 (1) - Using a 3/2 slider here does not match the rhythm that good. I see here you semplified the rhythm,but instead consider splitting this slider into a 3/4 repeated slider and a 1/1 slider,like here:
   
   It follows the vocals/synthesizer much better,imho.
8. 01:45:171 (2) - Lol,is this wave slider made on purpose? If you want just a neater wave slider,you could use this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   320,252,105171,2,0,B|288:228|236:232|204:268|204:268|172:304|120:308|88:284,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   136,184,107353,1,0,0:0:0
   232,132,107899,2,0,B|204:68|128:64,2,127.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   244,240,110080,6,0,B|320:208|412:220,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 01:57:717 (1) - Please,consider using CTRL+G here. The whole ascendent/discendent flow flows PERFECT there.
10. 01:47:899 (4) - Shouldn't the new combo be here instead of 01:50:080 (1) - ? The new vocal phrase begins here,as I see!
11. 02:15:171 (4,5) - That's a really little thing,but anyways you could revert these notes' position,as they flow really better as they continue perfectly the flow with 02:14:080 (3,1) - ! Just use CTRL+G and swap the claps to do that :3

1. 00:15:717 (2) - Why don't you add a whistle at the end of this slider too? It fits really good with the guitar chord!
2. 00:30:989 (3,4,5) - Heh,not really fond of this pattern... The jumps you used to create this pattern are not really intuitive and don't fit well with such a calm and quiet part like this. What about instead creating a simil-tornado pattern like this? (note: 00:32:080 (5) - starts from the same point as 00:30:989 (3) - )
3. 01:02:899 (2) - What about inverting this slider's curve to make a nice "wave-effect" with 01:02:080 (1) - 's dropoff and to make a nice arc structure with 01:04:262 (3) - ? Here's what I've done here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   452,104,62080,6,0,B|376:120|328:72,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   244,112,62899,2,0,B|166:117|133:176,2,135,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   312,168,64262,2,0,B|344:240|320:312,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 01:15:171 (2,3) - Why are you using this repeated slider with this note here? :\ Here I expected instead a couple of 1/1 sliders,as it works really well and it follows really good the vocals. Here's a pattern I made using this new arrangement,see if you like it
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   300,332,74899,5,0,0:0:0
   336,244,75171,2,0,B|408:280|392:360,1,135
   300,332,75989,2,0,P|240:360|200:304,1,135
   168,232,76808,2,0,B|96:216|40:272,2,135,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:32:626 (3) - CTRL+G here? After 01:31:535 (1,2) - this turn feels quite unappealing...
6. 01:40:262 (1,5) - Again,what about using CTRL+R onto each of them? An up-down-up-down flow here goes nicer imho :U
7. 01:47:217 (4) - what do you think on replacing this with a slider starting at 01:47:217 - (1/8) and finishing at 01:47:626 - ? On that red tick there's not really much to follow,and this slider works really well to emphatize the guitar chord being used there!
8. 01:59:626 (2) - What's the clap at the beginning doing there? It doesen't really sound that good along with the instuments. You could delete it,as it's pretty much useless.

-kevincela- wrote:

Hey,your map is now part of Chewin's queue as BCI decided to let me mod this... Remember to thank him!

-kevincela- wrote:

Hey,your map is now part of Chewin's queue as BCI decided to let me mod this... Remember to thank him!

[General]

1. Why does the first kiai in the refrain finish 3/2 later than the second one? It doesen't really make sense,as they are pretty much the same :\ ~

[Unbreak]

1. 00:23:899 (3,4) - What do you think on making 00:23:899 (3) - a curved slider like the next slider? If you make both of them encircle 00:23:353 (2) - ,you will get a really nice pattern with a pretty much natural flow. That's pretty much optional,though! ~
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   164,208,23353,1,0,0:0:0
   56,200,23899,2,0,B|56:152|96:120,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   200,108,24989,2,0,B|242:118|261:162,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   252,272,26080,5,8,0:0:0
   360,300,26626,1,0,0:0:0
   364,188,27171,2,0,B|420:116|368:12,2,170,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:42:444 (1,2) - This transition feels a bit weird to play because 00:44:080 (2) - is placed right above 00:42:444 (1) - ...That's a really little thing,but anyways what do you think on using instead a curve slider encircling 00:44:080 (2) - 's end? That would definitely solve the problem! ~ may a bit confuse some beginners but SV/AR is slow enough to do it. so.. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   308,108,42444,6,0,B|292:60|328:16,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   248,200,44080,2,0,B|308:244|372:216|412:180|424:140|416:92,2,255,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:47:899 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern actually works as it is,but It would be pretty cool if you used an arc-shaped pattern,as it flows absolutely good within
   00:44:080 (2) - ...Here's an example of what I have done: still prefer my pattern, sorry >.</
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   192,104,47899,6,0,B|164:66|117:54,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   204,212,49535,1,0,0:0:0
   112,276,50080,1,8,0:0:0
   8,240,50626,1,0,0:0:0

4. 01:02:080 (1) - What about using a "3" shaped slider there instead of using just a circular one? The circular slider you used is ok, but the flow with 01:03:717 (2,1) - continues in a bit strange way. It could be only me,but anyways see if you like it i don't really like using them but here it fits well. fixed :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   120,336,62080,6,0,B|84:304|80:252|80:252|40:260|8:232,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   68,136,63717,1,0,0:0:0
   164,84,64262,6,0,B|248:56,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:04:262 (1) - Did you forgot a whistle here? I see that there's a whistle played right here in the second refrain,but it's missing here... ~
6. 01:12:990 (3) - What do you think on using a whistle here at the beginning? It fits really well to emphatise the vocal's high pitch there,and it fits pretty good too! But.. bit.. but I can't hear it here. soo.. regular hitsound is fine here, anyway
7. 01:15:171 (1) - Using a 3/2 slider here does not match the rhythm that good. I see here you semplified the rhythm,but instead consider splitting this slider into a 3/4 repeated slider and a 1/1 slider,like here: soooong's flow is extremly slow! why don't we make more slow sliders? It fits quite good with vocals, imo. Anyway, if someone else will complain, too - i'll channge
   
   It follows the vocals/synthesizer much better,imho.
8. 01:45:171 (2) - Lol,is this wave slider made on purpose? If you want just a neater wave slider,you could use this: oh.. it was made.. but yours one is betrter :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   320,252,105171,2,0,B|288:228|236:232|204:268|204:268|172:304|120:308|88:284,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   136,184,107353,1,0,0:0:0
   232,132,107899,2,0,B|204:68|128:64,2,127.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   244,240,110080,6,0,B|320:208|412:220,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 01:57:717 (1) - Please,consider using CTRL+G here. The whole ascendent/discendent flow flows PERFECT there. ~
10. 01:47:899 (4) - Shouldn't the new combo be here instead of 01:50:080 (1) - ? The new vocal phrase begins here,as I see! no.. because it follows my pattern and fits here well, too >.</
11. 02:15:171 (4,5) - That's a really little thing,but anyways you could revert these notes' position,as they flow really better as they continue perfectly the flow with 02:14:080 (3,1) - ! Just use CTRL+G and swap the claps to do that :3 keyword: flow action?=change

[Break]

1. 00:15:717 (2) - Why don't you add a whistle at the end of this slider too? It fits really good with the guitar chord! ~
2. 00:30:989 (3,4,5) - Heh,not really fond of this pattern... The jumps you used to create this pattern are not really intuitive and don't fit well with such a calm and quiet part like this. What about instead creating a simil-tornado pattern like this? (note: 00:32:080 (5) - starts from the same point as 00:30:989 (3) - ) i don't know.. right now i feel like keeping this pattern here. if anybody else will complain - i'll fix
3. 01:02:899 (2) - What about inverting this slider's curve to make a nice "wave-effect" with 01:02:080 (1) - 's dropoff and to make a nice arc structure with 01:04:262 (3) - ? Here's what I've done here: but I like my waves, sorry! >.</
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   452,104,62080,6,0,B|376:120|328:72,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   244,112,62899,2,0,B|166:117|133:176,2,135,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   312,168,64262,2,0,B|344:240|320:312,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 01:15:171 (2,3) - Why are you using this repeated slider with this note here? :\ Here I expected instead a couple of 1/1 sliders,as it works really well and it follows really good the vocals. Here's a pattern I made using this new arrangement,see if you like it better than mine.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   300,332,74899,5,0,0:0:0
   336,244,75171,2,0,B|408:280|392:360,1,135
   300,332,75989,2,0,P|240:360|200:304,1,135
   168,232,76808,2,0,B|96:216|40:272,2,135,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:32:626 (3) - CTRL+G here? After 01:31:535 (1,2) - this turn feels quite unappealing... :V but it fiiiiiiits herrreeeeeee >.</
6. 01:40:262 (1,5) - Again,what about using CTRL+R onto each of them? An up-down-up-down flow here goes nicer imho :U you're right
7. 01:47:217 (4) - what do you think on replacing this with a slider starting at 01:47:217 - (1/8) and finishing at 01:47:626 - ? On that red tick there's not really much to follow,and this slider works really well to emphatize the guitar chord being used there! hmm. i'd like to keep it as is. at least for now. because 1/8 here will break flow :<
8. 01:59:626 (2) - What's the clap at the beginning doing there? It doesen't really sound that good along with the instuments. You could delete it,as it's pretty much useless. sure

Overall,that's a really nice map you have there... Sorry for my quite useless mod >_<
Good luck with your map!

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

-kevincela- wrote:

Hey,your map is now part of Chewin's queue as BCI decided to let me mod this... Remember to thank him!

dat kevin, i'm a girl ;________; /runs

Nyquill wrote:

SAY YOU LOVE ME AGAIIIIN

1. You haven't set previewpoint fot your map

1. 00:20:626 (2) - Slider end, how about adding a finish with 20% volume
2. 02:22:808 (3) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
3. 02:35:353 (1) - Start at 02:35:899 fit music more imo

1. 00:20:626 (4) - Slider end, finish with 20% volume instead of whistle?
2. 00:40:262 (3,4,5) - Add whistle to slider end of 3 and 4,5 to fit the background sound? If you do so, you can change the volume of 4,5 to 30% and 25% then back to 35% at 00:42:171 (6)
3. 02:22:808 (1) - Finish instead of whistle should be better

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. You haven't set previewpoint fot your map ]oh i'm so slow, sorry for this mistake :<

[Un-Break]

1. 00:20:626 (2) - Slider end, how about adding a finish with 20% volume ~
2. 02:22:808 (3) - Finish instead of whistle seems better ~
   
3. 02:35:353 (1) - Start at 02:35:899 fit music more imo ~

[Break]

1. 00:20:626 (4) - Slider end, finish with 20% volume instead of whistle? ~
2. 00:40:262 (3,4,5) - Add whistle to slider end of 3 and 4,5 to fit the background sound? If you do so, you can change the volume of 4,5 to 30% and 25% then back to 35% at 00:42:171 (6) but hey! i have my pattern and i don't want to break it, btw it sounds ok for me, the way it is now. sorry
3. 02:22:808 (1) - Finish instead of whistle should be better ~

Call me back for a recheck