[General]
Preview times are inconsistent. Is this intended?
[BMix]
00:41:754 (1) - I like this part a lot -- it's a very nice looking pattern that really gives the player a feel for the music. However, players are bound to hit (2) too early because there's no way of telling that it's 1/3 until after it's already done and over with. This is 100% completely optional but you might want to consider adding a slider here to give the player a heads up (for readability purposes). Not necessary at all but you might want to consider it.
01:01:862 (3,4,5) - Same concept applies here. Again, not necessary -- just something you might want to consider.
really solid -- this map is great
[BMax]
01:01:862 (3,4,5) - Just like in BMix -- these will catch players off guard because of the 3/4.
01:33:646 ~ 01:38:619 (12) - This is a massive spike in difficulty. I would tone down these jumps for this difficulty.
[ShinoTaiko]
OD5 is a bit low -- how about OD6 instead? The difficulty warrants it.
00:07:862 (12) - consider making this a kat because of the melody.
00:10:294 (11) - ^
00:15:484 (12) - ^
00:18:240 (19) - ^
00:41:754 (1) ~ 00:51:483 (4) - kat/don placement seems a little random in this section. consider making this part more structureed so it makes a lasting impression on the player.
http://puu.sh/3LWHg.jpg here's an example of how i'd arrange these patterns
00:56:673 (17,18,19,20,21) - this roll is awkward. consider changing it to kkddk instead
01:00:080 (2) - why is this a kat? change to don and make 01:00:240 (3) a kat instead. I think it adds a nice progressive touch while leading into the stream at the end of this section. also snap this note
01:16:293 (8) - unsnapped
01:16:618 (11) - make this a kat. I know you didn't make these notes kats during the first part of the kiai but the song is more lively now and the melody warrants the added emphasis
01:19:213 (10) - ^
01:19:375 (11,12,13) - changing to ddk would play better especially if you took my last suggestion
01:21:320 (6) - make this ddk to follow the music better (also this note is unsnapped)
01:21:482 (7) - unsnapped
01:21:807 (10) - same as 01:16:618 (11)
01:23:268 (1) - same as 00:41:754 (1) ~ 00:51:483 (4)
01:41:430 (1) - this stream is kinda random (thus making is play somewhat akwardly, especially cuz it's 1/3). not the beat placement, but the don/kat placement. I would do something like this instead
http://puu.sh/3LXbZ.jpg.
[Mimineko Oni]
Definitely raise the OD by one and also consider raising the HP drain by 1 as well.
00:02:673 (16) - make this a kat to follow the melody
00:07:862 (48) - ^
00:13:051 (84) - ^
00:18:241 (124) - ^
00:19:700 (135) - I don't know, the fact that this has a finisher on it (making it really big, obviously) seems kind of out of place. Maybe remove the finisher on the slider? Personal preference. Do whatever you want wwww
00:33:646 (202) - make this a kat to follow the melody?
00:38:835 (242) - ^
00:49:538 (299) - ^
01:04:781 (375,376) - switch the don/kat placement on this or at least add a kat on (375) for consistency's sake
01:09:970 (415) - ^
01:31:051 (561) - make this a kat
01:34:295 (579) - adding finishers after 1/3 isn't "unrankable" per se but this isn't very readable and the finisher just adds so much chaos into the mix (especially with the SV changes. it's hard to read) -- I would definitely remove all of them.
[Mimineko Muzukashii]
00:10:457 (38) - Normally I wouldn't recommend such a long stream of 1/2 in the muzukashii but considering the difficulty spread, I don't think that's an issue here. Add a don to follow the melody -- it's empty without one
00:19:700 (81) - same as in the oni -- not sure about the finisher here lol
00:28:132 (100) - add a don here. not sure why you stopped following the melody
00:28:619 (103) - ^
00:32:673 (120,121,122) - these parts are so empty. I know you want to give the player a break but it doesn't follow the music. (120) is unfitting. Move it to the red tick and then move 00:32:997 (121) over one tick as well. After that, add a note at 00:33:322 (122) to fill the gap. Arranging your beats this way follows the song without sacrificing a lot of the music and feels more fluent. Don't forget to add kats when necessary.
00:35:268 (132,133,134) - ^
00:41:592 (160) - add a kat here to follow the melody
00:44:349 (173) - ^
00:46:943 (185) - ^
00:49:538 (197) - ^
00:58:295 (221) - ^ (except to follow the percussion, not melody)
01:01:213 (235) - add finish
01:17:916 (309) - add kat here to follow the melody
01:23:105 (332) - same as 00:41:592 (160)
01:25:862 (345) - ^
01:28:457 (357) - ^
01:31:051 (369) - ^
01:33:646 (381) - ^
01:36:241 (393) - ^
01:38:835 (405) - ^