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kajiyatta
M4M request from your queue
General
ほとんど提案です
Easy
Placement
00:18:329(1) こんな感じにずらすとちょうど囲むようになるのでいいと思います
00:34:649(1) 向きを逆にしたほうが流れが良く初心者向きかなと
01:23:609(6,1) NCを逆にしてみては
Rhythm
01:24:089 バックの音も強くボーカルもあるのでnote追加したほうが分かりやすい気がします また01:24:569のスライダーを伸ばしてこんな感じなど
 
Hit Sonud
00:51:929(2) 始点にfinish追加
00:53:849(4) リバースのwhistle→finish
01:16:889(2)^
01:02:489(5) 終点にfinish追加

Amu's Normal
tick1でいいと思います slider-tick.wavもないので。
NCはボーカルではなく曲に合わせて置いた方が良いかなと思います
Placement
00:05:369(4) ここだけスペーシングが×0.8になってます
00:28:409(1,2) NC逆にしてみては
00:42:329(7,1)^
00:59:609(7,1)^
00:33:689(6,1)ここのブランケットをもう少し綺麗にできると思います
00:49:049(5,6,1,2,3) ややわかりにくいのでこんな感じなどどうでしょう
01:12:569(2,3,4,5) ここもやや雑に感じたのでこんな感じなど nazi
Rhythm
00:10:649(6,1) 逆にしたほうが曲をフォローしてると思います
Hit Sonud
00:07:769(1) finishつけてみては
00:51:929(1) whistle→finish?
01:02:969(5) リバースにfinish追加

Hard
譜面の作りから見てOD6.HP6でもいいかなと思いますがお任せします
Placement
00:36:089(6)やや中途半端な感じがします。ジャンプならもう少し間隔を開けてもいいと思います
00:41:129(2) Ctrl+G?
Hit Sonud
00:51:929(1) 始点にfinish追加?
00:54:569(2)^
00:55:769(4) finish追加+NC

良い譜面だと思います :)  star!
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>kajiyatta
all fixed!
thx~
Natsu
Easy:

SPOILER
00:00:089 add whistle
00:23:129 whistle in the head of slider for be consistent with (3)
00:36:569 whistle
00:57:689 whistle in the head of slider for be consistent
01:06:329 this slider look bad imo can u make it more symetrical?
01:26:489 (1) - try to reduce volume to 15 % and add whistle to the spinner

Normal:

SPOILER
00:00:089 whistle
00:34:649 NC
01:10:649 whistle
01:14:009 move the last point of slider really look alot better


01:26:489 same as easy

Hard:

SPOILER
00:00:149 unsnaped snap it to 00:00:089 and add whistle in the head too
00:08:009 add circle
00:08:489 ^
00:08:969 ^
00:47:849 whistle in the head too
00:48:809 ^
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

Natsu wrote:

Easy:

all no.

Hard:
all no.

00:00:149 unsnaped snap it to 00:00:089 and add whistle in the head too snapped 1/8
ty mod~
Amu
Normal:

[spoilerbox]00:00:089 whistle ok
00:34:649 NC ok
01:10:649 whistle ok
01:14:009 move the last point of slider really look alot better i think so too:3 ok

01:26:489 same as easy sorry, frost-b-spec said no , no.


Thank you for mod:3
HelloSCV
From #modrequest /o/

[General]
  • - i think normal and hard diffs gap is little bit large :p just my opinion
[Easy]
  • - 00:52:889 (3) - whsitle on end? hears nice
    - 01:09:209 (2) - finish on start and repeat ( and delete whistle on repeat )
    - 01:16:889 (2) - ^ only start
    - 01:18:809 (1) - finish?
    - 01:24:569 (3) - whistle on end

    [Amu's Normal]
    [list:29042] - 00:34:649 (1) - whistle on end
    - 00:35:609 (2) - out of DS
    - 00:48:089 (3) - ^
    - 00:48:569 (4) - whistle
    - 01:12:569 (2,4) - ^
    - 01:14:009 (5) - ^ on end
    - 01:14:969 (1) - ^
    - 01:17:609 (6) - move this note to 01:17:129 (5) - here? better for rhythm
    - 01:26:489 (1) - finish? instead whistle
[Hard]
  • -00:10:649 (3) - whistle on start
    - 00:14:969 (5) - this jump slider feels unexpected, rhythm is not chainging and feels clam so don't need a jump here i guess,
    - 00:27:449 (4) - using 1.0x DS? i have no idea why you reduced DS to 0.4x :p
    - 00:30:329 (6) - finish is better then whistle
    - 00:45:569 (5) - DS issue
    - 00:45:929 (1) - i think add whistle at this slider's end is better for 00:46:409 (2) - here ( if you added, delete whistle on thses 00:46:409 (2,4) - )
    - 00:46:889 (3) - ^
    - 00:47:849 (1,2) - similar reason with above, delete end's whistle instead, add whistle on repeat
    - 00:50:609 (3) - DS issue
    - 00:53:849 (1) - missed finish on start
    - 01:07:289 (1) - ctrl G? i think this is better for play, current pattern is not bad but players maybe want some jump in that part
    - 01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - so big DS for hard diff? reduce little is better choice
    - 01:12:089 (2,3) - this pattern feels little bit weried when i'm playing, how about ctrl G here? plays better imo
    - 01:16:889 (1,2) - finish on start would be great
that's all what i found haha good luck for rank!
Garven
I'm stalking HelloSCV

[General]
MP3 quality feels really low. You should see if you can find a better one.

[Easy]
This feels really slow and rather boring. The patterns have little to no structure to them, so I don't remember them at all. It also feels like you're just slowly moving in circles the entire map.
00:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - These would make more sense to the music if you mapped to the red ticks. Maybe use sliders instead so that it isn't too much of a shock initially.
00:50:009 (1) - End this at 00:50:729 -

[Normal]
This is really boring rhythmically. It's almost all 1/1s with an occasional 1/2 triple. Try using some longer sliders to vary the rhythm a little such as during the beginning of the song. Give that intro some sort of variance so that it's different when the band comes in at 00:07:769 -
00:33:689 (6,1) - Spacing is too close
00:34:649 (1) - Missed a whistle
00:48:569 (4,6) - Missed whistles?
00:48:569 (4,6) - Ugly overlap with 00:47:129 (2) -
01:12:569 (2,4,5) - Missed whistles
01:14:969 (1) - ^
01:17:849 (7) - Delete to have a better emphasis with the percussion
Hitsounding was also really boring. See if you can spruce it up with more finish use and some other sounds. Right now it's mostly just off-beat whistles.

[Hard]
00:50:609 (3) - This really doesn't belong there at all. All the emphasis is at 00:50:729 - but you lose that if you add in that beat at 609
Add a spinner somewhere so that the scores aren't stagnant.
Going from Normal -> Hard is a really big jump difficulty-wise.

You might want to tone down the large jumps (that don't really match anything in the music) and maybe some of the longer streams during the kiai.
Amu

HelloSCV wrote:

From #modrequest /o/

[Amu's Normal]
  • - 00:34:649 (1) - whistle on end ok
    - 00:35:609 (2) - out of DS ok
    - 00:48:089 (3) - ^ ok
    - 00:48:569 (4) - whistle ok
    - 01:12:569 (2,4) - ^ ok
    - 01:14:009 (5) - ^ on end ok
    - 01:14:969 (1) - ^ ok
    - 01:17:609 (6) - move this note to 01:17:129 (5) - here? better for rhythm sorry, i like this pattern in this map:( i keep it.
    - 01:26:489 (1) - finish? instead whistle
ok

that's all what i found haha good luck for rank!
ty:3

Thank you for useful mod:3
SakiK
as request

[Amu's Normal]

Noticeable mistakes DS ,plz check. for examples
00:06:329 (5) - DS
00:34:649 (1) - ^
00:35:609 (2) - ^
00:28:889 (1) - ^
00:30:809 (1) - ^
and many.
Especially,
00:48:089 (3) - too far,must fix here.

hit sound

00:01:049 (3) - whistel
00:02:969 (1) - ^ at head
00:04:889 (3) - ^

00:09:689 (4) - Drum finish
00:11:129 (1) - ^at end
00:13:529 (4) - ^
same here 00:30:809

00:48:569 (4) - whistel
00:49:529 (6) - ^

01:02:969 (6) - finish at reverse
01:09:209 (3) - finish
01:09:929 (6) - ^at head
01:17:609 (6) - finish
01:18:809 (1) - ^ at head

01:18:809 (1) ~01:24:089 (1)
I think more fix to use normal hit sound,
01:26:009 (3) - use normal hit

01:26:489 (1) - put finish insted of whistel

other

00:51:929 (1) -
I think here is most exciting place in front of the KIAI time,but have spaced and long spin.It is very wastefu...
try put notes and sliders here.for example

that's all.gl
Amu
hi, garven:3

[Normal]
This is really boring rhythmically. It's almost all 1/1s with an occasional 1/2 triple. Try using some longer sliders to vary the rhythm a little such as during the beginning of the song. Give that intro some sort of variance so that it's different when the band comes in at 00:07:769 - i also thought that this map was boring rhytmically. To improve that, i made a new part before 7:769.
00:33:689 (6,1) - Spacing is too close fixed
00:34:649 (1) - Missed a whistle fixed
00:48:569 (4,6) - Missed whistles? fixed
00:48:569 (4,6) - Ugly overlap with 00:47:129 (2) - fixed
01:12:569 (2,4,5) - Missed whistles fixed
01:14:969 (1) - ^ fixed
01:17:849 (7) - Delete to have a better emphasis with the percussion fixed
Hitsounding was also really boring. See if you can spruce it up with more finish use and some other sounds. Right now it's mostly just off-beat whistles.

Thank you for mod:3 its was so useful:3
Amu

SakiK wrote:

as request hi:3

[Amu's Normal]

Noticeable mistakes DS ,plz check. for examples もちろんです!
00:06:329 (5) - DS  ok
00:34:649 (1) - ^ ok
00:35:609 (2) - ^ ok
00:28:889 (1) - ^ ok
00:30:809 (1) - ^ ok
and many.
Especially,
00:48:089 (3) - too far,must fix here. 直しました!

hit sound

00:01:049 (3) - whistel    ok
00:02:969 (1) - ^ at head ok
00:04:889 (3) - ^        ok

00:09:689 (4) - Drum finish ok
00:11:129 (1) - ^at end ok
00:13:529 (4) - ^ ok
same here 00:30:809 ok

00:48:569 (4) - whistel ok
00:49:529 (6) - ^ ok

01:02:969 (6) - finish at reverse ok
01:09:209 (3) - finish ok
01:09:929 (6) - ^at head ok
01:17:609 (6) - finish ok
01:18:809 (1) - ^ at head ok

01:18:809 (1) ~01:24:089 (1)
I think more fix to use normal hit sound, そう思ったのでノーマルヒットサウンドに変えました。
01:26:009 (3) - use normal hit    ok

01:26:489 (1) - put finish insted of whistel ok

other

00:51:929 (1) -
I think here is most exciting place in front of the KIAI time,but have spaced and long spin.It is very wastefu...
try put notes and sliders here.for example
私も指摘されてそう思いましたが難易度がノーマルということもありここでスピン差をつけたいと思ったためここはnoにさせていただきます。

that's all.gl
役に立つモッドありがとうございます。 :)
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>HelloSCV
almost done.

>Garven
sry, all no.
Easy is for beginner. i dislike red tick.
Hard, not hard slow BPM stream.
Garven
Red ticks is fine in Easy maps as long as you use them well. Having lead-in rhythms or sliders can help with that. I'm more worried about the general structure of the map, as it seems to have pretty much none at all. Try to make something that's actually visually appealing instead of just... seemingly random meandering across the play field.

As for the Hard, well, it's your taste I guess, but overall the map is still rather poor and doesn't fit well with the song. It will most probably need a lot more work if you want this to go for ranking.
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>Garven
Easy
00:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - These would make more sense to the music if you mapped to the red ticks. Maybe use sliders instead so that it isn't too much of a shock initially. finally done
00:50:009 (1) - End this at 00:50:729 - finally done

Hard
No change.

thx~
iyasine
hi~(^^)/

Easy

01:02:489 (5) - Grid snapを外して、もう少しだけ下に下げてみては?01:01:529 (3,4) - に合わせて綺麗な斜めの流れにする感じ!

01:05:369 (3) - ここだけDistanceが乱れています。DS 0.8x にして手前の01:04:409 (1,2) - と合わせたら、もっとプレイしやすくなるかと!

Amu's Normal

00:26:969 (1) - NC?00:28:889 (5) - remove NC ?

00:33:209 (5) - Distanceが若干乱れています、手前と同じ0.9xにすると良いでしょう!

00:51:449 (3) - 手前のスライダーの延長線上に移動したほうがプレイしやすく、見た目も良くなるかと!

Hard

00:44:009 (5) - ここを少し右上にずらして、00:43:289 (2,3,4,5,1) - の塊を綺麗な星型にしてみては?

nice map!とても和みました :lol: good luck~
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

iyasine wrote:

hi~(^^)/

Easy

01:02:489 (5) - Grid snapを外して、もう少しだけ下に下げてみては?01:01:529 (3,4) - に合わせて綺麗な斜めの流れにする感じ!
done

01:05:369 (3) - ここだけDistanceが乱れています。DS 0.8x にして手前の01:04:409 (1,2) - と合わせたら、もっとプレイしやすくなるかと!
DSずれていないので修正していません。

Hard

00:44:009 (5) - ここを少し右上にずらして、00:43:289 (2,3,4,5,1) - の塊を綺麗な星型にしてみては?
done.

nice map!とても和みました :lol: good luck~
thx mod~
Suimya
Mod4Mod on your Queue =w=/


Easy:
OD and HP -1 would do be good for the easy diff
  1. 00:08:249 (2,3) - since it's easy diff i suggest you to remove these notes and make 1 1/1 short slider instead, it'll be better imo~
  2. 00:14:489 (1) - Add Normal simpleset on the slider's reverse, it'll sound better~
  3. 00:18:329 (1) - Add finish on slide's end~
  4. 00:23:129 (1) - ^ but on slider's start~
  5. 00:33:209 (4,5) - same as i said in here 00:08:249 (2,3) -
  6. 00:42:329 (4,1) - switch the nc , it'll be better on the 2 not the 1 imo
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - add finish on this note
  8. 00:52:889 (3) - it's kinda boring like this, so maybe make this slider like this?
  9. 01:06:329 (4) - add finish on slider's end
  10. 01:21:689 (5) - ^
  11. 01:24:569 (3) - ^ but slider's start
  12. 01:26:009 (4) - add drum simpleset in this note

Amu's Normal:
HP -1 will be good for this diff imo~
  1. 00:03:449 (6) - I don't suggest you to use stuck on normal diff, so maybe move it somewhere like this?
  2. 00:06:569 (4,5) - ^ it's a bit too hard for the normal diff, so maybe do something like this? Just remove this note 00:06:569 (4) - i don't think it'll follow anything~
  3. 00:10:649 (6) - move this note to x:336 y:216 so it'll be a perfect triangle
  4. 00:14:489 (6) - make this slider a bit curve it'll play a bit nicer and fun imo~
  5. 00:19:769 (2) - move this slider 2 grids to the left so it'll make nice mirror effect to the first slider~
  6. 00:33:689 (6) - maybe make this slider like this, so the end of this slider stuck under this slider 00:31:769 (2) -

Hard:
I suggest you to reduce the hp and od by one since it'll fit the map more
Good diff, best diff out of all them~


Good job on this map, but wow nice for old map o.o/

Good luck on this <3
Losertic
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

  1. I think fix custom hitsound. also, uh.. 9 month ago? remake it?
  2. I heard start sound " 00:00:209 " this part. uh, change offset..? i don't know. (it is not 1/1 beat)

Easy

  1. 00:14:489 (1) - move slider middle point (108,296), move slider tail point (79,272) because, for blanket
  2. 00:33:689 (5) - check distance. set 0.78x ~ 0.82x
  3. 00:48:089 (1) - NC...??
  4. 01:04:409 (1) - check distance.
  5. 01:05:369 (3) - ^
  6. 01:08:249 (1) - check distance.

Amu's Normal

  1. 00:05:849 (3,4,5) - maybe it's too hard for beginner. (i think not good stack note by normal diff) if you non-fix this mod, plz change perpect stack. 00:06:569 (4,5) - move (307,323)
    00:19:769 (2) ~ 00:28:889 (5) - change this?
    SPOILER
    ─ 00:19:769 (2) - move (99,188)
    ─ 00:20:729 (3) - move (324,197)
    ─ 00:21:689 (4) - move (316,301)
    ─ 00:22:169 (5) - move (218,347)
    ─ 00:22:649 (6) - move (220,239)
    ─ 00:23:129 (1) - move (126,292)
    ─ 00:23:609 (2) - move (154,187)
    ─ 00:25:529 (4) - move (357,187)
    ─ 00:26:969 (1) - move (465,191)
    ─ 00:27:449 (2) - move (409,287)
    ─ 00:27:929 (3) - move (321,231)
    ─ 00:28:409 (4) - move (369,135)
    ─ 00:28:889 (5) - move (269,93)
  2. 00:30:809 (1,2) - check distance.
  3. 00:36:089 (3) - ^
  4. 00:36:809 (5,6) - ^
  5. 00:40:889 (5) - ^
  6. 00:45:209 (5) - ^
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - ^
  8. 00:48:569 (4,5) - ^
  9. 00:50:009 (1) - ^
  10. 01:05:129 (3,4) - ^
  11. 01:08:249 (1) - ^
  12. 01:09:449 (4,5,6) - ^
  13. 01:11:129 (1) - ^
  14. 01:15:929 (2) - ^
  15. 01:16:889 (4) - ^
  16. 01:17:609 (6) - ^
  17. 01:18:329 (7) - ^
  18. 01:18:809 (1) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:00:089 - start note by easy,normal diff ummm.
  2. 00:06:089 (1) - plz change far away
  3. 01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - maybe it's too hard.
  4. 01:11:609 (1,2,3,4) - not pretty flow...umm change slider shape?
  5. 01:28:409 (1) - NC?
hoLysoup
I love this song <3
:>
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Mod4Mod on your Queue =w=/


Easy:
OD and HP -1 would do be good for the easy diff  done
  1. 00:08:249 (2,3) - since it's easy diff i suggest you to remove these notes and make 1 1/1 short slider instead, it'll be better imo~ no
  2. 00:14:489 (1) - Add Normal simpleset on the slider's reverse, it'll sound better~ done
  3. 00:18:329 (1) - Add finish on slide's end~ done
  4. 00:23:129 (1) - ^ but on slider's start~ done
  5. 00:33:209 (4,5) - same as i said in here 00:08:249 (2,3) - no
  6. 00:42:329 (4,1) - switch the nc , it'll be better on the 2 not the 1 imo done
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - add finish on this note done
  8. 00:52:889 (3) - it's kinda boring like this, so maybe make this slider like this? done
  9. 01:06:329 (4) - add finish on slider's end done
  10. 01:21:689 (5) - ^ done
  11. 01:24:569 (3) - ^ but slider's start done
  12. 01:26:009 (4) - add drum simpleset in this note done
Hard:
I suggest you to reduce the hp and od by one since it'll fit the map more
Good diff, best diff out of all them~


Good job on this map, but wow nice for old map o.o/

Good luck on this <3
thanks m4m~
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>Losertic
thanks m4m
sru,almost no
but,fixed distance mod
and little change.

>hoLy
i love sphere~! XD
Asgard
[Hard]
00:12:569 (4) - wrong space
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not beauty pattern.. try change pattern with slider and notes
00:20:609 (4) - 1 grid right
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - too hard... remember this is hard not insane
00:30:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:15:449
00:36:089 (6) - too far... how about 204, 268
00:36:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/4UNyE.jpg
00:55:769 (1) - remove NC?
00:56:729 (2,3,4,5) - more curve like this http://puu.sh/4UNAY.png
01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - too hard... this is hard diff not insane

[Normal]
00:06:569 (4,5) - i think stacked note is hard for newbie players
00:09:689 (4) - NC
00:17:849 (5) - ^
00:36:569 (4) - ^
00:40:889 (5) - ^
00:42:329 (1) - remove NC
00:43:289 (3) - NC
01:05:849 (5) - ^
01:09:929 (6) - ^

[Easy]
well.. looks good
Amu

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Mod4Mod on your Queue =w=/


Amu's Normal:
HP -1 will be good for this diff imo~
  1. 00:03:449 (6) - I don't suggest you to use stuck on normal diff, so maybe move it somewhere like this?
  2. 00:06:569 (4,5) - ^ it's a bit too hard for the normal diff, so maybe do something like this? Just remove this note 00:06:569 (4) - i don't think it'll follow anything~
  3. 00:10:649 (6) - move this note to x:336 y:216 so it'll be a perfect triangle
  4. 00:14:489 (6) - make this slider a bit curve it'll play a bit nicer and fun imo~
  5. 00:19:769 (2) - move this slider 2 grids to the left so it'll make nice mirror effect to the first slider~
  6. 00:33:689 (6) - maybe make this slider like this, so the end of this slider stuck under this slider 00:31:769 (2) -

Good job on this map, but wow nice for old map o.o/

Good luck on this <3
all fixed , thx for mod:3
regenz
M4M

general

i guess no problem here.

Hard

*** after play test this diff with pen. I think AR 8 make a map alot easier to read. some jump is not suit for AR7

00:00:149 (1) - i've felt this note can be make better and I've think it should start at 00:00:329 instead of 00:00:149 ( so It can resolve no sound it normal and easy also )


some set of notes missing a whistle at 3rd beat compare to 00:17:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - not miss
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5 miss
00:21:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - head 3 slider
00:26:009 (4) - whistle this is better
and some more until it's - x - x pattern (x = hitsound , - = none)
and if it's pattern please told me to make me learn a pattern

why not follow a drum here 00:55:529,00:55:649

in chorus section it's might be better if you add a snare drum hitsound at each place you 've already place a whistle ( 2nd beat ,4th beat)
http://puu.sh/4UOYV.zip < you can use these
use it until 01:24:569 (1) -
some except 01:19:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - use clap every white beat.
01:10:649 (2,3,4) - clap
01:17:609 (2) - finish sound?
01:24:809 (2,4) - remove this is fit more better.

you might not interest. but please try it at once.

Amu's Normal

00:34:649 (1) - whistle at head of slider is mistake ? sound not good for me
01:24:569 (2) - finish at start of slider and remove whistle at middle of slider ( it's sound weird ) previous was fine.
01:24:569 (2) - use soft sound or normal but with more quite maybe 40 percent volume ( if normal )

please read about snare drum additional hit sound in chorus section at hard diff modding.


easy

01:10:649 finish?

rest seem fine ( i guess it can't add an aditional snare drum hitsound.

I didn't moding for a longtime may be I've mistake something . sorry about it . If it's not helpful at all

my M4m maps https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957
Amu
[quote="Losertic"]Hello!

Amu's Normal

  1. 00:05:849 (3,4,5) - maybe it's too hard for beginner. (i think not good stack note by normal diff) if you non-fix this mod, plz change perpect stack. 00:06:569 (4,5) - move (307,323)
    00:19:769 (2) ~ 00:28:889 (5) - change this?
    SPOILER
    ─ 00:19:769 (2) - move (99,188)
    ─ 00:20:729 (3) - move (324,197)
    ─ 00:21:689 (4) - move (316,301)
    ─ 00:22:169 (5) - move (218,347)
    ─ 00:22:649 (6) - move (220,239)
    ─ 00:23:129 (1) - move (126,292)
    ─ 00:23:609 (2) - move (154,187)
    ─ 00:25:529 (4) - move (357,187)
    ─ 00:26:969 (1) - move (465,191)
    ─ 00:27:449 (2) - move (409,287)
    ─ 00:27:929 (3) - move (321,231)
    ─ 00:28:409 (4) - move (369,135)
    ─ 00:28:889 (5) - move (269,93)
  2. 00:30:809 (1,2) - check distance.
  3. 00:36:089 (3) - ^
  4. 00:36:809 (5,6) - ^
  5. 00:40:889 (5) - ^
  6. 00:45:209 (5) - ^
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - ^
  8. 00:48:569 (4,5) - ^
  9. 00:50:009 (1) - ^
  10. 01:05:129 (3,4) - ^
  11. 01:08:249 (1) - ^
  12. 01:09:449 (4,5,6) - ^
  13. 01:11:129 (1) - ^
  14. 01:15:929 (2) - ^
  15. 01:16:889 (4) - ^
  16. 01:17:609 (6) - ^
  17. 01:18:329 (7) - ^
  18. 01:18:809 (1) - ^
all fixed, thanks for mod!!!
Amu
[Normal]
00:06:569 (4,5) - i think stacked note is hard for newbie players
00:09:689 (4) - NC
00:17:849 (5) - ^
00:36:569 (4) - ^
00:40:889 (5) - ^
00:42:329 (1) - remove NC
00:43:289 (3) - NC
01:05:849 (5) - ^
01:09:929 (6) - ^

all fixed,thanks for mod!!
Amu

regenz wrote:

M4M


Amu's Normal

00:34:649 (1) - whistle at head of slider is mistake ? sound not good for me
01:24:569 (2) - finish at start of slider and remove whistle at middle of slider ( it's sound weird ) previous was fine.
01:24:569 (2) - use soft sound or normal but with more quite maybe 40 percent volume ( if normal )

please read about snare drum additional hit sound in chorus section at hard diff modding.


my M4m maps https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957
all fixed, thx for mod!!!
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

Asgard wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:569 (4) - wrong space done
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not beauty pattern.. try change pattern with slider and notes no
00:20:609 (4) - 1 grid right done
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - too hard... remember this is hard not insane no
00:30:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:15:449 no
00:36:089 (6) - too far... how about 204, 268 no
00:36:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/4UNyE.jpg done
00:55:769 (1) - remove NC? done
00:56:729 (2,3,4,5) - more curve like this http://puu.sh/4UNAY.png ??
01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - too hard... this is hard diff not insane no

regenz wrote:

M4M

general

i guess no problem here.

Hard

*** after play test this diff with pen. I think AR 8 make a map alot easier to read. some jump is not suit for AR7 done

00:00:149 (1) - i've felt this note can be make better and I've think it should start at 00:00:329 instead of 00:00:149 ( so It can resolve no sound it normal and easy also )


some set of notes missing a whistle at 3rd beat compare to 00:17:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - not miss cant understand eng :(
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5 miss cant understand eng :(
00:21:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - head 3 slider cant understand eng :(
00:26:009 (4) - whistle this is better no
and some more until it's - x - x pattern (x = hitsound , - = none)
and if it's pattern please told me to make me learn a pattern

why not follow a drum here 00:55:529,00:55:649 no

in chorus section it's might be better if you add a snare drum hitsound at each place you 've already place a whistle ( 2nd beat ,4th beat)
http://puu.sh/4UOYV.zip < you can use these
use it until 01:24:569 (1) - no
some except 01:19:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - use clap every white beat. no
01:10:649 (2,3,4) - clap no
01:17:609 (2) - finish sound? done
01:24:809 (2,4) - remove this is fit more better. done

you might not interest. but please try it at once.

easy

01:10:649 finish? no

rest seem fine ( i guess it can't add an aditional snare drum hitsound.

I didn't moding for a longtime may be I've mistake something . sorry about it . If it's not helpful at all

my M4m maps https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957
Thanks Asgard and regenz
Kioshinxs_old
I can create a one diff in taiko ? :3?

thanks
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

MachineGunt wrote:

I can create a one diff in taiko ? :3?

thanks
sry,no.
Kodora
hey frost =w= as promiced :3


[General]

  1. Maybe mute sliderslide? Doesn't fit calm vocals here imo.

[Hard]

  1. 00:00:149 (1) - I would recommend change for a bit for better flow, try something like this:

  2. 00:01:289 (4,5,6) - Maybe stack them and try to make a little triangle here? Something like this:

  3. 00:07:289 (5) - Move last anchorpoint to x208 y108 to make it flows more nicely
  4. 00:09:449 (5,1) - There are two strong beats at this note and at the beginning at slider. How about made normal-sampleset on them? (If you will apply this, try to do same in all parts like this)
  5. 00:16:169 (4,5) - I strongly recommend you decrease DS here to 1.80 to made this jump feels more natural - this is Hard diff, so jumps like this may feels too much. Also, NC to (5) due to jump would be pretty nice here.
  6. 00:22:169 (3) - New combo due to jump?
  7. 00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, this part is really more Insane-like. To made it easier to play try to reduse DS between those notes to x1.80-x1.60 - it will be more friendly for a Hard diff.
  8. 00:31:769 (5,6) - Same as at 00:16:169 (4,5)
  9. 00:38:489 (1) - Add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals?
  10. 00:40:409 (1,2,3) - Hmm.. This part looks actually a bit strange... Try something like this?

    SPOILER


    376,64,40409,6,0,B|268:92|204:9,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,112,41129,2,0,B|224:160|276:152,1,90
    212,20,41609,2,0,B|160:12|108:48,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  11. 00:42:329 (5) - Add finish to emphazire vocals?
  12. 00:45:689 (6) - Add finish
  13. 00:45:929 (1) - Add finish to emphazire vocals to the end of slider?
  14. 00:54:569 (2) - Maybe curve it a bit? Like this:

  15. 00:56:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh, this flow feels a bit weird... try something like this?
    SPOILER


    408,104,56249,6,0,B|360:112|312:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    240,120,56729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    204,200,56969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    120,232,57209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    60,300,57449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  16. 00:58:889 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is a bit hard to catch due to (5) being on blue tick - try to just remove this note
  17. 01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - ♥
  18. 01:14:249 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as at 00:58:889 (4,5,6,7,8)
  19. 01:21:209 (1,2,3,4) - Try something like this?
[Amu's Normal]

  1. 00:00:089 (1) - Move this circle to 00:00:149 - like fbs did on his diff
  2. 00:03:449 (6) - This finish sounds a bit random for me, consider remove it from here & add to beginning of 00:03:929 (1) -
  3. 00:03:929 (1) - Remove whistle from sliderbody?
  4. 00:05:849 (3) - ^
  5. 00:06:809 (4) - Follow your previous hitsound patterns here should be whistle i guess
  6. 00:07:289 (5) - If you want to keep this finish try to reduse volume on it, two finishes sounds a bit too loud here
  7. 00:07:769 (1) - 00:09:689 - Use drum-sampleset here too - for consistensy
  8. 00:16:889 (4) - Finish on tail?
  9. 00:23:129 (1) - Finish
  10. 00:31:769 (1,2,3) - Oops, spacing issue here
  11. 00:34:649 (1) - move last anchorpoint to x384y56 to make it flows more nicely
  12. 00:36:569 (1,2,3) - I strongly recommend avoid use a lot of circles in Normal diff - try to replace it with 1/2 slider to made it easier for beginners, something like this:

  13. 00:38:489 (1) - Add finish to emphazire vocals?
  14. 00:46:169 (1) - ^ (to the beginning of slider)
  15. 00:59:609 (1) - add finish?
  16. 01:04:889 (2,3,4) - Again, this can be too hard for a Normal diff. I strongly recommend you replace it with 1/2 reverse-slider same as at 00:36:569 (1,2,3)
  17. 01:05:369 (4,1) - Spacing issue
  18. 01:14:969 (1) - Finish to the head of slider to emphazire vocals?
  19. 01:17:369 (5,6) - Maybe replace 2 notes with slider here? Fits better imo
  20. 01:18:809 (1) - Why this part suddenly have normal-sampleset?
  21. 01:22:649 (3,1) - Disable grid snap and move (1) to made perfect blanket here
[Easy]

  1. 00:00:089 (1) - Start it at 00:00:149 - same as you did on Hard diff
  2. 00:34:649 (1) - Change form a bit maybe? Like this:

  3. 00:37:529 (1) - Finish to the tail of slider to emphazire vocals?
  4. 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, this rhythm feels a bit empty.. try something like this instead?

  5. 00:59:609 (1) - Add finish please :3
  6. 01:14:009 (5) - ^ (to the tail)
Pretty nice map. Hitsounds in normal feels a bit inconsistent, but i guess it can be easily fixed with some mods. Good luck with rank! :3
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>kodora
ty mod~
little change.
Myxo
Random Mod~

[Easy]
  1. The easy diff is well made, though some parts seem pretty boring to me. Sometimes, you've just mapped every second white tick for a long time, or reused the same "triple" (01:04:889 (2,3) - ) very often. The song has got more potential. For example:
  2. 00:00:089 (1,2,3) -
    Infact, the 2 isn't even an important beat. You could make a timeline like that:
    It would be much more interesting but still easy to read.
  3. 00:03:929 (1,2,3) - Same here.
  4. ( 00:07:769 (1,2,3,4,1) - Here the 4 is placed good, because there's a drum beat. )
  5. 01:06:329 (4) - Blanket could be better.
  6. 01:16:889 (2,1) - Random 90° angles don't make sense here. First of all it doesn't look good and makes your map feel like a 2011-map if it's not rotated, but it doesn't play very good too. If you don't know where to go after a straight slider, go straight on or use low angles.
[Amu's Normal]
  1. The normal diff is ok, but seems boring and repetetive right now. There are some exceptions, but you've mapped almost white-tick only. This makes the map less interesting. You should think of more more variety here. For example:
  2. 00:00:089 (1,2,3) -
    The red tick where the white bar is located is a more important beat than the white tick before it in my opinion. You could map it like that:
    It would be much more interesting but still easy to read.
  3. 00:03:449 (6) - Remove finish.
  4. 00:03:929 (1,2,3) - Better, more interesting timeline:
  5. There are more places like that where you could map red ticks instead of white ticks to make the diff better. Try to listen to the main instruments and fix some circles.
  6. 00:07:289 (5) - Remove finish.
  7. 00:09:689 (1) - It makes no sense to me to start with drum sample set here. Start using it here: 00:07:769 (1) - instead. Also, the first part with drum sample set doesn't have any hitsound placement. You may think of a simple pattern here.
[Hard]
  1. This diff is the best diff of the mapset. Well done :3 It's not as repetetive as the other diffs. Only some small cosmetic things:
  2. 00:18:809 (4,5,1) - Change this to a consistent curve like that:
  3. 00:22:649 (4,5,1) - Change to straight line between the sliders.
  4. 01:19:289 (1,2,3,4) - Keep the sliders consistent.
Good luck with the mapset :*
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>Desperate-kun
sry too late reply
little changed.
Amu
Kodora and Desperate-kun , some fixed:3

sorry for late:'(
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