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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 30 april 2013 at 19:39:39

Artist: nano
Title: Beautiful ground
Tags: nanoir
BPM: 182
Filesize: 4888kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 596 notes)


Download: nano - Beautiful ground
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Collab is on ice, the insane is frequently being worked on.
Changed circle size
Changed bg
Finished with some help from Theowest
Thanks!
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Offset: 1 114 1 110ms
BPM: 182,00

Most songs rarely uses decimals, such as 182,02
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Wow, I haven't seen any bad point in this beatmap at all!
I just have one question: Will you make the collab one longer?

~Aya
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marcelosina1 wrote:

Wow, I haven't seen any bad point in this beatmap at all!
I just have one question: Will you make the collab one longer?

~Aya
Hi!

First off, thanks!

Yeah well the collab is still a work in progress, I haven't checked with chung in a while now but both maps are supposed to be long. The insane version has a few holes that I've skipped on purpose that I'll finish up soon so it's not done either, but I'll continue working on it soon. I'll be gone for a week for now but after that I'm back in business!
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done mapping the last parts of insane, you can keep it if you want, just mention that I helped a bit
http://puu.sh/1SnRF
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Hey o/

General

  1. Should the name of the song be Beautiful ground?

  2. Also, add yuyoyuppe to tags. And you can add nanoir, it's an album


Insane

  1. Circle size -1? They are too big for insane, but it's your call
  2. 00:01:105 (1) - finish on first note
  3. 00:03:577 (1) - ^
  4. 00:04:731 - you should have note here to follow your rhythm
  5. 00:05:390 - ^ as there is beat in music
  6. 00:11:242 (8) - finish in the end
  7. 00:21:874 (1) - this note seems out of rhytm, add note 00:21:709 - here and 00:22:039 - here:
  8. 00:22:203 (1) - finish here
  9. 00:27:478 (1) - ^
  10. 00:29:786 (4,1) - do you see that they have 1/1 distance between them, but it has the same distance as between 00:30:445 (1,2,1,2). Why? Move it further
  11. 00:37:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many finishes in the stream D: sound awful, remove them
  12. 00:41:654 - I expected a note here, maybe add one?
  13. 00:43:302 (1) - finish
  14. 00:45:940 (9) - new combo!
  15. 00:51:214 (4) - shorten it to 00:51:544 - and add note on red tick
  16. 00:52:368 - add note here too
  17. 00:52:698 (9) - new combo
  18. 00:53:852 (1) - finish
  19. 00:57:148 - note, it's not good to leave blanked space more than 1/1
  20. 01:01:599 (5) - uhh, if you want to leave this, it's ok, but maybe split it into different notes?
  21. 01:04:401 (6) - new combo?
  22. 01:11:984 - add note
  23. 01:12:313 (11) - move it further
  24. 01:12:396 - maybe start spinner here? or here 01:12:478 -
  25. 01:22:863 (2) - finish
  26. 01:28:137 (4) - ^
  27. 01:31:929 (6) - ^
  28. 01:35:473 (10,11) - move them like this:
  29. 01:37:698 (8) - move it so that 01:37:203 (6) - won't overlap it
  30. 01:44:621 - note!
  31. 01:45:445 (5) - again, move it, such overlaps look bad
  32. 01:46:599 (9) - new combo and finish
  33. 01:49:236 (8) - ^
  34. 01:54:511 (1) - finish
  35. 01:57:148 (3) - new combo
  36. 02:09:346 (11) - don't fit. change, please D:
  37. 02:07:698 (5) - new combo
  38. 02:12:808 (1) - shorten to 02:13:137 -
  39. 02:14:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move it like here (as previous hitburst of notes overlap it)
  40. 02:33:083 (1) - start spinner from 02:34:154 - and map this part:
  41. 02:36:709 (2) - finish
  42. 02:41:984 (1) - ^
  43. 02:47:258 (10) - new combo
  44. 02:49:566 (1) - finish on reverse
  45. 02:55:170 (1) - finish
  46. 02:57:808 (1) - ^

    Also, you should improve your hitsounds. Try to experiment with soft and whistles and claps and so on, with volumes.
    Good luck!
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Hi!
via #modreqs
If my opinion is same contents as previous mod, It's OK skipping my mod. :D
These are my IMO; you should not accept all my suggestion, but if you skip my suggestion, I want you tell me the reason!

[Insane]

  • Rhythm and placement
  1. 00:01:929 (2) - It's not good using many slider's return such timing. I suggest this
  2. 00:03:577 (1,2,3,4) - This part of sound is changing compared to previous one. I suggest using little jump.
  3. 00:52:368 ~ 00:52:368 - This space is not good, I think. Because there is voice. I suggest this
  4. 01:52:203 (1,2,3) - I can't understand which sound you catch. I suggest adding circle 01:52:368 {same position as 01:52:203 (1)} and moving 01:52:533 (2,3) to 01:52:698.
  5. 01:58:467 - If you use the guitar line, need slide here. slider start=01:58:467 , end=01:58:632.
  6. 02:29:951 (8,1) - These are not fit to voice line. I suggest removing 02:29:951 (8), moving 02:30:115 (1) to 02:29:951 and adding circle here=02:30:775
  7. 02:33:083 (1) - this spinner is not fit to the sound there. I suggest put normal notes 02:32:753 ~ 02:34:072 and starting spinner here=02:34:072.
  8. 02:26:159 (6,7) - stack?
  9. 02:36:214 - need circle.
  10. 03:08:028 (2,3) - There are strong drum sound. I'd like to use jump!


New combo
  1. 00:09:017 (3) - NC. For example you use here 00:03:577 - .
  2. 00:45:280 (6) - NC. use long combo in later.
  3. 00:47:918 and 00:48:577 - change NC. From timing of voice.
  4. 00:50:061 and 00:50:555 - same reason as upward.="^"
  5. 01:00:610 and 01:00:940 - ^
  6. 01:03:742 and 01:04:401 - ^
  7. 01:09:676 and 01:10:500 - ^
  8. 01:26:819 - NC. use long combo.
  9. 01:27:808 and 01:28:137 -change NC. It's not good separateing 01:27:478 (9,10,11) and 01:27:808 (1,2,3).
  10. 01:34:566 (7) - NC. use long combo.
  11. 01:35:720 and 01:36:050 - change NC. same reason as 01:27:808 and 01:28:137 -
  12. 01:38:522 and 01:39:511 - change NC. from timing of voice.
  13. 01:41:324 and 01:41:984 - ^
  14. 01:46:599 (9) - NC. use long combo.
  15. 01:48:247 and 01:49:236 - change NC. change sound here=01:49:236 -
  16. 01:50:720 and 01:51:214 - change NC. For example you use here 00:03:577.
  17. 01:51:874 and 01:52:203 - change NC.
  18. 02:00:445 - NC. It's kindness.
  19. 02:01:269 and 02:01:434 - change NC. there are sound space here=02:01:269.
  20. 02:36:709 - NC. change sound clearly.
  21. 02:47:258 - NC. starting voice.


need much more mod for Rank. If you would like to apply other diff's mod, you call me via my PM.
Good luck!!
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Thanks, I've finished Reijis mod and I saw some things I liked in yours as well hibarirailwayz, so I'll go ahead and thank you for it (though I still haven't edited all of it) :)
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I don't know what's this
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Mod request via IRC on [Insane] diff

here i go~

[General]

  • It's a fun map overall, but i'd stick a little bit more with distance snap on some places


[Insane]

  • 00:02:423 (4) - ctrl+G this slider and fix it to make nice blanket (http://puu.sh/2bD2p)
    00:07:698 (6) - ^ (http://puu.sh/2bD4k)
    00:22:203 (4) - ctrl+G
    00:24:017 (4) - this feels kinda weird the way it is, I'd make into something like this: http://puu.sh/2bDeX
    00:27:808 (2) - ctrl+G
    00:29:126 (2) - ctrl+G
    00:33:083 (2) - ctrl+G
    00:50:885 (3) - ctrl+G
    00:55:006 (8) - I don't see any reason to make the slider all wiggled like this, i think a normal slider here would fit best to her voice
    00:56:654 (1) - why NC? remove nc here or remove it here 00:56:984 (1) -
    00:59:456 (7) - ctrl+G
    01:01:599 (5) - NC
    01:01:764 (1) - Remove NC
    01:31:599 (5) - ctrl+G and I would change this and make it into something like this: http://puu.sh/2bDAQ
    01:31:929 (1) - NC
    01:43:632 (7) - ctrl+G and same thing as above (http://puu.sh/2bDFo)
    01:59:786 (3) - NC
    02:31:929 (6) - ctrl+G
    02:36:709 (2) - NC
    03:04:896 (5) - ctrl+G
    03:05:390 (6) - ctrl+G


uff, hope I helped. Don't feel bad about what ayu said, just keep on mapping because the only way to improve is to map more!
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