updated DS's and Mythol's Diffs :3
Chyo-Kun wrote:
[Alacat's Normal]
00:21:669 - add beat x:68 y:104 sry , no change >_<
my map is regularly arranged , so I dont add new combo and some notes >_<bomber34 wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
- 00:41:669 - add note
- 01:08:079 (3) - add whistle ok ~ :3
- 01:14:233 (3) - I would like to see a bow slider here
- 01:22:951 (3) - I think a stack with (2) is better or position X: 396 Y: 112
- 01:31:669 (4) - new combo
- 01:49:618 (4) - a slight bow facing up feels nicer
- 01:59:618 - add slider ending on 01:59:874 (3) - . Sounds better imo
- 02:00:387 (4) - new combo
osu file format v10
[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Title:Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:alacat's Normal
Source:Imouto no Katachi
Tags:Darksonic alacat Mythol Sphere mao Peak Soul opening eroge visual novel hentai
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OverallDifficulty:3
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252,244,105515,1,8,0:0:0
344,200,106028,5,2,0:0:0
412,124,106541,1,8,0:0:0
412,124,106797,2,0,B|464:168|468:240,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
444,284,107566,1,8,0:0:0
364,348,108079,5,2,0:0:0
260,336,108592,1,8,0:0:0
200,252,109105,1,2,0:0:0
208,148,109618,2,0,B|80:124,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
12,200,110643,6,0,B|24:264,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,352,111669,1,8,0:0:0
252,324,112182,2,0,B|288:268|272:196,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,160,112951,1,2,0:0:0
200,64,113464,2,0,B|136:48,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
52,108,114233,6,0,B|24:172|56:240,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,256,115002,2,0,B|192:220|288:276,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,320,116284,2,0,B|428:264|412:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,164,117053,2,0,B|308:148,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,96,117566,2,0,B|236:80,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,100,118335,5,2,0:0:0
36,136,118848,2,0,B|24:200,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
68,352,119874,1,8,0:0:0
144,280,120387,2,0,B|276:272,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,240,121156,1,2,0:0:0
320,136,121669,2,0,B|320:96|336:72,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,28,122438,6,0,B|492:56|508:128,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,172,123207,1,2,0:0:0
464,272,123720,2,0,B|424:272|396:296,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,328,124233,2,0,B|316:384|248:316|180:372,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,372,125259,6,0,B|116:344|84:328,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,312,125771,2,0,B|12:252,2,65,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,126412,12,0,131156,0:0:0
Chyo-Kun wrote:
[DS's Easy]
01:08:079 - add a beat x:168 y:40 No, I prefer to follow music instead vocal here.
01:13:207 (1) - This slider looks a bit weird,maybe just replace it with a straight one? Ok, changed it.
02:06:541 (1) - Following the song,this spinner should start 02:06:284 (1) - here Nah, since it's an Easy diff I think it's ok if there is some empty space before a spinner.
Thanks for modding!bomber34 wrote:
[DS's Easy]flawless imo. I could give one very nazi advice but i don't even think it is necessary. But for the sake of saying it i say it anyway
- 00:32:694 (1) - use same position like on 00:28:079 (4) - Nope, because it would break the symmetric pattern.
-[NYAN]- wrote:
[DS's Easy]
00:16:284 (2) - 152|304 Ok.
00:28:079 (4) - 344|120 Nope, this note is following symmetry with 2.
00:37:823 (2) - 268|168 I don't see a reason to move this.
00:46:541 (2) - 392|208 ^
00:47:566 (3) - 200|272 ^, and this is following symmetry.
01:11:156 (3,4) - 112|228 Ok.
01:50:643 (1) - 152|340 No, the tick of slider is in centre of screen.
Thanks for modding.Laurier wrote:
Easy
00:10:643 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1y72y Sure.
00:25:515 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1y73c Nah, I prefer to keep a symmetric pattern.
00:58:848 (2) - this slider is not fit to this song. maybe make more smooth slider ? http://puu.sh/1y74W Ok.
Miya wrote:
alacat's Normal
- 00:18:848- Lower this timing point volume by 10%. With 30% volume, the finish sounds is still too loud compare to the music which is awkward to hear. fixed
- 00:46:541 (4) - I suggest to add a whistle on this slider start to make your whistle rythim more consistant. oh.. ok~
- 01:00:900 (1) - Hmm, since this time is a beginning of lyrical change, i think you can change the whistle on this slider start to finish instead. mm.. no change here >_<
- 01:40:643 (5) - To make your rythim on this part more synchronized to the rythim and vocal, i suggest you move this slider to 01:40:900- and then shorten this slider length by 1/2. Then you can add another circle at this time 01:40:643-. Don't forget to add a clap at this time : 01:41:412- ok , fixed ~
- Nice diff btw~ Thanks ^^/
Thanks.Miya wrote:
DS's Easy
- 00:21:925 (3) - You can improve this slider by makin this slider more rounded like this : http://puu.sh/1zl2p, so it will make this slider blanketed to the next circle properly. After that, copy pasta and ctrl + j + ctrl + h this slider to this slider 00:23:976 (1) - so it will look same. Don't forget to put new combo! Done.
- 00:28:079 (4) - I guess you miss a whistle on this one. Not consistant with your whistle rythim and sounds awkward when i hear. Added.
- 00:36:284 (1) - Hmm, same case with slider shape before. Make this slider more rounded and blanket. Improved.
- For kiai time, i suggest you add whistle every 2/1 rythim starting from 01:11:156- until 01:37:823- . The constant rythim of whistle will make the kiai time more interesting to hear. Try it. Did it until 1:49 :p
- 01:33:207 (5) - It's better to not skip the heavy beat 01:33:720- since it will a bit ruin your rythim and doesn't very good to hear. So, just make this slider a repeatable slider which has a repeat at 01:33:720- It's not a problem at all and that slider fits nice imo. so I'lll keep it.
- 01:40:900 (1) - Place a whistle on this slider start. It follow the next whistle perfectly. Done.
- 01:47:053 (4) - Urr, a whistle on this slider end should be clap instead. It really ruin your hitsounds pattern. Fixed.
- 01:58:848 (1,2,3) - Umm, please improve this slider shape please. It's not blanketed properly again. Fixed.
TheVileOne wrote:
Normal
I didn't find much wrong with this, but I didn't mod it heavily either.
00:10:643 (1,2) - I feel this could be improved. I slightly modified the curve ends, and created a more slant to the transition. http://puu.sh/1BLEw Nope.
00:46:541 (4,5) - Any reason why this isn't 0.8 snap? oops o.o fixed
Melophobia wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
- 00:23:207 (6) - Personally, I don't like the current flow to be honest. and doesn't even look nice to me. Maybe you can curve the slider in the opposite direction in order to make it look better. mm .. I don't think so >.<
- 00:28:079 (6) - Add a newcombo here and remove it from the next note. it currently ruins your comboing pattern and doesn't fit well with melody. ..didn't noticed , fixed
- 00:35:002 (5,6) - Sounds overmapped to me even though it follows music correctly. I think you don't have to follow it strictly, and can simplify the rhythm by making it like this; I like to put twice the same slider , no change.
- 01:05:002 - I expected a finish here because new stanza begins from here and you have added finishes every 2/1 downbeat in previous section. add it? yes , added.
- 01:08:079 (3) - It would be better to remove the whistle from here, because there's no background music here so it's kinda noisy to me.ok , Deleted.
- 01:11:156 (4) - This slider looks awkward because it has different angle from that of (2). make angle of them all the same or make (4) curved one.ok , I made curve slider :3
- 01:21:412 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is kinda weird to me, although it fits well with the vocal. but this section is based on 3/2 rhythm so that rhythm isn't suitable here unless you're sticking to vocal. I mean, try this rhythm. no, It's fine for me.
- 01:33:720 (1) - Would sound nice if you shortened this slider by 1/4 beat. not sure if it can fit well with your taste, but worth a try. No change here.
- 01:49:618 (4) - This section should be more exciting and harder because it's the most characteristic one (and what's more it is the end of kiai time). mm I'll think about this :3 no chagne now.
- 02:06:284 - A finish would be more suitable for the end of this difficulty. lower the volume if you think it's too loud. ok , added.
- 02:05:259 (1) - Change this slider into just a circle? The 1/2 rhythm makes this pattern look terribly bad and it doesn't really need to be like that. fixed~