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Duca - Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)
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Hi,mod requested by my modding queue
[DS's Easy]
01:08:079 - add a beat x:168 y:40
01:13:207 (1) - This slider looks a bit weird,maybe just replace it with a straight one?
02:06:541 (1) - Following the song,this spinner should start 02:06:284 (1) - here
[Alacat's Normal]
00:21:669 - add beat x:68 y:104
[Hard]
00:21:925 (6,8) - I can't hear on what those sliders are starting,maybe rewatch them?
00:25:002 (3,5) - ^
01:07:823 - 01:08:848 - instead of letting this part empity,use a spinner
[Mythol's Insane]
Nothing here,looks fine to me :3
Nice map! I hope this get ranked ^^
[DS's Easy]
01:08:079 - add a beat x:168 y:40
01:13:207 (1) - This slider looks a bit weird,maybe just replace it with a straight one?
02:06:541 (1) - Following the song,this spinner should start 02:06:284 (1) - here
[Alacat's Normal]
00:21:669 - add beat x:68 y:104
[Hard]
00:21:925 (6,8) - I can't hear on what those sliders are starting,maybe rewatch them?
00:25:002 (3,5) - ^
01:07:823 - 01:08:848 - instead of letting this part empity,use a spinner
[Mythol's Insane]
Nothing here,looks fine to me :3
Nice map! I hope this get ranked ^^
^^ you know why i mod this Sekai-nyan
[DS's Easy]
flawless imo. I could give one very nazi advice but i don't even think it is necessary. But for the sake of saying it i say it anyway
- 00:32:694 (1) - use same position like on 00:28:079 (4) -
[alacat's Normal]
:3 well that's it
hope you like some suggestions
[DS's Easy]
flawless imo. I could give one very nazi advice but i don't even think it is necessary. But for the sake of saying it i say it anyway
- 00:32:694 (1) - use same position like on 00:28:079 (4) -
[alacat's Normal]
- 00:41:669 - add note
- 01:08:079 (3) - add whistle
- 01:14:233 (3) - I would like to see a bow slider here
- 01:22:951 (3) - I think a stack with (2) is better or position X: 396 Y: 112
- 01:31:669 (4) - new combo
- 01:49:618 (4) - a slight bow facing up feels nicer
- 01:59:618 - add slider ending on 01:59:874 (3) - . Sounds better imo
- 02:00:387 (4) - new combo
- 00:14:746 (4) - Instead of 00:13:720 (1) - this should be new combo
- 00:16:541 - inside this gap until next Hitcircle. It feels like something is missing here
- 01:08:592 - add note. Maybe stack under (3)
- 01:48:592 (3) - not really happy with hitsound on slider start. On the one side it feels like i miss a finish on the other a finish does not really fit ._. At least it feels like something is missing for me
- 00:11:412 (2,3) - I don't feel comfortable with these, too. I think it would be better if you also put a note on 00:12:053 -
- 00:33:976 (5,1) - Jump is a bit to strong 2.0x DS feels better
- 00:35:515 (9,10,11) - here 1.5x DS fits better imo
- 01:49:874 (7) - instead of going back from (6) to (5)'s direction it would be better to do diamond pattern with 01:49:361 (5,6,7,1) -
- 02:05:259 (1,2) - same like first suggestion. It feels better for me with a note on 02:05:900 - too
:3 well that's it
hope you like some suggestions
Chyo-Kun wrote:
[Alacat's Normal]
00:21:669 - add beat x:68 y:104 sry , no change >_<
my map is regularly arranged , so I dont add new combo and some notes >_<bomber34 wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
- 00:41:669 - add note
- 01:08:079 (3) - add whistle ok ~ :3
- 01:14:233 (3) - I would like to see a bow slider here
- 01:22:951 (3) - I think a stack with (2) is better or position X: 396 Y: 112
- 01:31:669 (4) - new combo
- 01:49:618 (4) - a slight bow facing up feels nicer
- 01:59:618 - add slider ending on 01:59:874 (3) - . Sounds better imo
- 02:00:387 (4) - new combo
Chyo-Kun , bomber34
ty modding
osu file format v10
[General]
AudioFilename: katachi [Sekai-nyan].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69105
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Ironna Katachi (Short Ver.)
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:alacat's Normal
Source:Imouto no Katachi
Tags:Darksonic alacat Mythol Sphere mao Peak Soul opening eroge visual novel hentai
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
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332,252,76284,2,0,B|300:324|336:380,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,156,77823,5,8,0:0:0
368,156,78079,2,0,B|320:108|232:116|196:180,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,276,79361,1,2,0:0:0
84,336,79874,1,8,0:0:0
16,256,80387,2,0,B|4:124,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,64,81412,6,0,B|144:96|216:68,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,72,82182,2,0,B|292:132,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,176,82951,1,8,0:0:0
488,160,83464,2,0,B|508:224|484:288,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,316,84233,1,2,0:0:0
344,360,84746,2,0,B|280:360,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,312,85515,6,0,B|160:248|188:184,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,152,86284,2,0,B|292:132,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,204,87053,1,8,0:0:0
472,188,87566,2,0,B|492:316,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,96,89105,1,8,0:0:0
328,56,89618,6,0,B|276:92|200:80,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,56,90387,1,0,0:0:0
108,72,90643,2,0,B|64:124|72:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,272,91669,2,0,B|200:244|268:264,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,312,92694,2,0,B|408:260|396:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,128,93720,6,0,B|180:116,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,112,95259,1,8,0:0:0
484,192,95771,2,0,B|500:264|464:316,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,304,96797,1,2,0:0:0
292,224,97310,1,8,0:0:0
192,252,97823,6,0,B|60:252,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
20,156,98848,2,0,B|152:156,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,192,99874,1,2,0:0:0
328,260,100387,1,8,0:0:0
328,260,100643,2,0,B|400:264|456:196|428:120,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,56,101925,5,2,0:0:0
268,104,102438,2,0,B|256:172,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,308,103464,1,8,0:0:0
152,212,103976,2,0,B|80:220|52:284,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,244,105515,1,8,0:0:0
344,200,106028,5,2,0:0:0
412,124,106541,1,8,0:0:0
412,124,106797,2,0,B|464:168|468:240,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
444,284,107566,1,8,0:0:0
364,348,108079,5,2,0:0:0
260,336,108592,1,8,0:0:0
200,252,109105,1,2,0:0:0
208,148,109618,2,0,B|80:124,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
12,200,110643,6,0,B|24:264,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,352,111669,1,8,0:0:0
252,324,112182,2,0,B|288:268|272:196,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,160,112951,1,2,0:0:0
200,64,113464,2,0,B|136:48,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
52,108,114233,6,0,B|24:172|56:240,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,256,115002,2,0,B|192:220|288:276,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,320,116284,2,0,B|428:264|412:192,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,164,117053,2,0,B|308:148,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,96,117566,2,0,B|236:80,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,100,118335,5,2,0:0:0
36,136,118848,2,0,B|24:200,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
68,352,119874,1,8,0:0:0
144,280,120387,2,0,B|276:272,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,240,121156,1,2,0:0:0
320,136,121669,2,0,B|320:96|336:72,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,28,122438,6,0,B|492:56|508:128,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,172,123207,1,2,0:0:0
464,272,123720,2,0,B|424:272|396:296,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,328,124233,2,0,B|316:384|248:316|180:372,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,372,125259,6,0,B|116:344|84:328,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,312,125771,2,0,B|12:252,2,65,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,126412,12,0,131156,0:0:0
Chyo-Kun wrote:
[DS's Easy]
01:08:079 - add a beat x:168 y:40 No, I prefer to follow music instead vocal here.
01:13:207 (1) - This slider looks a bit weird,maybe just replace it with a straight one? Ok, changed it.
02:06:541 (1) - Following the song,this spinner should start 02:06:284 (1) - here Nah, since it's an Easy diff I think it's ok if there is some empty space before a spinner.
Thanks for modding!bomber34 wrote:
[DS's Easy]flawless imo. I could give one very nazi advice but i don't even think it is necessary. But for the sake of saying it i say it anyway
- 00:32:694 (1) - use same position like on 00:28:079 (4) - Nope, because it would break the symmetric pattern.
http://puu.sh/1wxqg
Topic Starter
Thanks fixed some stuff and updated DS's and alacat's diffs :3
hi,from PM (sorry for being late cuz puush had been down)
General
almost suggestion
DS's Easy
Placement
01:07:053(3) add reverse? I feel it more much.
Hit Sonud
01:37:823(1) add whistle?
01:48:079(1) why added finishes? it doesn't sound here and a bit loudly I suppose.
alacat's Normal
Placement
00:49:874(3) 前の(1)に合わせて少し曲げてみては？
01:43:464(3,4) 囲んでみるといいかもしれません 次の(1)と高さが合うので
Hit Sonud
00:36:284(1) whistleよりfinishの方が合っているように思えます
01:08:592(4) 前の(3)がwhistleなのでここもwhistleの方が聞こえがいいように思えます
Hard
Placement
00:40:387(1,2,3) make beautiful?
01:00:900(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) umm... maybe this would be better?
Rythem
01:08:079 I highly suggest adding a note at this because this part hears voice clearly and already existed note here in Normal & Easy diff.
01:08:592 ^
Mythol's Insane
Placement
01:30:643(5) maybe like this? this flow would be more better
Hit Sonud
00:19:874(1) silence or whistle better. finish hears a bit loud.
02:06:284(4) delete finish and add whistle?
overall seems fine I suppose. good luck and star~
General
almost suggestion
DS's Easy
Placement
01:07:053(3) add reverse? I feel it more much.
Hit Sonud
01:37:823(1) add whistle?
01:48:079(1) why added finishes? it doesn't sound here and a bit loudly I suppose.
alacat's Normal
Placement
00:49:874(3) 前の(1)に合わせて少し曲げてみては？
01:43:464(3,4) 囲んでみるといいかもしれません 次の(1)と高さが合うので
Hit Sonud
00:36:284(1) whistleよりfinishの方が合っているように思えます
01:08:592(4) 前の(3)がwhistleなのでここもwhistleの方が聞こえがいいように思えます
Hard
Placement
00:40:387(1,2,3) make beautiful?
01:00:900(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) umm... maybe this would be better?
Rythem
01:08:079 I highly suggest adding a note at this because this part hears voice clearly and already existed note here in Normal & Easy diff.
01:08:592 ^
Mythol's Insane
Placement
01:30:643(5) maybe like this? this flow would be more better
Hit Sonud
00:19:874(1) silence or whistle better. finish hears a bit loud.
02:06:284(4) delete finish and add whistle?
overall seems fine I suppose. good luck and star~
Topic Starter
Thanks For modding kajiyatta :3 Fixed Everything on my diff~
Topic Starter
updated alacat's diff :3
A star for moe Sekai :3
Good Luck!
Good Luck!
ero sekai o3o
[Mythol]
00:10:643 (1) - Whistle on end would be nice
00:19:874 (1) - Don't you think a whistle would be better here instead? I don't really hear a beat that is strong enough for that
00:35:002 (5,8) - Whistle on these? at least on (5). I do hear some connection there
01:01:669 (5,6) - On the previous 2 patterns (00:53:976 (8,1) - ) (00:58:079 (4,1) - ), you skipped an upbeat. On this you changed the rhythm and skipped the offbeat instead. I would prefer that you did the same on the 3rd as well
01:48:848 (4,1) - mind stacking the start & end with each-other? It looks kinda weird that it doesn't do that.
01:50:900 (3,4,5,1) - is the irregular spacing between (5) & (1) on purpose? Normally when doing zigzag/forth-and-back or other similar pattern (00:38:079 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this for example), is not as much notable. But when going curve-way makes it much more notable when playing. I hope you get what I mean :3
01:57:053 (1,4) - whistle on these? same reason as 00:35:002 (5,8) -
[Hard]
00:19:874 - to 00:52:694 - I would prefer if you used 40% here, just like Insane. Fits better with a bit less noise on this part
00:28:079 (1,2,3) - I think this placement ruins the flow. You can see that (1) is pointing at (3) while (2) is liike on the side watching (1,3). Not sure how to fix this w/o moving any slider.
00:38:592 (7,8) - this looks kinda awkward imo. The slider should be higher up
00:52:694 - 50% from here, so it doesn't have the same volume as the chorus (kiai) which have a slightly higher volume
01:07:566 (3,4,5) - stacks o: I would prefer if you unstacked them. But it's up to you
01:13:207 (1,2,3) - a triangle looks weird here. I would prefer if you did something like this
01:29:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - Squares!! ok, maybe it's not a big deal
01:31:156 (7,1,2,3) - This looks weird as well imo. Arrange it to something like this maybe 01:43:720 (6,1,2) - looks a bit plain don't you think? Curve ut up a bit 01:48:079 (1,2,3) - finish hitsound doesn't fit here at all imo. try using "whistle, nothing, whistle" instead
01:57:310 (7) - this slider looks derp lol
02:03:207 (4) - whistle on start. feels kinda empty here otherwise
02:03:976 (5) - whistle on end
02:04:489 (1) - remove the whistle on start if you did the above
02:05:259 (2,3) - swap whistle places. sounds better imo
[alacat]
Nice star rating (3,33)
Wouldn't you mind using AR 5 instead? I find it much better for the flow
00:37:053 (3) - curve this a bit more 01:37:823 (1) - how about curving this slider slightly? Since the previous note is somewhat higher up
[DS]
00:19:874 - mind using 40% from here on? 50% is a bit loud for this part imo
00:26:541 (3,4,1) - for some reason this looks odd. It's not even a spacing issue, but it kinda feels like it
00:52:694 - You can go higher in volume here (e.g. 50%)
01:43:976 (1,3) - this looks kinda awkward because they are touching each-other (no hentai stuff). You can push if a bit higher with distance snapping on, well you'll need to move it ↗ for it to work properly
Duca Duca Duca Duca Duca Duca
The mapset was pretty neat imo
Good luck!
[Mythol]
00:10:643 (1) - Whistle on end would be nice
00:19:874 (1) - Don't you think a whistle would be better here instead? I don't really hear a beat that is strong enough for that
00:35:002 (5,8) - Whistle on these? at least on (5). I do hear some connection there
01:01:669 (5,6) - On the previous 2 patterns (00:53:976 (8,1) - ) (00:58:079 (4,1) - ), you skipped an upbeat. On this you changed the rhythm and skipped the offbeat instead. I would prefer that you did the same on the 3rd as well
01:48:848 (4,1) - mind stacking the start & end with each-other? It looks kinda weird that it doesn't do that.
01:50:900 (3,4,5,1) - is the irregular spacing between (5) & (1) on purpose? Normally when doing zigzag/forth-and-back or other similar pattern (00:38:079 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this for example), is not as much notable. But when going curve-way makes it much more notable when playing. I hope you get what I mean :3
01:57:053 (1,4) - whistle on these? same reason as 00:35:002 (5,8) -
[Hard]
00:19:874 - to 00:52:694 - I would prefer if you used 40% here, just like Insane. Fits better with a bit less noise on this part
00:28:079 (1,2,3) - I think this placement ruins the flow. You can see that (1) is pointing at (3) while (2) is liike on the side watching (1,3). Not sure how to fix this w/o moving any slider.
00:38:592 (7,8) - this looks kinda awkward imo. The slider should be higher up
00:52:694 - 50% from here, so it doesn't have the same volume as the chorus (kiai) which have a slightly higher volume
01:07:566 (3,4,5) - stacks o: I would prefer if you unstacked them. But it's up to you
01:13:207 (1,2,3) - a triangle looks weird here. I would prefer if you did something like this
SPOILER
(1) is stacked with 01:15:259 (5) -
01:15:259 (5,6,7) - again you did like 00:28:079 (1,2,3) - but a bit less critical.(1) is stacked with 01:15:259 (5) -
01:29:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - Squares!! ok, maybe it's not a big deal
01:31:156 (7,1,2,3) - This looks weird as well imo. Arrange it to something like this maybe 01:43:720 (6,1,2) - looks a bit plain don't you think? Curve ut up a bit 01:48:079 (1,2,3) - finish hitsound doesn't fit here at all imo. try using "whistle, nothing, whistle" instead
01:57:310 (7) - this slider looks derp lol
02:03:207 (4) - whistle on start. feels kinda empty here otherwise
02:03:976 (5) - whistle on end
02:04:489 (1) - remove the whistle on start if you did the above
02:05:259 (2,3) - swap whistle places. sounds better imo
[alacat]
Nice star rating (3,33)
Wouldn't you mind using AR 5 instead? I find it much better for the flow
00:37:053 (3) - curve this a bit more 01:37:823 (1) - how about curving this slider slightly? Since the previous note is somewhat higher up
[DS]
00:19:874 - mind using 40% from here on? 50% is a bit loud for this part imo
00:26:541 (3,4,1) - for some reason this looks odd. It's not even a spacing issue, but it kinda feels like it
00:52:694 - You can go higher in volume here (e.g. 50%)
01:43:976 (1,3) - this looks kinda awkward because they are touching each-other (no hentai stuff). You can push if a bit higher with distance snapping on, well you'll need to move it ↗ for it to work properly
SPOILER
I used the new type of slider btw
02:00:900 (3) - I would prefer if you reversed this (Ctrl+G), but that would require some re-arrangement of the latter objectsI used the new type of slider btw
Duca Duca Duca Duca Duca Duca
The mapset was pretty neat imo
Good luck!
from my M4M queue
[Mythol's Insane]
00:58:592 (1,2,3,4) - the flow feels uncomfortable. and the spacing suddenly increases between (1) and (2). try making them feel like what you've done before.
01:02:182 (x) - intentionall missing notes? breaks the consistency of rhythm imo. however 01:02:438 (7) - needs to be removed to keep it.
01:07:566 (3,4) - this empty feels strange especially because you start (4) on 01:08:335 (4).
01:13:720 (6) - make this upwards a bit, looks better to me. http://puu.sh/1wYI4
01:18:079 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - maybe you'll need this >< http://puu.sh/1wYJG
01:29:618 (3,4,5) - could look better and the spacing feels... a bit large.
[Hard]
00:16:541 (x) - just add a note under the end of 00:15:771 (3)? sounds better
all seem fine but some of the new combos i didn't really understand.. maybe only me
[alacat's Normal]
fine
[DS's Easy]
01:57:310 (3) - whistle on end
02:02:438 (1) - whistle on head
02:06:028 (3) - whistle
clean and nice diff
overall it's fine enough, and good luck for this relaxing mapset sekai nyan~
[Mythol's Insane]
00:58:592 (1,2,3,4) - the flow feels uncomfortable. and the spacing suddenly increases between (1) and (2). try making them feel like what you've done before.
01:02:182 (x) - intentionall missing notes? breaks the consistency of rhythm imo. however 01:02:438 (7) - needs to be removed to keep it.
01:07:566 (3,4) - this empty feels strange especially because you start (4) on 01:08:335 (4).
01:13:720 (6) - make this upwards a bit, looks better to me. http://puu.sh/1wYI4
01:18:079 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - maybe you'll need this >< http://puu.sh/1wYJG
01:29:618 (3,4,5) - could look better and the spacing feels... a bit large.
[Hard]
00:16:541 (x) - just add a note under the end of 00:15:771 (3)? sounds better
all seem fine but some of the new combos i didn't really understand.. maybe only me
[alacat's Normal]
fine
[DS's Easy]
01:57:310 (3) - whistle on end
02:02:438 (1) - whistle on head
02:06:028 (3) - whistle
clean and nice diff
overall it's fine enough, and good luck for this relaxing mapset sekai nyan~
Easy
No Prob
Normal
00:42:438 (3) - (Suggestion) Add a repeat and delete the following note 00:43:976 (4)
And what's with the crazy number of inherited timing sections?
Hard
No Prob
Insane
01:57:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - Erm, try manually spreading them out...
That's all ^^"
No Prob
Normal
00:42:438 (3) - (Suggestion) Add a repeat and delete the following note 00:43:976 (4)
And what's with the crazy number of inherited timing sections?
Hard
No Prob
Insane
01:57:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - Erm, try manually spreading them out...
That's all ^^"
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding my map guys :3 Fixed some stuff~
And updated alacat's diff :3
And updated alacat's diff :3
Topic Starter
updated Mythol's diff :3
Topic Starter
updated again :3
hi~ Food is well~(In my food queue)
[General]
I recommand you are better fix this video resolution ratio,I think this vedio is 16:9,but your vedio is 4:3,plz instead it.
[DS's Easy]
00:16:284 (2) - 152|304
00:28:079 (4) - 344|120
00:37:823 (2) - 268|168
00:46:541 (2) - 392|208
00:47:566 (3) - 200|272
01:11:156 (3,4) - 112|228
01:50:643 (1) - 152|340
[alacat'sNormal]
00:44:489 - finish instead?
01:41:925 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:28:079 (1) - not beautiful
01:24:746 (5) - If it's a 3 notes jump...
01:45:259 (4) - spacing
00:28:079 (1) - add a finish in slider start?
00:40:387 - not add a finish?
01:07:566 (3) - add a normal finish
01:08:079 (4) - normal whistle
01:13:207 (1) - finish instead
01:15:259 - finish
01:17:310 - ^
01:29:618 (1) - ^
01:37:823 - ^
01:41:925 - ^
01:54:233 - finish
[Mythol's Insane]
00:11:412 (2) - This spacing is no problem?
00:30:387 (1) - move to 453|232
00:30:900 (2) - 288|168
00:31:412 (4) - 396|140
00:37:566 (3) - 76|99
00:38:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rotate 12°& move to 220|200
01:44:746 (2) - 247|224
01:45:771 (1,2,3,4) - not use 1.5 ds?
00:14:746 - Add a finish is sounds good.
01:07:053 (1,2,3) - Volume is too low.
songs is good~
[General]
I recommand you are better fix this video resolution ratio,I think this vedio is 16:9,but your vedio is 4:3,plz instead it.
[DS's Easy]
00:16:284 (2) - 152|304
00:28:079 (4) - 344|120
00:37:823 (2) - 268|168
00:46:541 (2) - 392|208
00:47:566 (3) - 200|272
01:11:156 (3,4) - 112|228
01:50:643 (1) - 152|340
[alacat'sNormal]
00:44:489 - finish instead?
01:41:925 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:28:079 (1) - not beautiful
01:24:746 (5) - If it's a 3 notes jump...
01:45:259 (4) - spacing
00:28:079 (1) - add a finish in slider start?
00:40:387 - not add a finish?
01:07:566 (3) - add a normal finish
01:08:079 (4) - normal whistle
01:13:207 (1) - finish instead
01:15:259 - finish
01:17:310 - ^
01:29:618 (1) - ^
01:37:823 - ^
01:41:925 - ^
01:54:233 - finish
[Mythol's Insane]
00:11:412 (2) - This spacing is no problem?
00:30:387 (1) - move to 453|232
00:30:900 (2) - 288|168
00:31:412 (4) - 396|140
00:37:566 (3) - 76|99
00:38:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rotate 12°& move to 220|200
01:44:746 (2) - 247|224
01:45:771 (1,2,3,4) - not use 1.5 ds?
00:14:746 - Add a finish is sounds good.
01:07:053 (1,2,3) - Volume is too low.
songs is good~
Topic Starter
Thanks for the helpful hitsound mod Nyan :3
mod4mod time
Easy
00:10:643 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1y72y
00:25:515 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1y73c
00:58:848 (2) - this slider is not fit to this song. maybe make more smooth slider ? http://puu.sh/1y74W
Nromal
good diff
Hard
00:21:925 (6) - move to center http://puu.sh/1y790
01:19:361 (4) - CTR+G
01:20:643 (5) - if you try ↑ please delete this
Insane
01:41:925 (1) - CTR+J
01:48:848 (4) - ^
that's all
Easy
00:10:643 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1y72y
00:25:515 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1y73c
00:58:848 (2) - this slider is not fit to this song. maybe make more smooth slider ? http://puu.sh/1y74W
Nromal
good diff
Hard
00:21:925 (6) - move to center http://puu.sh/1y790
01:19:361 (4) - CTR+G
01:20:643 (5) - if you try ↑ please delete this
Insane
01:41:925 (1) - CTR+J
01:48:848 (4) - ^
that's all
Topic Starter
Thanks Rie for Star and mod >w< fixed some stuff~
-[NYAN]- wrote:
[DS's Easy]
00:16:284 (2) - 152|304 Ok.
00:28:079 (4) - 344|120 Nope, this note is following symmetry with 2.
00:37:823 (2) - 268|168 I don't see a reason to move this.
00:46:541 (2) - 392|208 ^
00:47:566 (3) - 200|272 ^, and this is following symmetry.
01:11:156 (3,4) - 112|228 Ok.
01:50:643 (1) - 152|340 No, the tick of slider is in centre of screen.
Thanks for modding.Laurier wrote:
Easy
00:10:643 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1y72y Sure.
00:25:515 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/1y73c Nah, I prefer to keep a symmetric pattern.
00:58:848 (2) - this slider is not fit to this song. maybe make more smooth slider ? http://puu.sh/1y74W Ok.
http://puu.sh/1yqvb
Topic Starter
updated :3
Hi Sekai~
General
Well, overall this is a good mapset. But, the hard diff can be more harder.
Star for now.
See you~
General
- Hmm, i think you should increase your clap volume by 10% or 20%. Current clap volume is too low. Barely hear it >.<
- 00:21:925 (3) - You can improve this slider by makin this slider more rounded like this : http://puu.sh/1zl2p, so it will make this slider blanketed to the next circle properly. After that, copy pasta and ctrl + j + ctrl + h this slider to this slider 00:23:976 (1) - so it will look same. Don't forget to put new combo!
- 00:28:079 (4) - I guess you miss a whistle on this one. Not consistant with your whistle rythim and sounds awkward when i hear.
- 00:36:284 (1) - Hmm, same case with slider shape before. Make this slider more rounded and blanket.
- For kiai time, i suggest you add whistle every 2/1 rythim starting from 01:11:156- until 01:37:823- . The constant rythim of whistle will make the kiai time more interesting to hear. Try it.
- 01:33:207 (5) - It's better to not skip the heavy beat 01:33:720- since it will a bit ruin your rythim and doesn't very good to hear. So, just make this slider a repeatable slider which has a repeat at 01:33:720-
- 01:40:900 (1) - Place a whistle on this slider start. It follow the next whistle perfectly.
- 01:47:053 (4) - Urr, a whistle on this slider end should be clap instead. It really ruin your hitsounds pattern.
- 01:58:848 (1,2,3) - Umm, please improve this slider shape please. It's not blanketed properly again.
- 00:18:848- Lower this timing point volume by 10%. With 30% volume, the finish sounds is still too loud compare to the music which is awkward to hear.
- 00:46:541 (4) - I suggest to add a whistle on this slider start to make your whistle rythim more consistant.
- 01:00:900 (1) - Hmm, since this time is a beginning of lyrical change, i think you can change the whistle on this slider start to finish instead.
- 01:40:643 (5) - To make your rythim on this part more synchronized to the rythim and vocal, i suggest you move this slider to 01:40:900- and then shorten this slider length by 1/2. Then you can add another circle at this time 01:40:643-. Don't forget to add a clap at this time : 01:41:412-
- Nice diff btw~
- Honestly, this difficulty is just like normal+ with small circle. It's just too easy for a hard diff. There is a lot of 1/4 rythim in this music, you can use that to make this diff more harder. And you can make a little jump too to make thing more interesting.
- 00:28:079 (1) - A finish sounds at this slider start really doesn't fit in this time. It's too loud. Just remove it.
- 01:07:566 (3) - Just use soft finish sounds at this one. A normal sounds in the from nowhere is too awkward.
- 00:41:412 (3) - Nazi, but move this slider to 152 176 please to make this slider blanketed properly.
- 01:05:002 (1) - Since you add a finish sounds at this time 01:02:951-, it will be good if you continue the finish sounds at this slider start too.
- 01:58:335 (1) - ^
- 02:02:438 (1) - ^
- Oh yes, please review your combo pattern. I think it's a bit inconsistent.
- 00:27:053 (6) - Same as hard diff, i think a finish sounds is too loud at this time. So, remove the finish sounds from this slider end please.
- 01:28:848 (6) - I think whistle at this slider start is overused. Better to remove it.
- Nothing i can found again. Nice job!
Well, overall this is a good mapset. But, the hard diff can be more harder.
Star for now.
See you~
Miya wrote:
alacat's Normal
- 00:18:848- Lower this timing point volume by 10%. With 30% volume, the finish sounds is still too loud compare to the music which is awkward to hear. fixed
- 00:46:541 (4) - I suggest to add a whistle on this slider start to make your whistle rythim more consistant. oh.. ok~
- 01:00:900 (1) - Hmm, since this time is a beginning of lyrical change, i think you can change the whistle on this slider start to finish instead. mm.. no change here >_<
- 01:40:643 (5) - To make your rythim on this part more synchronized to the rythim and vocal, i suggest you move this slider to 01:40:900- and then shorten this slider length by 1/2. Then you can add another circle at this time 01:40:643-. Don't forget to add a clap at this time : 01:41:412- ok , fixed ~
- Nice diff btw~ Thanks ^^/
Thank for modding Miya ~
http://puu.sh/1znFz
Topic Starter
updated :3
Thanks.Miya wrote:
DS's Easy
- 00:21:925 (3) - You can improve this slider by makin this slider more rounded like this : http://puu.sh/1zl2p, so it will make this slider blanketed to the next circle properly. After that, copy pasta and ctrl + j + ctrl + h this slider to this slider 00:23:976 (1) - so it will look same. Don't forget to put new combo! Done.
- 00:28:079 (4) - I guess you miss a whistle on this one. Not consistant with your whistle rythim and sounds awkward when i hear. Added.
- 00:36:284 (1) - Hmm, same case with slider shape before. Make this slider more rounded and blanket. Improved.
- For kiai time, i suggest you add whistle every 2/1 rythim starting from 01:11:156- until 01:37:823- . The constant rythim of whistle will make the kiai time more interesting to hear. Try it. Did it until 1:49 :p
- 01:33:207 (5) - It's better to not skip the heavy beat 01:33:720- since it will a bit ruin your rythim and doesn't very good to hear. So, just make this slider a repeatable slider which has a repeat at 01:33:720- It's not a problem at all and that slider fits nice imo. so I'lll keep it.
- 01:40:900 (1) - Place a whistle on this slider start. It follow the next whistle perfectly. Done.
- 01:47:053 (4) - Urr, a whistle on this slider end should be clap instead. It really ruin your hitsounds pattern. Fixed.
- 01:58:848 (1,2,3) - Umm, please improve this slider shape please. It's not blanketed properly again. Fixed.
http://puu.sh/1Anes
Topic Starter
updated :3
Easy
Nothing found.
Normal
I didn't find much wrong with this, but I didn't mod it heavily either.
00:10:643 (1,2) - I feel this could be improved. I slightly modified the curve ends, and created a more slant to the transition. http://puu.sh/1BLEw
00:46:541 (4,5) - Any reason why this isn't 0.8 snap?
Hard
Very nice difficulty.
00:26:028 (1) - I would prefer if this was slightly more symmetrical.
00:28:079 (3) - Same since it's a mirror.
00:35:002 - This sounds like a clap sound, so clap here perhaps.
00:40:387 (1) - Maybe clap to start? seems like a hitsound should go there to me.
00:54:746 (5) - You forgot a finish. Please add one.
00:58:848 (1) - I would add one here too for consistency.
01:05:259 (2) - Contributes nothing to the beat. It doesn't feel like I'm hitting the beat when I click on it. If you delete, you can place a note here 01:05:515 - that would stack right on the next slider.
01:10:900 (4) - This should be higher in the combo. Move so that there is a continuous curve through this pattern.
01:30:643 (5,6,7) - Sort of a random way to come out of the pattern. I suggest finding a much more suitable transition here. Stacking 6,7 is a possible option in a pattern, but make sure the spacing is also coherent too. (6 could be located in the x 244 y 305 region for example).
01:44:489 (6,7) - Blanket could be better.
01:55:002 - Sounds like a 1/1 slider here would go better. The way you have it now, this sound is skipped 01:55:515 -
Insane
I probably missed a few things that I couldn't articulate into coherent thought. There is probably some polish issues still left in this map that I missed. The structure seemed shaky in spots.
00:10:643 (1) - Better if this was symmetrical.
00:11:412 (2,3) - small thing, but make this exactly 1.0 (currently 0.97)
00:16:541 (4,1) - 1.9 snap works better for me. Personal preference, so change if you want to.
00:26:284 (4,5,6) - Transition is kind of sloppy looking. I suggest a nicer looking transition. I like this http://puu.sh/1BMKt
00:27:053 (6) - Whistle or clap on repeat.
00:41:925 (6,1) - exactly 1.2 (Currently 1.18)
00:52:694 (5,6) - ^
00:55:515 (4,5) - I don't care for this jump. I feel the jump would be better here 00:56:541 (8,1) - instead
01:23:464 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure I like this transition. I guess it's fine.
02:02:053 (3,4) - Left and down 1 unit? It seems to go against the curve in its current position. Something doesn't look right with this slider as well 02:01:669 (2) -. Does it look alright to you?
Nothing found.
Normal
I didn't find much wrong with this, but I didn't mod it heavily either.
00:10:643 (1,2) - I feel this could be improved. I slightly modified the curve ends, and created a more slant to the transition. http://puu.sh/1BLEw
00:46:541 (4,5) - Any reason why this isn't 0.8 snap?
Hard
Very nice difficulty.
00:26:028 (1) - I would prefer if this was slightly more symmetrical.
00:28:079 (3) - Same since it's a mirror.
00:35:002 - This sounds like a clap sound, so clap here perhaps.
00:40:387 (1) - Maybe clap to start? seems like a hitsound should go there to me.
00:54:746 (5) - You forgot a finish. Please add one.
00:58:848 (1) - I would add one here too for consistency.
01:05:259 (2) - Contributes nothing to the beat. It doesn't feel like I'm hitting the beat when I click on it. If you delete, you can place a note here 01:05:515 - that would stack right on the next slider.
01:10:900 (4) - This should be higher in the combo. Move so that there is a continuous curve through this pattern.
01:30:643 (5,6,7) - Sort of a random way to come out of the pattern. I suggest finding a much more suitable transition here. Stacking 6,7 is a possible option in a pattern, but make sure the spacing is also coherent too. (6 could be located in the x 244 y 305 region for example).
01:44:489 (6,7) - Blanket could be better.
01:55:002 - Sounds like a 1/1 slider here would go better. The way you have it now, this sound is skipped 01:55:515 -
Insane
I probably missed a few things that I couldn't articulate into coherent thought. There is probably some polish issues still left in this map that I missed. The structure seemed shaky in spots.
00:10:643 (1) - Better if this was symmetrical.
00:11:412 (2,3) - small thing, but make this exactly 1.0 (currently 0.97)
00:16:541 (4,1) - 1.9 snap works better for me. Personal preference, so change if you want to.
00:26:284 (4,5,6) - Transition is kind of sloppy looking. I suggest a nicer looking transition. I like this http://puu.sh/1BMKt
00:27:053 (6) - Whistle or clap on repeat.
00:41:925 (6,1) - exactly 1.2 (Currently 1.18)
00:52:694 (5,6) - ^
00:55:515 (4,5) - I don't care for this jump. I feel the jump would be better here 00:56:541 (8,1) - instead
01:23:464 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure I like this transition. I guess it's fine.
02:02:053 (3,4) - Left and down 1 unit? It seems to go against the curve in its current position. Something doesn't look right with this slider as well 02:01:669 (2) -. Does it look alright to you?
Topic Starter
Thanks TVO for modding :3 fixed everything you said ~
TheVileOne wrote:
Normal
I didn't find much wrong with this, but I didn't mod it heavily either.
00:10:643 (1,2) - I feel this could be improved. I slightly modified the curve ends, and created a more slant to the transition. http://puu.sh/1BLEw Nope.
00:46:541 (4,5) - Any reason why this isn't 0.8 snap? oops o.o fixed
http://puu.sh/1C2Oe
Topic Starter
updated :3
Modding this just because of Duca *___*
[General]
Let me know whenever you're ready
[General]
- Source is obviously "IMOUTO NO KATACHI".
- Honestly I kinda dislike using whistles for percussion instead of clap (ex. 00:11:156 - , 00:12:182 - and 00:20:387 - , 00:21:412 - ), better to use claps for them and whistles for piano or something?
- 00:15:515 (2) - Follow the bassdrum better? The current rhythm is not wrong, but it's inconsistent with 00:13:464 (3,4) -
- 00:27:566 - I guess you forget something here!
- 00:35:387 (8) - Feels a bit noisy to me because there're so many whistles around here, How about removing this one?
- 00:38:592 (1) - It wouldn't hurt anything to stack this note under the previous (2).
- 00:43:720 (5,6) - Personally I think a jump here would be nice. I feel a stress on vocal and also the triplet will make the jump nice. but meh it may be just me ><
- 00:49:105 (4,5) - To be honest, they don't look so good to me, I would place them like this regardless of spacing.
- 01:02:694 (6) - hmm, I found this placement a bit awkward. Move this note upward for better flow?
- 01:07:053 (1,2,3) - It would be better to use Normal sampleset for these notes, imo. (and volume should be 50% or so) The clap sounds good too but not strong enough imo.
- 01:24:618 - Clap sounds nice here
- 01:28:848 (6) - Same as 00:38:592 (1) -
- 01:35:771 (1,2,3,4) - Honestly I don't like this rhythm (and the finish spam too...) (considering the level of this difficulty the current one is kinda boring isn't it o.o) I prefer something like this.
- 01:37:823 (1) - Feels empty here, I suppose some hitsound would fit nicely with this emphasize, maybe finish or whistle
- 01:50:643 (2,3) - Looks so close and crowded to me, I guess it's because (3)'s position is so close to (1)'s end. Space these notes at 1.4x instead? It will be also more consistent with the others in this combo.
- 02:05:259 (1) - I can understand why you placed the newcombo here, but it should be on 02:04:233 (4) - imo. It will be more fitting with change of melody.
- 02:05:643 - Missing clap? I would suggest adding it here even if it's intentional.
- 02:06:284 (4) - A finish would be great for the end of this difficulty!
- 00:21:925 (1,2,3) - The spacing is very inconsistent and looks terrible tbh, please even them out.
- 00:40:387 - Remove clap from here. It doesn't follow anything noticeable and sounds awkward to me.
- 00:43:464 (3) - Your pattern is not bad at all, but this one flows better imo. and patchouli is hentai...
- 00:48:592 (1) - I know this spinner follows the vocal correctly, but 00:51:669 - is the best place to end this spinner imo because there's a strong piano sound here.
- 01:05:771 (3) - This slider should be 1/4 longer to follow vocal correctly.
- 01:07:566 (3,4,5) - Consider unstacking them. stacking is doesn't fit well with the melody and looks awkward because it's a part of symmetrical pattern.
- 01:08:848 - A note here would be nice, because there's an extra bassdrum here.
- 01:15:259 (1,2,3) - It would make more sense if you placed them symmetrically like this
- 01:17:310 (1,2) - Try making the blanket better
- 01:26:541 (3,4) - Why are they spaced at 1.25x?
- 01:30:643 (5,6,7) - Move (7) upward so that (5,6,7) can look like a triangle? like this;
- 01:48:592 (6) - This section is most characteristic in the song and should be more emphasized. so this repeating slider makes it quite boring. consider removing it and remapping here.
- 00:23:207 (6) - Personally, I don't like the current flow to be honest. and doesn't even look nice to me. Maybe you can curve the slider in the opposite direction in order to make it look better.
- 00:28:079 (6) - Add a newcombo here and remove it from the next note. it currently ruins your comboing pattern and doesn't fit well with melody.
- 00:35:002 (5,6) - Sounds overmapped to me even though it follows music correctly. I think you don't have to follow it strictly, and can simplify the rhythm by making it like this;
- 01:05:002 - I expected a finish here because new stanza begins from here and you have added finishes every 2/1 downbeat in previous section. add it?
- 01:08:079 (3) - It would be better to remove the whistle from here, because there's no background music here so it's kinda noisy to me.
- 01:11:156 (4) - This slider looks awkward because it has different angle from that of (2). make angle of them all the same or make (4) curved one.
- 01:21:412 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is kinda weird to me, although it fits well with the vocal. but this section is based on 3/2 rhythm so that rhythm isn't suitable here unless you're sticking to vocal. I mean, try this rhythm.
- 01:33:720 (1) - Would sound nice if you shortened this slider by 1/4 beat. not sure if it can fit well with your taste, but worth a try.
- 01:49:618 (4) - This section should be more exciting and harder because it's the most characteristic one (and what's more it is the end of kiai time).
- 02:06:284 - A finish would be more suitable for the end of this difficulty. lower the volume if you think it's too loud.
- 02:05:259 (1) - Change this slider into just a circle? The 1/2 rhythm makes this pattern look terribly bad and it doesn't really need to be like that.
- Having 5 spinners for short song is too much isn't it? ><
- 00:38:335 (3) - Looks much better if you placed this slider like this. It's not so hard to fix this; Rotate it by 15° or so and move to x:200 y:188
- 00:48:592 (1) - Feels empty here because there's no hitsound around here due to the spinner, I suppose whistle will fit nicely with this spinner.
- 00:54:746 - Consider removing this finish. The emphasis is not strong enough for a finish and it's inconsistent with 01:02:951 - .
- 01:05:002 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't follow music very well and maybe confusing for beginners, I afraid. I would prefer something like this (2nd slider is optional)
- 01:15:259 (3,5) - The end of (3) is quite close to the beginning of (5), and I don't think it looks that great because it's partially overlapped. can you avoid it like this?
- 01:22:438 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:24:233 - so it can follow vocal better, and also I think the bassdrum is more suitable for the end of spinner. (plus, Add a whistle to the spinner if you want)
- 01:27:566 (3) - This slider is too close to (1) and looking weird to me. please adjust placement so it looks like this;
- 01:45:515 (3) - Kinda similar to what I said before.. the beginning of this slider is kinda close to the end of (1), and it looks terrible imo. you can avoid it by changing (3)'s shape and placement. refer to this image;
- 01:50:130 (3) - Obviously newcombo should be here, not on 01:50:643 - . as the kiai end shows, change of melody does exist here
- 02:04:489 (1,2,3) - How about this rhythm? It will ruin your symmetrical pattern, but is still worth a try since it fits nicely with the song
Let me know whenever you're ready
Topic Starter
Thanks Melo for modding =w= and fixed everything you said~
Melophobia wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
- 00:23:207 (6) - Personally, I don't like the current flow to be honest. and doesn't even look nice to me. Maybe you can curve the slider in the opposite direction in order to make it look better. mm .. I don't think so >.<
- 00:28:079 (6) - Add a newcombo here and remove it from the next note. it currently ruins your comboing pattern and doesn't fit well with melody. ..didn't noticed , fixed
- 00:35:002 (5,6) - Sounds overmapped to me even though it follows music correctly. I think you don't have to follow it strictly, and can simplify the rhythm by making it like this; I like to put twice the same slider , no change.
- 01:05:002 - I expected a finish here because new stanza begins from here and you have added finishes every 2/1 downbeat in previous section. add it? yes , added.
- 01:08:079 (3) - It would be better to remove the whistle from here, because there's no background music here so it's kinda noisy to me.ok , Deleted.
- 01:11:156 (4) - This slider looks awkward because it has different angle from that of (2). make angle of them all the same or make (4) curved one.ok , I made curve slider :3
- 01:21:412 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is kinda weird to me, although it fits well with the vocal. but this section is based on 3/2 rhythm so that rhythm isn't suitable here unless you're sticking to vocal. I mean, try this rhythm. no, It's fine for me.
- 01:33:720 (1) - Would sound nice if you shortened this slider by 1/4 beat. not sure if it can fit well with your taste, but worth a try. No change here.
- 01:49:618 (4) - This section should be more exciting and harder because it's the most characteristic one (and what's more it is the end of kiai time). mm I'll think about this :3 no chagne now.
- 02:06:284 - A finish would be more suitable for the end of this difficulty. lower the volume if you think it's too loud. ok , added.
- 02:05:259 (1) - Change this slider into just a circle? The 1/2 rhythm makes this pattern look terribly bad and it doesn't really need to be like that. fixed~
Thank you for modding Melosan
http://puu.sh/1CJ7J