Shimokawa Mikuni - Karenai Hana (TV Size)

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Chewin
~General~

  1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line.
  2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.


~Easy~

  1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion.
  2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5%


~Normal~

  1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle
  2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff
  3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1)
  4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy


~Panic!~

  1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above
  2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo
  3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound


That's it
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pimp

Chewin wrote:

~General~

  1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line. (fixed)
  2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.(i like it)


~Easy~

  1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion. (x)
  2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5% (fixed)


~Normal~

  1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle (i think it fits better as stack : ()
  2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff (x)
  3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1) (fixed)
  4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy(fixed)


~Panic!~

  1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above (x)
  2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo (fixed ??)
  3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound (fixed)


That's it (thank you a lot for mod :))
Chewin
Okay, moved the second red line on 01:24:212 only to set that spinner end.
Well, good luck with rank.

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Aleks719
Ranked~
10nya
grats! :D
Chewin
Good job <3
bossandy
This is a awesome song!! Greats !!!
Topic Starter
pimp
thank you all <3
Sekai
Gratz owo/
Faust
FMP \:D/
_Azusa_
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG :)
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pimp

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Gratz owo/
thanks :)

Faust wrote:

FMP \:D/
yeah, awesome :')

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG :)
brigadao 8-)
mas voce é a heroina aki <3
_Azusa_

pimpG wrote:

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG :)
brigadao 8-)
mas voce é a heroina aki <3
Assim fico convencida xD

Mas dando parabéns denovo porque a map tem patterns muito boas.
Gabe
Omg, congratulation! You got it ranked this year!
Topic Starter
pimp

Gabe wrote:

Omg, congratulation! You got it ranked this year!
thank you :)
that was possible because of yours and my other friends support <3
Aoriki
A FMP map!

Congratz on getting it ranked.
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pimp

Aoriki wrote:

A FMP map!

Congratz on getting it ranked.
thank you ^^

i'll start mapping fumoffu's ending in 2013 :)
Cygnus
grats bro :D lol late
Strawberry
gratz for rank xDD~~
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pimp
thank you guys :)
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