niceplayer wrote:

[Normal]
01:19:428 (3) - In fact , vocal is in 3/4. But I just suggest to remove this. (x i think this note is important)

[Hard]
00:43:026 (5,6) - Why changed? As a result ,there two beat be in 5. Make it same as 1,2,3,4,and make the combo tag to 8. (i dont get it ;_;)
01:00:952 (2) - 1/4 beat and it start from the second. There's a drum sound, but slider start from here can be a miss.(i think its easy to read for the hardest diff in the mapset)

DakeDekaane wrote:

/o/ Mod time~ \o\

[General]
Nice mapset, All these are only suggestions about hitsounds and aesthetics.

[Easy]
00:51:257 (1) - This normal finish doesn't fit very well, keep using soft hitsounds (i like the normal finish here)
01:00:770 (1) - Remove finish here (fixed)

[Normal]
00:51:440 (1) - Soft Finish. (x)
00:29:306 (1,1,2) - Maybe put it like this. (yes)

00:29:306 (1) - x:32 y:196
00:30:038 (1) - x:88 y:136
00:31:135 (2) - Actual position.

01:00:404 (1,2) - If you're looking for a better blanket here (i prefer my blanket ^^)

01:00:404 (1) - x:384 y:96; x:392 y:140; x:432,y:156
01:01:501 (2) - x:368 y:16; x:324 y:24; x:308 y:68
01:19:428 (3) - Unstack this, and put a note in 01:19:611 (unstack, but i'll keep it where it is in the timeline)

[Panic!]
Nothing found

That's all, good luck c:

BeatofIke wrote:

As requested In-Game. Here is your mod!

[General]
-> It would be better if you add the video for this map. If you have troble fing one, I can find one for you. (Yes, I can edit videos and mp3's) ( thank you, but the video itself is just staff credits with black background, no point in adding it ^^ )

[Easy]
00:59:306 (2) - Remove this finish at the head of the slider. You don't hear any finish here. (fixed)
01:16:867 (4,1) - Add a new combo here and remove the combo at 01:18:330. (fixed)

[Normal]
00:26:745 (3,1,2) - It will be nice if this pattern was symmetical. Somethind Like this: (maybe, i'll decide asap)

SPOILER

[Panic!]
-> Pretty good! ( )

Good Luck with you map. Your map should get a bubble. (thank you :'))

thank you a lot for accepting my request

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket ( )

[General]
the soft-hitclap sounds a bit quiet to me, hope you can make the file's volume up a bit (i checked with audacity 1.3 and its as so loud as possible, if i try to make it louder it will lose quality)

[skin]
add custom pause-back, pause-continue and pause-retry please, or remove pause-overlay and fail-background (i thought they were not important, i'm removing the pause and fail this time)

[Easy]
HD-1 OD-1 AR+1, or the setting is really odd imo (i gess i'll keep my settings)

[Normal]
00:46:501 (4,1,2,3) - try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen (i can't move 4 because i would need to move all notes before it too, but moved 1,2,3 up a bit)

call me back then (okay \o/ )

pimpG wrote:

btw how did i get this ticket, i dont remember it

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

pimpG wrote:

btw how did i get this ticket, i dont remember it

You should say thanks to azu-nyan14 because he/she posted your map in wcx's queue (/p/1931867) :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

fine now
bubbled

pimpG wrote:

why 0_o

BeatofIke wrote:

Ah Sweet!

Gabe wrote:

I told you! Congratulation on getting a bubble!

Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
OD-1 and HP-1 for consistency with stats in other diffs

Timing
offset 761 (-9 from yours)

that's all orz

1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line.
2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.

1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion.
2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5%

1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle
2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff
3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1)
4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy

1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above
2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo
3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound

Chewin wrote:

~General~

1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line. (fixed)
2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.(i like it)

~Easy~

1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion. (x)
2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5% (fixed)

~Normal~

1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle (i think it fits better as stack : ()
2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff (x)
3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1) (fixed)
4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy(fixed)

~Panic!~

1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above (x)
2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo (fixed ??)
3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound (fixed)

That's it (thank you a lot for mod )

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Gratz owo/

Faust wrote:

FMP \:D/

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG

pimpG wrote:

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG

brigadao
mas voce é a heroina aki <3

Gabe wrote:

Omg, congratulation! You got it ranked this year!

Aoriki wrote:

A FMP map!

Congratz on getting it ranked.