1. Easy (1.56 stars, 148 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 480 notes)
3. Naryuga's Hard (4.28 stars, 256 notes)
4. Normal (3.14 stars, 181 notes)
5. Okarin (5 stars, 583 notes)
6. Speed (4.9 stars, 565 notes)

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ BinJip ~

As per your request ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Mp3 is 96 kb/s,change at least to 128 kb/s pls.
2. Remove Countdown pls.

[Insane]

1. 02:14:369 (1,2) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better.

[Hard]

1. 00:32:820 (4,5) - Change slider first to rhythm,sound much better.
2. 01:02:555 (2,3) - ^
3. 01:00:696 (2) - Move to X:28 Y:256,looks better.
4. 02:03:749 (3,4,5) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
5. 02:43:572 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Naryuga's Normal]

1. HP-1 much better.
2. 01:58:971 (3,4,5) - Missing symmetry.
3. 02:12:776 (1) - Try change rhythm like this,sound much better.
   
4. 02:40:387 (1) - Same as above.

[Easy]

1. HP-1 much better.
2. 01:33:484 (2) - Move 1 grid down,symmetry with 01:32:422 (1).

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck and fight ~

SinJiRu wrote:

Star~!

랭크 힘내세요!

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

19:23 BinJip: 모딩리퀘스트
19:23 Nakagawa-Kanon: 저같이 미천한거에게...
19:23 BinJip: 그냥 대충해줘요..........(별체우기.....)
19:23 BinJip: 대충하고 쿠도스먹고 1석 2조
19:23 Nakagawa-Kanon: 별이라니...
19:23 Nakagawa-Kanon: ha....
19:23 Nakagawa-Kanon: 알겠습니다.
19:24 BinJip: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62328
19:24 BinJip: 귀찮으면 그리드 모딩 같은거 힛사 모딩같은거
19:26 Nakagawa-Kanon: BPM 반으로 줄이시고
19:26 Nakagawa-Kanon: 슬라이더 속도를 2배 늘이시는게 좋을듯.
19:26 BinJip: 음..?
19:26 BinJip: sv를 4.4?
19:26 Nakagawa-Kanon: 왜냐하면 이노래 원래 BPM은 지금 BPM의 절반이기때문이죠.
19:26 Nakagawa-Kanon: SV 3.60 하셔도 될텐데요
19:27 Nakagawa-Kanon: 아 Speed가 있었네요
19:27 Nakagawa-Kanon: 저거는 속도 그대로 두고
19:27 Nakagawa-Kanon: 변속을 2.00 하시면 될것같습니다.
19:28 Nakagawa-Kanon: 모든 난이도 초반은 soft 를 쓰시는게 좋을것같습니다.
19:30 BinJip: bpm 바꾸면 귀찮아질거 같은데 놔두면안되?
19:30 Nakagawa-Kanon: BPM 바꿔도 귀찮아질꺼 거의 없을꺼같은데요...
19:30 Nakagawa-Kanon: 그리고 BPM을 이용해 슬라이더 속도 올리는것도 규칙에 어긋나는거라...
19:31 BinJip: 잠시
19:31 Nakagawa-Kanon: 01:15:431 (1) -
19:31 Nakagawa-Kanon: 그리고 여기 시작점에 빨간선 하나 추가하시는게 좋을겁니다.
19:31 BinJip: ?
19:31 BinJip: bpm변경?
19:31 Nakagawa-Kanon: 아니요
19:32 Nakagawa-Kanon: BPM은 그대로 하나더 추가요.
19:32 BinJip: 이유는?
19:32 Nakagawa-Kanon: 저거 시작할때 잠깐 멈추고 시작하잖아요
19:32 Nakagawa-Kanon: 거기서부터 다시 박자가 시작됩니다.
19:32 BinJip: ㅇㅇ
19:32 Nakagawa-Kanon: 태고를 보시면 아실껍니다. 4박마다 하얀줄이 추가되는.
19:32 Nakagawa-Kanon: 투덱같은것도 비슷하고요.
19:35 BinJip: sv 4.4로 어떻게 늘리지?
19:35 Nakagawa-Kanon: 그냥 2.2로 하고 초록선으로 2배 설정하시거나
19:35 Nakagawa-Kanon: 메모장 이용하시면 됩니다.
19:36 Nakagawa-Kanon: 채아무찡...
19:37 Nakagawa-Kanon: 헉 제가 왜 여기에 썼죠. 미친듯.
19:42 BinJip: 로그 포스트 ㄱㄱ


이 로그는 조작입니다. 오오 조작

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[General]

1. Remove Countdown pls. - disbled it.

[Naryuga's Normal]

1. HP-1 much better. - nope. The HP spread is E-N-H-I-S / 2-4-6-6-8, I guess Normal with HP4 is good enough now
2. 01:58:971 (3,4,5) - Missing symmetry.- owo... fixed
3. 02:12:776 (1) - Try change rhythm like this,sound much better.
   
   - changed here, but by using with another patten.
4. 02:40:387 (1) - Same as above. - used the same rhythm to what you suggested.

1. 00:24:950 (1) - 이지인데 스피너가 좀 짧은거같네요 슬라 하나로 하시는게 더 나을거같아요
2. 00:35:570 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
3. 00:40:083 (2) - 00:40:349 - 여기에 놓는게 더 어울릴거같아요
4. 00:53:623 (1) - 1그리드 올려주세요 대칭이 아니네요
5. 00:55:747 (1) - 별로 스피너 올 자리가 아닌거같아요
6. 01:03:711 - 노트 하나 놓으시는게 더 자연스러울거 같아요
7. 01:07:694 (2) - 01:07:959 - 에 놓는게 더 어울리네요
8. 01:11:676 (4) - 이걸 지우고 3에 애로우 하나 추가하는게 더 플레이하기 쉬울거같아요
9. 01:43:534 (4) - 오프스크린 수정해주세요
10. 01:46:189 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
11. 01:54:685 (1) - ^
12. 02:02:649 (1) - 점프 너무 멀은거같네요 1.2~1.4정도로 써주세요
13. 02:22:826 - 노트 추가

1. CS-1 plz, i think CS4 with this SV is pretty harsh for beginners
2. 01:05:835 (4,5,1) - too hard
3. 02:09:154 (2,3,4) - ^

1. 난이도 정렬 보기 좋게 HP-1,OD-1?
2. 00:18:181 (3) - 보기 별로 안좋네요 00:17:384 (4) - 이부분에 스택해주세요
3. 00:22:163 (1) - ctrl+g 하는편이 더 재미있을듯
4. 00:23:358 (1) - 같은 패턴인데 갑자기 0.5돼면 헷갈려요, 수정해주세요
5. 01:00:658 (2) - 1번 슬라 꼬리에 완전히 스택?
6. 01:09:154 (2) - ctrl+g?
7. 01:17:782 (3,4) - 이렇게 겹치면 너무 헷갈려요.. 십중 팔구 틀릴듯 수정해주세요
8. 01:34:508 (1,1,1,1) - 너무 간격이 넓은거같네요 좀 줄여주세요
9. 01:44:862 (6) - ctrl+g
10. 01:47:649 (4) - ^
11. 02:04:773 (1,2) - ^
12. 02:19:773 (3) - 00:18:181 (3) -랑 같음
13. 02:22:959 - 갑자기 허전해요, 노트추가?
14. 02:31:853 (1) - 더 커브해서 부드럽게 만들어주세요
15. 02:33:047 (5) - ^
16. 02:44:331 (4) - 끝나는부분인데 계속 패턴 이으고 있어서 약간 이상해요, 슬라 머리부분에 서클 2개로 놔보세요

1. 00:01:587 (3) - ctrl+j 하는 편이 더 보기 좋을거같아요
2. 01:17:516 - 다음 노트 사이에 쉬는 시간이 좀 어색하네요 여기에 노트 하나 놔주세요

wantuole wrote:

[nor]
ok
02:09:154 (2,3) - hard for read - fixed

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[Normal]

1. CS-1 plz, i think CS4 with this SV is pretty harsh for beginners - seems it works well. made it CS3
2. 01:05:835 (4,5,1) - too hard - fixed
3. 02:09:154 (2,3,4) - ^ - fixed

you made a Hard diff :p - ...owo

HelloSCV wrote:

Normal
01:10:879 (2,3) - delete whistle and add clap (2) - start and finish (3) - only start ( like this 01:06:366 (1) - ) - m... i don't like this so much >< sorry
01:50:475 (3) - NC? - done
01:52:561 (4) - ^ - ^
02:44:331 (5) - add finish end of slider? - nope

1. Add "MAD" to your tags
2. Untick letterboxing during breaks because you have added video?
3. Ohh wait what, E-H-H-I-I? Because you named Naryuga's diff "Naryuga's Hard", it should be Normal lol, and then "Okarin" is an Insane/Extra, where's your hard?

1. Could you low down the volume about 15%? It's a bit louder imo
2. 00:06:897 (3,4) - I'd like to suggest you to move them to 00:06:897 (3) - 00:07:295 (4) - like this, I think it fits the vocal o-o and what you did make me confuse anyway lol
3. 00:24:950 (5) - (begin) clap
4. 01:10:614 (3) - (begin,end) clap
5. 01:17:782 (1) - Delete (2) and make a reserve on this slider? I know you're trying to fit with vocal, but it's hard to read to beginner D;
6. 01:53:623 (3) - nc to fit with your nc rules
7. 02:06:366 (1) - What's wrong on your spacing D:?
8. 02:44:596 (4) - finish
   Well I think this diff is a bit empty D;

1. I'm sure this is not Hard D;
2. 00:36:897 (1) - I'm scared when I saw this lol can you change to a note?
3. 02:35:835 (4) - Just saying: why whistle?
4. 02:44:331 (5) - If you want, finish at the end~
   I like this diff ^w^

1. 02:16:985 (1,1) - I know you know what's going on this. Unrankable ofc.
2. 00:15:791 (1,1) - I think here's just like 1.0 > 1.5 > 2.0, not 1.0>0.75>0.5. Anyway It's up2u
3. 00:25:481 (1) - This is hard to read due to its shape. o3o
4. 01:06:366 (1,1,1) - ^
5. 01:00:658 (2) - This slider's end is overlap on its track ._. change it?
6. 02:04:773 (1) - whistle?
   Cool diff

1. 01:11:278 (5) - Delete this note?
2. 01:11:809 (6) - make a jump here? Will be confuse when playing D;

1. 00:25:481 (1) - It's a bit hard to read due to its shape lol anyway it's up2u
2. 00:54:685 (3) - Use 1.0x DS? I saw you use it on (4,5,6,7)

BinJip wrote:

Naryuga's Normal - Done ( By Naryuga )

Flask wrote:

[Naryuga's Hard]

1. I'm sure this is not Hard D; - but some ppl say this is harder than "Normal"...mm CS4 (+1) again
2. 02:35:835 (4) - Just saying: why whistle?
3. 02:44:331 (5) - If you want, finish at the end~ - added with lower volume
   I like this diff ^w^ - thaaanks >w<

Lally wrote:

[Naryuga's Hard]

00:44:862 (1,2) - why don't you thy something like this: - just I don't like the overlap with 00:45:393 (2) - and 00:43:800 (2,3) - >_> sorry but no change here

just move 00:45:393 (2) - to x: 212 y: 236 and try something like this with 00:45:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - :

01:51:499 (1,2,3) - the (3) - should be x: 111 y :72 - ...why? the (1) is x:288, (2) is x:200 and the (3) should be x:112

Curisu wrote:

[Hitsounds(For All Diff)]
imo default hs are suitable for this song but u need some normal/soft switch to highlight HIGH-SPEED part of this song.
For me the biggest problem is all mapsets' hs lack variance.
Try 2 decrease volume of some parts of your map, not just a simple 60%-70%-80% change.


[Hard]
00:53:092 (3) - twisted. - umm fixed
00:59:596 (4) - space it like this? - nope... i love ~ shape and it's not that bad >_>
01:38:755 (1) - don't put whistle slide sound on it - uhoooooo!!!\( 'o')/ here.
02:25:481 (1) - ha~ha~ha~ha~ha~ lol put 5 circles is even better - without a spinner here, this diff has no spinner... I'm happy if you find better place for spinner

creative spacing and beautiful rhythm. but first step is 2 make it flowing, not 'twist and turn'. - m... I must make effort more

Flask wrote:

[General]
Ohh wait what, E-H-H-I-I? Because you named Naryuga's diff "Naryuga's Hard", it should be Normal lol, and then "Okarin" is an Insane/Extra, where's your hard?added


[Speed]
00:15:791 (1,1) - I think here's just like 1.0 > 1.5 > 2.0, not 1.0>0.75>0.5. Anyway It's up2u sound is getting smaller, so 1.0 > 0.75 > 0.5
00:25:481 (1) - This is hard to read due to its shape. o3o This hell diff I think it's ok
01:06:366 (1,1,1) - ^ ^


[Okarin]
00:25:481 (1) - It's a bit hard to read due to its shape lol anyway it's up2u Consideration

Lally wrote:

[General]
where is normal ? ;_; added normal!

[Insane]
00:27:871 (4,1) - do a blanket here That's ok

Curisu wrote:

[Insane]
01:39:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - little bit boring...?Afterwards fix, No idea now

1. Your mp3 is broken. I get major delays on the map and song
   Use this on instead http://puu.sh/1lTwF
2. Lower the volume on the start a bit more (30%)

• • I'm not sure about the timing but is not correct, I have one
  

  1st BPM:225,575
  2nd BPM:225,490

• - 00:26:060 (5) - Replace this clap for a finish in my opinion
  - 00:40:955 (1,2,1) - Not a good idea about the finish-hitsounds, is much better if you remove all the finish from these sliders
  - 00:49:467 (1) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern
  - 00:51:595 (1) - Remove finish on the start?
  - 01:05:958 (2) - This note is overlapping the slider (1), try something like this
  - 01:44:662 (1) - To keep your rhythm, remove new combo here and add new combo here 01:45:194
  - 01:51:580 (1,2,1) - Like I said, remove the finish in these sliders please
  - 01:55:838 (1) - This slider need to start here 01:55:838 and other thing is this note 01:56:636, is not very reasonable, just delete

MoodyRPG wrote:

Douga o/

General

• • I'm not sure about the timing but is not correct, I have one
  

  1st BPM:225,575
  2nd BPM:225,490

Easy

• - 00:26:060 (5) - Replace this clap for a finish in my opinion
  - 00:40:955 (1,2,1) - Not a good idea about the finish-hitsounds, is much better if you remove all the finish from these sliders
  - 00:49:467 (1) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern
  - 00:51:595 (1) - Remove finish on the start?
  - 01:05:958 (2) - This note is overlapping the slider (1), try something like this
  - 01:44:662 (1) - To keep your rhythm, remove new combo here and add new combo here 01:45:194
  - 01:51:580 (1,2,1) - Like I said, remove the finish in these sliders please
  - 01:55:838 (1) - This slider need to start here 01:55:838 and other thing is this note 01:56:636, is not very reasonable, just delete

Just I see the Easy because you need to check the timing, ask me again if you need help

Saten wrote:

[Naryuga]
AR 5 is really low D: (Normal uses 5) Use 7 at least, it's a Hard after all - ... HP/AR/OD +1(5/6/5)
00:26:012 (1) - finish on head - done
01:08:490 (1) - Drum finish? Normal sound better imo - isn't it interesting for boo~m sound? ._.
02:36:100 (1) - finish on head - done