1. Bitrate of the map must be between 128kbps and 192kbps, the bitrate right now is 320 kbps.

1. 01:03:509 (3,1,2) - the slight overlap kind of looks odd to me (not really major but it is recommended)

1. 01:16:644 - Maybe make the rhythm like this?
   
   Sure it's a little harder, but it's the climax of the song and things usually get a little harder at times like these, even for the second diff. If it gets too hard, maybe you can replace it with a repeating slider or a normal slider. Just don't do the rhythm at 01:17:779.
2. 01:19:239 - ^
3. 01:37:401 - ^
4. 01:39:996 - ^

1. 00:20:050 (1,1) - I don't really like those slider by themselves. Either make them longer or add more notes in between and after them.
2. 00:25:239 (4) - add NC
3. 00:26:374 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:28:482 (1) - ^
5. 00:31:563 (5) - ^

1. 00:20:050 (1,1) - same problem with [Another] but since this is the "easier" diff of the two, it might be better to make them longer sliders.
2. 00:25:239 (3) - add NC
3. 00:24:590 - 00:45:996 This part as a whole (and possibly more of this part in [Another] has to focus more on phrasing with your combos. Sometimes you make a new combo every one measure while in others it is every two measures. I suggest that you should make an NC every two measures.
4. 01:02:698 (4) - add NC (in this part, you can choose whether the combos should be every one measure or two. Just keep consistency.)
5. 01:33:185 (1) - remove note and make appropriate space changes
6. 01:34:320 (4,5,6,7) - a jump like this doesn't occur that much in the rest of the beatmap, I highly suggest changing it.

1. 00:02:536 - Maybe a note here.
2. 00:20:049 (1) - Try to put this note on x:262 (It fits the previous slider)
3. 00:48:590 (1) - I think that finish sound doesn't fit this reverse arrow.
4. 00:56:374 (3) - How about putting 2 small sliders here? (The music became more faster, so, more beats)
5. How about a slider with a reverse arrow that goes from here 01:00:266 to here 01:01:563?
6. 01:23:289 - Maybe a note here

1. 00:02:860 - Maybe a note here
2. 00:04:482 (1,2,3) - These notes are not placed correctly. Put them on x:16.
3. 00:32:536 - Maybe a note here
4. 00:45:509 (4) - The line of this slider is not straight. Fix it. ^^
5. 00:56:374 (1) - Look Easy Mod^

1. 00:52:482 (2) - This note is unnecessary
2. 01:14:050 (4) - How about a reverse arrow here? (take the 01:14:374 (1) out).
3. 01:22:320 (1) - How about a reverse arrow here? (take the 01:22:806 (2) out) - It's not the same thing as the previous point

1. if you mind, try to add one combo colours. imo, 2 combo colours are boring
   try this colours: http://puu.sh/1FOmP
   

   Combo1 : 184,3,157
   Combo2 : 227,227,227
   Combo3 : 243,12,87

2. better, not check letters box on storyboarding menu
   

1. Rythm:
   00:40:320 - add a note
   00:42:915 - ^
   00:47:131 - ^
   00:49:725 - ^
   00:51:023 - ^
   01:16:644 - ^
   01:37:401 - ^
   
2. Combo:
   00:08:698 - NC
   00:09:671 - remove NC
   01:22:320 - ^
   01:24:915 - ^
   01:31:401 - ^
   
3. Hits Sounds:
   00:12:266 - add whistle on the tail?
   00:47:293 (5) - add finish?
   00:57:023 (2) - add finish on the head
   01:32:698 - whistle on the tail?
   01:37:563 - change to clap

1. Combo color 2 blends too much with the BG. I suppose it needs to be changed.

1. 00:02:860 (5,6,7) - Move this pattern upward so it can be stacked under the end of (4)
2. 00:12:590 (1) - I don't think it's that great to mix finish and clap here. Maybe it would be better to remove this clap.
3. 00:17:455 (1) - This newcombo seems pointless. Consider removing it~
4. 00:22:644 (1) - A small jump would fit nicely with here. I would move this note to x:256 y:200. I don't care about whether you follow my suggestion or not, but it's highly suggested to make a jump here.
5. 00:27:509 - Feels empty with this section due to lack of notes. Add a note here to follow high pitch piano sound?
6. 00:34:158 (4) - I don't like how this slider is shaped differently from (3). You can make it a bit better by using 4 anchors for this slider. like this;
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:40:320 (9) - A curved slider will fit better with this kind of pattern imo. The current flow is kinda uncomfortable to me.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:43:401 (1,2,3) - Adjust placement a bit so that it can look like a triangle like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:45:833 (5,1) - I have no alternative for this pattern, but honestly the current one flows so badly imo. As far as I can see, I'm sure that you can make it more exciting.
10. 01:03:590 (8) - A clap here would be a nice accent. and I can hear an extra percussion in the music. not sure it fits your taste, but worth a try imo. same for 01:13:968 (9) - .
11. 01:05:455 - umm, personally dislike this heavy beat being ignored and you using a long slider here. it'll be more natural if you use shorter one and follow that emphasis. same for 01:15:671 (1) -
12. 01:11:941 (1) - Add a finish here. it should suit perfectly with the beginning of re-kiai, and more consistent with 01:01:563 (1) - .
13. 01:19:077 (7) - The end of this slider is too close to 01:18:752 (5) - imo. It wouldn't hurt anything to move it away.
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:26:860 (3,1) - Consider unstacking these notes, because you used so many 1/1 stacking in this part so it might be quite confusing even though this difficulty is an Insane.
15. 01:32:374 (4,1) - This spacing is too close imo. at first I thought it was 1/4. consider spacing them at higher DS.
16. 01:32:698 (5,1) - Since this point is quite characteristic, how about trying something different here? I would suggest something like this, it can fit nicely with the song and must be interesting!
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:34:725 (9) - Same as 01:03:590 (8) - , consider adding a clap here.
18. 01:36:590 - Same as 01:05:455 - , try to stop using a long slider and follow the emphasis better.
19. 01:40:482 (2,3,4) - Make these sliders more curved and space them at higher DS: these are more suitable for this kind of pattern and looks/flows better. like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 01:43:077 (5) - I'm assuming you could hear the cymbal sound in the music.. anyway try to add a finish here. it would be more suitable for the end of this difficutly.

[Ranger] wrote:

[Fang's Hyper]
00:19:875 - 여기에 노트 추가해보시면 어떨까요? i use 3 hit reverse slider instead add a note
00:20:524 - ^ ^

TMAstraf wrote:

Fang's Hyper:
00:09:821 Maybe a little bit distance
00:10:794 This is a bit to far away from last circle
01:25:064 the Same like first

Sonnyc wrote:

Fang's Hyper:

-- 맵셋 상으로 저는 이 난이도를 하드로 취급하겠습니다. 아무튼, AR7 부탁합니다. Standard 난이도는 4인데, 격차가 너~무 크네요

00:21:497 (3,4) - 음악상 두개의 리듬이 서로 바뀌었습니다. 3연타 -> 클릭 -> 3연타 순서입니다. 현재박자 유지하겟습니다.
00:33:659 (3) - 4번쨰 점 1칸 내리는게 더 곡선 같네요
00:57:172 (1,2,3) - 이 노트들만 간격이 0.24x이네요. 수고스럽겠지만 0.30x과 더 가까이 맞출수 있으리라고 봅니다.
01:10:794 (7) - 2칸 오른쪽으로 하는게 슬라이더 끼리의 거리를 통일시킬수 있을거 같아요
01:20:361 (4) - (6)의 끝에 놓는건 어떨까요? 거리 유지를 위해 어쩔 수 없이..
01:42:091 (8) - (7)과 줄이 되게 해주세요

bbj0920 wrote:

[DF Hyper]
00:07:226 - whistle
01:00:740 (4) - whistle
01:21:821 (1) - finish
01:39:983 (1) - finish

Kitagami wrote:

Fang's Hyper

1. 00:03:497 (4) - I don't know... This slider disturbs the flow in my opinion... How about doing something like this?: accept your opinion
   
   Please, don't do the exactly same thing (only if doing, ofc, lol), since the spacing is totally wrong and I changed it like this just to check the flow.
   
   
   Not exaaaaactly like this, but you know, something like this "S" (not a perfect one) format formed by those two sliders. Something like this one 00:13:064 (1,2)
2. 00:27:983 (3,4) - And so again, I think this blanket looks a bit odd, since the tail of 00:27:983 (3) ends to one side and 00:28:470 (4) starts on the other side. See what I'm talking about here:
   
   What the player have to do.
   
   
   
   What would be more comfortable to do (at least, in my opinion).
   
   

Wah, I think I can't find anything else o.o

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