Strawberry wrote:

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1. try to change combo color white to another one more distinct? the present is confused for unreadable reserve arrow on defult skin.. fixed

　
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1. 00:10:735 - tbh the whistles on these part are really noisy for me.. try decreasing volume plz.. ;w; fixed
2. 00:21:284 (1,3) - try a symmetry here?~ http://puu.sh/2vkOz fixed
3. 00:29:856 (1) - i'd like to move it onto x.156 y.280 for blanket. would be looks much neater imo. umm, I feel current is better sorry.
4. 00:30:515 (2) - same pattern as above~ maybe you can try to adjust the angle of the curve for another blanket~ or just do a copy by the previous slider (3) on the last combo. :3 ^
5. 00:45:680 (2) - a clap would be much more suitable here.. and if you did, remove the needless whistle? fixed
6. 00:50:295 (1) - how about remove the nc here and other one which on 00:52:933 (1) and then add a new one at 00:50:295 (4) for consistent with lyric? fixed

　
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1. 00:10:735 - same as previous diff. fixed
2. 00:16:999 (2) - why not putting it on x.500 y.216 for a much better flow? anyway just say that. :3 fixed
3. 00:22:603 (3,4,5,6) - the pattern of circular arc could be made much better imo~ since it's just nazi things, i'd like to leave codes here. :3 fixed
   

   460,112,22603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   492,196,22933,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   464,280,23262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   384,324,23592,1,8,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:43:702 (1) - really feel bad about these ticks sound of the sliderslide.. silence 'em by inherited points? (00:44:032 and 00:44:691 changed hit-sound pattern.

　
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1. 00:06:284 (2) - why jump here?.. it would be more enjoyable as a hard if you just set it on x.32 y.220 for following the spacing. :3 (also the same thing at 00:16:504 (2).. fixed
2. 00:16:504 (2) - the same volumes problem as other diffs~ fixed
3. 01:15:433 (1) - would be much better on sound if you shorten the spinner for ending at the downbeat 01:17:328.. (yea you can also set another single circle at 01:17:658 with clap. :3 fixed

　
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1. 00:10:735 - same~
2. 00:29:196 (1,2,3) - largen the spacings here? since there are only sliders, normal spacing would be really bored.. http://puu.sh/2vlL0 another fixed
3. 00:44:361 (2) - can't understand that why you'd like to extend the slider till the white tick.. for the vocal it should be just stopped at red one. (remove the silent inherited point which with 5% volume either. :3 changed but not deleted green line. if deleted, it sounds weird imo.
4. 00:51:120 (3,4) - ctrl+g for a better flow? the present is also confused for me since it looks really like the circle (4) is closing after the previous slider (2).. umm... ok fixed.
5. 01:31:669 (2) - why not to move it onto x.68 y.60 for more symmetrical and better spacing? this part set with DS, so I don' change this spacing.

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after these tiny things. i think it would be ready. :3