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MuryokuP - Overture

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meiikyuu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, November 09, 2013 at 1:44:54 PM

Artist: MuryokuP
Title: Overture
Tags: your pianist megurine luka vocaloid
BPM: 96
Filesize: 2831kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.78 stars, 42 notes)
  2. Hard (4.71 stars, 115 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.79 stars, 174 notes)
  4. Normal (2.6 stars, 72 notes)
  5. Sakuya's Insane (4.88 stars, 228 notes)
Download: MuryokuP - Overture
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everything's getting like remapped
those
96 bpm can I map
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
wait wut, its supposed to be 96-192 ...?
those
Oh I'm not on pc so I didn't dl and website doesn't support variable bpm orz
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
ohh lol i see
Hinsvar
asdf can't resist to mod meii's maps

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. There are unused inherited timing points from 00:36:913 - 00:40:663 on Easy, Normal, and Hard. Remove them if you're not planning to add a spinner like what you and Sakuya have done on your Insane diffs.
>Hard
  1. 00:54:725 (7) - Ctrl+G? Keeping the flow linear here isn't gonna work well. This should do better.
>Insane
  1. 00:48:788 (3) - Uh... the flow is... kinda weird here. Move to (292,356)?
  2. 00:55:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - For a song with a 4/4 time signature, this pattern is really out of place, IMO. Feel free to keep this, though.
  3. 01:19:413 (9,10,1) - Weird flow problem here, also. Make (9,10) like this?
    316,248,79413,2,0,B|280:168|320:80,1,170
    360,8,79881,1,0,0:0:0
>Sakuya's Insane
  1. 00:58:006 (2,3) - According to the song, it is more fitting for (3) to have the repeat, not (2).
  2. 01:00:975 (4,5) - This would work better if they are converted to two 1/1 sliders. Reason's same as above.
  3. 01:08:788 (5) - Ctrl+G? idk how to explain this... It's just better for me.
  4. 01:10:038 (1,2,3) - This feels kinda forced... Ctrl+J and then make the lower slider (2) and the upper slider (3) (just like the original position)?
  5. 01:20:038 (3) - Move the anchor point on the slider's tail (I'm still not sure of which one's head and tail, but I'm talking about the one with the repeat) to (320,308)? The current position is just... weird.
  6. 01:26:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Only one stream? This feels so jarring, but whatever, I guess.
Easy and Normal are completely fine to me.

I don't know about what should I comment on again, so that's it :P

Good luck on the way 8-)
Deif
Hi! I've seen this in #modreqs, and I inmediately fell in love with the music ^^

[General]

Tags: I'm assuming the 2nd Insane is made by LunarSakuya. You'll have to add the guest mapper's name in tags in all the diffs.

Unused inherited sections: I've noticed you have some in Easy, Normal and Hard: 00:36:913 , 00:38:163 , 00:39:413 , 00:40:663 . It's highly recommended to remove them. Meh, already mentioned in the previous modpost.

Hitsounds: The rhythmic base of the 2nd part of the music is quite simple. Every 2 stanzas the following hitsound pattern is repeated: | Finish - 2 - Clap - 4 | 1 - 2 - Clap - 4 |. Based on that, I've pointed out the hitsounds you've been missing (just in Easy, but there are a lot of missing hitsounds in the rest of the diffs). Please, all of them are just mere suggestions, so you're free to reject them if you want.

[Easy]

Hitsounds
00:47:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning of the slider, and Clap at the repetition.
00:50:038 (3) - Clap at the repetition.
00:57:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning.
01:02:538 (1) - Finish at the end.
01:07:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning.
01:09:413 (2) - Clap.
01:10:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning
01:12:538 (1) - Finish at the end.
01:15:663 (2) - Clap.
01:19:413 (2) - Clap.
01:20:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning.
01:21:913 (4) - Clap at the beginning.
01:25:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning.
01:27:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning.
01:30:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning.
01:31:913 (1) - Clap at the beginning.
Nice diff, I cannot point out anything else.

[Normal]

01:28:163 (2) - This slider don't really match with the shape of (1) and (3). HERE it looks much better imo. I'll leave you the code of that slider if you agree to change it.
SPOILER
92,92,88163,2,0,B|150:83|183:27,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
[Hard]

00:28:475 (5,6) - The stronger note according to the melody is (5), while (6) is almost silent. I suggest to stack both notes to reproduce that effect.

00:28:788 (6) - S-Whistle.

00:54:569 (6) - Its appearance is a bit sudden after (3)'s hitburst dissapearance. I'd suggest you to move it a bit down, trying to make it more visible. You may need to move (7) to keep a proper distance between these notes.

[Insane]

00:23:788 - To keep the consistency of the Break Times, you can add a 2/1 long slider here, similar to 00:18:788 (7) . Or, if you prefer, you could remove that last slider I mentioned and add a Break Time.

00:28:475 (5,6) - As in Hard, I'd suggest you to stack them.

00:28:788 (6) - S-Whistle.

00:58:788 (5) - Minor stuff. To keep a better flow, you could move this note to (268,168).

01:09:881 (10) - I cannot agree completely with the placement of this note. It doesn't flow well with the next note imo, and covers the beginning of (3). It looks better somewhere else (e.g. stacked with the end of (3)).

01:26:131 (5) - Ugh... I highly recommend to change the position of this note. The movement it needs is kinda unintuituve, and it's almost invisible even with Stack Leniency 7.

[Sakuya's Insane]

00:28:788 (3) - S-Whistle at the end.

01:26:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream is kinda out of place in this song. I'd reduce it to 4 notes and a 1/4 long slider with 4 repetitions, or any other plausible combination.


Awesome job. All the diffs are pretty neat and flow quite well. Have some stars, and good luck!
- ArC -
I want that this map will be rank!!!!!!
senkai
too bad this map is graveyarded already.... :/

i hope it gets revived~~~ xD

then i would like to make a guest diff if its ok :D :D :D :D
Orage
Awsome Map !!!!
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
aw thanks xD
Sterrestof
I freaking love all your muryokuP maps ._.' are you planning on getting this one ranked still? :3
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
thanks ^^ and probably soon since I'm putting live-right on hold for now
Gman140
I hope this map gets revived, i love all your maps.
Azer


OH MAN I'm hyped.
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
Yeahhhh!
WingSilent
Good news you revived it. :)
Let me know when all diffs are done. I already guess i can't GD but i can mod. ~^_^~
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
aw thanks ^^ ill let you know
Koruny
Pretty good map =) looking forward to it being ranked.
But is the short time just because it's not finished yet? or is it a short song?
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Koruny wrote:

Pretty good map =) looking forward to it being ranked.
But is the short time just because it's not finished yet? or is it a short song?
the total length of the song is like 1:30 or whatever, it's pretty short because it's the intro song to an album xD

and everything was finished but im remapping a lot of it now
Koruny
Ah, ok thanks for the quick answer =P.
Looking forward to future maps of you =D Oh, and btw. i love your MuryokuP maps =)
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Koruny wrote:

Ah, ok thanks for the quick answer =P.
Looking forward to future maps of you =D Oh, and btw. i love your MuryokuP maps =)
ahaha thank u very much
Pretty Rhythm
So cool map xD
CakiP
supp~!
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