Hi! I've seen this in #modreqs, and I inmediately fell in love with the music ^^
[General]
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I'm assuming the 2nd Insane is made by LunarSakuya. You'll have to add the guest mapper's name in tags in all the diffs.Unused inherited sections: I've noticed you have some in Easy, Normal and Hard: 00:36:913 , 00:38:163 , 00:39:413 , 00:40:663 . It's highly recommended to remove them. Meh, already mentioned in the previous modpost.
Hitsounds: The rhythmic base of the 2nd part of the music is quite simple. Every 2 stanzas the following hitsound pattern is repeated: | Finish - 2 - Clap - 4 | 1 - 2 - Clap - 4 |. Based on that, I've pointed out the hitsounds you've been missing (just in Easy, but there are a lot of missing hitsounds in the rest of the diffs). Please, all of them are just mere suggestions, so you're free to reject them if you want.
[Easy]
Hitsounds00:47:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning of the slider, and Clap at the repetition.
00:50:038 (3) - Clap at the repetition.
00:57:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning.
01:02:538 (1) - Finish at the end.
01:07:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning.
01:09:413 (2) - Clap.
01:10:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning
01:12:538 (1) - Finish at the end.
01:15:663 (2) - Clap.
01:19:413 (2) - Clap.
01:20:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning.
01:21:913 (4) - Clap at the beginning.
01:25:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning.
01:27:538 (1) - Finish at the beginning.
01:30:038 (3) - Finish at the beginning.
01:31:913 (1) - Clap at the beginning.
Nice diff, I cannot point out anything else.
[Normal]
01:28:163 (2) - This slider don't really match with the shape of (1) and (3).
HERE it looks much better imo. I'll leave you the code of that slider if you agree to change it.
SPOILER92,92,88163,2,0,B|150:83|183:27,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
[Hard]
00:28:475 (5,6) - The stronger note according to the melody is (5), while (6) is almost silent. I suggest to stack both notes to reproduce that effect.
00:28:788 (6) - S-Whistle.
00:54:569 (6) - Its appearance is a bit sudden after (3)'s hitburst dissapearance. I'd suggest you to move it a bit down, trying to make it more visible. You may need to move (7) to keep a proper distance between these notes.
[Insane]
00:23:788 -
To keep the consistency of the Break Times, you can add a 2/1 long slider here, similar to 00:18:788 (7) . Or, if you prefer, you could remove that last slider I mentioned and add a Break Time.00:28:475 (5,6) - As in Hard, I'd suggest you to stack them.
00:28:788 (6) - S-Whistle.
00:58:788 (5) - Minor stuff. To keep a better flow, you could move this note to (268,168).
01:09:881 (10) - I cannot agree completely with the placement of this note. It doesn't flow well with the next note imo, and covers the beginning of (3). It looks better somewhere else (e.g. stacked with the end of (3)).
01:26:131 (5) -
Ugh... I highly recommend to change the position of this note. The movement it needs is kinda unintuituve, and it's almost invisible even with Stack Leniency 7.[Sakuya's Insane]
00:28:788 (3) - S-Whistle at the end.
01:26:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
This stream is kinda out of place in this song. I'd reduce it to 4 notes and a 1/4 long slider with 4 repetitions, or any other plausible combination.Awesome job. All the diffs are pretty neat and flow quite well. Have some stars, and good luck!