timing is inherited from yeahyeahyeahhh's original version, the first one is for hitsound and the second one is the start point of KIAI TIME imoHarez wrote:
Not used Green Line
^MaledictusXVII wrote:
Hmm, DaRRi, good job in boring diff ^^
little fixes:
00:18:478 (1,2,3) - maybe move them slightly to the right? fixed
00:28:933 (2,2) - maybe not here? wha
03:00:296 (1,2,3) - not to hard for normal diff? it is?
03:18:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Breeze wrote:
[orz][Boring]
- 00:40:296 (1) - 不加个Finish?
[Relaxing]
- 03:16:887 - 这里的break不要感觉更好吧, 这么短真的没必要, 加了break四角还会出现那个箭头看起来不是特别合适
[DaRRi sTyLE]
- 00:31:205 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不加whistle么? 其他难度这里都是加了哨音的:/
- 00:40:296 (1) - Slider头加个finish?
- 00:45:751 (3) slider尾, 00:46:205 (1), 00:46:660 (2) slider头, 00:47:114 (3) slider头 - 不加whistle?
- 01:53:023 (1,2), 01:53:933 (3,4) slider头- ^
- 02:02:114 (1) - slider头, Finish?
- 03:16:887 - 也是觉得这个break不太必要, 我觉得自然掉血的感觉最适合这种只有声音没有背景乐的地方
- 03:16:887 - 和前两个难度一样的建议啦
Timing, music file and background img and VIDEO are taken from yeahyeahyeahhh's ranked one.This doesn't mean that you have to put yeahyeahyeahhh in the tags.
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Agree with this.Chewin wrote:
Timing, music file and background img and VIDEO are taken from yeahyeahyeahhh's ranked one.This doesn't mean that you have to put yeahyeahyeahhh in the tags.
Remove it, please.
fixed, and removed yyy from the tagkanpakyin wrote:
我覺得offset: 3926比較適合...你可以看看yyy的thread, rank了之後也有關於timing的討論
not sure if 5% volume is unrankable or not, but changed them for nowChewin wrote:
Furthermore I have to tell you that silenced notes are unrankable.
Then you need to increase the volume of these 3 green lines: 01:09:387 / 02:31:205 / 03:34:842 till at least 20%.
EDIT: You also should give kpy kudosu for timing help ;P
Where you have used it, it was. 5% can be used to silence spinners or last sliders/circles or sliders/circles before break time.DaRRi MIx wrote:
not sure if 5% volume is unrankable or not, but changed them for nowChewin wrote:
Furthermore I have to tell you that silenced notes are unrankable.
Then you need to increase the volume of these 3 green lines: 01:09:387 / 02:31:205 / 03:34:842 till at least 20%.
EDIT: You also should give kpy kudosu for timing help ;P
kanpakyin wrote:
ok, let's go.
[General][DaRRi sTyLE]
- okay
[Realxing]
- Please resnap all notes in this diff. There are tons of unsnapped notes. FIXED
- 00:43:814 (5) - Could you remove this note so that it can be consistent with previous part(00:36:539 - and 00:40:176 - ) VOCAL IS DIFFERENT HERE
- 01:33:018 (7) - hum...I would say increase the spacing here would be nice because there is a accent which is suitable for a jump. IT'S OK IMO
- 02:07:903 - A rhythmic suggestion here. How about adding a note at 02:07:903 - and 02:08:244 - ,so that it can follow the drum sound and the instrument at the same time : ) WOULD BE MONOTONOUS
- 02:20:291 (3) - , 02:22:109 (5) - Probably you can use the new type style slider to remake it to a better shape. YES ACCEPTED
- 02:40:062 - Add a note here? NOT REALLY
[Boring]
- 00:38:471 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, better to fix this though.FIXED
- 02:01:198 (2,3,1) - ^ FIXED
- 02:23:471 (1) - I don't think a spinner fits the music here because the vocal is still singing at this time. I suppose that a spinner should be used at protraction. The spinner could start at 02:25:744 - if you want. I THINK IT'S OK IN THIS DIFF,01:01:653 (1) - SAME HERE
- 02:34:380 (4) - This didn't stack at slider(3)-'s end properly. Please stack it again. FIXED
[Orz]
- 02:23:471 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這對有點難度...加上這種pattern和AR,導致整個佈局就不太好. 建議重新排一次 REPATTERNED
- 03:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同難讀.求換成slider FIXED
- 03:20:289 (1,2,3,4) - 這個是低難度, 然後這裡都是疊, 節奏又不同, 加上低AR, 結果就變得巨難讀 FOLLOW THE MUSIC PLS
- 03:22:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 03:23:926 (1,2,3,4) - ^ +spacing FIXED SPACING
- 03:25:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 03:36:426 - Unused green line. Remove it? FIXED
Call me back.
- 01:02:107 (1) - I would like to move this spinner to 01:03:926 - and then map the part before the spinner. IT'S FINE
- 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - 最低難度, 不建議在間距上動手腳 ACCEPTABLE IMO
- 02:23:925 (1) - Same as 01:02:107- IT'S FINE
- 02:33:016 ~ 02:47:107 - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 -. Also copy and paste沒關係? ^
- 03:32:107 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - MADE THEM CLOSER
Thanks Picture is nice i shall take it~HellDawn wrote:
Hellooooo
Some stuff before ranking
General
It would be better If you find a new background Because background similar of yeahyeah map WAIT I FOUND BACKGROUND (Hope you like it)
Darri Style
00:46:198- This part so strange because doesnt fit with music so you should move to blue line and add note to here > 00:46:426- Also if you put clap to 2. combo Rhytm is gonna well (Believe me) NO IT'S DRUM HERE
01:05:062- if you put finish Song will good :3 NOT HERE
01:07:562- ^ NOT HERE
02:07:789- you know ^
02:29:380- finish ^
02:38:926- it would be better if you stack with slider because you already stacked with previous slider NOT SAME, THERE'S VOCAL HERE SO SPACING SHOULD CHANGE
03:16:653- finish ^
03:23:926- why you put finish begining ? sound so weird FIXED
Relaxing
01:13:926- wrong spacing too close ACCEPTABLE, PATTERN IS CLEAR
01:21:198- ^ ^
02:03:926- New combo unnecessary IT'S NOT..
02:16:653- finish I GUESS NOT
03:16:653- finish fit there SAME TO IN DARRI STYLE
Boring
00:51:198 (1,1) ''missed' You should put whistle at the end of sliders OK
01:03:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- I understood why this difficult name boring These combos are stacked so boring If I were you I will change sides IT'S FINE
01:07:562- finish ^
01:17:335- add a note here IT'S UNNECESSARY TO MAP TO EACH SINGLE SOUND IN EASY DIFF
02:13:016- same as my first suggestion ^ ^
03:16:653- absolutely finish here ^
Orz
OD -1
00:47:107- no need whistle THERE IS...
00:27:562- New combo I DON'T MAKE NEW COMBOS RANDOMLY
02:08:926- No need whistle ^
Good luck
sorry but i want to keep what it is nowNoHitter wrote:
Just a couple of things I've noticed.
[DaRRi sTyLE]
- 00:56:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this combo should follow 00:54:835 (1,2,3,4,5) more similarly. You already added rhythms on the white ticks, to stop them suddenly feels odd. IMO add notes on 00:57:107 and 00:57:676.
- 02:18:471 (1,2,3,4,1) - Similar to above. You already added the white ticks at the previous combo and leaving them out here sounds odd. Add notes at 02:18:926 and 02:19:380.
Also that difficulty jump from Orz to Boring is quite big IMO.
Boring has 1/4's in them while Orz is lacking even 1/2's.
Harez wrote:
Hitsound suggest~
[orz]
00:18:471 (1) Finish at first
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:02:107 (1) ^
02:51:198 (1) ^
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^
[Boring]
00:54:835 (1) Finish at first
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:16:653 (1) Finish at first
02:51:198 (1) Finish
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^
03:33:016 (1,2) Whistle
[Relax]
00:18:471 (1) Finish at first
00:38:471 (1) Clap at end
00:38:471 (1,2) anti jump
01:39:380 (4,5,6) 1 grid up
02:07:107 (3,1,2,3) Whistle at (3) end, (1), and at first of (2,3) slider
02:21:426 (1,2) whistle
[DaRRi MIx / DaRRi sTYLE]
ninja jump
00:59:607 (1,2,3,4) Whistle
01:04:835 (5,6,8) Finish?
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:21:426 (1,2,3,4) Finish
02:51:198 (1) Finish
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^
star~
thanks for help~grumd wrote:
00:27:562 (2) - This repeat arrow in [Relaxing] is hidden, why was this bubbled? o_0
Edit: Also it would be better not to hide 03:00:744 (2) - under the slider track, that can be confusing / it is restricted by rules for non-insane diffs. ([Boring])
01:28:471 (1) - 01:35:744 (1) - This is too far from the center of screen, it's hard to hit after the spinner ([Orz])
02:16:653 (1) - 00:58:471 (1) - These are overlapping with HP Bar a bit, move them down ([Orz])
02:20:289 (1) - 00:54:835 (1) - These are touching score numbers, again that doesn't look good, again move them down ([Orz])
That are only unrankable or barely unrankable points, not doing a full mod.
Also I did like that sliderjumps in Insane, 01:18:471 (1,2,3,4,1) - they remind me of gangnam dance style