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我覺得offset: 3926比較適合...你可以看看yyy的thread, rank了之後也有關於timing的討論
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gogogogo lol
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kanpakyin wrote:

我覺得offset: 3926比較適合...你可以看看yyy的thread, rank了之後也有關於timing的討論
fixed, and removed yyy from the tag
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Furthermore I have to tell you that silenced notes are unrankable.
Then you need to increase the volume of these 3 green lines: 01:09:387 / 02:31:205 / 03:34:842 till at least 20%.

EDIT: You also should give kpy kudosu for timing help ;P
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Chewin wrote:

Furthermore I have to tell you that silenced notes are unrankable.
Then you need to increase the volume of these 3 green lines: 01:09:387 / 02:31:205 / 03:34:842 till at least 20%.

EDIT: You also should give kpy kudosu for timing help ;P
not sure if 5% volume is unrankable or not, but changed them for now
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DaRRi MIx wrote:

Chewin wrote:

Furthermore I have to tell you that silenced notes are unrankable.
Then you need to increase the volume of these 3 green lines: 01:09:387 / 02:31:205 / 03:34:842 till at least 20%.

EDIT: You also should give kpy kudosu for timing help ;P
not sure if 5% volume is unrankable or not, but changed them for now
Where you have used it, it was. 5% can be used to silence spinners or last sliders/circles or sliders/circles before break time.
It was very confusing to play those circles you had silenced.

I have rechecked it anyways, and the mapset is fine to me.
You can have your bubble back, and good luck!

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Ah. Another gangnam. XD
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ok, let's go.

[General]
  1. okay


[DaRRi sTyLE]
  1. Please resnap all notes in this diff. There are tons of unsnapped notes.
  2. 00:43:814 (5) - Could you remove this note so that it can be consistent with previous part(00:36:539 - and 00:40:176 - )
  3. 01:33:018 (7) - hum...I would say increase the spacing here would be nice because there is a accent which is suitable for a jump.
  4. 02:07:903 - A rhythmic suggestion here. How about adding a note at 02:07:903 - and 02:08:244 - ,so that it can follow the drum sound and the instrument at the same time : )
  5. 02:20:291 (3) - , 02:22:109 (5) - Probably you can use the new type style slider to remake it to a better shape.
  6. 02:40:062 - Add a note here?


[Realxing]
  1. 00:38:471 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, better to fix this though.
  2. 02:01:198 (2,3,1) - ^
  3. 02:23:471 (1) - I don't think a spinner fits the music here because the vocal is still singing at this time. I suppose that a spinner should be used at protraction. The spinner could start at 02:25:744 - if you want.
  4. 02:34:380 (4) - This didn't stack at slider(3)-'s end properly. Please stack it again.


[Boring]
  1. 02:23:471 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這對有點難度...加上這種pattern和AR,導致整個佈局就不太好. 建議重新排一次
  2. 03:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同難讀.求換成slider
  3. 03:20:289 (1,2,3,4) - 這個是低難度, 然後這裡都是疊, 節奏又不同, 加上低AR, 結果就變得巨難讀
  4. 03:22:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 03:23:926 (1,2,3,4) - ^ +spacing
  6. 03:25:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  7. 03:36:426 - Unused green line. Remove it?


[Orz]
  1. 01:02:107 (1) - I would like to move this spinner to 01:03:926 - and then map the part before the spinner.
  2. 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - 最低難度, 不建議在間距上動手腳
  3. 02:23:925 (1) - Same as 01:02:107-
  4. 02:33:016 ~ 02:47:107 - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 -. Also copy and paste沒關係?
  5. 03:32:107 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 -


Call me back.
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Thanks a lot for so many details^^

kanpakyin wrote:

ok, let's go.

[General]
  1. okay


[DaRRi sTyLE]
  1. Please resnap all notes in this diff. There are tons of unsnapped notes. FIXED
  2. 00:43:814 (5) - Could you remove this note so that it can be consistent with previous part(00:36:539 - and 00:40:176 - ) VOCAL IS DIFFERENT HERE
  3. 01:33:018 (7) - hum...I would say increase the spacing here would be nice because there is a accent which is suitable for a jump. IT'S OK IMO
  4. 02:07:903 - A rhythmic suggestion here. How about adding a note at 02:07:903 - and 02:08:244 - ,so that it can follow the drum sound and the instrument at the same time : ) WOULD BE MONOTONOUS
  5. 02:20:291 (3) - , 02:22:109 (5) - Probably you can use the new type style slider to remake it to a better shape. YES ACCEPTED
  6. 02:40:062 - Add a note here? NOT REALLY


[Realxing]
  1. 00:38:471 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, better to fix this though.FIXED
  2. 02:01:198 (2,3,1) - ^ FIXED
  3. 02:23:471 (1) - I don't think a spinner fits the music here because the vocal is still singing at this time. I suppose that a spinner should be used at protraction. The spinner could start at 02:25:744 - if you want. I THINK IT'S OK IN THIS DIFF,01:01:653 (1) - SAME HERE
  4. 02:34:380 (4) - This didn't stack at slider(3)-'s end properly. Please stack it again. FIXED


[Boring]
  1. 02:23:471 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這對有點難度...加上這種pattern和AR,導致整個佈局就不太好. 建議重新排一次 REPATTERNED
  2. 03:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同難讀.求換成slider FIXED
  3. 03:20:289 (1,2,3,4) - 這個是低難度, 然後這裡都是疊, 節奏又不同, 加上低AR, 結果就變得巨難讀 FOLLOW THE MUSIC PLS
  4. 03:22:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
  5. 03:23:926 (1,2,3,4) - ^ +spacing FIXED SPACING
  6. 03:25:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
  7. 03:36:426 - Unused green line. Remove it? FIXED


[Orz]
  1. 01:02:107 (1) - I would like to move this spinner to 01:03:926 - and then map the part before the spinner. IT'S FINE
  2. 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - 最低難度, 不建議在間距上動手腳 ACCEPTABLE IMO
  3. 02:23:925 (1) - Same as 01:02:107- IT'S FINE
  4. 02:33:016 ~ 02:47:107 - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 -. Also copy and paste沒關係? ^
  5. 03:32:107 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - MADE THEM CLOSER


Call me back.
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I would like to leave this to another bat.

Rebubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ [list:5b883]




Edit:
Bubble Repaired.
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Hellooooo

Some stuff before ranking

General

It would be better If you find a new background Because background similar of yeahyeah map WAIT I FOUND BACKGROUND (Hope you like it)


Darri Style

00:46:198- This part so strange because doesnt fit with music so you should move to blue line and add note to here > 00:46:426- Also if you put clap to 2. combo Rhytm is gonna well (Believe me)
01:05:062- if you put finish Song will good :3
01:07:562- ^
02:07:789- you know
02:29:380- finish
02:38:926- it would be better if you stack with slider because you already stacked with previous slider
03:16:653- finish
03:23:926- why you put finish begining ? sound so weird

Relaxing

01:13:926- wrong spacing too close
01:21:198- ^
02:03:926- New combo unnecessary
02:16:653- finish
03:16:653- finish fit there

Boring

00:51:198 (1,1) ''missed' You should put whistle at the end of sliders
01:03:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- I understood why this difficult name boring :D These combos are stacked so boring If I were you I will change sides
01:07:562- finish
01:17:335- add a note here
02:13:016- same as my first suggestion ^
03:16:653- absolutely finish here

Orz

OD -1

00:47:107- no need whistle
00:27:562- New combo
02:08:926- No need whistle

Good luck
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HellDawn wrote:

Hellooooo

Some stuff before ranking

General

It would be better If you find a new background Because background similar of yeahyeah map WAIT I FOUND BACKGROUND (Hope you like it)


Darri Style

00:46:198- This part so strange because doesnt fit with music so you should move to blue line and add note to here > 00:46:426- Also if you put clap to 2. combo Rhytm is gonna well (Believe me) NO IT'S DRUM HERE
01:05:062- if you put finish Song will good :3 NOT HERE
01:07:562- ^ NOT HERE
02:07:789- you know ^
02:29:380- finish ^
02:38:926- it would be better if you stack with slider because you already stacked with previous slider NOT SAME, THERE'S VOCAL HERE SO SPACING SHOULD CHANGE
03:16:653- finish ^
03:23:926- why you put finish begining ? sound so weird FIXED

Relaxing

01:13:926- wrong spacing too close ACCEPTABLE, PATTERN IS CLEAR
01:21:198- ^ ^
02:03:926- New combo unnecessary IT'S NOT..
02:16:653- finish I GUESS NOT
03:16:653- finish fit there SAME TO IN DARRI STYLE

Boring

00:51:198 (1,1) ''missed' You should put whistle at the end of sliders OK
01:03:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- I understood why this difficult name boring :D These combos are stacked so boring If I were you I will change sides IT'S FINE :)
01:07:562- finish ^
01:17:335- add a note here IT'S UNNECESSARY TO MAP TO EACH SINGLE SOUND IN EASY DIFF
02:13:016- same as my first suggestion ^ ^
03:16:653- absolutely finish here ^

Orz

OD -1

00:47:107- no need whistle THERE IS...
00:27:562- New combo I DON'T MAKE NEW COMBOS RANDOMLY
02:08:926- No need whistle ^

Good luck
Thanks ;) Picture is nice i shall take it~
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Just a couple of things I've noticed.

[DaRRi sTyLE]
- 00:56:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this combo should follow 00:54:835 (1,2,3,4,5) more similarly. You already added rhythms on the white ticks, to stop them suddenly feels odd. IMO add notes on 00:57:107 and 00:57:676.
- 02:18:471 (1,2,3,4,1) - Similar to above. You already added the white ticks at the previous combo and leaving them out here sounds odd. Add notes at 02:18:926 and 02:19:380.

Also that difficulty jump from Orz to Boring is quite big IMO.
Boring has 1/4's in them while Orz is lacking even 1/2's.
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NoHitter wrote:

Just a couple of things I've noticed.

[DaRRi sTyLE]
- 00:56:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this combo should follow 00:54:835 (1,2,3,4,5) more similarly. You already added rhythms on the white ticks, to stop them suddenly feels odd. IMO add notes on 00:57:107 and 00:57:676.
- 02:18:471 (1,2,3,4,1) - Similar to above. You already added the white ticks at the previous combo and leaving them out here sounds odd. Add notes at 02:18:926 and 02:19:380.

Also that difficulty jump from Orz to Boring is quite big IMO.
Boring has 1/4's in them while Orz is lacking even 1/2's.
:o sorry but i want to keep what it is now
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Why not [DaRRi MIx] :<
  • *I love your mapping, reminds me of good old times <3


Looking forward for rank
posted
Hitsound suggest~

[orz]
00:18:471 (1) Finish at first
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:02:107 (1) ^
02:51:198 (1) ^
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^

[Boring]
00:54:835 (1) Finish at first
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:16:653 (1) Finish at first
02:51:198 (1) Finish
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^
03:33:016 (1,2) Whistle

[Relax]
00:18:471 (1) Finish at first
00:38:471 (1) Clap at end
00:38:471 (1,2) anti jump :o
01:39:380 (4,5,6) 1 grid up
02:07:107 (3,1,2,3) Whistle at (3) end, (1), and at first of (2,3) slider
02:21:426 (1,2) whistle

[DaRRi MIx / DaRRi sTYLE]
:o ninja jump
00:59:607 (1,2,3,4) Whistle
01:04:835 (5,6,8) Finish?
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:21:426 (1,2,3,4) Finish
02:51:198 (1) Finish
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^

star~ :)
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Fixed some of them! thanks a lot! :)

Harez wrote:

Hitsound suggest~

[orz]
00:18:471 (1) Finish at first
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:02:107 (1) ^
02:51:198 (1) ^
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^

[Boring]
00:54:835 (1) Finish at first
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:16:653 (1) Finish at first
02:51:198 (1) Finish
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^
03:33:016 (1,2) Whistle

[Relax]
00:18:471 (1) Finish at first
00:38:471 (1) Clap at end
00:38:471 (1,2) anti jump :o
01:39:380 (4,5,6) 1 grid up
02:07:107 (3,1,2,3) Whistle at (3) end, (1), and at first of (2,3) slider
02:21:426 (1,2) whistle

[DaRRi MIx / DaRRi sTYLE]
:o ninja jump
00:59:607 (1,2,3,4) Whistle
01:04:835 (5,6,8) Finish?
01:29:380 (1) Finish
01:36:653 (1) ^
02:21:426 (1,2,3,4) Finish
02:51:198 (1) Finish
02:58:471 (1) ^
03:31:198 (1) ^

star~ :)
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00:27:562 (2) - This repeat arrow in [Relaxing] is hidden, why was this bubbled? o_0

Edit: Also it would be better not to hide 03:00:744 (2) - under the slider track, that can be confusing / it is restricted by rules for non-insane diffs. ([Boring])
01:28:471 (1) - 01:35:744 (1) - This is too far from the center of screen, it's hard to hit after the spinner ([Orz])
02:16:653 (1) - 00:58:471 (1) - These are overlapping with HP Bar a bit, move them down ([Orz])
02:20:289 (1) - 00:54:835 (1) - These are touching score numbers, again that doesn't look good, again move them down ([Orz])
That are only unrankable or barely unrankable points, not doing a full mod.

Also I did like that sliderjumps in Insane, 01:18:471 (1,2,3,4,1) - they remind me of gangnam dance style :D
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grumd wrote:

00:27:562 (2) - This repeat arrow in [Relaxing] is hidden, why was this bubbled? o_0

Edit: Also it would be better not to hide 03:00:744 (2) - under the slider track, that can be confusing / it is restricted by rules for non-insane diffs. ([Boring])
01:28:471 (1) - 01:35:744 (1) - This is too far from the center of screen, it's hard to hit after the spinner ([Orz])
02:16:653 (1) - 00:58:471 (1) - These are overlapping with HP Bar a bit, move them down ([Orz])
02:20:289 (1) - 00:54:835 (1) - These are touching score numbers, again that doesn't look good, again move them down ([Orz])
That are only unrankable or barely unrankable points, not doing a full mod.

Also I did like that sliderjumps in Insane, 01:18:471 (1,2,3,4,1) - they remind me of gangnam dance style :D
thanks for help~
fixed except 01:28:471 (1) - 01:35:744 (1), there's enough time for reaction.
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I guess this is the last time I can give the bubble repair, so take care of 'it'.

Bubble Repaired.
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