P A N wrote:

yea finally D: after a long time i mod this map

BeatofIke wrote:

Your Preview time is unsnapped. Please move the Preview time at 39273 (-10).

1. Offset is early by 9ms which is quite a lot.
2. This map really should have an epilepsy warning concerning parts like 00:13:967 and 00:15:192; there also are lighter examples such as the pulsing icon in the start which can already be enough, but the timestamped examples are the main reason for this and should not be ignored (aswell as the whole kiai time basically).
3. Your hit300g.png is causing issues in Flan's diff: 01:15:790 (2) is having its reverse arrow mostly covered by previous combo's 10 hitburst, making it very hard to sightread if not impossible.

Jenny wrote:

Gathered from #modhelp discussion I'll conclude the following issues:

1. Offset is early by 9ms which is quite a lot.
2. This map really should have an epilepsy warning concerning parts like 00:13:967 and 00:15:192; there also are lighter examples such as the pulsing icon in the start which can already be enough, but the timestamped examples are the main reason for this and should not be ignored (aswell as the whole kiai time basically).
3. Your hit300g.png is causing issues in Flan's diff: 01:15:790 (2) is having its reverse arrow mostly covered by previous combo's 10 hitburst, making it very hard to sightread if not impossible.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Disable the Epilepsy Warning on all the difficulties since you don't need it.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

new version

1. Your HP bar is very hard to deal with because it just features no colour whatsoever, basically making it unnoticed and overshined by your SB and the rest of the skin - I really have no idea how much HP I got left because it's just grey in grey and the stars that are supposed to mark your HP are barely notable and they're moving; that's not good and really a pain to try figure out. I would advise you replace it with the one from the Flandre Scarlet v1.3 Skin or something similarly themed.
   
2. Your star2.png is blue while the rest of your map, skin and SB are more yellow-red-ish themed.. that doesn't really fit with each other, suggesting you use another colour there; quick-made example below.

star2 example, orange

screenshot of mentioned Flandre Skin

Jenny wrote:

eLtigreXXx wrote:

that's just.. ugly and inconsistent..
I'll work something out for you..

new version

oks added C:

Altered Version: http://puu.sh/7k2x6.osu
Changes: Arranged those three sliders to an even triangle (bent them a slight bit), adjusted spacings to sliders afterwards a bit to suit the new pattern and improve consistency (slight 0.07x spacing errors), added whistles where they were missing (2/1 patterning on each 1st/3rd, missing through half of the following part).

Make sure to get Flan's feedback on the changes before uploading this.
loliflan said I can make changes in their diff




Additional (aesthetical) concerns: all done

1. Your HP bar is very hard to deal with because it just features no colour whatsoever, basically making it unnoticed and overshined by your SB and the rest of the skin - I really have no idea how much HP I got left because it's just grey in grey and the stars that are supposed to mark your HP are barely notable and they're moving; that's not good and really a pain to try figure out. I would advise you replace it with the one from the Flandre Scarlet v1.3 Skin or something similarly themed.
   
2. Your star2.png is blue while the rest of your map, skin and SB are more yellow-red-ish themed.. that doesn't really fit with each other, suggesting you use another colour there; quick-made example below.

star2 example, orange

screenshot of mentioned Flandre Skin

Jenny wrote:

Just to be entirely safe, you should also PM MLGnom (as he's the creator of the Flandre skin) and inform him you're using his work in your map - that's only fair and, theoretically speaking, could prevent another unrank related to possible (but frankly, very improbable) copyright/property issues.

Lapis Aoki wrote:

-I don't really know about this but, maybe you should remove ''(PV Ver.)'' from the title.

Charles445 wrote:

Doing some very quick rankability checks by request

Timing needs fixing.all fixe

First offset is 84 (off by 15)
Second offset is 52377 (off by 13)

Right now your hitsounds are ridiculously quiet. There are parts where the music is blaring and the audio of the hitsounds is a mere 10%

You've silenced the hitnormal on S:C2 at the end of the map, so every circle or start of a slider needs to have a proper hitsound.
Lunatic is fine because it is a slider end.
Insane is fine because the circle has a finish hitsound applied to it.
Hard is unrankable because the circle at 01:30:550 (5) - has no hitsound other than a sound effect that comes much later.fixed

On Regou's Lunatic, why does the slider at 00:31:119 (1) - end on 1/6?

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi there a little mention (no kd)
Regou's Lunatic
The last spinner should be finish at 01:33:657 - (for fitting with other diff)

Niko-nyan wrote:

@Irreversible : (PV ver.) isn't necessary btw

edit : seems eltigrexxx using this video still necessary but i think it will be nice if you use PV ver

BeatofIke wrote:

[Hard]
00:28:655 (3) - This slider is off-grid. Please fix!

Lanturn wrote:

Grats!

Just wondering though sorry, for Easy diff.

00:05:390 (4,1) - is this jump intentional? It plays very very wrong when compared to the rest of your map >_<;

DakeDekaane wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

Grats!

Just wondering though sorry, for Easy diff.

00:05:390 (4,1) - is this jump intentional? It plays very very wrong when compared to the rest of your map >_<;

I'd agree on this one, it's a bit misleading x~x

Mania Vocaloid wrote:

eLtigreXXx... u r nice mapper D:

i just fail to add my ranked guest diff in ur first rank map.