cYsmix - Flan in Wonderland · forum

Rei Hakurei

Joined February 2011

Rei Hakurei 2012-11-15T09:10:16+00:00

hi~
m4m request via PM

[Timing]
i'm not sure about this song's timing.. because there's unsnapped red... well~ i think need more timing test
but from what i've got.. i'll try to find it more accurately later

1. Offset: 100ms	BPM: 147,00
2. Offset: 51.935ms	BPM: 136,00
3. Offset: 52.376ms	BPM: 125,00

[Hitsound]
- Soft Whistle 1 Replacement .. why don't try Drum Clap Addition instead? it gives similar sound instead replacing the nice Soft Whistle.. Also the Custom Soft Whistle gives no sound instead here, the hitsound is not really loud

[Easy]
i think it's fine for patterns
00:06:629 (1,2) - hitsound swap. because it feels about lower tone instead higher tone
00:32:752 (1) - (slider start)add whistle
00:36:017 (1) - ^
00:39:282 (1) - ^
01:15:404 (5) - move down 1 grid, as make some symmetry-ish with (3)
01:19:244 (1) - use circular here?

332,248,79244,6,0,P|404:216|476:256,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:26:924 (1) - (both slider edge) add whistle

[Normal]
00:16:425 (1) - no NC?
00:51:935 (2) - give one more repeat
01:04:844 (1,3) - remove whistle
01:07:724 (1) - (slider start) remove whistle
01:08:684 (2) - ^
01:08:684 (2,1,1,2,1) - ^
01:10:604 (2) - (slider end) remove clap

[Hard]
00:06:629 (1) - (slider 5th end) move the hitsound to the slider 4th end (Finish - No - No - Clap - No)
00:09:894 (1) - ^
00:10:915 (4) - add whist/clap here
00:24:792 (1,2) - remove whistle here because the (3,4) gives higher tone than this one
00:27:037 (5) - put hitsound at each slider end point no - clap - clap - no - clap
00:39:690 (3) - (slider 2nd end) add whistle
00:42:956 (2) - ^
00:42:547 (1) - (slider start) add whistle
i think it's fine

[Lunatic]
> Too many NCs @_@
00:06:935 (4,5) - swap the whistle
00:07:241 (7) - add whistle
00:07:956 (3,4) - ^
00:13:160 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/1qpo2 oh my! it's two combo at same time
00:15:201 (5) - why not move the haste green timing here?
01:29:684 (5) - give this object haste green timing (2x) it more fits because there's a 1/8 between 01:29:684 - 01:29:804

[EXTRA]
> This one is a bit hitsoundless maybe?
00:15:201 (10) - (slider 2nd-8th end) add whistle
00:25:609 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:51:935 (9) - give whistle to slider and remove the whistle at the end of slider to make similar effect with the song
00:52:844 - giving this part soft default is the best for me till certain time.. as default soft whistle here would work well

sub mod here

00:53:804 (4,5) - add whistle
00:54:284 (1) - remove NC, to make slow part as draining part
00:54:284 (1,2) - add whistle at nearest slider end between both sliders [ (1)'s slider end + (2)'s slider start ]
00:55:724 (5) - add whistle
00:55:964 (1) - (slider start) ^
00:56:444 (2,3) - nearest part add whistle [ (2)'s slider end + (3) ]
00:57:164 (1) - previous combo is too short imo, how about removing the NC?
00:58:124 (1) - ^
00:57:644 (4,5) - add whistle
(if you keep the whistling till 00:59:084 it could make better ^^)
00:59:084 (1) - (slider end) add whistle
01:00:044 (1) - ^
01:01:004 (3) - (slider 2nd end) add whistle
01:04:844 (3) - ^
01:02:204 (4,5) - add whistle [ (4)'s slider 3rd end + (5) ]
01:02:924 (6,7) - add whistle [ (6)'s slider 3rd end + (7) ]
01:04:364 (2) - (slider start) add whistle
01:06:284 (6,7) - add whistle
01:07:244 (10,11) - ^

as the map is good enough for me so i decided to see if the hitsounding is similar or not~
GL ^^

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-11-15T14:54:34+00:00

Rei_Fan49 wrote:
[Normal]
00:16:425 (1) - no NC? I think 00:16:017 (3) and this spinner should be separated.
00:51:935 (2) - give one more repeat The sound I wanted to follow ends at 00:52:139.
01:04:844 (1,3) - remove whistle Hm, why?
01:07:724 (1) - (slider start) remove whistle The accent is here. The whistle sounds natural for me.
01:08:684 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:684 (2,1,1,2,1) - ^ ^
01:10:604 (2) - (slider end) remove clap In fact, there is no clap:P

Hmm, sorry no change, but thank you for modding, Rei-san.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-11-15T17:35:09+00:00

Rei_Fan49 wrote:
hi~
m4m request via PM

[Timing]
i'm not sure about this song's timing.. because there's unsnapped red... well~ i think need more timing test
but from what i've got.. i'll try to find it more accurately later
1. Offset: 100ms	BPM: 147,00 ← all dif
2. Offset: 51.935ms	BPM: 136,00 
3. Offset: 52.376ms	BPM: 125,00
[Hitsound]
- Soft Whistle 1 Replacement .. why don't try Drum Clap Addition instead? it gives similar sound instead replacing the nice Soft Whistle.. Also the Custom Soft Whistle gives no sound instead here, the hitsound is not really loud

[Easy] all done
i think it's fine for patterns
00:06:629 (1,2) - hitsound swap. because it feels about lower tone instead higher tone
00:32:752 (1) - (slider start)add whistle
00:36:017 (1) - ^
00:39:282 (1) - ^
01:15:404 (5) - move down 1 grid, as make some symmetry-ish with (3)
01:19:244 (1) - use circular here?
332,248,79244,6,0,P|404:216|476:256,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:26:924 (1) - (both slider edge) add whistle

[Hard]
00:06:629 (1) - (slider 5th end) move the hitsound to the slider 4th end (Finish - No - No - Clap - No)
00:09:894 (1) - ^
00:10:915 (4) - add whist/clap here ok
00:24:792 (1,2) - remove whistle here because the (3,4) gives higher tone than this one ok
00:27:037 (5) - put hitsound at each slider end point no - clap - clap - no - clap ok
00:39:690 (3) - (slider 2nd end) add whistle ok
00:42:956 (2) - ^ ok
00:42:547 (1) - (slider start) add whistle ok
i think it's fine

as the map is good enough for me so i decided to see if the hitsounding is similar or not~
GL ^^

Last edited by KokoroStudiox3 2012-11-15T17:36:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-11-15T17:35:58+00:00

thanks

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-11-17T02:27:39+00:00

Tenshichan wrote:
M4M From my queue~

[Regou's Lunatic]

00:12:956 (5,6) - It doesn't look very well how they are stacked, maybe from the other side? D:
00:25:201 (2,3) - CTRL + J on both to use whole playfield? Nope, it would be difficult to click 00:26:222 (1) -
00:31:629 (2,3,4) - Move all of them 2 grid right (look better ) Ok :3
01:18:804 (10) - Not exactly stacked under the slider Opps, fixed
01:29:724 (5) - ^ Snapped wronly, this is actually 1/6, snapping it to 1/4 make this looks weird, fixed
nice diff

The song was awesome and I had a lot of fun modding this map! This should be ranked asap ^w^ Good luck!

BeatofIke wrote:
Sorry for Delay! Request from my modding queue!

[Regou's Lunatic]
00:51:527 (5,6,7,8) - Not a perfect square. Trying to fix this ;__;

Good Map! Almost ready for bubble. No Kudosu please!

[Lunatic]
> Too many NCs @_@ LOL what
00:06:935 (4,5) - swap the whistle Okay
00:07:241 (7) - add whistle Nope, don't like it
00:07:956 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:13:160 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/1qpo2 oh my! it's two combo at same time buged, fixed. The first one is a 2.0x slider
00:15:201 (5) - why not move the haste green timing here? no thanks
01:29:684 (5) - give this object haste green timing (2x) it more fits because there's a 1/8 between 01:29:684 - 01:29:804 ^

Thanks!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-11-17T02:36:59+00:00

update

Dark Fang

1,981 posts

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2012-11-25T07:43:38+00:00

hi

[General]

nothing

[Easy]

00:16:426 (1) - note symmetry. why don't you try make symmetry?

144,212,16426,6,0,B|192:232|220:200|220:200|256:216|292:200|292:200|320:232|368:212,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:20:100 (1) - if you change by above code, move to (368,212) and adjust DS next notes
00:39:283 (1) - same as 00:16:426 (1) -

264,180,39283,6,0,B|216:180|184:160|184:160|148:172|112:160|112:160|80:180|32:180,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:42:140 (3) - 1 grid down
00:42:957 (1) - move to (276,344)
00:44:181 (2) - 1 grid left and adjust next notes
01:08:684 (1) - move to (400,200), 4th point of slider move to (292,244) and adjust next notes. cuz symmetry with 01:06:764 (4) -
01:18:284 (3) - keep DS 1.10x

[728's Normal]

00:05:814 (2) - use clipboard with 00:04:997 (1) - and Ctrl + H and + G pls.
00:14:793 (1) - 1 grid left
00:16:018 (3) - try make triangle with 00:14:793 (1,2) -
00:50:304 (2) - why don't you stack with 00:47:446 (1) - and adjust other notes
01:07:724 (1) - last point of slider put on (264,64) pls
01:09:644 (1) - like 01:07:724 (1) -

[Hard]

00:02:140 (1) - move to (420,200) and 00:03:773 (1) - stack with this?
00:46:630 - ~ i think clap is awkward for this part. if you want use clap 00:47:446 (4) - remove clap at start of slider . and use that rhythm. IMO
01:04:604 (5,1) - move to (268,268)

[Regou's Lunatic]

00:21:732 (3) - move to (212,168)
00:47:855 (4) - move to (136,108) and 00:48:059 (5) - (148,208)
00:51:528 (5,6,7,8,9) - why don't you use like this? just suggestion

196,72,51528,1,2,0:0:0
136,252,51732,1,0,0:0:0
316,312,51936,1,10,0:0:0
376,132,52140,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,52364,1,0,0:0:0

00:55:964 (6) - use distance 1.2x and 00:56:204 (1) - 1 grid down
00:56:924 - add a note?
01:29:684 (5) - resnap
awesome good map <3

[DJ LoliFlan]

00:57:884 (5) - move to (280,180) and 00:58:844 (5) - move to (232,128) i think that's good than now
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:

SPOILER

01:00:084 -

nothing special awesome map xD

sorry for my poor mod
Have a nice day

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-11-25T17:34:44+00:00

my diff done

thanks

Flanster

5,938 posts

Joined August 2010

Flanster 2012-11-25T18:17:38+00:00

Tenshichan

[DJ LoliFlan]

00:57:924 (5) - Move to x:276 y:184 looks good to DS, applied
00:58:884 (5) - ^ uuuuh, thats a no, too jumpy
01:00:084 - Unneeded Green line removed
01:27:684 (5) - Perhaps make an exact horizontal symmetry to (1) here nah...

Dark Fang

[DJ LoliFlan]

00:57:884 (5) - move to (280,180) and 00:58:844 (5) - move to (232,128) i think that's good than now not applied, earlier mod was better
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:

SPOILER

01:00:084 - fixed on earlier mods

KokoroStudiox3

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Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-11-25T18:24:20+00:00

update

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-11-26T06:59:22+00:00

SPOILER

Dark Fang wrote:
[728's Normal]

00:05:814 (2) - use clipboard with 00:04:997 (1) - and Ctrl + H and + G pls.
00:14:793 (1) - 1 grid left
00:16:018 (3) - try make triangle with 00:14:793 (1,2) -
00:50:304 (2) - why don't you stack with 00:47:446 (1) - and adjust other notes
01:07:724 (1) - last point of slider put on (264,64) pls
01:09:644 (1) - like 01:07:724 (1) -

~~It's meh~~ all done

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: PV Flan in Wonderland.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 39283
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 60080,75440
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Flan in Wonderland (PV Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Flan in Wonderland (PV Ver.)
Artist:cYsmix
ArtistUnicode:cYsmix
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:728's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:Lolicore Flandre h-728 728  Scarlet Sisters flan chan Regou U.N. Owen was her
BeatmapID:185245
BeatmapSetID:61848

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Flan in Wonderland.flv"
0,0,"BG.png"
//Break Periods
2,52340,58169
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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60044,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
67484,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
90764,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


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Combo3 : 255,147,255
Combo4 : 255,111,111
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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Low

2,006 posts

Joined July 2011

Low 2012-11-27T22:24:16+00:00

General

- Nothing's wrong here. I like the song choice.

Easy

00:08:263 (3) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider. It gives it a weird sounding noise.
00:23:365 (4) - This is slightly overlapping the previous slider.
01:02:924 (5) - This slider could be improved to blanket the previous circle. Try something like this.
- This difficulty is very well made with nice patterns and sliders in my opinion.

728's Normal

00:31:120 (1) - This overlaps with 00:32:753 (1) in a rather ugly way. Perhaps you could tilt 00:32:753 (1) a bit so that they didn't overlap so much.
00:51:936 (2) - Drag the breaks start at the end of this note to where the red line is. It looks neat and follows the rhythm in game.

Hard

00:13:161 (4,1) - I like how the super fast slider stream starts with the end of (4). It gives a nice rhythm and spice to the map.
- I really have no complaints. This flows so well.

Regou's Lunatic

00:07:855 (2) - At first, I couldn't tell that this was in 1/4 from the previous slider. Try un-stacking it to give players the idea that it's in 1/4 easily.
01:30:284 (7) - You should add a quiet spinner to the end of this slider to be consistent with the other difficulties.

DJ LoliFlan

No complaints.

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-11-28T20:12:18+00:00

Thx Jacob for your modding, all done :3

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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-11-29T05:30:13+00:00

all done thanks

update

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2012-12-01T07:39:42+00:00

Hi, eLtigreXXx

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod delay.)

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

Fine

Easy

00:30:304 (4,5) - Spacing is close. Please increase the spacing them.
00:39:283 (1,2) - Spacing is far. Please reduce the spacing them.

728's Normal

00:15:202 (2,3) - Move (2) to right 1 grid, then move (3) to up 1 grid. It would be more beautiful.
00:36:108 (1) - Move to down 1 grid.
01:30:764 (1) - Spinner end at 01:35:084? Order to the same as other diff.

Hard

01:29:324 (3) - Move it to down 1 grid. Order to the symmetry of (1).

Regou's Lunatic

00:00:508 (1,2) - Move (2) to stack with (1), or increase the spacing between those.
00:17:242 (5) - It looks weird. I think that add NC here be better.
00:19:691 (1) - Move to right 1 grid.
00:25:610 (3) - Try move to somewhere else that not here, would be better.
01:10:724 (6) - The note is weird for me. Maybe remove it imo.
01:30:764 - Add a circle, or add spinner to same as other diff?

DJ LoliFlan

00:23:773 - I hear rhythm on this. So you should add a circle here.
00:37:651 (5) - Add NC?

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-12-01T16:01:23+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:
728's Normal
00:15:202 (2,3) - Move (2) to right 1 grid, then move (3) to up 1 grid. It would be more beautiful.Oops I forgot to fix this.
00:36:108 (1) - Move to down 1 grid.ok
01:30:764 (1) - Spinner end at 01:35:084? Order to the same as other diff.ok

Thanks for modding Nichiyouki.

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2957,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
3365,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
3773,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
4181,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
4589,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
4997,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
5406,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
6222,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
12548,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
13161,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
13569,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
16018,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
21324,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
24793,-100,4,2,0,25,0,0
26222,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
32753,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
36018,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
39283,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
45814,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
51936,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
52344,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
52364,480,4,2,1,5,1,0
60044,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
67484,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
90764,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,151
Combo2 : 100,72,253
Combo3 : 255,147,255
Combo4 : 255,111,111
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

[HitObjects]
116,60,508,2,0,B|164:56|164:56|180:64|180:64|228:60,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,64,1324,1,0,0:0:0
372,152,1732,6,0,B|324:156|324:156|308:148|308:148|260:152,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,152,2548,1,2,0:0:0
64,152,2957,1,0,0:0:0
112,240,3365,6,0,B|208:296,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
305,295,4181,2,0,B|400:239,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,140,4997,6,0,B|304:84,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
207,84,5814,2,0,B|112:140,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,240,6630,6,0,B|108:276|108:276|116:284|116:284|112:320,2,82.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,208,7446,2,0,B|164:188|200:176|236:188|248:208,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,296,8263,6,0,B|212:316|248:328|284:316|296:296,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,208,9079,1,2,0:0:0
392,208,9283,2,0,B|448:208,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,108,9895,6,0,B|452:72|452:72|444:64|444:64|448:28,2,82.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,143,10712,2,0,B|400:163|364:175|328:163|316:143,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,92,11528,6,0,B|196:88|196:88|188:96|188:96|152:92,2,82.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,56,12344,2,0,B|280:36|316:24|352:36|364:56,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,144,13161,5,2,0:0:0
372,224,13569,2,0,B|328:264|272:276|216:264|172:224,1,220,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,144,14793,5,0,0:0:0
172,60,15202,2,0,B|199:11,2,55,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,144,16018,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,16426,12,4,18875,0:0:0
356,272,19691,6,0,B|312:312|256:324|200:312|156:272,2,220,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,172,21732,5,8,0:0:0
256,208,22140,1,2,0:0:0
164,172,22548,1,8,0:0:0
156,72,22957,6,0,B|200:32|256:20|312:32|356:72,2,220,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,116,24793,6,0,B|211:152|211:152|228:158|228:158|259:195,3,110,0|2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,241,26222,6,0,B|224:257|176:265|128:257|96:241,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
60,206,27038,2,0,B|60:330,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,336,27855,6,0,B|188:352|236:360|284:352|316:336,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
351,301,28671,2,0,B|435:301,2,82.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,266,29487,6,0,B|300:234|292:186|300:138|316:106,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
351,70,30304,2,0,B|239:70,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,164,31120,6,0,B|248:180|296:188|344:180|376:164,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
425,163,31936,2,0,B|425:255,2,82.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
425,113,32753,6,0,B|424:89|399:61|362:53|341:64,2,110,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,164,33977,1,8,0:0:0
336,265,34385,6,0,B|315:276|278:268|253:240|252:217,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,164,35610,1,8,0:0:0
424,116,36018,6,0,B|443:127|455:163|444:199|424:211,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,164,37242,1,8,0:0:0
250,214,37651,6,0,B|229:201|217:165|229:129|249:116,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,164,38875,1,8,0:0:0
336,64,39283,6,0,B|288:68|288:68|272:60|272:60|224:64,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,144,40100,2,0,B|228:144,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,144,40508,1,8,0:0:0
372,144,40916,6,0,B|376:192|376:192|368:208|368:208|372:256,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,252,41732,2,0,B|212:252,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,252,42140,1,8,0:0:0
168,152,42548,6,0,B|164:104|164:104|172:88|172:88|168:40,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,28,43365,2,0,B|282:82,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
331,81,43773,2,0,B|345:135,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
345,183,44181,6,0,B|393:179|393:179|409:187|409:187|457:183,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,282,44997,2,0,B|397:296,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
363,331,45406,2,0,B|308:316,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
262,318,45814,6,0,B|250:338|214:350|178:338|166:318,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
214,230,47038,1,8,0:0:0
214,182,47242,1,0,0:0:0
214,134,47446,6,0,B|226:114|262:102|298:114|310:134,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
114,134,48671,1,8,0:0:0
166,218,49079,6,0,B|178:238|214:250|250:238|262:218,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
214,134,50304,1,8,0:0:0
262,134,50508,1,0,0:0:0
310,134,50712,6,0,B|330:146|342:182|330:218|310:230,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
222,178,51936,2,0,B|167:178,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,60044,12,2,63884,0:0:0
352,92,64844,5,2,0:0:0
352,292,65804,1,2,0:0:0
156,292,66764,1,2,0:0:0
156,192,67244,1,2,0:0:0
156,92,67724,6,0,B|264:64,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,64,68684,2,0,B|468:92,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
468,192,69644,6,0,B|360:220,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,220,70604,2,0,B|157:191,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,96,71564,6,0,B|231:125,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,32,72524,2,0,B|306:60,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,128,73484,6,0,B|273:156,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
273,254,74444,2,0,B|379:282,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
478,282,75404,6,0,B|478:378,2,82.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
478,234,76364,2,0,B|430:186|382:234,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
282,230,77324,6,0,B|282:147,2,82.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
282,279,78284,2,0,B|234:327|186:279,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
86,279,79244,6,0,B|70:221,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
76,176,79724,1,0,0:0:0
71,126,79964,2,0,B|85:71,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,72,80684,1,8,0:0:0
283,72,81164,6,0,B|339:72,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
373,107,81644,1,0,0:0:0
408,142,81884,2,0,B|408:198,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
410,298,82604,1,8,0:0:0
311,298,83084,6,0,B|255:298,2,55,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
346,262,83804,1,2,0:0:0
310,226,84044,2,0,B|262:178|214:226,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
114,225,85004,6,0,B|114:297,2,55,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
78,189,85724,1,2,0:0:0
113,153,85964,2,0,B|161:105|209:153,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,152,86924,6,0,B|364:152,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
398,187,87404,2,0,B|454:187,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,222,87884,2,0,B|536:270|488:318,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,317,88844,6,0,B|388:261,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,226,89324,2,0,B|296:226,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,192,90764,12,0,95084,0:0:0

MoodyRPG

2,754 posts

Joined August 2010

MoodyRPG 2012-12-02T19:49:27+00:00

Blurrrp

General

• El BG es algo provocador por asi decirlo, podrias buscar algo mejor mas relacionado con Touhou

Easy

- 01:15:404 (5) - Para seguir tu patron de combos, añade uno aqui y remuevelo de aca 01:16:364
- 01:25:964 (4) - Como el puush esta malo xD, queria hacerte la siguiente sugerencia, porque no alineas esta nota con (2)?

728's Normal

- 00:21:732 (1) - In my opinion, you should to remove this new combo to follow your combo pattern
- 00:24:793 (1) - Same ^

Hard

- 01:09:644 (5) - Añade un new combo aqui y remuevelo de aca 01:10:604

Regou's Lunatic

-- Good stuff

DJ LoliFlan

- 00:37:651 (5) - New combo to follow your combo pattern

<3

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-12-02T21:53:40+00:00

todo lo mío echo :3
gracias c:

estar ebuscando otro bg

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-12-03T02:15:44+00:00

MoodyRPG wrote:
728's Normal
- 00:21:732 (1) - In my opinion, you should to remove this new combo to follow your combo pattern Hm.. I tried to put NC on each first downbeats, so I don't think this breaks my pattern.
- 00:24:793 (1) - Same ^

thanks for modding.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-12-03T04:04:47+00:00

change BG
redowload

Eirene

577 posts

Joined December 2008

Eirene 2012-12-19T02:16:29+00:00

Well... I didn't see anything bad in the mapset

[Regou's Lunatic]
01:09:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - don't really like the jump to between (4) and (5), the cursor movement doesn't feel cool...not sur how to fix this, maybe swap 1 with 2 and 3 with 4 or something like this ?

I guess that's all ._.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-12-19T04:22:27+00:00

thanks Eirene

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2012-12-20T23:29:42+00:00

Hi~

Sorry for taking too long after your request, but it's mod time /o/

[General]
In my opinion, all diffs should begin in 00:01:120 or 00:01:324, the bass sound before is very, very, very~ bassy? (I had to put my headphones to listen 00:00:100 - 00:01:120 )

Tags:Lolicore Flandre h-728 728  Scarlet Sisters flan chan Regou U.N. Owen was her

You have a double space between "728" and "Scarlet" tags, fix. Maybe add "Loliflan" in tags too. Btw, why is "chan" in tags D:

[728's Normal]
00:15:202 (2) - This gets slightly covered by the HP bar, move the last node a bit down.

[Hard]
00:06:630 (1) - You can make the parts where you use this kind of slider more fun, in my opinion, try this.

This apply for all similar sliders you use in this diff, (00:09:895 (1), 00:27:038 (5) , 00:28:671 (5) , 00:30:304 (5) , 00:31:936 (6) )

[DJ Loliflan]
01:10:964 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe curve this a bit more.
That laugh in the end it's scary >->

That's all from my part, short mod as this is a nice mapset, good luck /o/

B2IN

B2IN 2012-12-22T01:23:11+00:00

Hi~ eLtigreXXx :3
from my q

[General]
fine
[728's Normal]
fine
[Hard]
00:10:508 (2) - might be confusing. remove , then end the 00:09:895 (1) note till 00:10:304.
00:11:018 (5) - i recommend you to remove note.
[Regou's Lunatic]
00:21:732 (3) - not straight with 00:21:324 (1,2) . move to x208 y164

[DJ LoliFlan]
00:14:385 (6) - re-spacing. x304 y68 ?
01:06:044 (2,3,4) - should make same distance.
01:09:164 (4) - move x368 y:192 will better blanket with 01:08:444 (3)
01:10:364 (1) - if follow above suggestion, re-spacing.

that's all ~
Gl~

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-12-22T03:30:42+00:00

Fixed some, thanks!

http://puu.sh/1DMnY

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2012-12-22T04:13:38+00:00

done

update

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-12-22T14:31:25+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
[728's Normal]
00:15:202 (2) - This gets slightly covered by the HP bar, move the last node a bit down. Actually I don't think it interfere with the game-play so much.

Thanks for modding.

Flanster

5,938 posts

Joined August 2010

Flanster 2013-03-03T21:29:18+00:00

dead?

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-04-25T02:30:38+00:00

Hi ><
m4m

[Easy]

00:39:275 (1) - move the first red point (from left) to the left 1 grid

[728's Normal]

00:37:643 (1) - move to 252|212
00:39:275 (1) - move tail to to 224|60
00:51:928 (2) - repeat this? maybe better >_>

[Hard]

00:35:398 (7) - NC?
00:17:234 (3) - move to x:59
*2 option here*
00:23:765 (3) - move down 2 grid OR
00:24:173 (4) - move up 2 grid

00:30:908 (1) - remove NC here and NC at 00:31:112 (2) to follow the old one
00:33:153 (2) - move up 1-2 grid
00:37:643 (3) - right 1 grid
00:51:826 (8) - move to x:389
00:56:684 (2) - left 1 grid
01:13:964 (4) - right 1 grid
01:24:524 (7) - NC here and reomve NC the next note

[Regou's Lunatic]

00:16:010 (1,1) - I think people probably can't play this. look at auto's cursor >_>
00:34:581 (4,2) - up 2 grid
00:43:153 (2) - down 2 grid would be great
00:49:071 (1) - move tail down 3 grid or 264|264
01:27:404 (2) - left 1 grid

[DJ LoliFlan]

01:03:884 (6) - move center to 224|240 and move tail to 204|272
01:04:844 (1) - left 1 grid and down 1 grid
01:22:364 (8,9,10) - move them right 3 grid

very good map good song
all diff are good OMG why this not rank

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2013-04-25T06:25:41+00:00

.

Last edited by KokoroStudiox3 2013-04-25T17:48:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2013-04-25T06:37:24+00:00

Lolicore Flandre wrote:
dead?

I will continue this

all done
thaks P A N

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2013-04-28T03:28:36+00:00

Sorry for late mod~~

[Hard]

01:30:764 (1) - Change Hitsound S:default to S:2

[728's normal]

00:52:364 - i think Don't need to Inherited Point 00:52:336.and this point is unsnap! so delete green point. and you need to expand breaktime? if you ok, please expand this unsnaped breaktime
01:30:764 (1) - same Hard Diff ; Change Hitsound S:default to S:2

[Easy]

00:52:604 - you need to expand breaktime? (same to 728's normal)
01:02:924 (5) - 2nd point 1 grid down, 3rd red point 1 grid down, 4th point 1 grid down and 1grid right
01:30:764 (1) - Same~

sorry it's all...

sorry for late mod and short mod
take my star~~
Good LUCK for Rank!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2013-04-28T23:15:19+00:00

hard easy all done

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-04-30T03:02:33+00:00

hey

General
- Getting a custom slider ball (sliderb0.png...sliderb9.png) would complete the skin

- Change TitleUnicode to 不思議の国のフラン (PV Ver.)

Easy
00:29:887 (3) - Clap
00:32:745 (1) - ^ on tail
00:34:785 (4) - ^
00:36:010 (1) - ^ on tail
00:38:051 (4) - ^
01:15:404 (1) - ^ on tail
very nice

728's Normal
00:01:724 (1,3) - Claps on these? i hear them in the bgm
00:13:153 (1) - NC, delete NC on next note to mark the change in tone
00:51:928 (2) - maybe move this up here so the pattern's not so clustered https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/730024
01:23:084 (1) - Clap on tail
01:25:004 (1) - ^
01:27:404 (2) - clap on head
01:29:324 (2) - ^

Hard
00:10:500 - Add note, stay consistent with 00:07:234 (2) -
00:51:112 (6) - Whistle on head

Regou's Lunatic
00:00:908 (2) - NC, change in rhythm vs. spacing
00:39:275 (1) - Finish on head sounds nice
00:52:844 (1) - can't have silent notes, try at least 10% for this little section; and make sure the other notes are audible

DJ LoliFlan
00:59:084 (1) - Delete NC, i feel like it's part of the same stanza as the pink combo
01:00:044 (3) - then NC here
01:01:004 (1) - Delete NC for similar reason above
01:03:884 (6) - NC
01:04:844 (1) - Delete nc
01:11:564 (6) - NC, delete NC on 01:12:284 (1) -
01:15:404 (1,2,3) - Consider orienting these another way to be safe i guess, the hitbursts from (1,2) almost cover the reverse of the following notes?
01:30:524 (2) - holy shit was that a giggle i just heard

call me back ^^

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2013-04-30T03:33:59+00:00

added slider ball and change title
easy normal hard all done
thanks

Flanster

5,938 posts

Joined August 2010

Flanster 2013-04-30T03:50:33+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
DJ LoliFlan
00:59:084 (1) - Delete NC, i feel like it's part of the same stanza as the pink combo
01:00:044 (3) - then NC here
01:01:004 (1) - Delete NC for similar reason above
01:03:884 (6) - NC
01:04:844 (1) - Delete nc
01:11:564 (6) - NC, delete NC on 01:12:284 (1) -
All applied.
01:15:404 (1,2,3) - Consider orienting these another way to be safe i guess, the hitbursts from (1,2) almost cover the reverse of the following notes?
yeah it can be changed, done.
01:30:524 (2) - holy shit was that a giggle i just heard
Yes it was.

call me back ^^