Mr Color wrote:

Random mod cause it's the only interesting map I could find atm

[Another]
00:06:980 (1) - Ctrl-G this? Makes it more obvious that it isn't 1/4 with the previous circle and leads right into the second slider. Ya sure, pattern looks cooler too.
00:51:180 - It seems to me that a spinner would be better here. I like the sliders on the vocals more tbh
01:02:280 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These patterns could be confused as all spaced in 1/4. Just thought I'd let you know. I'll keep for now. I think the 1st 2 are okay but you might be right about 01:03:080 (1,2) although I haven't seen too many stumble on it. I'll see if I can come up with a diff pattern I like, if so I'll try changing.
01:21:580 (1) - Once again I think a spinner is more appropriate.Seems too short to place a spinner.
This is so good. tyy

[31's Taiko] Sorry if the mod sucks, I'm still new to this
00:17:080 (106) - move this back 1/4?
00:22:480 (145) - move this back 1/4 and add a d to 00:22:580
00:28:280 (192) - move this back 1/4?
00:29:080 - Add a d here
00:41:480 - ^
00:43:080 - ^
01:02:280 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139) - I think ddk ddk ddk for these sound better
01:03:980 - Add a denden here?
01:11:180 - Add a ddk here
01:46:380 - ^

[Normal]
00:25:780 (2,3) - I see the appeal, but I doubt this will get past on a Normal.
00:52:780 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - There's a problem with the SV and these. Their end isn't snapped to anything.
01:04:780 (3) - ^
...Oh, looks like this isn't finished yet. Alright. Disregard this I guess?

Rest of the map is great so far. Can't wait for the Hyper.make me a good one T_T

Cilvery wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:780 - how about adding a note here. it’s just me though.

[Hyper]
01:21:980 (2) - stack the start of 01:20:880 (4) - with the one of this slider.

01:53:280 (3) - it’d be nice if you make a repeat slider with 1/4 beat to follow the accentuated sound of drum on 01:53:380 - .


[Another]
00:32:580 (3,4,5) - it’s a bit hard for me to play. I suggest moving these objects like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1098330

nothing else to say. good luck!

1. Single Oni not allowed anymore. Since your map was submitted after this rule got changed you must add Muzukashii to your mapset
2. Add Mapper 31 to tags
3. Taiko have unsnapped notes

1. 00:05:980 (1) - Remove new combo
2. 00:10:380 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - How about raise spacing a bit here to make it more challenging? Something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:12:180 (2,3) - Just mirrored sliders may looks boring, try to curve them a bit? Something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:22:380 (3) - I guess you can mute slidertick too since there are no any musical cues here
5. 01:52:830 (4,5) - Kinda unexpected. You have no any 1/8 triples in map, and adding only one in the near end with OD9 may be too tricky. Try to replace with short 1/8 slider.

1. 01:22:380 (3) - Same as at Another
2. 01:28:180 (1,2,3) - How about replace it with 1/4 reverse-slider? Should be better with this OD for a Hyper diff.
3. 01:30:080 (3,4) - Might be hard to catch due to not predictable rhythm. Having short 1/4 slider instead would solve this problem.
4. 01:35:980 (1) - Remove NC
5. 01:37:680 (1) - Add whistle like you did on Another?

1. 00:27:980 (3,4,5) - Replace it with 1/2 reverse-slider to make it more beginners-friendly?
2. 00:52:780 - As much as this perfectly works in this part i must say that even such little speed-ups might be a bit hard for a Normal, consider remove them
3. 00:57:580 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
4. 01:02:380 (1,2) - Very disagree with such cruel jump on Normal, reduse it please
5. 01:04:780 (3) - I would not recommend begin new part of music with sliderends since it is passive hitobject and don't require hitting. Try something like this to follow music better:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:05:980 (3,4,1,2) - Don't jump in Normal please
7. 01:12:880 (3,1) - ^
8. 01:14:680 (5,1) - ^
9. 01:19:280 (2,1) - Why there are sudden x1.00 spacing after x1.20 part?
10. 01:30:180 (4,5,6) - This part is very hard to catch due to unexpectable rhythm - replace it with 1/2 reverse-slider please
11. 01:41:680 (4,1) - Jump again

1. 00:45:380 (1) - Raise volume here a bit please, start of slider is almost silenced
2. 00:53:180 (2) - NC?

Kodora wrote:

sorry for delay > >

[General]

1. Single Oni not allowed anymore. Since your map was submitted after this rule got changed you must add Muzukashii to your mapset
2. Add Mapper 31 to tags
3. Taiko have unsnapped notes
   
   removed taiko
   

[Another]

*AR9 OD9 <3 Maybe try to reduse HP Drain by 1 tick to make it more friendly for HR players

1. 00:05:980 (1) - Remove new combo gunna keep for aesthetic reasons
2. 00:10:380 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - How about raise spacing a bit here to make it more challenging? Something like this: already does, just not by as much as your suggestion, will keep as is
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:12:180 (2,3) - Just mirrored sliders may looks boring, try to curve them a bit? Something like this: don't see any real reason to change
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:22:380 (3) - I guess you can mute slidertick too since there are no any musical cues here slider tick is fine I think, goes with the start of the cutoff of the slow-down noise
5. 01:52:830 (4,5) - Kinda unexpected. You have no any 1/8 triples in map, and adding only one in the near end with OD9 may be too tricky. Try to replace with short 1/8 slider. I think it's fine. If there were more obvious 1/8 triples in the map I would've mapped those too.

Awesome stuff

[Hyper]

*Raise HP Drain by 1 tick for better difficulty spread

1. 01:22:380 (3) - Same as at Another
2. 01:28:180 (1,2,3) - How about replace it with 1/4 reverse-slider? Should be better with this OD for a Hyper diff. its OD7 on a hyper, think its okay
3. 01:30:080 (3,4) - Might be hard to catch due to not predictable rhythm. Having short 1/4 slider instead would solve this problem.
4. 01:35:980 (1) - Remove NC done
5. 01:37:680 (1) - Add whistle like you did on Another?done

[Normal]

*AR -1 & HP, OD +1 for better difficulty spread go with OD+1, -1 AR too slow

1. 00:27:980 (3,4,5) - Replace it with 1/2 reverse-slider to make it more beginners-friendly? dont see how its difficult
2. 00:52:780 - As much as this perfectly works in this part i must say that even such little speed-ups might be a bit hard for a Normal, consider remove them
3. 00:57:580 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
4. 01:02:380 (1,2) - Very disagree with such cruel jump on Normal, reduse it please
5. 01:04:780 (3) - I would not recommend begin new part of music with sliderends since it is passive hitobject and don't require hitting. Try something like this to follow music better: what? the sliderend is the end of the last part of the music, new rhythmn starts on 01:05:580 (1) -
   
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:05:980 (3,4,1,2) - Don't jump in Normal please
7. 01:12:880 (3,1) - ^
8. 01:14:680 (5,1) - ^
9. 01:19:280 (2,1) - Why there are sudden x1.00 spacing after x1.20 part?
   
   I dont understand the last few mods? Where is the jump? Sudden 1.00 spacing? this whole section is 1.2
10. 01:30:180 (4,5,6) - This part is very hard to catch due to unexpectable rhythm - replace it with 1/2 reverse-slider please
11. 01:41:680 (4,1) - Jump again

[Beginner]

1. 00:45:380 (1) - Raise volume here a bit please, start of slider is almost silenced
2. 00:53:180 (2) - NC?

Awesome map. Good luck with ranking!