GeneralThis song is worth a full mapset. Lunatic isn't really an approval level map. There's no sense not including a few extra difficulties.
Lunatic00:23:926 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/4th stacks used in this way plays badly for me.
00:26:326 (8,1) - Spacing?
00:26:826 (2) - Please reduce by 1/4th.
00:27:626 (4,5) - This is not a correct placement and is overmapped.
00:57:426 (5,6,7) - I think it sounds better like this.
http://puu.sh/1xfcL01:02:426 (4,5,6,7,8) - Spaced too far/looks ugly. I suggest staying with your compressed technique. may not super tight compression, but enough that the spacing doesn't look bad. Personally I hate placing 5 note streams. Perhaps you could get a much nicer pattern without this 01:02:726 (7) -
01:03:226 (1,2,3) - Same sloppy kind of rhythm I felt at 57 seconds.
01:06:426 (4,5,1) - Sloppy rhythm, skips over a white tick for a much more inaudible sound, the end of it kills all sense of the rhythm for me. Not good.
01:07:226 (2) - Next combo should be here instead.
01:09:626 (3,4,5,6) - Plays alright, sounds bad.
01:36:826 (1,2) - Curves don't match.
03:07:626 (5,6,7,8,9) - Eh doesn't look great. I hate 5 note streams.
03:22:726 (2) - Meh
03:30:026 (7,8) - Curve doesn't match exactly. If the alignment were fixed, it would be better.
03:53:026 (5) - Doesn't look right to me. Maybe symmetry would help.
04:05:626 (5,6,7) - Not sure about this transition.
04:15:226 (1,2,3,4) - Carries poor flow IMO.
04:16:826 (1,2,3) - Bad pattern.... you can do something much better here.
04:18:426 (5,6,7) - The form here is a bit sloppy looking IMO.
04:28:226 (2,3) - Jump is quite large for skipping to a blue tick like that. I suggest a more closer placement and increase the spacing here 04:28:526 (3,4) - to compensate. (I am aware this isn't the only time you did this, and the other times, it flowed poorly, but I feel this one doesn't need to be so large)
04:52:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Some of these spacings just look bad. Spacing shouldn't vary so much and in such a random way.
05:18:026 (2) - feels out of place to me, like it shouldn't be there or something about it doesn't sound right. Try repeating on 1/16th, it sounds better IMO.
05:52:826 (1,2,3,4) - Undermapped? Those repeat sliders pass over a lot of the beat through here. I suggest a more strenuous mapping of this. You can save the repeat sliders for a Hard mode.