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Heh, I wanted to help look into the details of this song (one of my favorites from teh kart games), but it looks like the nitpicks have already been picked. 
I would like to offer up one or two things though:
I don't know this for a fact, but I think you need to keep your timing/offsets on all of your difficulties consistent. One of my maps had been deemed unrankable because I accidently mad made the timing on one diff .04 faster than the rest. Just keep that in mind.
Hitsounds. For me, this can really get the magic going in a map. Be sure to apply a hitsound pattern that makes sense with the song (and is to your liking, of course). Have fun with it!
Like YoshiKart said, spacing is very important here. The distance snap tool is your friend! Don't feel as if you need to use it all the time though...it may be helpful to think that spacing should be consistent during same-color combos, whereas you may make distance jumps across different combo colors. This is in no way set in stone, but setting up personal guidelines may be helpful in the future!
Those are my two bits. Have fun with you first map!
I would like to offer up one or two things though:I don't know this for a fact, but I think you need to keep your timing/offsets on all of your difficulties consistent. One of my maps had been deemed unrankable because I accidently mad made the timing on one diff .04 faster than the rest. Just keep that in mind.
Hitsounds. For me, this can really get the magic going in a map. Be sure to apply a hitsound pattern that makes sense with the song (and is to your liking, of course). Have fun with it!
Like YoshiKart said, spacing is very important here. The distance snap tool is your friend! Don't feel as if you need to use it all the time though...it may be helpful to think that spacing should be consistent during same-color combos, whereas you may make distance jumps across different combo colors. This is in no way set in stone, but setting up personal guidelines may be helpful in the future!
Those are my two bits. Have fun with you first map!
Now I'm gonna get nitpicky on beat timing and such:
(Minor) Timeline errors:
EASY
00:22:82 (3) - Move to the red tick before it
00:56:33 (2) - Move to the blue tick before.
01:04:60 (2) - Same
01:06:67 (1) - Start should be at red tick before.
01:13:49 (1) - Start goes on the white tick before
NORMAL
00:56:12 (2) - Move to blue tick before it
01:04:60 (2) - Same
Mapping issues (open to discuss):
EASY
00:19:09 (7,8,9) - A como of 9 is quite rare for an Easy diff. Place a mark at 7, tops.
00:33:57 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Very hard for an Easy diff, may I suggest changing 2 to 4 into a slider?
00:37:30 (1,2,3,4) - Same goes.
01:08:32 (0) - Nothing here, or after the 2nd slider? Blasphemy!
NORMAL
Hmmm... This isn't really a Normal, it's more of a Hard, in my oninion..
00:29:64 (0) - Something's amiss here
00:33:57 (1,2,3,4,5,and so on and so on,5,6,7,8) - This is not suitable for a Normal. Either remap this part for a normal, or change the Difficulty name.
00:49:91 (4) - Why is this a slider?
01:06:67 (3) - This gets really dull
All in all, quite okay, just not that intuitive.
I dunno, it sounded perfect to me..YoshiKart wrote:
I may be off a bit on the offset by a couple ms.
(Minor) Timeline errors:
EASY
00:22:82 (3) - Move to the red tick before it
00:56:33 (2) - Move to the blue tick before.
01:04:60 (2) - Same
01:06:67 (1) - Start should be at red tick before.
01:13:49 (1) - Start goes on the white tick before
NORMAL
00:56:12 (2) - Move to blue tick before it
01:04:60 (2) - Same
Mapping issues (open to discuss):
EASY
00:19:09 (7,8,9) - A como of 9 is quite rare for an Easy diff. Place a mark at 7, tops.
00:33:57 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Very hard for an Easy diff, may I suggest changing 2 to 4 into a slider?
00:37:30 (1,2,3,4) - Same goes.
01:08:32 (0) - Nothing here, or after the 2nd slider? Blasphemy!
NORMAL
Hmmm... This isn't really a Normal, it's more of a Hard, in my oninion..
00:29:64 (0) - Something's amiss here
00:33:57 (1,2,3,4,5,and so on and so on,5,6,7,8) - This is not suitable for a Normal. Either remap this part for a normal, or change the Difficulty name.
00:49:91 (4) - Why is this a slider?
01:06:67 (3) - This gets really dull
All in all, quite okay, just not that intuitive.
Topic Starter
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There's a solution to everything:Karteler wrote:
Couldn't find anything good to use there. If you have any suggestions, just post. ^^
EASY:
01:06:46 (1) - Make this one return once
01:09:16 (1) - Place a slider on this white tick, going until the blue one, then returning, and ending near the long slider at 01:09:98. Then place a beat at 01:11:43 and at 01:11:65
NORMAL:
Split the large returning slider into various "single-ride" slider, if you get what I'm saying
Here are the times:01:06:67 - 01:07:50
01:07:91 - 01:08:74
01:09:16 - and so on. always one fourth in between the sliders.
I'm pretty fine with the EASY, and can see that in your type of difficulty, but the NORMAL is still bugging me. Feel free to place 2/4 in between sliders.
EDIT: found a minor mistake at 00:56:02 (2) - Place this on the blue tick AFTER the red one. I might've said "before", but it's after!
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You should change the topic title the next time you submit. 
Let me finish my difficulties. D:
Let me finish my difficulties. D:
The changes in the beatma were really useful ^^
Gratz, it's really getting perfect
Continue improving it.
Gratz, it's really getting perfect
Continue improving it.
After some minor changes it will be a great map. Ganbatte!
All I really found was one part on 100cc, so...
100cc:
00:33:88 (2) - Move 1/4 back, sounds better.
00:36:37 (6) - ^
00:37:71 (2) - ^
00:39:57 (6) - ^
50cc is fine to me. Those notes just need a slight moving because it feels weird otherwise.
Nice otherwise.
100cc:
00:33:88 (2) - Move 1/4 back, sounds better.
00:36:37 (6) - ^
00:37:71 (2) - ^
00:39:57 (6) - ^
50cc is fine to me. Those notes just need a slight moving because it feels weird otherwise.
Nice otherwise.
Topic Starter
Fixed what Ekaru said.
Thanks everyone for the feedback and for the support. =D
Thanks everyone for the feedback and for the support. =D
Let's mod this again.
50cc
00:08:75 (2,3) - I'm going to use this as a guideline for spacing. This is 0.5x distance snap at grid level 2. (View > Grid Level > 2)
00:10:40 (4) - Move this one down.
00:11:65 (5,6) - Move both 1 right and one down.
00:17:02 (1,2,3) - Move all three 1 down.
00:23:64 (4) - 1 down again.
00:24:88 (5,6) - Both 3 left and 1 down.
00:28:40 (4) - 1 right
00:29:02 (5,6) - 1 left
00:30:26 (1) - Wanna center this? Move it 1 right if so.
00:34:81 (3) - 1 left
00:36:47 (3) - 1 right
00:38:54 (1,2,3,4) - This feels confusing for an Easy difficulty. Can you agree with hitcircles at 00:38:95 (5), 00:39:36 (6), 00:39:57 (7), and 00:39:78 (8)?
00:40:19 (1) - Reverse the selection and move the new beginning of the slider near 8. You don't have to space this precisely to 0.5x since it's a new combo, but Easy should have any big jumps.
00:48:26 (2) - Move to the middle of the x axis. AKA 2 to the right.
00:49:29 (3,4) - Move 3 to the right by 5, and move 4 to the right by 3. You may want to move the 4 notes so they are in the center of the playfield.
00:56:22 (2) - 1 to the right.
00:56:53 (3) - 2 to the right.
00:56:74 (4) - 2 to the right.
00:58:39 (5) - This is very far away from 4 in the timeline, so put this someplace in the middle of the playfield, maybe moving it up a little.
01:04:50 (2) - 1 to the left.
01:04:81 (3) - 2 to the left.
01:05:01 (4) - 2 to the left.
01:05:63 (5,6) - both 2 to the left.
01:06:46 (1,2,3,4,5) - This in an Easy difficulty? O_O I suggest a slider that starts at 01:06:673, ends at 01:07:500, and repeats once. Then, a slider that starts at 01:09:155 and ends at 01:09:465. A hitcircle at 01:09:465, then a slider from 01:09:983 to 01:11:637. Use spacing and slider shapes at your discretion.
01:13:29 (1) - This slider should end at 01:15:774.
This whole map desperately needs hitsounds. Highlight a note and click on either whistle, finish, or clap to make a note be punctuated by that sound. Use this on notes that will bring out the sound, but don't overuse them.
100cc
00:07:09 (1,2,3,4) - Guideline for spacing is 0.7x. I refer to grid 2 again.
00:08:34 (6,7,8,9,10) - Move all 1 to the right.
00:11:44 (5,6,7) - Move 2 to the right.
00:13:92 (2,3,4) - Move 2 down 1, move 3 down 2, and move 4 down 3. xD
00:14:75 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move all up 1 and left 2.
00:17:44 (2,3) - Move 2 to where 3 is. Move 3 right by 3.
00:18:06 (4) - To the right by 5.
00:19:09 (5) - Right 3, down 1.
00:19:30 (6) - Right 2.
00:21:57 (6,7,8) - Move 6 to the right by 1, 7 to the right by 2, and 8 to the right by 3. xD again.
00:22:40 (9) - To the right 5.
00:23:64 (1,2,3,4) - You might wanna make these closer to the last slider's end. Let 5, 6, and 7 follow suit. Afterwards, move 6 to the right 1 and 7 to the right 2.
00:27:37 (2,3) - Move 2 where 3 is. Move 3 to the left 3.
00:27:99 (4) - To the left by 5.
00:28:19 (5) - To the left by 6.
00:28:40 (6) - By 7.
00:29:23 (7) - Left by 5.
00:29:64 (8) - Left 4.
00:29:85 (9) - Left 2.
00:30:060 - Make a hitcircle here, 3 to the right of 9?
00:33:78 (2) - Right 1.
00:34:71 (6,7) - Both to the right by 2.
00:35:23 (1) - Space it from 7 with 0.7 distance snap.
00:35:64 (2,3,4,5) - I'd rather you use a short slider that repeats twice. Normal isn't suited for this. Also, respace 00:36:26 (6,7,8).
00:37:30 (1,2,3,4,5) - Respace with distance snap again.
00:38:95 (2,3,4,5) - Use another repeating slider for this.
00:38:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Respace from each other.
00:40:19 (1) - M is excellent.
00:47:43 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Respace from each other with 0.7x distance snap. You know the drill. >_>
00:54:05 (2,3) - To the right 3. The slider should also go right by 3. Shorten the slider so it ends at 00:55:089.
00:55:91 (1,2,3,4) - Respace with 0.7x snapping.
00:56:74 (4) - I say take off one repeat so that the player will start near the next notes. Big jumps in a Normal level have steep learning curves.
01:00:67 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Respace to your liking.
01:03:15 (4) - Shorten the slider to end at 01:03:570.
01:04:50 (2) - Move up by 2. Restack 3 and 4 onto it.
01:05:63 (5,6) - Move down by 3.
01:06:25 (1) - Move down by 3, then respace 2.
01:07:91 (4) - Move this to 01:08:328.
01:10:39 (6) - Delete this.
01:09:15 (5) - Move this to 01:09:983.
01:06:67 (3,4,5,6,7) - Now respace all these sliders, and the last two notes.
Again, this needs hitsounds. Punctuate certain parts of the map with either whistles, finishes, or claps.
*looks back*
*faints*
Sorry for typing so much.
BTW, I'll get those difficulties finished on the next weekend. I'm pretty busy on weekdays.
50cc
00:08:75 (2,3) - I'm going to use this as a guideline for spacing. This is 0.5x distance snap at grid level 2. (View > Grid Level > 2)
00:10:40 (4) - Move this one down.
00:11:65 (5,6) - Move both 1 right and one down.
00:17:02 (1,2,3) - Move all three 1 down.
00:23:64 (4) - 1 down again.
00:24:88 (5,6) - Both 3 left and 1 down.
00:28:40 (4) - 1 right
00:29:02 (5,6) - 1 left
00:30:26 (1) - Wanna center this? Move it 1 right if so.
00:34:81 (3) - 1 left
00:36:47 (3) - 1 right
00:38:54 (1,2,3,4) - This feels confusing for an Easy difficulty. Can you agree with hitcircles at 00:38:95 (5), 00:39:36 (6), 00:39:57 (7), and 00:39:78 (8)?
00:40:19 (1) - Reverse the selection and move the new beginning of the slider near 8. You don't have to space this precisely to 0.5x since it's a new combo, but Easy should have any big jumps.
00:48:26 (2) - Move to the middle of the x axis. AKA 2 to the right.
00:49:29 (3,4) - Move 3 to the right by 5, and move 4 to the right by 3. You may want to move the 4 notes so they are in the center of the playfield.
00:56:22 (2) - 1 to the right.
00:56:53 (3) - 2 to the right.
00:56:74 (4) - 2 to the right.
00:58:39 (5) - This is very far away from 4 in the timeline, so put this someplace in the middle of the playfield, maybe moving it up a little.
01:04:50 (2) - 1 to the left.
01:04:81 (3) - 2 to the left.
01:05:01 (4) - 2 to the left.
01:05:63 (5,6) - both 2 to the left.
01:06:46 (1,2,3,4,5) - This in an Easy difficulty? O_O I suggest a slider that starts at 01:06:673, ends at 01:07:500, and repeats once. Then, a slider that starts at 01:09:155 and ends at 01:09:465. A hitcircle at 01:09:465, then a slider from 01:09:983 to 01:11:637. Use spacing and slider shapes at your discretion.
01:13:29 (1) - This slider should end at 01:15:774.
This whole map desperately needs hitsounds. Highlight a note and click on either whistle, finish, or clap to make a note be punctuated by that sound. Use this on notes that will bring out the sound, but don't overuse them.
100cc
00:07:09 (1,2,3,4) - Guideline for spacing is 0.7x. I refer to grid 2 again.
00:08:34 (6,7,8,9,10) - Move all 1 to the right.
00:11:44 (5,6,7) - Move 2 to the right.
00:13:92 (2,3,4) - Move 2 down 1, move 3 down 2, and move 4 down 3. xD
00:14:75 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move all up 1 and left 2.
00:17:44 (2,3) - Move 2 to where 3 is. Move 3 right by 3.
00:18:06 (4) - To the right by 5.
00:19:09 (5) - Right 3, down 1.
00:19:30 (6) - Right 2.
00:21:57 (6,7,8) - Move 6 to the right by 1, 7 to the right by 2, and 8 to the right by 3. xD again.
00:22:40 (9) - To the right 5.
00:23:64 (1,2,3,4) - You might wanna make these closer to the last slider's end. Let 5, 6, and 7 follow suit. Afterwards, move 6 to the right 1 and 7 to the right 2.
00:27:37 (2,3) - Move 2 where 3 is. Move 3 to the left 3.
00:27:99 (4) - To the left by 5.
00:28:19 (5) - To the left by 6.
00:28:40 (6) - By 7.
00:29:23 (7) - Left by 5.
00:29:64 (8) - Left 4.
00:29:85 (9) - Left 2.
00:30:060 - Make a hitcircle here, 3 to the right of 9?
00:33:78 (2) - Right 1.
00:34:71 (6,7) - Both to the right by 2.
00:35:23 (1) - Space it from 7 with 0.7 distance snap.
00:35:64 (2,3,4,5) - I'd rather you use a short slider that repeats twice. Normal isn't suited for this. Also, respace 00:36:26 (6,7,8).
00:37:30 (1,2,3,4,5) - Respace with distance snap again.
00:38:95 (2,3,4,5) - Use another repeating slider for this.
00:38:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Respace from each other.
00:40:19 (1) - M is excellent.
00:47:43 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Respace from each other with 0.7x distance snap. You know the drill. >_>
00:54:05 (2,3) - To the right 3. The slider should also go right by 3. Shorten the slider so it ends at 00:55:089.
00:55:91 (1,2,3,4) - Respace with 0.7x snapping.
00:56:74 (4) - I say take off one repeat so that the player will start near the next notes. Big jumps in a Normal level have steep learning curves.
01:00:67 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Respace to your liking.
01:03:15 (4) - Shorten the slider to end at 01:03:570.
01:04:50 (2) - Move up by 2. Restack 3 and 4 onto it.
01:05:63 (5,6) - Move down by 3.
01:06:25 (1) - Move down by 3, then respace 2.
01:07:91 (4) - Move this to 01:08:328.
01:10:39 (6) - Delete this.
01:09:15 (5) - Move this to 01:09:983.
01:06:67 (3,4,5,6,7) - Now respace all these sliders, and the last two notes.
Again, this needs hitsounds. Punctuate certain parts of the map with either whistles, finishes, or claps.
*looks back*
*faints*
Sorry for typing so much.
BTW, I'll get those difficulties finished on the next weekend. I'm pretty busy on weekdays.
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Pretty good map for first one
I'd like to see this one ranked so here comes star..
*thumbs up*
I'd like to see this one ranked so here comes star..
*thumbs up*
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Darn, now my Mirror won't correspond with my 150cc. D:Karteler wrote:
Edit9: Added 150cc (Sorry YoshiKart, you can still do mirror, I don't plan to do it). Probably have some beats off. I would be glad if someone check. Spacing is most fine, jumps are intentional.
I hope you like mine better.
Maybe I can finish both today.
EDIT: I think I'll attach what I have for Yoshi's 150cc right now so you can replace it if you like it.
BTW, there's technically no image set for 150cc, but I will include one later. Just put the image in the song's folder when I give it.Download: Shinobu Tanaka and Kenta Nagata - Rainbow Road (Karteler) [Yoshi's 150cc].osu
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Topic Starter
I didn't know I could use sounds at spinner, lol.
Thanks for the suggestions Mogsworth. I tried to make the M as most symmetrical as I could, but can't guarantee you that's perfect.
Thanks everyone for the suggestions.
Thanks for the suggestions Mogsworth. I tried to make the M as most symmetrical as I could, but can't guarantee you that's perfect.
Thanks everyone for the suggestions.
Well, now you know. :3
Here is a fix on the M slider in 100cc...
Download: Shinobu Tanaka and Kenta Nagata - Rainbow Road (Karteler) [100cc].osu
150cc looks great, though.
Reupload with this 100cc .osu and I'll bubble.
Here is a fix on the M slider in 100cc...
Download: Shinobu Tanaka and Kenta Nagata - Rainbow Road (Karteler) [100cc].osu
150cc looks great, though.
Reupload with this 100cc .osu and I'll bubble.
Incredible map, but need some little fixes. ^^
If you're going to make a post like this, please state what needs to be fixed, okay? :3Blue Dragon wrote:
Incredible map, but need some little fixes. ^^
Also, holding off on the bubble even after you reupload, since Yoshi's difficulty isn't uploaded yet.
I mean the spacing parts on 50cc. xDMogsworth wrote:
If you're going to make a post like this, please state what needs to be fixed, okay? :3Blue Dragon wrote:
Incredible map, but need some little fixes. ^^
Also, holding off on the bubble even after you reupload, since Yoshi's difficulty isn't uploaded yet.
I'm not a mapper (Duh, i'm a horrible mapper.) but spacing on 50cc makes the song hard to beginners.
^^"
To me, the spacing on 50cc isn't hard when playing on touchpad (believe me, my skills on touchpad are like that of a beginner on mouse), and it's actually spaced well and appropriately. But that's just my view to be honest.Blue Dragon wrote:
I mean the spacing parts on 50cc. xD
I'm not a mapper (Duh, i'm a horrible mapper.) but spacing on 50cc makes the song hard to beginners.
^^"
On mouse, spacing can be the hardest trouble to beginners. =/Mogsworth wrote:
To me, the spacing on 50cc isn't hard when playing on touchpad (believe me, my skills on touchpad are like that of a beginner on mouse), and it's actually spaced well and appropriately. But that's just my view to be honest.
But okay, the map owns. Lol.
Offset sounds 6ms late to me.
[50cc]
No real problems here.
[100cc]
00:33:57 (1) - From here up to the M slider, this is VERY hard to follow.
00:43:70 (1) - Should start 1/2 earlier (but end where it does now).
[150cc]
The jumps here feel a bit random. They're not unplayable (or unrankable) but they could be nicer.
00:11:08 (5) - Move 1/8 later.
00:24:32 (5) - Move 1/8 later.
00:33:57 (1) - From here up to the M slider, this is VERY hard to follow.
00:34:50 (6) - Move 1/8 later.
00:53:79 (2) - Move 1/8 later.
[Yoshi's 150cc]
All good~
[50cc]
No real problems here.
[100cc]
00:33:57 (1) - From here up to the M slider, this is VERY hard to follow.
00:43:70 (1) - Should start 1/2 earlier (but end where it does now).
[150cc]
The jumps here feel a bit random. They're not unplayable (or unrankable) but they could be nicer.
00:11:08 (5) - Move 1/8 later.
00:24:32 (5) - Move 1/8 later.
00:33:57 (1) - From here up to the M slider, this is VERY hard to follow.
00:34:50 (6) - Move 1/8 later.
00:53:79 (2) - Move 1/8 later.
[Yoshi's 150cc]
All good~