Jenny wrote:

The first slider is off and should start at 00:00:845 (end at 00:01:446 in Easy so that is where the second should start in other diffs). (At least that is the closest I could get) when I play it on 25% speed I found they are fine

Easy:

OD+1; OD1 is too low to be used for for anything, imo.
OD1 is fine to an Easy

• 00:07:457 (1,2) - that may be me but I do not like the angle of these; example for possible alternative below
  I think my arc is better
  
  00:10:080 (1) - that bow could be better; move 2nd sliderpoint to 218|-5
  not difference after fixed, I don't know why you mod this tiny useless things..
  00:11:392 (3) - the sliderstart here feels as if it was hitting too hard, reduce volume?
  the volume is fine
  00:12:703 (1) - similar as with 00:10:080, move 2nd sliderpoint to 367|385
  same reasone here
  00:14:015 (3) - CTRL-H and moving it to 188|289 does better as it continues the bow which 1 and 2 currently lead into
  no, the slider is for better flow to later objects
  00:15:326 (1) - a bit of curvestuff again, 2nd sliderpoint to 75|87, end to 37|148
  same reasone here
  00:17:949 (1) - ^ 2nd sliderpoint to 296|313
  same reasone here
  00:23:195 (1) - why not stack this on 2? as the vocals do not change in-between it feels as if it was standing still so that'd fit
  I like to add objects from middle as always
  00:25:818 (1) - curve, 2nd point to 309|4
  same reasone here
  00:29:425 (2) - this is me being very picky but move this to 167|370 as that leads better into 3
  same reasone here
  00:30:736 (4) - similar, move to 295|208 for better curve-transition
  same reasone here
  00:32:048 (2) - iirc, such minisliders were problems for me when I was very new to the game, just pointing this out
  this slider is following vocal
  00:32:703 (3) - as with previous examples, put to 496|167 for better transition into the next curve
  same reasone here
  00:37:621 (2) - that curve appears a bit clunchy to me, suggesting to put 2nd sliderpoint to 407|58 and end/reverse point to 453|29
  same reasone here
  00:40:244 (3) - this one feels more natural to me when enlarged by 1/2
  this slider is folliwng drum and vocal
  00:41:228 (4) - put to 253|216 to continue 3's curveflow better
  same reasone here
  00:42:539 (2) - as with a similar example, this may be a guaranteed combobreak to newbies
  same reasone here
  00:44:834 (2) - enlarged by 1/2 makes this feel more natural
  same reasone here
  00:47:457 (3) - ^
  same reasone here
  00:50:080 (3) - ^
  same reasone here
  00:53:359 (2,3) - new combo each as they got their very own soundpatterns and there is likely a stop in-between the objects in the song, so that would be justified
  I add NC at every heavy beats
  00:54:670 (1) - should be enlarged by 1/2
  same reasone here
  00:55:490 (2,3) - these feel bad to play, as they start on likely nothing and also are set on red ticks which makes them awkward to click and hold, change this!
  this slider is totally following the vocal, what's wrong with it
  00:57:293 (1) - enlarge by 1/2
  same reasone here
  00:58:113 (2,3) - same as with 00:55:490, do something about that
  same reasone here
  00:59:916 (1) - enlarge by 1/2
  same reasone here
  01:01:228 (3) - ^
  same reasone here
  01:05:162 (1) - ^
  same reasone here
  01:05:982 (2,3) - again, these thingies should be changed, really, they feel so unnatural and unfitting :<
  same reasone here
  01:07:785 (1) - enlarge by 1/2
  same reasone here
  01:08:605 (2,3) - wtaiwaöklwltaknt you know what I mean
  same reasone here
  01:11:064 (2) - enlarge by 1/2
  same reasone here
  01:11:884 (3) - *throw apple at wcx* deze thingzzz
  same reasone here
  01:18:933 (2) - enlarge by 1/2
  same reasone here
  01:19:752 (3) - *cough cough* you know it already
  same reasone here

Judgement: The above mentioned stuff (especially kiai one) is worth being changed, so do that - after these fixes, the diff should be fine.



Normal:

Drain -1, OD +1? (My personal perception, I prefer when OD is higher than Drain)
now it's fine imo
Isn't AR5 quite fast for a normal?
AR5 for this Normal is fine

• 00:03:359 (4) - I do not see a reason for the 1/2-reverse here, there is no sound this is following; also, it is put onto a red tick which makes it feel awkward, especially to newer players
  this sldier is following music and vocal
  00:04:015 (5) - curve could be better if you put 2nd sliderpoint to 383|197
  same reasone here
  00:06:474 (4) - the reverse arrow is too much, remove it, there is no sound on the white tick it ends on that'd justify it
  this sldier is following music and vocal
  00:08:769 (4) - better curve out by putting 2nd sliderpoint to 410|345
  same reasone here
  00:12:703 (1) - better with sliderend at 443|166
  same reasone here
  00:13:359 (2) - there's no sound on start and reverse arrow but as an additional sound, this one doesn't feel too bad
  this one is following music and drums
  00:14:015 (3) - 2nd sliderpoint to 299|219
  same reasone here
  00:14:507 (4) - 2nd sliderpoint to 128|194
  same reasone here
  00:15:326 (1) - 2nd sliderpoint to 217|365
  same reasone here
  00:17:293 (5) - 2nd sliderpoint to -16|180
  same reasone here
  00:17:949 (1) - 2nd sliderpoint to 131|310, end to 176|268; adjust following circle's distance then
  same reasone here
  00:19:916 (6,7) - that could break quite a few combos but it seems okay
  yep, it's ok
  00:27:129 (3) - 2nd sliderpoint to 149|342
  same reasone here
  00:30:736 (6) - I'd replace this with a circle as there is no sound audible at where this slider ends and that is not a criteria for a normal diff at least
  00:33:031 (6) - there is nothing on where this slider starts and there is also nothing on where the reverse arrow is at
  following drums and vocal here
  00:41:556 (1) - 2nd sliderpoint to 330|365
  same reasone here
  00:53:359 (3,5) - new combo as mentioned in easy aswell
  same reasone as Easy
  00:57:293 (1) - curve is a bit better with 2nd sliderpoint at 143|307
  same reasone here
  00:58:277 (4) - this circle is too much; for a normal at least
  this one is following drum, triple click in Normal is fine
  00:58:441 (5) - 2nd sliderpoint to 85|187
  same reasone here
  01:06:146 (4) - replace with a circle as there is no sound at where this slider ends
  no, this one is following drum and vocal not nothing
  01:06:802 (6) - this circle is a maybe-too much one, consider removing it as too much 1/2s in a row are somewhat mean in a normal
  same reasone here
  01:08:933 (4) - 2nd sliderpoint to 280|29
  same reasone here
  01:09:588 (6) - 2nd sliderpoint to 467|119
  same reasone here
  01:10:736 (2) - a circle on each white tick would fit better here as the reverse arrow hits onto nothing which is meeh
  here's 1/2 vocal, so I used repeat
  01:16:310 (2) - that could blanket 3 a bit better
  they are already prefect blanket
  01:18:933 (3,4,5,6,1) - this part here is awkward to play as you do not hit on where the hitsounds are at, which is bad, especially for a low difficulty level; consider changing this so the objects to hit are on where the hitsounds are
  objects are following vocal, hitsounds are following drums, totally fine
  01:22:211 (5) - could blanket 4 better, use 2 sliderpoints
  same reasone here
  01:23:523 (1) - 2nd sliderpoint to 365|364
  same reasone here
  01:24:998 (4,6) - new combo each as for the soundpattern they are following?
  same reasone as Easy

Judgement: Pretty k, though still little things to better out so do that please~



Hard:

AR8 is quite fast for a Hard - back in my days, this was used on Insanes :v
8 is totally fine to this Hard
Also, lower drain by 1 please, may be my personal perception tho.
HD 7 is also fine to this Hard

- Not going to point out everything that is too upscaled, the whole diff is too wide and variative in spacing for a hard... -

• 00:00:736 (1,2) - that is kinda mean for a hard diff and I'd just expect such a thing on an Insane, if even
  this is a usual pattern in Hard diffs
  00:01:392 (3) - netpick: this does not exaaaaaaaactly flow through 2's end
  this flow is fine, juse changed direction here
  00:03:195 (1) - could blanket 2 better; also, the sliderstart does not follow anything which is bad
  alread blanket perfectly
  00:10:080 (1,2) - I'd prefer 3 nonreverse-1/2 sliders here because of the soundpattern
  folling drums here
  00:14:507 (3,4) - a 1/1 slider fits the song better here; also, 1/2 sliders that start on red ticks are, as you know, bad to hit and hold for most of the time :/
  same reasone here
  00:16:966 (2) - could blanket 1's end better
  same reasone here
  00:17:949 (1,2) - I'd prefer 3 nonreverse-1/2 sliders here because of the soundpattern
  same reasone here
  00:20:244 (5) - move 2nd sliderpoint to 346|109 for better curve
  same reasone here
  00:30:244 (3) - a) this jump is huge for such a somewhat-calm passage of the song, b) 1/2 slider on redtick = no
  this is just a very small jump..
  00:32:211 (1) - that one came kinda suddenly, wouldn't have expected a jump here, especially not on a hard diff
  same reasone here
  00:37:621 (1) - curve is better with 2nd sliderpoint at 211|72 and end at 169|117
  same reasone here
  00:40:736 (3) - again, kinda wide jump for a hard diff + 1/2 slider on redtick; I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 one if you want to keep the jump at least
  same reasone here
  00:42:703 (1) - kinda sudden this jump is, desu
  vocal is sudden loud here, so I add jump
  00:44:343 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - no. because of these reasons: a) this is way too fast and variative in spacing for a hard diff, b) 1/2 sliders without a reason audible + on redticks
  same reasone here
  00:46:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is about the same as the one mentioned above
  same reasone here
  00:49:425 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - no, do not do this on a hard diff.
  why, it fit the song
  00:54:015 (3) - new combo as because of soundpattern
  same reasone as Easy
  00:55:162 (2) - 1/2 slider on red tick...
  same reasone here
  01:03:195 (3,4,5,6) - that stack movement is very very mean for a hard diff and somewhat bad to play
  same reasone here
  01:04:343 (4,5,6) - there's no reason for these 1/4s in the song
  can't you hear the drums?
  01:05:982 (4) - 1/2 slider on red tick, change.
  same reasone here
  01:06:310 (1) - wide-as-fuck jump; this is a hard diff, not an insane
  same reasone here
  01:08:277 (4,5) - red ticks.
  same reasone here
  01:09:588 (3) - that sudden change of direction after 1 and 2 continued the same bow is harshly unflowing and evil for a hard diff, do not do that
  same reasone here
  01:18:933 (4,1,2) - replace all these with 1/2 sliders, that suits the rhythm and hitsound pattern better and feels more natural
  same reasone here
  01:20:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - these should have equal spacing as the sound in the music is not changing and also, it feels bad because of the redtick slider
  same reasone here
  01:22:539 (2) - move 1/2 later in time and add a circle here, suits the vocals more
  not vocal I'm following music here

Judgement: This is not a Hard-diff right now. It's too hard. The spacing varies too much, the rhythm of objects is partly unfitting and there is some overmapping that totally does not belong in a Hard-diff. Make it easier and thin reduce object density, also spacing. As an Insane, this would've been okay but as a Hard, no.



Insane:

• 00:03:359 (1) - as in hard, this slider's start does not follow any sound, change that or replace it with something that sounds better
  same reasone as Hard
  00:04:015 (3) - that curve feels awkward, the sliderpoints are too trapezoidish which makes it meeh; also, this will be likely misshit as a 1/2 because of the big spacing before and AR9
  same reasone here
  00:05:818 (1) - there is nothing in the song here, remove object
  this is Insane diff, so I add some triple clikc
  00:05:326 (3) - a) curve could be better and more balanced, b) I'd suggest letting this build an equal triangle with 1's end, 2 and 3's end
  same reasone here
  00:06:638 (4,5,6,7) - a slider feels way better here as fast clicking in such a calm passage (intro) of the song is kinda meeh and questionable to me
  circle feel better imo
  00:07:949 (2) - same as with 00:04:015, the curve feels ugly because of trapezoid sliderpoint arrangement
  same reasone here
  00:08:769 (1) - ^ (yes, this matters more for curves that go downwards than ones that go upwards, for example on 2 here, it does not bother me but that is how it is, it looks bad on some and not so bad at others :v)
  same reasone here
  00:09:916 (4,5) - overmapped, there is nothing to hit on here.
  same reasone here
  00:10:408 (2,3,4,5) - all of this should have equal spacing as the sound in the music and the beat you got do not change at all
  same reasone here
  00:11:228 (5,1) - the transition between these is kinda bad as you got a fluent movement in the previous combo and then you have to like instantly go WAY too much down-rightwards to catch 1 and this breaks the whole flow
  this is flow changing
  00:11:638 (2) - overmapped, no sound in the song here
  same reasone here
  00:13:851 (1,2) - overmapped (especially 2), also, the spacing is too wide.
  same reasone here
  00:14:998 (7) - I don't see this huge spacing justified
  this spacing is not huge imo, as Insane
  00:15:162 (1,2) - overmapped (especially 2)
  same reasone here
  00:15:654 (4,5) - hard to notice this stack because of previous hitburst/s; also, this whole stop-and-go movement feels bad and unflowish, also aritificially hard
  same reasone here
  00:16:474 (1,2) - overmapped again, especially 2, also, huge distance where there is no reason for it
  same reasone here
  00:17:129 (5) - this slider plays bad to hit and also the angle in which it is placed from 4 is kinda bah
  believe me it play well
  00:18:277 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these should have equal spacing which is not that huge, this is way too upscaled
  same reasone here
  00:24:507 (3) - 2nd sliderpoint to 362|189 will make this curve way less clunchy
  same reasone here
  00:24:998 (4) - ^ to 501|155
  same reasone here
  00:25:818 (1) - 2nd sliderpoint to 78|8
  same reasone here
  00:28:605 (2,3,4) - overmapped.
  same reasone here
  00:29:588 (1,2) - ^
  same reasone here
  00:29:752 (3) - that slider's bow is meeh and it also doesn't end where it should; to correct, move 2nd sliderpoint to 182|242
  same reasone here
  00:30:244 (5) - this starts on nothing and also plays bad as it is on a red tick
  don't you hear the vocal?
  00:31:556 (3) - ^
  same reasone here
  00:34:998 (5) - sliderend to 258|331 for less clunchyness
  same reasone here
  00:35:490 (6) - 2nd sliderpoint to 171|235 for the same reason
  same reasone here
  00:36:146 (1,2) - there is nothing in the song that would justify these
  same reasone here
  00:38:277 (8) - new combo as there is a now soundpattern here
  same reasone as Easy
  00:39:097 (2,3) - overmapped, especially 3
  same reasone here
  00:40:736 (3) - bad to play as it is on a red tick, also, could blanket 5 better
  same reasone here
  00:41:392 (1,2) - overmapped, especially 2
  same reasone here
  00:46:966 (2,3) - overmapped, especially 3
  same reasone here
  00:47:949 (7) - WAY too huge spacing + red tick
  same reasone here
  00:49:752 (2,3) - this feels bad as a stack as it stops the whole consistency in movement
  same vocal here so I stacked
  00:50:572 (1,2) - replace with 1/1 slider, suits the vocals better and erases the 1/2-redtick problem
  same reasone here
  00:51:884 (1,2) - overmapped, also, the long slider should start on 1 as that is where the long vocals begin
  same reasone here

As for the kiai, it's the same as for the rest of the diff: Erase all the objects that are on where there is nothing in the song (this means nearly all tripplets), replace/redesign/remove/change all the 1/2 sliders on red ticks, overthink your huge spacings, look out for flowstopping/-breaking stacks and better out slidercurves and especially angles between objects.
My impression of this difficulty is: Overdone.

It does not look bad but it does not suit the song and that is where the mistake is - your Hard diff suits the song way better and would do as an Insane aswell, why do you have this one :<

Aleks719 wrote:

Normal
00:29:752 (4) - 8 1/2 objects in a row, looks hard for Normal
they're all following vocal well, also they're all sliders not circles, so it's not hard to play/read imo
00:49:425 (1) - ^
same reason here
and HP-1 would be fine too!
umm, ok, fixed

Easy
00:05:982 (2) - imo, end of slider should be here: 00:06:638-
in fact the starting is following vocal and the ending is following music, I think it's fine


that's all~

MMzz wrote:

[General]

Silence the spinners at the end of every diff? You don't have to, I just figure since there is no music there, there is no need for a hitsound!
umm, I already turned down the volume by using green timing sections.. I didn't use 0% volume cuz it's unrankble now

[Hard]

00:36:146 (3) - This note should be moved back to 00:35:982, if you listen to the piano you're skipping over this note. You should move 3 somewhere else too so it's readable after this, stacking under 2 seems to work fine. This actually caught me off guard while playing for the first time so it would be wise to fix.
in fact this note is not following piano or drums, it's following the kinda quiet finishes in the music :3 I think it's fine

Excellent map like always wcx! Just fix up that note in the hard and I will gladly rank!