1. Easy (2,17 stars, 197 notes)
2. Hard (4,89 stars, 439 notes)
3. Hawkii's Normal (3,59 stars, 252 notes)
4. Insane (4,99 stars, 538 notes)

nattap wrote:

I wanted to map a diff but which diff you want and how to upload that?

Static Noise Bird wrote:

M4M~

[Weak]
00:35:270 (2,2) - Small overlap, may want to fix though I don't think it's too big problem - Fixed!
00:50:731 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
01:35:500 (4,5) - The emptiness and distance confuses here, add something or at least put (5) farther away Fixed
01:46:577 (1,2) - Big overlap, not sure if intended but IMO it's ugly fixed
03:05:731 (3) - Put this one square up (x:264 y:72) Fixed

[Strong]
01:25:808 (3) - One right, one down (x:272 y:208) Fixed
01:49:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could do something different here instead of repeating same thing twice Fixed

[Power]
00:20:500 (3) - Make prettier curve (and use less points) Fixed
01:23:039 (3) - Move up or right (or both) a bit Fixed
01:36:193 (2) - Again, this time move left, up or both Fixed
02:38:039 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Weird, no distance snapped mess. Confuses me, not sure about pros though. Fixed
03:16:577 (2) - Make longer, but not so wide "wobbles" Fixed

Good luck~

TheVileOne wrote:

[...]
Hawkii's Standard

This style of mapping is very forum to my approach so I was limited to what I could reasonably critique. It's pretty solid difficulty though.

00:20:731 (4,5,6) - Use the same snap? I think it's good that way >:
00:21:654 (1,2) - Sliders look so different :/ what do you mean? D:
00:58:577 (1,2) - I'm not sure I like how this looks. My mapping style is too foreign to this to produce a suggestion. I would have has each slider flow into each other in a continuous kind of pattern. I like it that way
01:26:270 (1) - Remove the whistle on the start. The end sounds like a clap sound. Yup :3
01:28:116 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:654 (1) - Looks to me that it should be moved slightly up for the blanket to be perfect. do the same for the rest of the pattern. but than it's too close
01:37:808 - Clap or whistle? I rather like whistle. Yup
01:45:654 (3,4) - Further apart than 1,2 Changed
01:48:423 (1,2,3,4) - You wouldn't need to break your pattern if you moved this down so that the complete pattern wouldn't touch the lifebar. Changed :3

Thanks a lot for modding

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Went over vocaloid artist change.
Guest mappers need to be added to tags Fixed!!

Drum hitsound doesn't fit all that well IMO and it's strange that it only applies to the later kiais.

Weak
Personally felt those deep drum sounds were out of place. Fixed it, now they should fit better

00:01:347 (1,2,3) - Spacing? Seem's fine to me
00:17:962 (1) - Perhaps move down and to the left so that the end is on the vertical line. it seems to make a better transition. fixed
00:25:347 (2) - Position exactly on the head of 4? (not really a suggestion, you should do it.) fixed
00:30:423 (5,1) - 1.0 I don't see any distance problems here, also i had 1.0 on this pattern.
00:34:577 (1) - Place exactly where the square started? fixed
00:34:577 (1,2) - This transition doesn't look right. I think this would be a nicer transition. http://puu.sh/1gOJE Well apart from the slider shifts, I moved the start closer to the start of the square. fixed
00:47:500 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The slight variations in spacing through here are why 00:49:116 (1,2) - isn't lining up perfectly. if you used a similar snap through here, it would be cleaner in general.Fixed
00:58:577 (1) - this sounds a lot better if it ended here 00:59:500 - I would reduce so that it repeats on the white tick and add a note where it ended. fixed Actually 01:00:193 (1) - sounds better mapped on the beats instead of the vocals. Consider moving half back? It might just my personal preference though that the beat sounds better with the hitsounds than the vocals.Feel free to ignore the second part, but do the first part. Have to reconsider the second part.
01:31:347 (2) - Add clap.Fixed
01:31:808 (3) - Repeat on the red tick not blue.Fixed
01:33:654 (1) - End needs clap or whistle to follow main rhythm Fixed
01:35:500 (4) - ^ ^
01:36:654 (5,6) - Play a LOT better 1/2th forward. Please move. 5 will be a hitsound beat too. Fixed both
01:39:885 (2) - Move less inward to 1 and it will look slightly better. Still doesn't look great though. I changed the pattern a bit, hope it looks better now
02:10:577 (1) - Same comment as 58 seconds Same awensar as on 58 sec
02:10:577 (1,1) - That drum hitsound wasn't in first kiai I fixed this issue in all difficulties
02:36:423 (1) - Add whistle or a hitsound to the end? Fixed
02:38:270 (2) - ^ ^
02:47:500 (5) - Adjust this so that it fits better in that transition. Fixed
03:01:808 - Add note? Fixed
03:03:885 (5) - Replace clap with whistle Fixed
03:10:577 (3,1) - Imperfect transition IMO. i'd end 1 on the red tick and follow the red ticks through here. Fixed

Hawkii's Standart

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Strong

I probably missed a lot of transitions that just change spacing for no reason. There are so many it's hard to identify which ones need to change spacing and which ones do not. I did not use Distance snap on Hard so the spacing is inconsistant, but I also have some jumps in there
which work fine and i won't change them all.

00:03:770 (2,3) - Stack isn't perfect.fixed
00:05:616 (3,4) - Flow is poor. that 1.0 gap for 1,2 makes you go faster than you need to move to hit the parts after it. You should fix this imbalance. Fixed
00:05:962 (4,5) - Stack isn't perfect.fixed
00:34:347 (1) - Place more perfectly on the end of 4?Fixed
00:35:500 (4) - Add hitsound at the start of this?fixed
00:38:039 (8) - Not perfectly on the end of 6.fixed
01:09:193 (5,6,1) - Curve breaks its form here. It's not like the rest of the curve. What.. it seems fine to me~
01:10:577 (3) - Not perfectly under 1. fixed
01:28:577 (4,5,6) - I did not expect this angle here. you should place 5 on the head of 3. and perhaps adjust the spacing so that the part after has the same spacing.fixed
01:49:808 (2) - Add hitsound on start.fixed
01:52:577 (2,3,4,5,1) - What's with the spacing changes?Fixed it a bit
01:56:270 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
02:11:962 (5,1) - 0.9? did not use snap, so no
02:14:270 (1,2,3) - This is not perfect. the ends don't line up.fixed
02:19:347 (4,1) - 0.9 is a better snap.did not use snap so o
02:19:577 (1,2,3) - the unevenness of this pattern bothers me. Is there anyway you could make it look uniform?Fixed this pattern
02:23:500 (5,6) - 0.9 exactly.did not use snap so no
02:38:039 (5,1) - Kind of an awkward gap for a slowdown. fixed the spacing
02:45:654 (2) - Not perfectly under 4 fixed
03:00:193 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/1gRnT ???? fixed
03:01:808 (1) - Should be part of previous combo.fixed
03:04:923 (7) - Move to x 416 y 94? looks better to me.fixed

Taris wrote:

Hi m4m request thank you

[Weak]

00:16:577 - Add note? Done!
00:50:731 (3) - Multiple reverses can confuse beginners, but two reverses fit the rhythm , so its your choice if you want to change it or not. Changed!
00:25:116 - Add note? done!
00:48:423 (2,3,4) - Replace with a reverse slider please, Clicking like this is not for easy diff. Replaced it with a slider instead.
01:06:885 (2,3,4) - ^^
02:55:808 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:12:193 - Add note done!
01:38:731 - ^ ^
01:43:347 (4) - New combo here Done!
01:43:577 (1) - Remove new comboDone!
01:44:731 (3) - Add it hereDone!
01:46:116 (4) - ^ ^
01:48:423 (3) - ^ ^
02:01:116 (4) - ^ ^

[Hawakii's Standard]

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[Strong]

00:06:885 - Add note done!
00:24:308 - ^ ^
01:05:847 - ^ ^
01:24:077 - ^ ^
01:32:731 - ^ ^

[Power]

Looks Good Yay >w<

Good Luck!

Taris wrote:

[Hawakii's Standard]

00:19:116 - Add Note Yuw
00:11:270 - ^ Yuw
01:08:731 - ^ Yuw
01:36:654 - ^ Yuw
01:37:116 - ^ Yuw
00:55:347 (1) - Move spinner to blue tick Yuw
03:07:808 (1) - Remove this note Noo >: I like it that way and it's the same rythm in each refrain
03:07:577 - Add a note here ^
03:08:039 - ^ ^
03:08:500 - ^ ^

[Yue] wrote:

Hi M4M~ x3

[Weak]
00:06:654 - delete the note Done!
00:14:962 - moving this slider to 00:15:193 - Done!
00:21:193 (1) - clears this little slider and placed a note http://puu.sh/1hWdS Done!
01:00:193 (1) - this slider has many repetitions, for beginners is so difficult to do that you need to change it.
You could do this -> http://puu.sh/1hWk8
* Is an example of how you could do * I changed it but i did something else insead.
01:07:577 (1) - I think you should remove a repetition and drop something new Done!
01:09:654 (2) - ^ Done!
01:55:116 (2,3) - you could replace these two notes for a small slider http://puu.sh/1hWuW Done!
02:19:577 (1) - As in 01:07:577 (1) Done!
02:21:654 - ^ Done!

[Hawkii's Standard]

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Strong - Power : I would like to help with this problem but even I'm not very good at insane ;_____; No prblem :3


EDIT:


M4M http://osu.ppy.sh/s/56469 n.n

[Yue] wrote:

[...]

[Hawkii's Standard]
00:11:270 - add a note Okay
01:11:962 (3) - this slider should do more symmetrical changed the whole pattern :3
01:24:423 - ^ Changed
01:33:654 - ^ e.e but.. D: it fits perfectly with the other slider >:
01:35:500 - ^ It's the same slider as above ^ and it needs to be symmetrical ..
01:37:347 (6) - you could do something like this http://puu.sh/1hWOp
I say this because I think it has many repetitions
not necessarily have to do as I told you, you can also do something your way I'm pretty late .. the picture doesn't exist anymore >:
02:03:193 (1) - and 02:05:500 (4) - slider perfect! * only is a comment > < * Thank you
02:11:500 (2) - This slider is wrong fixed
02:47:500 (1) - I love this slider <3 Thank you x3 I think you like symmetry?

HellDawn wrote:

M4M

Weak

00:54:885- If I were you I will put spinner this line No, The vocal starts on red tick so i will leave it like that.
00:57:770- Dont need this timing point Yes, there are a lot of green lines that are unnecessary, i have to clean them up a bit.
00:58:577- Finish + whistle Done!
01:00:193- whistle begining and repeat Done!
01:17:039- Break drag to here I didn't even know that this is possible.. o.o THANK YOU >w<
01:20:731- needn't Yes, there are a lot of green lines that are unnecessary, i have to clean them up a bit.
02:29:039- break drag to here Done!

Hawkii

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Strong

01:24:077- Remove this combo because is not fit with music Done
02:29:039- Break drag to here Done

Power

00:43:577- RNC Done
01:25:808- ^ No i like it that way >:
01:29:039- ^ No because the 1/3 starts here.
01:31:347- ^ I like this so no.
01:38:039- NC Done
01:38:270- RNC Nope, 1/3 starts here
02:06:193- ^ Done

Starz0r wrote:

Starz0r's Mod4Mod

Power-SC

00:09:654 Move farther back ?
00:19:577 Move farther back ?
01:07:116 Move to the right a bit No, it fits the way it is right now
01:23:039 Move Up Until The Bottom Slider Isn't Touching It No, i want the overlap to be here
01:26:039 Move Up Alot No, that would make the jump too big
01:38:039 and 01:38:154 Timed badly D:, move by (1/2)? No, this is 1/4 off beat so 1/3 is correct.
01:51:193 and 01:51:308 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^


Strong
Perfect


Hawkii's Standard

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Weak
Perfect

Starz0r wrote:

Power-SC

00:09:654 Move Up A Bit
00:19:577 Move Up A Bit

Fixed, sorry.

1. delete all bookmarks

1. 00:20:500 (3) - 1 grid left(grid level 4) to make it stack with 00:19:808 (1) -
2. 00:40:116 (1) - confuse spacing. try this [img1]
3. 00:42:654 (3) - its end not stack with 00:41:731 (1) -
4. 00:46:808 (4) - not stack with 00:45:423 (2) -
5. 01:16:116 (1) - should ends at 01:17:039 -
6. 01:29:193 (1,2,1,2,1) - confuse pattern 0A0
7. 03:07:116 (4) - 1 grid down(grid level 4) to stack with 03:08:500 (3) -
8. 03:23:500 (1) - +finish

1. 00:32:500 (1) - 1 grid up(grid level 4)
2. 00:39:193 (4) - NC
3. 01:05:500 - should put a note here
4. 01:06:885 (3) - 1 grid left(grid level 4) to stack with 01:08:500 (3) -
5. 01:07:116 (4) - 1 grid left(grid level 3)
6. 01:17:039 - spinner end, or break starts here
7. 01:29:039 (6) - NC
8. 01:35:270 (8) - not stack with 01:34:116 (4) - ,so move 01:34:116 (4) - 1 grid left(grid level 4)
9. 01:38:270 (8) - NC
10. 01:49:808 (2) - stack with 01:48:423 (2) -
11. 02:18:885 (3) - 1 grid down(grid level 4)
12. 02:53:731 (3) - ^
13. 03:19:347 (3) - change reverse to slider+note.
14. 03:23:500 (1) - +finish

1. 00:16:808 (2) - change whistle to clap at start
2. 00:17:731 (4) - ^
3. 00:54:885 (1) - last note before spinner, so put it on y axis
4. 01:37:347 (6) - NC
5. 03:08:731 (2) - remove whistle at end

1. 00:09:193 (1) - clap at start
2. 00:26:270 (4) - finish at end
3. 00:52:577 (6) - clap

SPOILER

1. Already mentioned the diff names in IRC.
2. Offset should be 1337 (-10). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.
3. The soft hitnormal is hard to hear here, because the song is pretty loud. I'd suggest to use the normal hitnormal instead.

1. It would be a good idea to change the hitsounding for the kiai - stop using the custom hitsouds and use claps regularly. It would soud better and highlight the kiai more.
2. 00:23:500 (4,1,2,3) - Not a big fan of this. This kind of overlap tends to be confusing for Easy diffs. It would be better to change (1,2,3) to avoid the overlap.
3. 00:53:270 (1) - This was very confusing to me (I even combo broke on it). Even though spacing is normal, the rhythm unexpected changes into offbeat rhythms (red ticks). I suggest to add a note at 00:52:808 - or turn 00:52:577 (6) - into a 1/2 slider to make it a bit less confusing.
4. 01:41:962 (3,1,2) - It would be better to remove the repeat from (3) and make (1) a slider to have the same timeline as 01:39:193 (3,4) - . Right now, (3) breaks the consistency of the comboing because the new combo should be on its end.
5. 01:46:577 (1) - Remove this new combo for consistency with your previous comboing.
6. 01:50:270 (1,1) - This overlap looks very bad and might be confusing, because the second slider's end is hidden under the first's slidertrack.
7. 01:58:116 (3,4) - I found this to be pretty surprising, because the song doesn't actually have a bit on (3)'s end, and it sounds weird. Just make (3) a 3/2 slider (it would end where (4) is) ?
8. 02:42:885 (3) - This slider breaks the comboing: to be consistent with 02:36:423 (1,1) - the new combo should be on the big white tick, but your slider ends here. A solution would be to make the slider last only 1/1 (thus end at 02:43:347 - ) and add a circle at 02:43:808 - with a new combo (removing the new combo on 02:44:500 (1) - obviously).
9. 02:56:500 (1) - It would sound better (because fitting the vocals) to make this a 1/1 repeat slider (only one repeat). The next slider would need an adjustment to keep the spacing consistent though.
10. 03:01:577 (1,3) - To stay consistent in your comboing (with previous kiais), add a new combo on (3) and remove the first one and the one on03:04:347 (1) -
11. 03:09:193 (2) - This slider breaks your comboing.
12. 03:16:347 (1,3) - To stay consistent in your comboing, add a new combo on (3) and remove the first one and the one on 03:18:423 (1) - .

1. AR5 OD3 is stupid. There's no point in having such a difference between AR and OD, especially in a Normal. You can either raise OD to 4 or lower AR to 4. Either works fine, so the choice is up to you.
2. The spacing is quite large on this diff, with a lot of 1/2 (meh). I'd suggest to raise circle size by one to make this a bit easier to play.
3. I'm concerned about all the post-spinner notes that are 1/1 after spinners. That time feels too short for a Normal diff (462ms), but they fit. If you find an alternative solution, please change them.
4. 00:40:116 (1) - This one's not necessary. You could either make the spinner end here, or make the break start here. The note just adds unnecessary difficulty.
5. 00:55:231 (1) - Why start on a blue tick ? That looks very weird. Just make it start on the white tick ?
6. 01:24:423 (1,2) - VERY VERY BAD SPACING ISSUE: the spacing is halved for absolutely no reason !
7. 01:28:116 (1,2) - VERY VERY BAD SPACING ISSUE: the spacing is halved for absolutely no reason !
8. 03:23:039 (1) - This is kind of useless, if you ask me. The Easy diff ends with a long spinner here, and the two other ones with a shorter one, so make the spinner longer for consistency (don't add a short spinner because double spinners are confusing for a Normal).

1. The amount of 1/4 (especially triples) is abusive. You use them even when there's nothing in the song that calls for that kind of rhythm. And it's even worse because this is a Hard diff and it adds a lot of unnecessary and unfitting difficulty.
2. There are a lot of overlaps that don't look good, and in most cases are confusing. I suggest to rework these patterns to remove the overlaps.
3. As a general pointer, that holds true for all maps, when you want to stack things like 01:34:106 (4,8) - make sure the stack is perfect. Otherwise it becomes an uncontrolled overlap and looks bad, ruining the effect you meant it to have.
4. 01:06:875 (3,4,5) - o.o weird spacing, was that on purpose ?
5. 02:39:875 (1,4) - The end of (4) is hidden under (1) and its hitbursts, which looks bad and can be confusing if the slider has a repeat.
6. 02:54:413 (1,2) - This kind of thing looks really bad and is confusing, because the approach circle blends in with the slidertrack, and the first beat of the slider is entirely hidden. It would look and play better to move (2) away.

1. Same comments as in Hard concerning overlaps.
2. 00:16:885 (5,1) - Exchange the new combos here to make the 1/3 a bit more obvious. As it is now, this part is rather confusing because of that.
3. 00:26:039 (4,5,1) - This rhythm is technically wrong. What you did before (00:16:885 - ) is correct, so use that rhythm. If you want something faster than the 1/3, the note (5) from the previous rhythm should be a 1/6 repeat slider with one repeat.
4. 00:36:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Using jumps here makes sense, but these don't look very good. Make some kind of geometrical pattern with them so it looks better !
5. 00:38:616 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - This is extremely confusing because of the overlaps. First, the 1/3 circles are hidden under the first slider, then the last two sliders is hidden under 1/3 circles. Please rework this pattern to get rid of the overlaps.
6. 00:57:654 (1) - This spinner is too short and unrankable because it has 1000 bonus and the beat after it is visible right as the spinner starts. Having something 1/2 after it is overkill anyway, since most people would hardly be able to even pass the spinner. Please remove it.
7. 01:16:116 (1) - This spinner is too short as well (but not unrankable). Please at least extend it by 1/2.
8. 01:28:808 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,1) - see 00:26:039 (4,5,1) - and remove the shower of new combos, because they make comboing inconsistent.
9. 01:36:193 (2) - There is no reason why you should hide this under the previous slider... It looks bad and is confusing to play.
10. 01:38:039 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - See 00:26:039 (4,5,1) -
11. 01:40:808 (1) - This slider's repeat is entirely hidden under the hitburst from 01:39:885 (2) - . Change its direction.
12. 01:50:731 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - See 00:26:039 (4,5,1) -
13. 02:09:654 (1) - see 00:57:654 (1) -
14. 02:50:270 (1) - Same.
15. 03:02:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - This is just overmapped, and doesn't bring anything to the map. Why not continue with the rhythm you were using, which was interesting ?

Shiro wrote:

As per your request.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game !

General

1. Already mentioned the diff names in IRC. Yes, i will change them to standart names.
2. Offset should be 1337 (-10). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.0thank you >w< I will~
3. The soft hitnormal is hard to hear here, because the song is pretty loud. I'd suggest to use the normal hitnormal instead.

I will think about, I don't know if i'll change it. I wanted this hitsound in Kiai there because it sounds diffrent from the song and kinda freshening, if that makes any sense.. xD

Weak

1. It would be a good idea to change the hitsounding for the kiai - stop using the custom hitsouds and use claps regularly. It would soud better and highlight the kiai more. I don't like to use clap sounds, I'm afraid that they sound too overpowering if I use them in kiai constantliy.
2. 00:23:500 (4,1,2,3) - Not a big fan of this. This kind of overlap tends to be confusing for Easy diffs. It would be better to change (1,2,3) to avoid the overlap. I deleted 00:21:183 now theres no overlap anymore.
3. 00:53:270 (1) - This was very confusing to me (I even combo broke on it). Even though spacing is normal, the rhythm unexpected changes into offbeat rhythms (red ticks). I suggest to add a note at 00:52:808 - or turn 00:52:577 (6) - into a 1/2 slider to make it a bit less confusing. I did something diffrent from what you've suggested but It now follows the beat on white Ticks.
4. 01:41:962 (3,1,2) - It would be better to remove the repeat from (3) and make (1) a slider to have the same timeline as 01:39:193 (3,4) - . Right now, (3) breaks the consistency of the comboing because the new combo should be on its end.I see what you mean. I slightly changed the pattern and now it has a constant and easy beat.
5. 01:46:577 (1) - Remove this new combo for consistency with your previous comboing.Done~
6. 01:50:270 (1,1) - This overlap looks very bad and might be confusing, because the second slider's end is hidden under the first's slidertrack. I placed the slider diffrent, no overlap anymore.
7. 01:58:116 (3,4) - I found this to be pretty surprising, because the song doesn't actually have a bit on (3)'s end, and it sounds weird. Just make (3) a 3/2 slider (it would end where (4) is) ? Did it~
8. 02:42:885 (3) - This slider breaks the comboing: to be consistent with 02:36:423 (1,1) - the new combo should be on the big white tick, but your slider ends here. A solution would be to make the slider last only 1/1 (thus end at 02:43:347 - ) and add a circle at 02:43:808 - with a new combo (removing the new combo on 02:44:500 (1) - obviously).Did it exactly as you suggested.
9. 02:56:500 (1) - It would sound better (because fitting the vocals) to make this a 1/1 repeat slider (only one repeat). The next slider would need an adjustment to keep the spacing consistent though. Did it~
10. 03:01:577 (1,3) - To stay consistent in your comboing (with previous kiais), add a new combo on (3) and remove the first one and the one on03:04:347 (1) - done~
11. 03:09:193 (2) - This slider breaks your comboing.I changed the pattern.
12. 03:16:347 (1,3) - To stay consistent in your comboing, add a new combo on (3) and remove the first one and the one on 03:18:423 (1) - .Fixed~

Hawkii's Standard

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Strong

1. The amount of 1/4 (especially triples) is abusive. You use them even when there's nothing in the song that calls for that kind of rhythm. And it's even worse because this is a Hard diff and it adds a lot of unnecessary and unfitting difficulty. I will remap those tripples.
2. There are a lot of overlaps that don't look good, and in most cases are confusing. I suggest to rework these patterns to remove the overlaps. I will remap the overlaps.
3. As a general pointer, that holds true for all maps, when you want to stack things like 01:34:106 (4,8) - make sure the stack is perfect. Otherwise it becomes an uncontrolled overlap and looks bad, ruining the effect you meant it to have. I get what you mean, I will fix the unstacked objects.
4. 01:06:875 (3,4,5) - o.o weird spacing, was that on purpose ? Actually, no o.o I fixed it.
5. 02:39:875 (1,4) - The end of (4) is hidden under (1) and its hitbursts, which looks bad and can be confusing if the slider has a repeat. Yes I know, but since there is no repeat i won't change it.
6. 02:54:413 (1,2) - This kind of thing looks really bad and is confusing, because the approach circle blends in with the slidertrack, and the first beat of the slider is entirely hidden. It would look and play better to move (2) away.Fixed it.

Power

1. Same comments as in Hard concerning overlaps.
2. 00:16:885 (5,1) - Exchange the new combos here to make the 1/3 a bit more obvious. As it is now, this part is rather confusing because of that.Changed~
3. 00:26:039 (4,5,1) - This rhythm is technically wrong. What you did before (00:16:885 - ) is correct, so use that rhythm. If you want something faster than the 1/3, the note (5) from the previous rhythm should be a 1/6 repeat slider with one repeat.I removed a circle and placed it a bit diffrent, now this should not be an issue anymore.
4. 00:36:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Using jumps here makes sense, but these don't look very good. Make some kind of geometrical pattern with them so it looks better ! I remapped the Jump pattern.
5. 00:38:616 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - This is extremely confusing because of the overlaps. First, the 1/3 circles are hidden under the first slider, then the last two sliders is hidden under 1/3 circles. Please rework this pattern to get rid of the overlaps. I remapped this pattern.
6. 00:57:654 (1) - This spinner is too short and unrankable because it has 1000 bonus and the beat after it is visible right as the spinner starts.Having something 1/2 after it is overkill anyway, since most people would hardly be able to even pass the spinner. Please remove it. Done, even if I don't really understand, I always passed this spinner and always got but yeah, It's still unrankable.
7. 01:16:116 (1) - This spinner is too short as well (but not unrankable). Please at least extend it by 1/2. done~
8. 01:28:808 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,1) - see 00:26:039 (4,5,1) - and remove the shower of new combos, because they make comboing inconsistent. Removed all NC~
9. 01:36:193 (2) - There is no reason why you should hide this under the previous slider... It looks bad and is confusing to play. I placed the slider farther away.
10. 01:38:039 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - See 00:26:039 (4,5,1) - Changed!
11. 01:40:808 (1) - This slider's repeat is entirely hidden under the hitburst from 01:39:885 (2) - . Change its direction. Changed!
12. 01:50:731 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - See 00:26:039 (4,5,1) - Changed as well!
13. 02:09:654 (1) - see 00:57:654 (1) - Removed~
14. 02:50:270 (1) - Same. Removed~
15. 03:02:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - This is just overmapped, and doesn't bring anything to the map. Why not continue with the rhythm you were using, which was interesting ?There was this 1/4 Beat in the background so i thought this would be a good idea, I will change some of it.]

Overall, the timeline is interesting, but the mapset needs a lot of work on aesthetics (mainly getting rid of overlaps). Hitsounding needs to be consistent, too. This mapset has good ideas but they need to be used better. Good luck ! This has potential.