JauiPlaY wrote:

No_Gu wrote:

小贤哥哥好帅嫁给我

我觉得你智商真是直线下滑... //我甚麼都不知道...

[General]
嘛 似乎是少个spinner approachcircle这样
另外用默认的combo color真是浪费了 //好

[Hard]
00:20:918 (3) - 加个nc1的clap其实不错啊 //這裡感覺還是跟whistle好
00:25:956 (5) - 蓝线开头很怪 //不會啊
00:28:306 (1) - 去NC //好
00:47:560 (2,3) - 先circle再slider //1個slider打起來會比較舒服
01:00:993 (5,1) - 我觉得再拉远些会比较好 //跟distance snap的應該沒問題
01:15:098 (5) - 尾逆时针转个5度之类的 //調教了一下
01:16:217 (3) - 去clap //跟鼓聲
01:19:575 (3) - 多折返一次会死... //改了
01:22:486 (5,1) - 先circle再slider //我跟vocal

[Insane]
00:13:083 (1) - 提前1/4 //可
01:01:777 (1) - 去NC //k
感觉AR有点高 不會啊

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. nopigu's video offset: -152 -> -141 //both fixed.
2. missed skin: spinner-approachcircle.png.
   
   
3. don't used default combo color Orz... It's unsuitable for this video/bg. //k
   
4. like Rika's Easy: 00:56:739 (1,1,2) - the object was covered by "spinner-osu.png (押忍!!)" you can used transparent photo for this skin element.
   
   photo

   

I will pass these two to fay.

Hard

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:25:172 (3,4,5) - I haven't heard any drum/voice for 00:25:508 - but 00:25:396 - and 00:26:180 - have a snare sound. you can try the mapset like this: ↓
   
   rhythm

   
   //fixed in my way.
2. 00:37:486 (6,1) - change the new combo? 00:37:486 (6) - you used "reverse selection" slider, but it's a kinda confuse for playing. add NC to notice player this pattern used different spacing. //no, I would like to follow the vocal here.
   
   
3. 01:07:038 (1,2,3,4) - corresponds to 01:00:098 - It's very suddenly 4 plat combo. perhaps, you can used this pattern at the second paragraph.
   It's more readable and comfortable. //How can we call it is 'sudden' ? It just follows the music, so why not?
   
   
4. 01:19:575 (3) - 01:19:575 - to 01:20:023 - looks it's 5 plat stream. ((01:19:575 - and 01:20:023 - both are hihat for background music (drum). //already fixed.
   
   
5. 01:22:933 (1,2,3) - (optional) reverse selection? make a fluent flow it's more comfortable to playing. //k

Insane

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:04:799 (1) - (segmentation issue) change nc to 00:05:471 (3) - looks better imo. //no because I want to put the new combo with the vocal.
2. 00:08:829 (9) - ^ //^
   
   
3. 00:24:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wrong rhythm (same as Hard I said) //I did that intentionally.聽起來沒違和感
   
   
4. 00:30:098 (5) - move to x168,y336. 讓這團紅色"00:28:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - "的間距看起來一樣 不論note/slider頭尾= = //不開grid做圖的.
   
   
5. 01:06:142 - where's this hitsound ;w;? It's must be expressed ;_;. //This is accroding to my personal feeling, I don't like a triplet there.
   
   
6. 01:08:605 (6,1) - so why do you used jump here? It's not suitable/comfortable jump for here. //to fit the pattern change.

Taiko Muzukashii

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:26:180 (53,54,55,56) - kd d k. (54,55,56) 給人的感覺是漸漸轉變 而這三個音可以很明顯的聽出(56)比另外兩個的音重很多 該強調的位置應該是(56) 所以kd d k會更適合些. //我的style是把鼓和vocal還有高低音結合起來, 這個位置我覺得把kat fits在鼓點上會比較好
2. 01:11:515 (74,75,76) - sound kkd is better. regardless hear sound or playing feel. //No change because of the pitch.
   
   
3. 01:24:277 (124) - d. 音符轉變應該抓重點... //k

Taiko Oni

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:12:635 (47,48) - 等音量/音效的snare 怎麼不用D D? Muzukashii就算了 要降低難度 但是Oni也這樣做? //D 和 d的音質其實是有不同的, 如果聽起來的話, 在重音上的D和之後的d比較更能突出d, 所以沒改
2. 00:43:530 (3,4,5,6,7) - kdkkd/ddkkd. 音調變化給我的感覺. 而且dddkk/kkkdd這類的pattern本來就不好打 建議改掉. //I change it to kkddk instead.
   
   
3. 01:19:575 - add note 打起來/聽起來都比較不會這麼奇怪. //k
   
   
4. 01:24:948 (219,220,221,222,223,224) - k k d k k D這樣... //adjust a bit.

xxheroxx wrote:

[Hard]

• • 00:17:112 (5) - End this slider at 00:17:224 and add a repetition. //I would say 1/2 fits the instrument much better.
  • 00:24:277 (3) - End this slider at 00:24:389. Add a circle at 00:24:724. //^
  • 00:47:560 (2) - End this slider at 00:47:784. Add a circle at 00:48:008. //I would like to do some rhythmic variation here.
  • 00:51:142 (5) - End this slider at 00:51:366. Add a circle at 00:51:590. //^

[Insane]

• • 00:02:784 (4) - End this slider at 00:03:120. 1/2 will cause the slider to be ugly.
  • 00:59:202 (green timing section) - Set the volume at 60%. //I would say 55% is good enough.
  • 01:13:530 (green timing section) - ^ //^
  • 01:14:202 (3) - End this slider at 01:14:426. Add a circle at 01:14:538. //nope, it fits the drum sound much better in this way.

[Taiko Oni]

• • 00:26:068 (66) - Delete this d. //why?
  • 00:26:292 (x) - Add d. //^
  • 01:16:441 (169) - d? //reasonable, done!

Flask wrote:

[General]

1. Tags:... ed ending 2... 應該要ed2連在一起 只有一個2誰查的到=,= //done
   沒了

[Hard]

1. 00:03:456 (1) - 有一種沒whistle就好空的感覺 //added
2. 00:22:262 (2,3) - 能不能做成同種slider 就是把(2)的幅度拉到跟(3)差不多大or直接copy //我還是覺得手動DIY比較好!
3. 01:02:336 (2) - 縮短1/2然後放note在downbeat? 感覺比較對vocal -_- //做了感覺就很彆扭..

[Insane]

1. 00:48:456 (6) - 出screen //done
   我喜歡這diff -v- thx!

raririn wrote:

[Hard]
00:13:530 (1) - 不拉到00:13:978 - 嘛…… //跟鼓點

00:24:948 (1,2,3,4) - 这一堆好难读啊……试试去掉4的折返 头拉到00:25:732 (4) - 然后把note翻转过来？//already fixed

00:58:754 (1) - 这个隔得实在有点远了吧orz离转盘结尾1.77x //中間隔了個1/4 大丈夫!

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:43:530 (106,107,108,109,110,111) - 节奏真的好怪啊 00:43:642 - 00:43:978 - d？//不會啊

[Insane]
00:25:172 (3) - :<最后一个tick往左一点？//不了, 為了stack.

00:34:127 (5) - NC？又到长白线了而且也变了DS嘛 //k

00:45:321 (2) - 叠失误？//fixed

00:56:739 (3) - SV突然变小是不是应该有个NC…… //不用把...

01:07:374 (2) - 这里的hit声好难听啊 是不是轻一点比较好0.0 //k

01:24:277 (2) - 叠失误的嘛0.0... //fixed

xxheroxx wrote:

[NoHitter's Normal]

• • 00:30:098 (x) - Add a circle. I don't have to place a circle at every white tick :/
  • 00:31:889 (x) - ^ ^
  • 00:33:680 (x) - ^ ^
  • 00:35:471 (x) - ^ ^
  • 00:37:262 (x) - ^ ^
  • 00:38:157 (5) - Add a repetition. ^
  • 00:59:202 (green timing section) - Set the volume at 60%.Isn't that the kiai section?

Flask wrote:

[NoHitter's Normal]

1. Suggest AR+1 Done.
2. 00:27:635 (4) - The reserves appears too fast imo. Change to some slider/notes? Or just delete some reserves and make it 1/1 long then reserve... nah it's hard to explain so example.jpg Well many people already say it's too hard, so I reworked the pattern a bit.
   Nothing else, great diff

raririn wrote:

[NoHitter's Normal]
00:56:963 (1) - whistle here? You can hear a drum in the background. I'm using that as the basis.

01:19:799 (1) - why NC here but not 01:18:903 (6) - 0.0.. Following the vocals.

spboxer3 wrote:

[Insane]
00:26:292 (8) - ...怎麼聽slider end都覺得奇怪 或許用volume 20%會好點

kanpakyin wrote:

00:30:098 (5) - move to x168,y336. 讓這團紅色"00:28:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - "的間距看起來一樣 不論note/slider頭尾= = //不開grid做圖的.

^實在很想吐嘈這和grid什麼關係233 咱說的是間距阿

[沒股]
00:56:851 - 這地方不知道是我上次沒看到還是不見了 這邊應該有spinner才對 不然break太長了些

[Taiko muzukashii]
01:24:948 (127) - k? //I still prefer don here because the difficulty is muzukashii, I would like to do less variation on this diff.

[Taiko Oni]
00:28:306 (76,77) - k k

Taiko純為意見 感覺打起來比較適合
no kd 改完找我

Aleks719 wrote:

Hard
Can you make HP-1 please? in menu your mapset looks : 1.5 star, 3,5star and 5 diffs with 5star rate D:
It looks scary, so hp-1 will give 4.5 rating for Hard~

Aleks719 wrote:

Gu's Insane
00:20:695 (3) - can you make reverse more visible? :SK

S o r d a wrote:

SAO<3
gratz~

Pokie wrote:

Takaku-n Takaku-n