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hoLysoup! (^^)/
[General]
●ok!

[Normal]
●HP Drain rate -1.I think this is a little difficult for beginners. >_<
●00:11:918 (1) - try to move to x:292 y:52 (spacing?)
●00:17:632 (3) - add new combo ?
●00:38:704 (2) - add whistle on the slider's repeat~
●00:39:775 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction ? :3 flow is good imo
●00:41:918 (2) - ^
●01:14:775 - try to put 40% volume ? loud a little >_<
●02:00:489 (3) - add new combo ? same as here.00:57:632 (1) -
●02:34:061 (3) - add calp on the slider's end
●02:36:561 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head

This green line is unnecessary ~ (check other diff :3)
●01:26:114 -
●01:26:293 -
●01:48:257 -
●01:49:061 -
●01:49:507 -
●01:50:579 -
●02:49:061 -
●02:52:364 -
●02:53:436 -

[Hard]
●00:24:239 (2) - Change curve slider? :>
●00:26:739 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head
●00:57:632 (1,2,3) - try to put gradually volume? :3
●01:30:847 (6) - add whistle on the slider's repeat~same as here.01:27:989 (6) -
●02:00:489 (1,2,3) - same as here.00:57:632 (1,2,3) -
●02:26:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - no hit sound ? :o put more ~
●02:34:775 (1,3) - add whistle on the slider's head
●03:03:347 (1,2,3) - same as here.00:57:632 (1,2,3) -

[Insane]
●00:28:168 (3) - 1 grid down ?
●00:28:525 (7) - add whistle on the slider's end
●00:39:240 (5,6) - switch these notes ? try to make jump :3
●02:11:025 (7,8,9) - Rotate by around 10°? You could improve this flow a bit.
●02:29:061 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head
●02:45:668 (8) - try to change curve slider ? Aim for the next note :3
●03:26:204 (1) - more spacing?

chata\^_^/ ganbatte ~ ! :P
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
- t e n n y a -

- t e n n y a - wrote:

From our queue! :3
hi hoLysoup-san~!
hihihi!!
[Normal]
  1. HP -1? fixed
  2. 01:10:489 (2)- : add finish on slider repeat and slider end? owo mm probably no~
  3. 02:00:489 (3)- : make them curve? since you make curved slider on previous and next sliders owo fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:454 (2)- : add finish on slider head? mm no too loud
  2. 00:32:989 (3)- : ^ mm no too loud
  3. 00:41:918 (2)- : add nc here, since you user 1 nc on 00:34:775 (1)- here ovo fixed
  4. 00:51:204 (6)- : add whistle on slider head? since you use whistle on next notes owo fixed
  5. 01:44:775 (2)- : same reason as 00:41:918- fixed
  6. 01:54:061 (6)- : same reason as 00:51:204- this one probably no
  7. 01:59:061 (4)- : nc here? since you use nc at 00:56:204- here fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:918 (10,11,12)- : remove clap? to equaling clap at 00:13:972 (3,4) wow long clap mod.. I just fixed a few, I didn't fix all of the ones below :>
  2. 00:51:114 (8)- : add clap?
  3. 00:53:972 (7)- : ^
  4. 00:56:829 (4)- : ^
  5. 01:02:543 (8)- : ^
  6. 01:05:400 (8)- : ^
  7. 01:08:257 (8)- : ^
  8. 01:31:204 (5,6)- : remove clap? same reason as 00:16:918-
  9. 01:45:400 (7)- : add clap?
  10. 01:56:829 (7)- : ^
  11. 01:59:686 (3)- : ^
  12. 02:05:400 (4)- : ^
  13. 02:11:114 (8)- : ^
  14. 03:02:543 (8)- : ^
  15. 03:08:257 (2)- : ^
  16. 03:13:972 (4)- : ^
  17. 03:19:686 (4)- : ^
  18. 03:21:114 (3)- : ^
  19. 03:22:543 (3)- : ^
  20. 03:25:400 (7)- : ^
that's all I can find
rank good luck >w<
Thanks so much for modding!!

alaneko!

alacat wrote:



hoLysoup! (^^)/
yay alakyatto!
[Normal]
●HP Drain rate -1.I think this is a little difficult for beginners. >_< fixed
●00:11:918 (1) - try to move to x:292 y:52 (spacing?)
●00:17:632 (3) - add new combo ? fixed
●00:38:704 (2) - add whistle on the slider's repeat~ fixed
●00:39:775 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction ? :3 flow is good imo fixed
●00:41:918 (2) - ^ fixed
●01:14:775 - try to put 40% volume ? loud a little >_< fixed
●02:00:489 (3) - add new combo ? same as here.00:57:632 (1) - fixed
●02:34:061 (3) - add calp on the slider's end mm not this one
●02:36:561 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head ^

[Hard]
●00:24:239 (2) - Change curve slider? :> www ok fixed
●00:26:739 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head mm not this one
●00:57:632 (1,2,3) - try to put gradually volume? :3 fixed
●01:30:847 (6) - add whistle on the slider's repeat~same as here.01:27:989 (6) -
●02:00:489 (1,2,3) - same as here.00:57:632 (1,2,3) - fixed
●02:26:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - no hit sound ? :o put more ~ but I don't know what to put.. haha
●02:34:775 (1,3) - add whistle on the slider's head fixed
●03:03:347 (1,2,3) - same as here.00:57:632 (1,2,3) fixed

[Insane]
●00:28:168 (3) - 1 grid down ? mm I'll think about this :>
●00:28:525 (7) - add whistle on the slider's end fixed
●00:39:240 (5,6) - switch these notes ? try to make jump :3 mm maybe~
●02:11:025 (7,8,9) - Rotate by around 10°? You could improve this flow a bit. fixed
●02:29:061 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head fixed
●02:45:668 (8) - try to change curve slider ? Aim for the next note :3 fixed
●03:26:204 (1) - more spacing? fixed


chata\^_^/ ganbatte ~ ! :P yay alacat! :D arigatou!
Faust
So, I won't waste any time.

One thing though.

I don't know if you want to spend a bit more time touching up parts like - 00:20:489 (1) - on your Normal difficulty and etc, but if you do want to go over your map one more time that's encouraged.

There isn't anything on this mapset that I'm uncomfortable about. I'd like to specially mention to your Insane difficulty though, it is top-notch.

Do let me know.
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

Faust wrote:

So, I won't waste any time.

One thing though.

I don't know if you want to spend a bit more time touching up parts like - 00:20:489 (1) - on your Normal difficulty and etc, but if you do want to go over your map one more time that's encouraged.

There isn't anything on this mapset that I'm uncomfortable about. I'd like to specially mention to your Insane difficulty though, it is top-notch.

Do let me know.
wow~ thank you!!
I checked the blanket sliders in Normal and hopefully I made all of them perfect or at least, better looking than before.
and I checked over the other 2 diffs as well. thank you!
Faust
Here we go.
Kawayi Rika
We are only fixed a volume,nothing issue ~

Awesome map and moe song <3


/Me eats chata

-Neipezi
congrats~lol
wring
grazzz<3
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
>Faust
Thank you!! :D

>Rika
愛 :>!

>-Kirito
thanks!!

>wring
:D!! <3 りんぐ!!
Nymph
茶太!
alacat
hoLysoup :3

omedeto♪
Gamu
ome ! :3
Pokie
detou ! (:3[___]
Snowy Dream
w! Rika's Heart
Congratz > <
Xierra
Haha! I know it doesn't need a lot of mods to get this map ranked. I was right after all ;)
Omedetou Holy Soup! (And I shouldn't drink that soup) :D

moe moe moe
XxYukixX
Good Map : D
Melophobia
<3
MiLu
congratz hoLysoup <333
Quilt
おめでとー
NewRulerNA
gratz~ :3
kurohana
Congratz :D I love this map, your style is great <3
cRyo[iceeicee]
:3
Mythol
yay soup!
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
>Nymph!
茶太! <3

>aLacat!!
:D! HEHEHEHEHE!

>Gamu!
waiiiii! :D!

>Pokie!
我在等 神Pokiexkotone >:]!

>Snowy Dream!
haha thanks!! :>

>Xierra
thank you!! :D!
don't eat me!

>XxYukixX
thanks!! :>

>Moephobia!
...❤

>MiLu!
MiLu!!!!!!!!!! <3

>QuiLt!
show me more 舞花songs! :>

>NewRulerNA!
arigatou!~!~! :>

>kurohana
thank you so much!! :>

>cRyo[moemoe]
let's make a coLLab~ :<!

>MythoL!
waiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! :D!!
Star Stream
I'm late
but I'm really happy to see this rank
yay :D
Wreath
Omedeto! :oops:
merchat7
Extremely late grats from me
Faust
Good to see this took off.

Congratulations, after the weeks of waiting.
Curisu
\:D/ Finally

Gratz~
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