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[Hi, From Queue]

[General]
Background
crisp shd.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
crisp nm.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
crisp hd.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

Tick Rate:
Make It 2 It Fits The Music

Letterbox During Breaks:
Remove It From All Difficulties Since You Don't Have Storyboard

[Easy]
Some Edits:
- 00:12:413 (1) - Remove this two circls
- 00:12:413 - Slider From Here To 00:15:156 -
- 01:00:413 (1,2) - Confusing For Newbies
- 01:03:156 (1,2) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑
- 01:05:899 (1,2) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑
- 01:08:642 (1,2) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑
- Change The Placement of them ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑

[Mintice's Easy]
Nice Diff

[Normal]
Nice Diff

[Hard]
Nice Diff

[Super Hard]
Some Edits:
- 00:41:213 (1) - Like This Would Be Better 00:41:213 (1) -
- 01:56:727 (1) - Start It Here 01:56:813 -

[Extra]
- 01:56:727 (1) Start It Here 01:56:813
posted

OEvil wrote:

[Hi, From Queue]

[General]
Background
crisp shd.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
crisp nm.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
crisp hd.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

Tick Rate:
Make It 2 It Fits The Music

Letterbox During Breaks:
Remove It From All Difficulties Since You Don't Have Storyboard
fixed

[Easy]
Some Edits:
- 00:12:413 (1) - Remove this two circls
- 00:12:413 - Slider From Here To 00:15:156 - fixed
- 01:00:413 (1,2) - Confusing For Newbies
- 01:03:156 (1,2) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑
- 01:05:899 (1,2) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑
- 01:08:642 (1,2) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑
- Change The Placement of them ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑
fixed

[Mintice's Easy]
Nice Diff

[Normal]
Nice Diff

[Hard]
Nice Diff

[Super Hard]
Some Edits:
- 00:41:213 (1) - Like This Would Be Better 00:41:213 (1) - I cant understand :?
- 01:56:727 (1) - Start It Here 01:56:813 -
fixed

[Extra]
- 01:56:727 (1) Start It Here 01:56:813
fixed
posted
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No General issues to point.

* And no complaints for [Easy], [Mintice's Easy], [Normal], [Hard] and [Extra].

[Super Hard]
* No complaints here too, next are just pattern suggestions.
:idea: 00:04:870 (3,1) - Why not make like this? → http://puu.sh/3wlQH.jpg
00:06:927 (1) - If you changed the pattern above, consider moving it to x:144 y:148.
00:07:270 (2) - If you changed the pattern above, consider moving it to x:304 y:116.

That's it ^^

So nice song (: LET'S RANK IT, my BATs!!!!

Star!

Att.
posted
Maybe you need a muzu._.
[SH]
00:40:515 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
00:41:201 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1055004
00:45:315 (1,2) - swap
01:01:087 (9) - use 0.5x?
01:56:801 (1) - start at 01:56:630 -
[EX]
00:22:173 (2) - moveto 256,88
00:35:887 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:41:887 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:52:858 (3) - ^
01:27:144 (5,7) - swap
01:49:087 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:56:801 (1) - start at 01:56:630 -
[Hard]
style is too old I think
somewhere were narrow
[Normal]
._.
[M's Easy]
STR1?
01:00:401 (1) - 2nd point 56,108
01:12:744 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1055016
01:56:630 - spinner
[Easy]
too many circles
[Oni]
2.0x all change to 1.0x
posted
Hey, mod from my "non-japanese" queue.

Easy

- You should rename it to "Beginner" since it's very easy and you have another Easy

00:34:344 (1) - Remove Nc, not needed.

Guest Easy

00:17:201 (3) - , 00:35:030 (5) - , 00:46:687 (3,4) - , 01:40:858 (4) - Wrong spacing.
01:54:572 - You should let this end with a slider til 01:55:258 - . Would fit better and makes a better ending.

Normal

- A lot objects aren't snapped, you need to fix this. Timing > Resnap all notes
- You need to fix the timing lines too!
- You shouldnt make a NC after every 2 objects. Every new beat is fine. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1055572
- Make more curved sliders and other styles. It's very repetetive in shape. 00:48:058 -

01:01:430 (2) - A little spacing difference here. Easy fix.

Hard

- Some objects aren't snapped. Fix this here too.
- You need to fix the timing lines too again.
- You shouldnt make a NC after every 2 objects, like on Normal. Every new beat is fine. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1055572

00:37:087 (7) - Spacing difference really needed?
01:22:344 (1,2) - These two objects overlapp each other in time. You have to fix this.
00:19:773 (2,3,4,5,6) - Very confusing placement, you should spread them a little more so it's clear how to play.
00:30:745 (2) - Same
01:01:772 (1) - That's a 1/8 slider or so. You need to make it 1/4 as everything.
01:44:287 (1) - Little spacing mistake.
01:48:401 (1) - , 01:56:630 (1) - 1 NC is really not needed. Remove it.

Harder Hard

- You should rename this to Insane, this is no Hard anymore.
- Again, watch your comboing.
- Your spacing isn't very consistant. For example 00:27:830 (2,3) - compared to 00:28:344 (7,8) - . Consider fixing this up.
- Your placement is very random. You should make pattern readable and playable enough so people can enjoy it. A lot is contradicted in this difficultie.
- 00:48:058 - This speed up is very sudden. You should make a warning or something softer or else the player can't read it enough to play it good.

Extra

Well, i leave this to BATs if this is rankable enough.
posted
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Crisp.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 82361
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12376,15205,26091,37062,48034,59005,60462,71348,82319,93291,104262
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32

[Metadata]
Title:Crisp
TitleUnicode:Crisp
Artist:yak_won
ArtistUnicode:yak_won
Creator:Xin_U
Version:Ts8zs' Muzukashii
Source:Ez2Dj : AZURE EXPRESSION INTEGRAL COMPOSITION
Tags:krazyrain Mintice Kazukisinx EZ2AC
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"crisp nm.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1430,342.857142857143,4,1,0,100,1,0
15144,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
82344,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
104287,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
115258,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,0
Combo2 : 63,63,63
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 0,0,128

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ts8zs wrote:

[Oni]
2.0x all change to 1.0x
They are did on purpose.
I was making a muzu but its k
Edit: ts8zs, i disliked your muzu, is so repetitive...
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Hi, there are mods for your mania diffs ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diff and like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diff)
Mania 4K
From the beginning 'till 00:12:412 - I suggest you to re-arrange ~20% of all stream here, delete some notes and try to follow music, all that player can see here it's a monotonous stream. Where are chords, LNs and double notes according to the music? It's simply overmapping coz there's no musical patterns and I think it can be a problem for ranking.

00:41:887 - add here one more note to 3rd column according to the beat here

00:53:201 (53201|1) - move to 3rd column too for hand balance in this pattern

From 00:59:030 to 01:00:401 - I recommend you to follow the song, performing simple stream between two columns looks boring, there are some pauses in this moment, so you need delete some notes to follow the music and re-arrange other notes

From 01:00:401 to 01:44:287 - that's really good mapped part in this diff, I suggest you to re-arrange beginning parts in that way, like you did it for these 44 seconds, it's awesome

And finally re-arrange ending like beginning from 01:44:287 to 01:55:172 - same reasons, I suggest you to follow the music till the end


Mania 7K
These patterns are look awesome rather than in 4K diff. There's only some suggestions:

From 00:48:058 to 00:58:344 - you can add one more note every second tact to accent it according to the beat, it'll be suitable with your LN patterns here anyway, so try to make it balanced and it'll be good coz this part for now look empty rather than your previous and next going parts

From 00:59:030 to 01:00:401 - I suggest you to re-arrange this part according to the song again, like I told you in previous diff or at least I recommend you to switch colums here every 1/2 beat to make this pattern more comfortable to play

01:01:601 (61601|0) - move to 6th column to keep hand balance here in your pattern

01:11:201 (71201|5) - move to 1st or 2nd column, same reason ^

Other part of the song seems good, ending part is good too, without any exceptions.


Both mania diffs are INs but notice you that according to rules you need at least one EZ or NM mania diff for rank~
Good luck :3/
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from my queue~

[Beginner]
  1. 00:03:487 (4) - NC here
  2. if you follow the above take off NC here 00:04:172 (1) (this is just to make it look separate since the pattern lifts at that point)
  3. 00:26:115 (1) - remove NC
  4. If you follow above NC here 00:30:230 (6)
  5. then remove this NC 00:31:601 (1)
  6. 00:37:087 - there is a fairly long break here for no sort of reason really, you can have a shorter break and map more (there is a nice beat going on here)
  7. 00:52:172 (2,3,1) - check spacing (circle overlaps previous slider but not the later slider) i am guessing you want them to overlap considering this one is 00:49:430 (2,3,1) has overlaps
  8. 00:54:915 (2,3,1) - ^
  9. 01:11:372 again another obnoxiously long break that doesn't need to be. it is a beginner difficulty but this leaves more to be desired
  10. 01:29:887 (1,2) - blanket is off

just need to recheck everything make sure all the spacing is correct and everything is where you want it to be
[Mintice's Easy]
  1. 00:29:544 (1,3) - overlap is avoidable and should be avoided
  2. 00:35:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - seems forced to me, and the pattern is a little out of place in an easy. there should be a reversible1/2 slider starting at 00:37:087 instead of the note there, it'll sound better (it will also match your overall combo for that piece, try to be more consistent in your patterns)
  3. 01:01:772 (1,2) - yuck fix this blanket please
  4. 01:00:401 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make sure all the spacing in these blankets are the same
  5. 01:06:915 (2,1) - this overlap is ugly, remap
  6. 01:19:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a lot of your straight patterns are very boring, try and change them up!
  7. inconsistent kiai times in comparison with the other difficulties (when they start, they must be at the same time all through the mapset)

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:544 (3,1) - another ugly overlap, the AR makes it look very bad because (3) is there for a long time
  2. 00:37:062 - again with the long breaks, this is your normal diff, dont be afraid to map more!
  3. there are some stacks that look bad again because of the AR, either stack them or don't!a good example of this is here 01:40:515 (5,1)

[Hard]
  1. 01:14:115 (1) - straighten this slider out a bit

good luck
posted

Lust wrote:

from my queue~

[Beginner]
  1. 00:03:487 (4) - NC here
  2. if you follow the above take off NC here 00:04:172 (1) (this is just to make it look separate since the pattern lifts at that point)
  3. 00:26:115 (1) - remove NC
  4. If you follow above NC here 00:30:230 (6)
  5. then remove this NC 00:31:601 (1) revised some NC
  6. 00:37:087 - there is a fairly long break here for no sort of reason really, you can have a shorter break and map more (there is a nice beat going on here)gonna fix
  7. 00:52:172 (2,3,1) - check spacing (circle overlaps previous slider but not the later slider) i am guessing you want them to overlap considering this one is 00:49:430 (2,3,1) has overlapsfixed
  8. 00:54:915 (2,3,1) - ^fixed
  9. 01:11:372 again another obnoxiously long break that doesn't need to be. it is a beginner difficulty but this leaves more to be desiredgonna fix,too
  10. 01:29:887 (1,2) - blanket is off
fixed
just need to recheck everything make sure all the spacing is correct and everything is where you want it to be
[Mintice's Easy]
  • I fixed the map because Mintice is inactive
  1. 00:29:544 (1,3) - overlap is avoidable and should be avoided
  2. 00:35:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - seems forced to me, and the pattern is a little out of place in an easy. there should be a reversible1/2 slider starting at 00:37:087 instead of the note there, it'll sound better (it will also match your overall combo for that piece, try to be more consistent in your patterns)
  3. 01:01:772 (1,2) - yuck fix this blanket please
  4. 01:00:401 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make sure all the spacing in these blankets are the same
  5. 01:06:915 (2,1) - this overlap is ugly, remap
  6. 01:19:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a lot of your straight patterns are very boring, try and change them up!fixed all
  7. inconsistent kiai times in comparison with the other difficulties (when they start, they must be at the same time all through the mapset)It is GD

    Ranking_Criteria wrote:

    If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:544 (3,1) - another ugly overlap, the AR makes it look very bad because (3) is there for a long time
  2. 00:37:062 - again with the long breaks, this is your normal diff, dont be afraid to map more!
  3. there are some stacks that look bad again because of the AR, either stack them or don't!a good example of this is here 01:40:515 (5,1) fixed all

[Hard]
  1. 01:14:115 (1) - straighten this slider out a bitfixed

good luck
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