[*]00:32:517 ~ 00:33:851
I think can add more notes here
[*]00:34:962 (10,11,12,13,14)
Try delete 00:34:962 (10)
or just try to arrange 00:34:962 (10,11,12,13,14) to something else.
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- 00:43:962 (52) - add a note ?
- 00:47:851 - add a note ?
- 00:48:295 (68) - k / d ?
- 00:48:517 (69) - d / k ?
[*]00:50:295 ~ 00:51:628
Could add more notes here cuz it is bit more soundical
[*]00:52:073 (81)
Change this to k ?
no vocal so you may can follow another instrament that can here rarely
rather then drum to give some change
[*]00:54:851 (97) - delete ~
[*]00:55:184 (99) - k / D or K
[*]00:56:739 - add a note ~?
[*]00:58:073 (111) - k / d
[*]00:58:184 (112) - delete
[*]00:59:295 (119) - may be delete ?
[*]01:02:961 (138,139,140) - not 1/6?
Or trying to not make 01:03:406 (141,142,143,144,145,146) too hard ?
then try to not use 1/6 oftenly even at the end of the song's kiai part
try to balance in all.
[*]01:04:961 ~ 01:06:295
I think could add some more notes
and specially this part
01:06:184 because the sound of
01:06:295 (155) is different~
[*]01:10:517 , 01:10:961 , 01:11:406
are more necessary to add note then
01:11:850 (182)
[*]01:20:739 (220,221,222,223)
This could be change to k k d or any 3 comb
[*]01:28:072 (247)
Properbly you could take finish sound more
rather then 1/6 s
so look like ddd K , kkd D , ddd D , etc