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Topic Starter
Nymph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月8日 at 18:35:44

Artist: VocaliodP
Title: 1/6
Tags: out of gravity No_Gu tutuhaha vocaloid hatsune miku OdoP
BPM: 125
Filesize: 6743kb
Play Time: 04:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gu's Normal (3.18 stars, 283 notes)
  2. Insane (4.97 stars, 651 notes)
  3. TuHard (4.61 stars, 427 notes)
Download: VocaliodP - 1/6
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1/6
1年多前做的失败作渣图 虽然烂但是有GD不想坟啊 撞墙反省中
^this map is old and suck
No_Gu
复活
Kanon
Mod via IRC
log
10:47 Kanon: 总感觉音效略单薄
10:47 Nymph: 嗯 还有一层whistle没加
10:52 Nymph: 。。转盘前的那个note很难抓么
10:52 Kanon: 哪里
10:53 Nymph: 每个转盘前不是个回转slider么
10:53 Nymph: 然后底下有个note
10:53 Nymph: 感觉你每次都在那犹豫一下
10:53 Kanon: 不难 那里我觉得挺好
10:53 Nymph: 。是么
10:54 Kanon: 01:08:105 (3) - 这个去掉?
10:55 Kanon: 01:13:985 (5) - NC这里开始?
10:55 Nymph: 去掉了我前面slider还是那么放?
10:55 Nymph: 还是拉长一格
10:56 Kanon: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464371
10:57 Nymph: soga
10:57 Nymph: 搞定
10:58 Kanon: 01:29:345 (4,5) - 都用clap强调下?
10:58 Nymph: 音乐没有啊 感觉太突出了带clap
11:00 Kanon: 02:17:225 (4) - 这个也去掉?
tutuhaha
Saten
o3o

[General]
03:25:505 - I kinda expected a kiai fountain here
Add guest mappers to tags on all diffs
offset 61 (-4ms) feels somewhat better
Vocaloid names must never go in Artist or Source. Instead, use the composer of said song with "Vocaloid" as Artist, the Vocaloid name can go in the tags; more info: p/1767683
I don't like this rule btw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8VliGjILzs
Composer is OdoP

[Insane]
00:53:105 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:13:745 (4,1) - stack/custom-stack this better
01:34:145 - add a break?
01:53:105 (1,2) - stack the tails better?
01:56:225 (5) - 1 grid left
03:00:545 - custom whistle on this slidertick?
03:23:585 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a zigzag pattern? 03:28:865 (5,2) - stack properly?

[Tu]
00:12:545 (1,2) - Normal Sampleset or claps
01:19:745 (5,6,7) - this might be tricky
03:23:585 (1,2,3,4) - claps on the tails as well

[Gu]
AR+1 (4 feels kinda awkward imo)
01:23:345 (2) - finish on tail
01:24:545 (4) - finish on head
01:25:505 (5) - finish on start
01:57:905 (2,3) - is this on purpose?
02:07:025 (4,5,6) - claps on tails as well
02:32:705 (2) - finish on start
02:54:785 (1) - whistle
02:56:705 (1) - ^
02:58:625 (1) - ^
03:00:545 (1) - ^
03:18:785 (3) - finish on head
03:44:705 (1) - second point 1 grid up & left
04:11:585 (1) - finish on start & end
04:13:505 (3) - finish on head
04:14:465 (4) - ^
04:15:425 (1) - ^
04:16:385 (2) - ^
04:17:345 (3) - ^
04:18:305 (5) - ^


Good luck~~
Rotte
Gu's Normal

00:46:145 (3) - 右移一格
01:37:985 - 到 01:45:425 - 这一段音效有点吵

TuHard

01:09:185 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:14:465 (2) - ^
01:20:945 (6) - NC?
02:15:425 (6,7,1) - 可以加绿线弄渐强音量
02:54:065 (1,2,3) - 这个别叠着用个三角小跳如何?
03:48:545 (1) - 移除NC
03:48:545 (1) - NC
04:14:225 (8) - Finish去掉比较好
04:16:625 - ^

Insane

00:56:225 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:57:185 (4) -
01:08:585 (5) - 我觉得删掉这个note比较好
01:20:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里有点坑....
我觉得这样比较好

01:46:985 (7) - 这个note删了吧..打起来怪怪的

01:53:105 (1) - 用note感觉比较好...
01:53:345 - 这个也是
02:00:425 (4) - 删掉吧...打起来怪怪的
02:01:385 (2) - ^



老妮的神图,摸摸 :)
onodai145
[General]
Artist: VocaliodP
OdoP is VocaliodP's nickname.

[Insane]
I think better to start from 00:03:185 -
01:13:745 (4,1) - Add a break?

[TuHard]
00:09:425 - I think better this pattern
01:30:785 - Add a note and start spinner 01:30:905 -
02:39:905 - Add a note and start spinner 02:40:025 -

[Gu's Normal]
03:31:025 - I think better this pattern


Nice map XD
Good Luck~

Sorry my bad English.
Topic Starter
Nymph
@Saten: thanks for modding! Almost fix all but can't have a log..... (weird I can't find the Quote button).........

@Rotte:fix some on Insane and normal but didn't change a lot on hard diff :3 多谢~

@onodai145: fix the artist thanks~ didn't fix other stuff in the diffs because I think they are fine current~ thank you~
raririn
いつか重力のクサリを 断ち切り
君を連れて サテライト

[General]
  1. 把out of gravity加进tag?
  2. Artist:ぼーかりおどP VocaliodP放romanised artist


    [Insane]
    1PC
    1. 00:08:465 (2) - 最后一个点往右下移一格?
    2. 00:13:025 - 我觉得这里音应该重一点/_\ 90%?
    3. 00:39:425 (3,4) - 感觉像是这样的...
    4. 00:51:905 (1) - 能平滑一点/ \?
    5. 01:54:785 (4,5) - Ctrl+G反一下?
    6. 01:55:265 (1,2) - 感觉Ctrl+Shift+R 10°好看点..
    7. 03:06:785 (2,3,4,1) - ...太鬼畜了嘛沙包怎么DT
    8. 03:17:345 (4) - 往下一点差不多(x=436,y=96)的地方:?
太中规中矩了NH连nazi都弄不出来;_;
酱油mod 没kd了
Topic Starter
Nymph

raririn wrote:

いつか重力のクサリを 断ち切り
君を連れて サテライト

[General]
  1. 把out of gravity加进tag?
  2. Artist:ぼーかりおどP VocaliodP放romanised artist

    嗯全弄了
    [Insane]
    1PC
    1. 00:08:465 (2) - 最后一个点往右下移一格?
    2. 00:13:025 - 我觉得这里音应该重一点/_\ 90%?这个我感觉现在就行啊
    3. 00:39:425 (3,4) - 感觉像是这样的...唔这个感觉还好
    4. 00:51:905 (1) - 能平滑一点/ \?这个其实我更喜欢我这个;w;
    5. 01:54:785 (4,5) - Ctrl+G反一下?
    6. 01:55:265 (1,2) - 感觉Ctrl+Shift+R 10°好看点..其实这2个某种意义上故意的..
    7. 03:06:785 (2,3,4,1) - ...太鬼畜了嘛沙包怎么DT 没事啊 空节奏了的
    8. 03:17:345 (4) - 往下一点差不多(x=436,y=96)的地方:? 挪了一下位置
太中规中矩了NH连nazi都弄不出来;_;
酱油mod 没kd了

液多谢
raririn
.......
Elinia
[Gu's Normal]
01:12:065 (2,3,4) - 做成这样感觉好些?

04:06:785 (5) - 再多个折返?然后摆成这样子
虽然easy normal确实该多放滑条,但还是感觉滑条太多了点orz

[TuHard]
00:12:545 (1,2,3) - a little bit boring, change the style? 比如说三角形
04:19:385 (1) - 在这里04:22:145结束?

[Insane]
00:44:465 (2) - 拖到x:92 y:68?
02:07:985 (6) - 这个如果别人的皮肤比较大圈会被挡住的啊……收缩圈更是
02:19:265 (4) - ^
02:39:185 (8,1) - 这样更合vocal些?

03:55:985 (3,1) - ^
02:54:785 (1) - 02:58:625 (1) - 为啥不用reverse或是note+短滑条0.0反正减了SV
04:11:585 (1,2,3,4) - 连续的在下面的note好不舒服……把2和3往上移一些?
04:19:265 (1) - 在这里04:22:145结束?
另外感觉这个insane有点偏容易了0.0

[Others]
愚人节快乐 :)
Leorda
Hi there

[Gu's Normal]
00:22:145 (2) - Flip horizontally for better flow?
02:39:665 (1) - Add finish for emphasis?


[TuHard]
00:53:825 (6) - Make a slider like this to make a better flow for next slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687777
01:07:265 (3) - Add clap at end
01:47:585 (6) - Move to X:420 and Y:60 for better flow?
02:04:385 (8) - This position of slider can break the flow. Reverse the slider to fix it?
03:27:905 (5) - ^


[Insane]
00:06:545 (3,4) - Jump here is doesn't fit. It doesn't have a *pop* sound (like the sound effect at 00:07:745)
00:39:425 (3) - Snap the end slider at blue tick isn't fit to the song, IMO
02:15:425 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump?


Good luck
Topic Starter
Nymph

elinia wrote:

[Gu's Normal]
01:12:065 (2,3,4) - 做成这样感觉好些?yes fixed

04:06:785 (5) - 再多个折返?然后摆成这样子 这个感觉还是不要 尤其低难度我觉得尽量避免多折返
虽然easy normal确实该多放滑条,但还是感觉滑条太多了点orz 个人风格问题 我自己做的话也很愿意放slider

[TuHard]
00:12:545 (1,2,3) - a little bit boring, change the style? 比如说三角形 开头嘛 我觉得还好
04:19:385 (1) - 在这里04:22:145结束?这个一说我才想起来转盘时间不一样 我把normal的过跟其他dif统一了

[Insane]
00:44:465 (2) - 拖到x:92 y:68?其实这个梗故意的 就算你问为什么这么诡异我也说不出来啊
02:07:985 (6) - 这个如果别人的皮肤比较大圈会被挡住的啊……收缩圈更是
02:19:265 (4) - ^ 这个很普通吧 还是不要
02:39:185 (8,1) - 这样更合vocal些?感觉玩起来有点怪 先保留意见

03:55:985 (3,1) - ^
02:54:785 (1) - 02:58:625 (1) - 为啥不用reverse或是note+短滑条0.0反正减了SV 我也不知道啊 反正就随手下了节奏
04:11:585 (1,2,3,4) - 连续的在下面的note好不舒服……把2和3往上移一些?换了下位置 往上摆了摆
04:19:265 (1) - 在这里04:22:145结束?
另外感觉这个insane有点偏容易了0.0 嘛BPM就这样

[Others]
愚人节快乐 :) 多谢多谢~
thanks~
Topic Starter
Nymph

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Gu's Normal]
00:22:145 (2) - Flip horizontally for better flow? I think it is fine
02:39:665 (1) - Add finish for emphasis? finish kinda weird here


[TuHard]
00:53:825 (6) - Make a slider like this to make a better flow for next slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687777 nah I don't think blanket is needed here
01:07:265 (3) - Add clap at end added
01:47:585 (6) - Move to X:420 and Y:60 for better flow? I think current is better
02:04:385 (8) - This position of slider can break the flow. Reverse the slider to fix it?
03:27:905 (5) - ^ I think a jump seems fine for the flow


[Insane]
00:06:545 (3,4) - Jump here is doesn't fit. It doesn't have a *pop* sound (like the sound effect at 00:07:745) change the spacing
00:39:425 (3) - Snap the end slider at blue tick isn't fit to the song, IMO hmm I think it is fine though
02:15:425 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump? nah this spacing can hardly be called a jump, so I think new combo seems weird here


Good luck
thanks~
wcx19911123
as your request

[General]
offset=56(-9) is better imo

[Gu's Normal]
AR-1? 5 is kinda high to this diff
03:27:185 (3,4) - slider first and then citrcle later, rhyme'll be better imo
04:24:005 - spinner end at here(1/8 snap)? it'll fit the song better imo

[TuHard]
00:51:905 (2) - I suggest you ctrl+g on this slider. the jump is not too hard to play as a Hard diff, but it doesn't fit the song at all, I don't know why to add a jump here..
04:24:005 - same as Normal

[Insane]
00:13:145 - add a note? do the same things you did at 00:12:665 -
01:20:945 - 因为这里有个vocal,所以我建议这里用3连+单点或者单点+3连好点,2连+2连感觉不太合曲,因为这附近你基本跟的都是vocal
01:34:145 - 感觉spinner end没必要这么小声
01:42:305 (2,3) - wrong spacing?
02:07:985 (6) - change a shape or direction please, the slider's end touched HP bar(with default skin)
04:24:005 - same as Normal

我今天有点喝多了0.0
Topic Starter
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
offset=56(-9) is better imo k

[Gu's Normal]
AR-1? 5 is kinda high to this diffk
03:27:185 (3,4) - slider first and then citrcle later, rhyme'll be better imok
04:24:005 - spinner end at here(1/8 snap)? it'll fit the song better imo well feel aliitle weird about this one,so keep it

[TuHard]
00:51:905 (2) - I suggest you ctrl+g on this slider. the jump is not too hard to play as a Hard diff, but it doesn't fit the song at all, I don't know why to add a jump here.. k
04:24:005 - same as Normal

[Insane]
00:13:145 - add a note? do the same things you did at 00:12:665 - k
01:20:945 - 因为这里有个vocal,所以我建议这里用3连+单点或者单点+3连好点,2连+2连感觉不太合曲,因为这附近你基本跟的都是vocal
01:34:145 - 感觉spinner end没必要这么小声个人爱好
01:42:305 (2,3) - wrong spacing? k
02:07:985 (6) - change a shape or direction please, the slider's end touched HP bar(with default skin) k
04:24:005 - same as Normal

我今天有点喝多了0.0
多谢
wcx19911123
bubbled
Elinia
lol :)
Scorpiour
hi there~~random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Suggest to uncheck letterbox during breaks since there're some short breaks not fit for that
[Insane]
  1. 00:53:816 (1) - make it curved a bit? like
  2. 00:57:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - about here, i'd like to move (1) - to 257:71 (00:56:696 (3) - 's end), and then make a square jump like this:
  3. 01:02:936 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
  4. 01:10:136 (3,4,5,6) - i'd like to move the triplet to red-tick
  5. 01:14:936 (1) - apply a red anchor? also 01:15:656 (2) -
  6. 01:20:216 (6) - also, ctrl+g for flow?
[Gu's Normal]
  1. CS-1?
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