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TERRA - Fantasia

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murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年5月19日 at 2:11:40 午前

Artist: TERRA
Title: Fantasia
Source: pop'n music THE MOVIE
Tags: pop'n music game Sakik alacat Garven jubeat saucer naoki maeda jun hyper fantasia beatmaniaIIDX 18 Resort Anthem
BPM: 165
Filesize: 2563kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Normal (1.82 stars, 135 notes)
  2. Garven's Easy (1.85 stars, 89 notes)
  3. Insane (4.58 stars, 352 notes)
  4. SakiK's Hard (3.28 stars, 247 notes)
Download: TERRA - Fantasia
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
moebuta is good
but moebuta is not moebuta
why?
because moebuta is moebuta...

Guest.
Sakik-Hard
alacat-Normal
Garven-Easy
Last edited by murasamenosigure , edited 14 times in total.
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
(ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ ~ ☆

Normal ~ (3.41) http://puu.sh/1faZk
murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

alacat wrote:

(ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ ~ ☆

Normal ~ (3.41) http://puu.sh/1faZk

($・・)/~~~
SakiK
326 posts
Joined June 2010
SakiK
here is my diff(Hard 4.94)
http://puu.sh/1h65j

sorry for late
murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

SakiK wrote:

here is my diff(Hard 4.94)
http://puu.sh/1h65j

sorry for late

np

試験頑張りましょう
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
BinJip
hi

*これは全部提案です

[General]

今のmp3 bitrateは 197kbpsです 128~192kbpsの間に変えてください
hit sound volume 100%->80% 100%とても大きい


[alacat's Normal]

00:49:422 (1) - 1gird down

easy とか normalは 変えると面倒だからこまかいのは pass!
(絶対したくなくてしないのではないからな!)


[SakiK's Hard]

00:59:604 (3) - なんで bule line? こうしてみてください


01:00:331 (5,6) - これも次の red line までふやすことがいいとおもいます
01:01:786 (5,6) - ^

[Insane]

00:54:877 (9) ~ 00:58:149 (1) までBreak time?? HP多く減る

01:09:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - ボーカルが始める時スライダーを入れるのがもっと似合


01:15:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^


01:17:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^
murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

BinJip wrote:

hi

*これは全部提案です

[General]

今のmp3 bitrateは 197kbpsです 128~192kbpsの間に変えてください
hit sound volume 100%->80% 100%とても大きい


[Insane]

00:54:877 (9) ~ 00:58:149 (1) までBreak time?? HP多く減る

01:09:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - ボーカルが始める時スライダーを入れるのがもっと似合


01:15:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^


01:17:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^

thx Mod!!

01:15:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^


I adopted it


今のmp3 bitrateは 197kbpsです 128~192kbpsの間に変えてください

128に変えたら違和感出たんですけど何でかわかりますかね？
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
[General]
You forgot to change the timing on Guest diffs after you changed mp3
I think you need an easier diff (3 star or less) than Normal (which is basically 3,5 star)

[Insane]
00:17:116 (7) - clap
00:17:844 (3) - clap on head
00:18:026 (4) - remove clap on tail
00:18:571 (7) - clap
00:52:026 (2,4) - this overlap is kinda unrankable (hitburst overlaps repeat-arrow)
01:08:389 (1) - finish on head?
01:12:026 (11,1,2,3,4) - make the spacing more smooth?
01:06:026 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - tricky start & end. But you don't have to change it though, just pointing that out :P
01:09:844 - Start the kiai here instead
01:40:571 (4) - NC?

[Sakik]
imo you should use AR 8
00:59:662 (3,4,5) - is this on purpose? o.O
01:01:844 (5,6) - ^
01:05:480 - missing something here
01:05:844 - ^
01:07:298 (3,4,5) - same as 01:01:844 (5,6) - ^
01:08:389 (1) - Finish on head

[alacat]
omg, please use CS 3 and AR 5
00:12:389 (1,1) - this might be too close
01:33:116 (1,1) - ^


That's all for now I guess~

Goodluck /o/
SakiK
326 posts
Joined June 2010
SakiK
all of bug inherited point... fix

hope fix this bug soon
http://puu.sh/1l6xC
murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

Saten wrote:

[General]
You forgot to change the timing on Guest diffs after you changed mp3
I think you need an easier diff (3 star or less) than Normal (which is basically 3,5 star)

[Insane]
00:17:116 (7) - clap
00:17:844 (3) - clap on head
00:18:026 (4) - remove clap on tail
00:18:571 (7) - clap
00:52:026 (2,4) - this overlap is kinda unrankable (hitburst overlaps repeat-arrow)
01:08:389 (1) - finish on head?
01:12:026 (11,1,2,3,4) - make the spacing more smooth?
01:06:026 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - tricky start & end. But you don't have to change it though, just pointing that out :P
01:09:844 - Start the kiai here instead
01:40:571 (4) - NC?


That's all for now I guess~

Goodluck /o/

thx Mod!
~_~/

Easy will make Garven
But He is busy
God only knows...
Star Stream
2,031 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:alacat's Normal
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:513 (1) - too earlier after spinner, it's the easiest diff in this map, plz make enough break between them plz
  2. 01:19:967 (3) - avoid overlapping
  3. 01:35:967 (1) - same as 00:14:513 (1) -
[Hard]
  1. CS-1
no much things to point but you need 1 more diff between Hard and Insane..

Good luck
noclip
26 posts
Joined July 2011
noclip
00:21:844 (11) - slightly above and to the left
00:04:026 (4,5,6,1) - encourage you to share this place
00:08:753 (5,6,7,1) - ^^
00:34:935 (3,4,5,6) - I advise you to do so:

00:37:298 (1) - A combo of one slider??
01:06:389 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - Sharing this place
01:14:207 (10) - put this slider so:

01:32:389 (7) - too far
Cuvelia
282 posts
Joined November 2011
Cuvelia
こんにちは。
アーティスト名などについての提案です。

[General]
  1. アーティスト名を TERRA に変更。
    　
  2. ソースを pop'n music THE MOVIE に変更？
    音源は元のゲームの曲のキー音を抜いたやつでしょうか？
    曲を聴いていても原曲とは違うので・・・
    もしそうでしたらソースはACで初出の pop'n music THE MOVIE で問題無いと思います。
    元のソースであるpop'n music portableは移植先ですのでタグのほうに入れたらいいかと思います。
    jubeat saucerにも移植されてるのでこちらもタグに入れてもいいかと思います。
    　
  3. それ以外はタグに naoki maeda , jun , hyper fantasia を追加、terra を削除。
    　
  4. PreviewTime : 30935 のほうが歌詞と曲調の始まりとしてはいい感じがしました、気に入らなければnoで全然大丈夫です。
    　
  5. Star Streamさんのmodにも書いてますが alacat's Normal だけオフセットが-32になっており音が凄くずれています。
    他の難易度のオフセットは26です、これで大丈夫だと思うので26に修正しましょう。

頑張ってください～
murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

Cuvelia wrote:

こんにちは。
アーティスト名などについての提案です。

[General]
  1. アーティスト名を TERRA に変更。
    　
  2. ソースを pop'n music THE MOVIE に変更？
    音源は元のゲームの曲のキー音を抜いたやつでしょうか？
    曲を聴いていても原曲とは違うので・・・
    もしそうでしたらソースはACで初出の pop'n music THE MOVIE で問題無いと思います。
    元のソースであるpop'n music portableは移植先ですのでタグのほうに入れたらいいかと思います。
    jubeat saucerにも移植されてるのでこちらもタグに入れてもいいかと思います。
    　
  3. それ以外はタグに naoki maeda , jun , hyper fantasia を追加、terra を削除。
    　
  4. PreviewTime : 30935 のほうが歌詞と曲調の始まりとしてはいい感じがしました、気に入らなければnoで全然大丈夫です。
    　
  5. Star Streamさんのmodにも書いてますが alacat's Normal だけオフセットが-32になっており音が凄くずれています。
    他の難易度のオフセットは26です、これで大丈夫だと思うので26に修正しましょう。

頑張ってください～

指摘ありがとうございます！
助かりました＼(^o^)／
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
thanks guys :3

http://puu.sh/1oaU5

今後、offset変更した場合はよろしくおねがいしますね～
murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:alacat's Normal
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:513 (1) - too earlier after spinner, it's the easiest diff in this map, plz make enough break between them plz
  2. 01:19:967 (3) - avoid overlapping
  3. 01:35:967 (1) - same as 00:14:513 (1) -
[Hard]
  1. CS-1
no much things to point but you need 1 more diff between Hard and Insane..

Good luck

thx mod~/

Insane no mod?
murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

noclip wrote:

00:21:844 (11) - slightly above and to the left
00:04:026 (4,5,6,1) - encourage you to share this place
00:08:753 (5,6,7,1) - ^^
00:34:935 (3,4,5,6) - I advise you to do so:

00:37:298 (1) - A combo of one slider??
01:06:389 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - Sharing this place
01:14:207 (10) - put this slider so:

01:32:389 (7) - too far

thx mod
But you did mod only 1diff....
I cant give you kds...
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
遅くなってごめんなさい

Easyできました！

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murasamenosigure
170 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
murasamenosigure

Garven wrote:

遅くなってごめんなさい

Easyできました！

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256,320,19662,5,0,0:0:0
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368,288,22571,1,2,0:0:0
336,176,22935,1,0,0:0:0
236,108,23298,2,0,P|344:56|444:124,1,240
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148,224,33116,1,2,0:0:0
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48,280,34571,1,8,0:0:0
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272,112,39298,1,2,0:0:0
384,328,40025,1,2,0:0:0
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160,56,41844,1,10,0:0:0
96,152,42207,2,0,P|160:216|160:216|224:168|304:192,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,232,44753,1,10,0:0:0
217,349,45116,2,0,P|96:376|8:312,1,240
16,192,46207,1,8,0:0:0
120,136,46571,1,0,0:0:0
392,136,47298,1,0,0:0:0
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256,48,58207,5,4,0:1:0
256,336,59662,1,0,0:0:0
104,96,61116,1,0,0:0:0
408,96,62571,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,64026,8,4,68389,0:1:0
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256,16,72389,1,8,0:0:0
152,80,72753,2,0,P|256:131|360:80,2,240,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,296,74935,1,0,0:0:0
488,224,75662,6,0,P|496:64|328:48,1,360,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
181,46,77116,2,0,P|16:64|24:224,1,360,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,304,78571,1,0,0:0:0
400,304,79298,1,2,0:0:0
360,64,80026,1,0,0:0:0
256,8,80389,1,2,0:0:0
152,64,80753,1,2,0:0:0
64,288,81480,6,0,P|144:360|256:312,1,240
256,192,82571,1,2,0:0:0
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456,216,84026,1,8,0:0:0
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64,200,92753,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,101844,5,4,0:1:0


thx Garven~~
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[Garven's Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:52:389 (3, 4) - move this to the right so that (4) doesn't go off-stage

[alacat's Normal]
SPOILER
  1. 00:10:026 (1) - is the only upbeat circle that is not stacked, inconsistent?
  2. 00:12:389 (1) - spinner is placed very close to notes, consider moving back 2/2
  3. 00:43:662 (1) - you could have 3/2 length (current is 2/2 length) slider, for interest. Aligns with singing
  4. 01:17:116 (4) - could have 2/3 length reverse slider here, to align with singing again, more interesting. Also with note on 01:17:844 or, double reverse. e.g the same rhythm as 00:07:298
  5. 01:20:026 (3) - same idea as before, if you wanted
  6. 01:37:480 (3) - could lengthen reverse slider to be 4/3 beats, aligns with the chorus choir voices nicely. (4) stays in same (rhythmic) place and creates an endbeat.

[SakiK's Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:18:026 (5, 6) - jump seems excessive here
  2. 00:35:480 (2, 3) - same
  3. 00:58:207 - consider maybe faster SV? 0.6 or 0.7. You still get nice effect, but not as jarring for movement/speed difference on player. Especially since the resulting speed-up has practically no warning, it is also jarring.
  4. 01:01:480 (3, 4) - I think you should swap their positions, will be more intuitive and lead to more sensible jump from (4) to (5).
  5. 01:19:298 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is very hard jump for hard, consider making distance smaller. For instance, moving 4, 6, 8, and 9 upward.

[Insane]

SPOILER
Overall this sometimes has some very large jumps that stand out from the rest, I pointed out the biggest, I would consider making them slightly more even over all.
  1. 00:22:026 (1, 2) - large, unepxected jump, in quiet part of piece, consider shortening it
  2. 00:58:207 - why not consider putting a slower slider velocity here like in Hard diff? Could work well again. ~0.8 or something
  3. 01:25:480 (4, 1) - huge jump here again
  4. 01:29:298 (6, 1) - and here
  5. 01:31:298 (1 -8) - these jumps are all massive, I expect this to be in a >5 star diff, not 4.5 star
  6. 01:36:026 - Again, maybe consider putting a slider velocity mod in here to indicate wind-down of the song
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