masamune11 wrote:

Hello~

I did say that I would like to mod this map... but, fortunately, I can not find any inconsistencies, so... Have a star instead~

Nicely designed beatmap, btw

LQA20Ans wrote:

M4M mod~
It would be short...


[General]

-Rewrite & GD Insane's hitsound is diffrent with other 3 diffs.
Match the sound and it would be consistent.


[Easy]

-01:05:996 (3) - Change to slider like 01:05:222 (2) -. It follows the rhythm.

-01:22:254 (1,2,3,4) - It's a suggestion... how about this one.

just drag down

[Normal]

-HP Drain +1

-00:35:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change to two repeat, symmetrical sliders would be good.
if you change to sliders, add a whistle on start and end of sliders.

-01:12:189 (7) - delete whistle on end.


[Hard]

-01:22:254 (1) - delete a whitle on end of slider.
01:23:254 (3,1,3) - Other sliders too.


[Rewrite]

-00:11:028 (3) - NC

-00:38:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Give a crescendo to stream's hitsound.

-00:51:673 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - makes the jump bigger would be playable and rise the mood imo

-01:17:802 (2,4) - overlap the note.

-01:32:663 (5) - change to one repeat slider like Lunatic GD.


[jonathanlfj's Lunatic]

-00:12:577 (1) - make a slider more wrinkled

-00:38:125 (3) - Give a crescendo effect on hitsound.


PS : 01:16:060 (3) - Nice crescent moon


Nice map I can't say where to fix.

Good luck! Take my star :3

jonathanlfj wrote:

my whole body hurts from falling over 9000 times orz

BeatofIke wrote:

jonathanlfj wrote:

my whole body hurts from falling over 9000 times orz

Ouch! That looks very painful! D:

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

jonathanlfj's Lunatic

1. 00:00:190 - check "Nc" press twice done
2. 00:00:770 - I think remove whistle and 00:00:964 - add whistle here~? the whistle is meant to correspond with the piano sound in the background
3. 00:02:319 - ^ as above
4. 01:05:996 - remove nc ? o.o ok

LQA20Ans wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Lunatic]

-00:12:577 (1) - make a slider more wrinkled aite

-00:38:125 (3) - Give a crescendo effect on hitsound. nice one, done


PS : 01:16:060 (3) - Nice crescent moon thank you

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Rewrite

1. 00:14:125 - 00:24:964 - 00:26:512 - 00:38:899 - 00:41:996 - 00:52:835 - 00:54:383 - 01:00:577 - 01:12:964 - add finish
2. 00:17:609 - 00:18:383 - add clap
3. 00:21:093 - this slider(2nd point x=256 y=340 3rd point x=216 y=344) is better( 00:21:867 - this slider follow)
   
4. 00:21:480 - this slider 00:21:093 - use Ctrl+H + Ctrl+J
5. 00:32:706 - add whistle?
6. 01:22:254 - red line "S1custom" now... change "Default" 01:31:254 - ^

hitsound has been all fixed, pattern kept.

inverness wrote:

Rewrite

1. Volume setting too low!
2. 00:03:093 (6) - Remove or unstack fixed
3. 00:22:448 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest you to make these pattern look like this 00:23:415 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 00:29:415 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nooo bad placement bad flow Try make them placed cyclic or criss-cross triangle (david star placement)
5. 01:27:004 (10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Definitely a big no-no. Too much pattern in a same place. You should move them somewhere else and don't make them stacked like that

LQA20Ans wrote:

[Rewrite]

-00:11:028 (3) - NC fixed

-00:38:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Give a crescendo to stream's hitsound. fixed

-00:51:673 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - makes the jump bigger would be playable and rise the mood imo

-01:17:802 (2,4) - overlap the note. fixed

-01:32:663 (5) - change to one repeat slider like Lunatic GD.

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
set lead-in to 2500 plz, 2000 is not enough imo Fixed!
timing is bit late imo, I'll find the better one later(my tablet doesn't work now) O.O

[Normal]
00:44:319 (4,5) - how about move them to 00:44:125 - , will fit the song better imo, like what you did at 00:41:028 - It will be off beat when if I change this, so I will leave it.

[Hard]
00:47:222 (2) - move it to x:256 :196? flow will be better Fixed!
00:39:189 - how about end the slider here? 3/4 beat sounds great here imo. need to fix the pattern a bit if you want to change this, or the jump to 00:39:286 (2) - is too huge I like it the way it is. It looks strange when I try changing it, so I will leave it.

[jonathanlfj's Lunatic]
01:29:754 (6) - how about ctrl+g on this, like what you ddi at 01:27:754 - , flow will be much better imo Looks like a good suggestion, but I will wait for jonathanlfj's response!

nice map, I'll be back Okay :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Lunatic]
01:29:754 (6) - how about ctrl+g on this, like what you ddi at 01:27:754 - , flow will be much better imo alrite

1. 00:49:748 (3) - Of all the sliders here in this difficulty, I think this one is the weirdest. The blanket doesn't look good and needs to be fixed. I suggest you use 4 points instead of 3 so you could make a better blanket.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:16:070 - I think you should add a circle here instead to give emphasis to the last syllable of the lyric and the end of kiai. So basically, if you followed this suggestion, your gonna have to move the spinner on 01:16:264 instead.
3. 01:26:259 - Same suggestion that I said above. Would be better if you emphasize these things ~

1. HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty is too low in my opinion. Try adding +1 on each to maintain the difficulty spread through this diff.
2. 01:14:522 (5,6) - Switching these circles I believe would be better. It'll make much more sense in the music if the reverse slider comes first before the circle. You should try it out and see XD
3. 01:16:070 - Same suggestion I did on Easy. Add a note here to emphasize the beat and bla bla you know what it is ~ XD Oh and this also applies to the last part too cause I'm too lazy to list them up cause I know that you know XD

1. OD 6 would be better for this diff in my opinion.
2. 00:09:490 - What about add a note here too to emphasize the start of the song? XD
3. 01:16:070 - Same suggestion over and over. D:
   
   THIS HARD IS THE BEST HARD I'VE EVER SEEN! O_O

1. Okay, first things first. I know the mapper of this diff's name is Rewrite. But seriously, does the diff name make any sense? I mean, players would be like "Wut iz thiz diviculti?" and something like that. I prefer naming it like what jonathanlfj did on his diff.
2. 01:03:296 (9,10) - The flow of the patterns would be more smoother and better if you switch the positions of these two hit circles. Try it.

1. OH MY GOD THIS IS FCKING PERFECT!!!!!!!

SPOILER

WHATDAFUQ OHMYGOD BEAT, REWRITE, AND JONATHAN! THIS IS THE BEST MAP EVER I LOVE ALL YOUR PATTERNS! OH MY GOD I'M GONNA VOTE FOR THIS MAP ON 2013! D BIG BIG YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! LOL

Philippines wrote:

Hi, BeatofIke! Here's a mod I promised from The Hot Seat Queue.

Easy

1. 00:49:748 (3) - Of all the sliders here in this difficulty, I think this one is the weirdest. The blanket doesn't look good and needs to be fixed. I suggest you use 4 points instead of 3 so you could make a better blanket. Fixed!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:16:070 - I think you should add a circle here instead to give emphasis to the last syllable of the lyric and the end of kiai. So basically, if you followed this suggestion, your gonna have to move the spinner on 01:16:264 instead. Sorry, not this time :I
3. 01:26:259 - Same suggestion that I said above. Would be better if you emphasize these things ~ ^

Normal

1. HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty is too low in my opinion. Try adding +1 on each to maintain the difficulty spread through this diff. Fixed!
2. 01:14:522 (5,6) - Switching these circles I believe would be better. It'll make much more sense in the music if the reverse slider comes first before the circle. You should try it out and see XD I want symmetry XD
3. 01:16:070 - Same suggestion I did on Easy. Add a note here to emphasize the beat and bla bla you know what it is ~ XD Oh and this also applies to the last part too cause I'm too lazy to list them up cause I know that you know XD Same as Easy :I

Hard

1. OD 6 would be better for this diff in my opinion. Fixed!
2. 00:09:490 - What about add a note here too to emphasize the start of the song? XD Nah XD
3. 01:16:070 - Same suggestion over and over. D: Same as Easy and Normal :I
   
   THIS HARD IS THE BEST HARD I'VE EVER SEEN! O_O
   Thanks XD

Rewrite

1. Okay, first things first. I know the mapper of this diff's name is Rewrite. But seriously, does the diff name make any sense? I mean, players would be like "Wut iz thiz diviculti?" and something like that. I prefer naming it like what jonathanlfj did on his diff. Most of his recent guest difficultes are named "Rewrite" difficulty.
2. 01:03:296 (9,10) - The flow of the patterns would be more smoother and better if you switch the positions of these two hit circles. Try it. It doesn't feel right. The flow is better the way it is. :I

jonathanlfj's Lunatic

1. OH MY GOD THIS IS FCKING PERFECT!!!!!!! Cuz jonathanlfj's maps are too pro!

Fix my suggestions and you can call me back for a bubble recheck XD. In the meantime:

SPOILER

WHATDAFUQ OHMYGOD BEAT, REWRITE, AND JONATHAN! THIS IS THE BEST MAP EVER I LOVE ALL YOUR PATTERNS! OH MY GOD I'M GONNA VOTE FOR THIS MAP ON 2013! D BIG BIG YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! LOL

BeatofIke wrote:

Normal

1. 01:14:522 (5,6) - Switching these circles I believe would be better. It'll make much more sense in the music if the reverse slider comes first before the circle. You should try it out and see XD I want symmetry XD No, this'll make much more sense. D:

BeatofIke wrote:

Philippines wrote:

jonathanlfj's Lunatic

1. OH MY GOD THIS IS FCKING PERFECT!!!!!!! Cuz jonathanlfj's maps are too pro!

BeatofIke wrote:

I'm waiting for a BAT to check this map. I wanted this map to be ranked by the end of the year, but it's now too late orz >_<

163,146,24974,6,0,P|200:128|240:132,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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MMzz wrote:

01:06:006 (9) - Would be a very good idea to remove a repeat on this and use a note for the last beat. It will give the player a WAY better understanding of when the 1/8 ends instead of having to guess (sorta).

MMzz wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Lunatic]
OD8 Would be cool, OD7 is just too easy. (or maybe it's just me lol) i think ur just too pro xD...OD8 will make me rage quit on this diff if i play it (already made it harder than it should be with AR9 lol)
00:07:167 (1) - Remove this combo. (and 00:08:716 (1) - ) I understand you want to follow the vocal with combos here(?), but I have a better idea for you. With those 2 combos gone you have just regular downbeat combos then you have to shorter combos kicking in at: 00:09:490 (1) - that following the build up of the music perfectly so it makes more sense for them to be shorter. Now with those previous ones longer you are following exactly to the build up! true, these combos were added as previous suggestions for consistency but the build up makes more sense, so done~
00:34:264 (4,1) - Swap these combos? Makes more sense because of the downbeat and vocals, plus makes the jump pattern more clear. opps that was a mistake, nice catch
01:06:006 (9) - Would be a very good idea to remove a repeat on this and use a note for the last beat. It will give the player a WAY better understanding of when the 1/8 ends instead of having to guess (sorta). gg done, and effectively made it a bit more challenging (also applied it to 00:38:135 (3) for consistency, hope its fine)

Scorpiour wrote:

congrats~~~

osu! need more senya!