frost-b-spec wrote:

m4mありがとうございます。

譜面については言うことなしでした。
Modしてもらって申し訳ないです。

気付いているかもしれませんが、日本名タイトル、アーティストへの変更だけしておいて下さい。 fixed

+kdstar

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi kajiyatta ~

From my queue

[Easy]

00:54:254 (1,2,3,1) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdzS change? fixed

01:13:769 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdBF fixed

01:40:396 (3,4) blanket please current seems no problem


[Normal]

00:20:675 (1,2,3) specing http://puu.sh/1ZdHR fixed

00:30:709 (2) This is slider -> http://puu.sh/1ZdG5 fixed

00:33:237 (2,3) Straight flow of the slider is hard. -> http://puu.sh/1ZdJ7 This flow is better I know your mean, but this part is consistence.

00:56:308 (2,3,4,5) This pattern is recommended -> http://puu.sh/1ZdLA none

01:08:002 Straight flow of the slider is hard. I don't think such a thing, but if other modders say same opnion, I'll change.

01:18:115 (1) ^

01:30:915 (1,2,3,4) The flow pattern is hard fixed

02:04:336 (1,2) blanket please fixed


[Hard]

00:03:158 (1,2,3) This pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdQF Moving to very good. should start at vocal I suppose.

00:35:292 (1,2,3) specing it's not wrong spacing, to be symmetrical (6,7,1,2)


01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) This is pattern procedure http://puu.sh/1ZdTp change? fixed

02:00:385 (6,7) Why is the jump? Please paste notes and six times previous same part, I did it. so alike this.

02:02:518 (5) Ctrl+G This flow is very good. non. aimming to jump

02:07:101 (3,4,5,6) why is the jump.... fixed

02:18:636 (8,1) OMG .. why is the big jump.. change please.. non, I suppose some jump need for this diff because of fun.

Many slider straight overall.
The map looks a little stiff.
But the tempo and maps. Slider look more
Recommends that complement


Good Luck!

Teru21 wrote:

Hi XD from Mod queue

Nice song

[General]
6143 for offset is a bit late. change it into 6098 . much fitter I'll wait some modders for timing. it's quite difficult

[Easy]
00:11:745 (1) - 1 grid up for better polygonal fixed
00:19:964 (1) - if you are using this rhythm from the start, then use it untill 00:24:704 , it sounded awkward having 2 different rhythm in 1 bars I know this mean but still current placement is ok.
00:19:964 (1) - give this slider a curve to make it more interesting XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZGNk cool
00:21:228 (2) - ^ ^
00:25:020 - the prevous rhythm was start at the first white line and end in 4th white line, its sounded awkward too.. if I could suggest you, change this 4 circles into 00:27:549 (1) - this rhythm XD keeping same rhythm makes bored I suppose...
00:30:077 (1) - you should keep this slider 'straight' err.. I don't know what its called since its a long time I mod maps @A@ you put 2 same slider mirrored.. so it would be good if you just keep it straight XD http://puu.sh/1ZH1x fixed
00:31:341 (3) - add an angle to fit the drum XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZH4l ok
00:33:870 (2) - ^ ^
00:32:289 (4) - can't you make it like this? better imo http://puu.sh/1ZH7K straight seems better i suppose
00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't it looks like this? http://puu.sh/1ZHca ; so 00:37:662 (1) - x:260 y:312 ; 00:38:610 (2) - x:440 y:352 ; 00:39:874 (4) - x:256 y:164 another fixed
00:40:190 (1,2) - move this somewhere if you change ^ ^
00:47:459 (4) - x:248 y:164? its centered with 00:45:247 (1) XD fixed
01:10:530 (1) - I prefer you put it down here x:368 y:92 for better flow with 01:09:266 (3) fixed
01:15:587 (1,2,3,4,1) - what pentagon is this? ;A; I'll give you a perfect pentagon =3= 01:16:219 (2) - x:76 y:224 ; 01:16:851 (3) - x:144 y:364 ; 01:17:483 (4) - x:296 y:344 hmm? I tried this but it's weird...?
01:55:724 (1) - the 2nd slider point move it 1 grid to the right XD will be more fit with the angle
02:18:162 (2) - remove clap add whistle fixed

[Normal]
00:31:341 (3) - inconstant spacing fixed
00:55:044 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZHsf following the vocal XD usually I follow the music not vocal in this diff for newbie.
01:09:266 (4) - second slider point move it 2 grid to the right for constant spacing and better symmrtric fixed
02:10:577 - add clap here hitsound pattern (the drum also sounded like that if you hear it carefully) some added
02:20:691 - ^
00:38:294 - ^
00:39:558 - ^
01:09:898 - ^
01:20:011 - ^
phew XD nice flow

Nothing to comment on hard diff XD its good ;D

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3

~GoodLuck XD

~Take my star > w <)/

kajiyatta wrote:

Teru21 wrote:

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3

thanks for modding & star, quite useful for me!

Teru21 wrote:

XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD

Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D

kajiyatta wrote:

Teru21 wrote:

XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD

Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D

I checked this but awfully sorry, I don't satisfy this diff... no offence was meant.

flankly speaking I didn't have a intention of making Insane when I uploaded this map. so keeping Easy, Normal, Hard style seems ok.

but thank you for your effort and interest. if you make full mapped, I'll add it to external download link (but not official pending sorry...)

1. 00:47:775 - maybe u can put a spinner on here~just suggestion~
   
   1. 00:49:671 - end
2. 01:48:455 - ^
3. 01:58:568 (1) - try to use 1/4 slider? like or same with before

1. 01:38:974 (3) - cancel reverse and add a note on 01:39:290 - ? just suggestion~
2. 01:50:667 (11) - cancel a reverse....try only one reverse?

Athena Tennos wrote:

lol~
M4M~

[EASY]
look fine~

[Normal]

1. 00:47:775 - maybe u can put a spinner on here~just suggestion~ this part becomes calm music and vocal, maybe unnecessary.
   
   1. 00:49:671 - end
2. 01:48:455 - ^
3. 01:58:568 (1) - try to use 1/4 slider? like or same with before it seems a bit difficult for Normal I suppose

[Hard]

1. 01:38:974 (3) - cancel reverse and add a note on 01:39:290 - ? just suggestion~ current seems fine
2. 01:50:667 (11) - cancel a reverse....try only one reverse? nice, fixed

nice mapset~
lol~star~
and good lucy~

B2IN wrote:

o/ hi kajiyatta
from my q

　General

1. Can you increase Slider Velocity from Normal diff ? Because Normal slider is 0.8x, Hard slider is 1.6x. from 0.8x to slider to 1.6x is too far. consider this opinion. fixed

　Easy

• fine.

　Normal

1. 01:44:030 (2) - try this alin for symmetry with 01:42:766 (5) . fixed
2. 01:58:568 (1,2,3) - unfit with music. make this like 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) . same pattern seems bored I suppose. and current follows the vocal, so no fixed.

　Hard

1. 00:48:723 (4,5) - kinda odd beat. because i felt some empty. remove (5), and add note on 00:48:565 , 00:49:039 . like this tried this but I suppose a bit weird...
2. 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - not bad. but try this. better fit with music haha, I tried before of course, but only notes seems poor and difficult for Hard I suppose.
3. 01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) - you should make this to regular pentagon. (9)x220 y144 //(6)x240 y220. fixed
4. 01:38:974 (3) - missing clap on 01:39:290 . oops... fixed
5. 01:58:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) same as.

gl ~

B2IN wrote:

:3 recheck

　Normal

1. 00:35:766 (2) - missing clap on slider.
2. 00:47:143 (5) - unsnapped slider.
   All fixed

that's all~ gl

1. Max BG 1024x768
2. Mp3 128-192kbps
3. Preview point all the same
4. Kiai time should be consistent in all diff except guest
5. One difficulty<
6. Tag consistency
7. Audio lead-in consistency
8. Combo colour consisitency
9. Please delete the osb file since you don't have storyboard :3

1. HP Drain: 4 or less
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 4 or less
4. Overall Difficulty: 4 or less
5. Slider velocity: 1.00x or less
6. Combo not higher than 6 unless it is suitable
7. Everything is perfect, in my sense \:D/

1. HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 5 or below I think AR-1 is better ._.
4. Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
5. Combo not higher than 8
6. Perfect too!

IamKwaN wrote:

FROM MY MODDING QUEUE \:D/

[General]

1. Max BG 1024x768
2. Mp3 128-192kbps
3. Preview point all the same
4. Kiai time should be consistent in all diff except guest
5. One difficulty<
6. Tag consistency
7. Audio lead-in consistency
8. Combo colour consisitency
9. Please delete the osb file since you don't have storyboard :3

ok

[Easy]

1. HP Drain: 4 or less
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 4 or less
4. Overall Difficulty: 4 or less
5. Slider velocity: 1.00x or less
6. Combo not higher than 6 unless it is suitable
7. Everything is perfect, in my sense \:D/

[Normal]

1. HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 5 or below I think AR-1 is better ._. Easy has AR3, so Normal seems fine with AR5
4. Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
5. Combo not higher than 8
6. Perfect too!

[Hard]
I can find nothing wrong lol


Perfect map imo and the flow and pattern are easy to follow
Also, song is good. Sorry that my mod is a bit too short
BTW, Star :3

- t e n n y a - wrote:

Hiyaaa M4M from #modreq

General

• nothing~!

Easy

1. 00:17:436- : Prefer to add break here owo fixed
2. 00:47:459 (4)- : make this right at the middle of screen? move this to x256 y80 would be nice ixed
3. 00:49:988 (1)- : add clap? for hit sound balance fixed
4. 01:50:667 (1)- : ^ fixed
5. 01:52:879 (3)- : remove clap, not fit imo fixed
6. 02:15:318 (2,3)- : reverse them? It can confuse easy player imo owo current seems better imo

Normal

1. 00:52:832 (1)- : make this more symmetric? like move 2nd slider point to x56 y156 and 3rd point to x60 y100? fixed
2. 01:10:530 (1)- : 1 grid to left? o.o fixed
3. 02:09:945 (2)- : 2nd slider point to x276 y172? fixed

Hard

1. 01:20:011 (5)- : how about NC here? keep current pattern sorry><
2. 02:20:691 (6)- : ^
   Nice diff really (:'''3)rz

I hope this help you, star and good luck! ^q^

1. 00:25:653(2,4)i dont think those two whistle suit the music,maybe remove them for consistence
2. 00:27:549(1,2,1,2)one grid left to make the slider head under 00:25:020(1)
3. 00:35:766(1)its may looks better if you copy 00:37:662(1)
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:19:379(3,4)try this rhythm?
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5. 02:16:898(1)miss a whistle here?

1. 00:37:978(2,3)circle2 x:451 y:259 circle3 x:371 y:273
2. 01:20:643(5)maybe put it in this way?
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:47:507(4)repeat it to follow the vocal?
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:20:691(3)do not repeat this one :3
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:03:419(2)copy 01:02:945(1) then ctrl+h g instead of use ctrl+>>
2. 01:54:617(4,5)^
3. 02:00:464(7)add finish here?
4. 02:21:165(9,10)1 gird left and 1 gird down to make a regular pentagon

Melt wrote:

Hi
Your map seems perfect to me
so just some suggestions here.

[Easy]

1. 00:25:653(2,4)i dont think those two whistle suit the music,maybe remove them for consistence fixed
2. 00:27:549(1,2,1,2)one grid left to make the slider head under 00:25:020(1) another fixed
3. 00:35:766(1)its may looks better if you copy 00:37:662(1)
   SPOILER

   
   　it's nice but already copied (3) so now no fixed.
4. 01:19:379(3,4)try this rhythm?
   SPOILER

   
   I just feel current better.
5. 02:16:898(1)miss a whistle here? ok fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:37:978(2,3)circle2 x:451 y:259 circle3 x:371 y:273 ?
2. 01:20:643(5)maybe put it in this way?
   SPOILER

   
   a bit fixed.
3. 01:47:507(4)repeat it to follow the vocal?
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
4. 02:20:691(3)do not repeat this one :3
   SPOILER

   

following back instrumental, so no fixed.

[Hard]

1. 01:03:419(2)copy 01:02:945(1) then ctrl+h g instead of use ctrl+>> fixed
2. 01:54:617(4,5)^ fixed
3. 02:00:464(7)add finish here? clap seems enough
4. 02:21:165(9,10)1 gird left and 1 gird down to make a regular pentagon fixed

That‘s all
Good luck :3

1. use the distance snap please, some notes have weird spacing in all the map.
2. 00:08:966 (3) - inconsistent distance, check it.
3. 00:11:789 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:47:143 (5) - move it to x:124 y:256
6. 01:58:568 (1,2) - remove claps? imo

1. Hard looks like as Insane :3

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Only suggestions, feel free to refuse.

Normal

1. use the distance snap please, some notes have weird spacing in all the map. I checked all notes, but almst ok maybe,,,
   
2. 00:08:966 (3) - inconsistent distance, check it.
3. 00:11:789 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:47:143 (5) - move it to x:124 y:256
6. 01:58:568 (1,2) - remove claps? imo I feel it better.

Hard

1. Hard looks like as Insane :3

that's all! good luck~

-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Good song, Good mapset. Some distance errors, but looks fine overall. Go GO Rank!

Easy

00:06:142 (1,2,3) - spacing not consistent

00:08:966 (3,4) - ^

00:50:304 (2,3,4) - ^

00:55:044 (1,2,3) - ^

01:15:587 (1,2,3,4,1) - not a perfect pentagon fixed

01:50:667 (1,2) - whoa.. keep the 1.1x. Do not go over +/- 0.04 for spacing in easy

01:53:511 (1,2) - ^ checked all distances

Normal

00:08:966 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked it's not stack...

01:12:426 (3) - last point down by 1 grid for better blanket fixed

01:19:379 (3) - last point up by 1 grid fixed

Nice Diff~

Hard

00:22:966 (2,3,4,5) - make it more symmetrical fixed

00:30:077 (1) - make a better blanket just say it's ok

00:30:709 (3) - ^

01:30:441 (1,2) - overlap doesn't fit in my opinion sorry keep own.

01:53:037 (6,7,8,2,3,4) - not perfectly stacked checked but already perfectly stacked

02:00:306 (6,7) - not suitable jump fixed

General

Easy

Normal

Hard

Kitsuneko wrote:

Hi kajiyatta
from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

General

• 
  
  

1. Clear

Easy

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. OK

Mapping

1. 02:11:210 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - せっかく対称配置なので中央で揃えよう
   02:13:738 (1,2,3) - 上を変えると次の配置揃えてあるのが詰まるのでこんな配置に
   
   img

   
   all fixed

Normal

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. OK

Mapping

1. 00:40:190 (1,4) - 直線だとちょっと画面ギリギリなのと流れぶった切ってるので両方とも対称に折り曲げる
   
2. 01:30:441 (1) - スライダー真上からまっすぐ降ろしてきていいかな
   all fixed

Hard

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. OD+1, Hardでスライダーメインなら7でいいんじゃないかな 今のところはそのままで、同じような意見が出たらまた検討します

Hitsounding

1. OK

Mapping

1. 01:20:011 (5) - ここで星型ジャンプ使うならNC パターンを崩したくないのでそのままで　
   
2. 01:44:504 (4,5) - 単発スライダーのリズムを逆に、ボーカルは01:44:820　fixed

Good luck kajiyatta


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

52,108,141007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,36,141165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,141323,1,4,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER

popner wrote:

Hi there, from my special rule queue.

[General]
Tags: add 'jpop'? fixed
Is this song from an album? If so, please add album title in tags. fixed
Delete Porno Graffitti - Apollo (kajiyatta).osb? fixed

[Easy]
The red lines of this diff is inconsistent with other diffs. fixed
00:25:020 (1,1) - stack them properly? fixed
00:27:549 (1,2) - nazi - try to move the sliders a little to avoid the overlap? fixed
00:30:709 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - they are not perfectly symmetric. fixed
00:55:992 (2,3) - same as 00:27:549 (1,2) fixed

[Normal]
00:40:190 (1,4) - make them symmetric sliders? Maybe change 00:41:771 (4) to the shape of 00:40:190 (1). It is so because the shape of 00:40:190 (1) looks random. changed both to simple sliders
00:45:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a round? Like: fixed

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:57:888 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern is a little easy and don't fit the pace of music here imo. You can try some thing like:

SPOILER

maybe they can make more sense. For the pattern here is my suggestion - stack every notes under slider ends: another fixed

SPOILER

02:03:467 (7,1) - spacing issue fixed
02:20:375 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the polygon seems not neat enough. You can try this: (code for 02:21:007 (8,9,10), last 3 notes) fixed

52,108,141007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,36,141165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,141323,1,4,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER

Call me back after you fix this.

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. fixed on Hard diff

[Easy]
01:00:417 (1) - This is too soon after a spinner for an Easy. Try to give about 4 beats after for this level of difficulty. fixed
02:01:096 (1) - ^ fixed

Nice set :3

P o M u T a wrote:

おめでとう！