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Hi there, from my queue.thanks for moddings and stars! it's useful for me
* = Slightly more suggested than others.
Haha the background. Nice.
Nice combo colors, but I think 1 and 2 may look too similar compared too the other colors. Maybe change 1? Just a loose thought, you don't have to. a bit canged
00:22:492 (3,4) Maybe this instead? good!
00:37:346 (2) Delete maybe? maybe it's not difficult.
* 00:11:083 (4,1,2,3,4) It might be better if you put it in like a flower or star shape. Maybe something like this? (Its not a perfect representation, but you should get the main picture.) fixed
00:19:964 (1,2,3,4) and 00:22:492 (1,2,3,4) It might be better if these two were symmetrically rhythmic ( like in 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) and 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) ) keeping same patterns make player boring imo...
* 01:02:945 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you followed the rhythm like the rest of the chorus. As is, this makes the drums sound weird. fixed
* 01:10:530 (1,2,3) ^ fixed
01:20:643 (1) Maybe you should replace this with a spinner that starts here and ends at around 01:23:172 ? a bit weird for me...
01:47:507 (4) Why is the tick silenced? not backbeat here.
OD -1? wait for other modders...
00:44:773 (5,1) I feel that it would be better if you took the repeat off of 5, move 1 to where 5 usually ended, and add a circle (stacked on top of 2) where 1 usually ended. (But i don't know about the spacing for 5 and 1. Maybe you could keep it the same, idk.) sorry no fixed.
01:43:398 (1,2,3) If you can, I suggest that you stack 1 on top of 2 and 3, or stack 2 and 3 below 1. maybe fixed?
01:59:042 (2,3) and 01:59:990 (5,6) Maybe you could follow the same structure as 01:58:568 (1) and 01:59:516 (4) boring imo... but if others mention that I'll fix it
02:00:464 You could add a 2 beat spinner here (and just break 1 into a circle at the endpoint). Idk, just a thought. music becomes silence so I feel spacing better
02:19:269 (2) Kind of like what I was suggesting in the beginning of this difficulty, you could cut the repeat off of 2, move it a 1/2 beat over (so that it ends at the same place) and add a circle here. current rhythm seems better i suppose...
Sorry for the small mod. Take my star.
[General]thanks for modding.
01:10:530 - Add a kiai fountain here. fixed
00:11:083 (4) - Nc here and not on 00:11:789 (1 ) no fixed
00:19:964 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571 783 maybe current placement better imo
00:21:228 (2) - ^ ^
00:45:247 (1) - Make it symmetrical. fixed
00:47:459 (4) - Replace with a slider and remove the break http://puu.sh/1OwtW break here iscomfortable
01:48:139 (2) - ^
02:18:794 (1) - The spinner should ends at 02:20:691 umm... end at long White line seems better because this part is last of song.
I think about 1,10x spacing is better than 1,00x for a normal.
01:58:568 (1,2,3) - Like 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) ok
00:54:728 (7) - Like 00:54:096 (5) here jumping seems better
01:54:617 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571793 I'll consider it
01:55:092 (5) - ^ ^
02:21:323 (11) - Add new combo. nope.
M4Mthanks for modding
Use another colour instead of purple, it doesnt fit the BG I'll wait for another opinions.
00:39:874 (4) - 1 grid right
01:58:568 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern makes it looks like its faster as it is, space it so that the sliderds dont overlapp fixed
00:16:024 (4,1) - Spacing, too close to each element and
00:18:068 (4,5) - are too far apart ^
00:34:502 (6,7) - This jump doesnt work due to it breaking the flow of the preview combo I know this jump has long distance, but it's the most difficult diff and to be symmetrical.
00:37:030 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - You follow the vocal and then you just randomly make something different, change it well, following to music I suppose in this part...
00:44:299 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:57:572 (7) - Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:57:572 - another fixed
01:19:537 (4) - Delete the repeat of the slider umm, a bit weird for me...
01:20:011 (5) - NC here then nope
01:43:556 (2) - Delete this, nonsense circle fixed
01:47:823 (7) - Should be 2 1/2 note stacked current rhythm seems better for me.
01:55:724 (1) - Put a single circle here I'll consider it, maybe other modders say that I'll fix.
01:56:040 (2) - Delete this slider, it doesnt go 2 to the vocal nope
01:58:252 (8,9,10) - Pointless and nonsense 1/4 notes deleted a note
02:20:770 (7) - Delete this circle fixed
02:20:691 (6) - NC[/color] nope
Hi kajiyatta ~thanks for modding~
From my queue
00:54:254 (1,2,3,1) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdzS change? fixed
01:13:769 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdBF fixed
01:40:396 (3,4) blanket please current seems no problem
00:20:675 (1,2,3) specing http://puu.sh/1ZdHR fixed
00:30:709 (2) This is slider -> http://puu.sh/1ZdG5 fixed
00:33:237 (2,3) Straight flow of the slider is hard. -> http://puu.sh/1ZdJ7 This flow is better I know your mean, but this part is consistence.
00:56:308 (2,3,4,5) This pattern is recommended -> http://puu.sh/1ZdLA none
01:08:002 Straight flow of the slider is hard. I don't think such a thing, but if other modders say same opnion, I'll change.
01:18:115 (1) ^
01:30:915 (1,2,3,4) The flow pattern is hard fixed
02:04:336 (1,2) blanket please fixed
00:03:158 (1,2,3) This pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdQF Moving to very good. should start at vocal I suppose.
00:35:292 (1,2,3) specing it's not wrong spacing, to be symmetrical (6,7,1,2)
01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) This is pattern procedure http://puu.sh/1ZdTp change? fixed
02:00:385 (6,7) Why is the jump? Please paste notes and six times previous same part, I did it. so alike this.
02:02:518 (5) Ctrl+G This flow is very good. non. aimming to jump
02:07:101 (3,4,5,6) why is the jump.... fixed
02:18:636 (8,1) OMG .. why is the big jump.. change please.. non, I suppose some jump need for this diff because of fun.
Many slider straight overall.
The map looks a little stiff.
But the tempo and maps. Slider look more
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Hi XD from Mod queuethanks for modding & star, quite useful for me!
6143 for offset is a bit late. change it into 6098 . much fitter I'll wait some modders for timing. it's quite difficult
00:11:745 (1) - 1 grid up for better polygonal fixed
00:19:964 (1) - if you are using this rhythm from the start, then use it untill 00:24:704 , it sounded awkward having 2 different rhythm in 1 bars I know this mean but still current placement is ok.
00:19:964 (1) - give this slider a curve to make it more interesting XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZGNk cool
00:21:228 (2) - ^ ^
00:25:020 - the prevous rhythm was start at the first white line and end in 4th white line, its sounded awkward too.. if I could suggest you, change this 4 circles into 00:27:549 (1) - this rhythm XD keeping same rhythm makes bored I suppose...
00:30:077 (1) - you should keep this slider 'straight' err.. I don't know what its called since its a long time I mod maps @A@ you put 2 same slider mirrored.. so it would be good if you just keep it straight XD http://puu.sh/1ZH1x fixed
00:31:341 (3) - add an angle to fit the drum XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZH4l ok
00:33:870 (2) - ^ ^
00:32:289 (4) - can't you make it like this? better imo http://puu.sh/1ZH7K straight seems better i suppose
00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't it looks like this? http://puu.sh/1ZHca ; so 00:37:662 (1) - x:260 y:312 ; 00:38:610 (2) - x:440 y:352 ; 00:39:874 (4) - x:256 y:164 another fixed
00:40:190 (1,2) - move this somewhere if you change ^ ^
00:47:459 (4) - x:248 y:164? its centered with 00:45:247 (1) XD fixed
01:10:530 (1) - I prefer you put it down here x:368 y:92 for better flow with 01:09:266 (3) fixed
01:15:587 (1,2,3,4,1) - what pentagon is this? ;A; I'll give you a perfect pentagon =3= 01:16:219 (2) - x:76 y:224 ; 01:16:851 (3) - x:144 y:364 ; 01:17:483 (4) - x:296 y:344 hmm? I tried this but it's weird...?
01:55:724 (1) - the 2nd slider point move it 1 grid to the right XD will be more fit with the angle
02:18:162 (2) - remove clap add whistle fixed
00:31:341 (3) - inconstant spacing fixed
00:55:044 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZHsf following the vocal XD usually I follow the music not vocal in this diff for newbie.
01:09:266 (4) - second slider point move it 2 grid to the right for constant spacing and better symmrtric fixed
02:10:577 - add clap here hitsound pattern (the drum also sounded like that if you hear it carefully) some added
02:20:691 - ^
00:38:294 - ^
00:39:558 - ^
01:09:898 - ^
01:20:011 - ^
phew XD nice flow
Nothing to comment on hard diff XD its good ;D
Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3
~Take my star > w <)/
XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD
Teru21 wrote:Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3thanks for modding & star, quite useful for me!
XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XDI checked this but awfully sorry, I don't satisfy this diff... no offence was meant.
Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D
its okay www i told you if you like it or not btw www XD and you answered it clearly, just make me more happy wwwwww X3
Teru21 wrote:XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XDI checked this but awfully sorry, I don't satisfy this diff... no offence was meant.
Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D
flankly speaking I didn't have a intention of making Insane when I uploaded this map. so keeping Easy, Normal, Hard style seems ok.
but thank you for your effort and interest. if you make full mapped, I'll add it to external download link (but not official pending sorry...)
lol~thanks for modding
- 00:47:775 - maybe u can put a spinner on here~just suggestion~ this part becomes calm music and vocal, maybe unnecessary.
- 00:49:671 - end
- 01:48:455 - ^
- 01:58:568 (1) - try to use 1/4 slider? like or same with before it seems a bit difficult for Normal I suppose
- 01:38:974 (3) - cancel reverse and add a note on 01:39:290 - ? just suggestion~ current seems fine
- 01:50:667 (11) - cancel a reverse....try only one reverse? nice, fixed
and good lucy~