Porno Graffitti - Apollo

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kajiyatta

Mr Color wrote:

Hey! Cool map here. Time for a mod. :p thx :3

[General]
-Use Tick Rate 2, sounds better umm, this suggestion is first, so I'll wait for some modders and some say that, I'll change this.

[Hard] AR +1 is more readable to me. maybe a bit slow in AR7, but it's my aimming. there are so many high AR maps, but I don't like them.
00:31:183 (4) - Delete this and move 00:31:341 (5) - there instead so it fits with the vocals? fixed
00:34:818 (7) - Take off the repeat and place a circle at 00:35:134 with New Combo. (New Combo is on the white bar that way + good flow into next circle) fixed
00:43:351 (2) - Take off the repeat and make a 1/1 slider starting at 00:43:825 - (Delete anything that is in the way) I put it symmetrically with previous slider (6), so no fixed.
00:59:785 (1) - I think a circle instead of slider is better here aha, it's second time in this suggetion, ok fixed.
01:20:485 (8,9) - Reverse these two circles (better flow with the direction of previous slider) another fixed.
01:43:398 (8) - New Combo should be here :p I forget it... thanks.
02:00:464 (1) - Again, I think a circle is better. fixed
Very fun difficulty, good job!

[Normal]
00:08:260 (2) - I think only a circle here is better (and doesn't overlap with next slider) fixed
00:10:730 (4) - Again, except this time place the circle at 00:11:083 - fixed
00:47:617 - There is nothing for a long time here :o You can put a break here if you d on't want to map it put break here.
00:57:888 (1,2,3,4) - I think instead of sliders, use stacked 1/2 circles. More fun :p a bit difficult I suppose...
01:03:419 (2) - This is a bit weird, it breaks the regular flow you had before. I suggest you do something like you did at 01:10:530 (1,2,3) - because it is very, very good. fixed
01:48:297 - There is nothing for a long time here :o You can put a break here if you don't want to map it adda a break.
Very well mapped Normal~

[Easy] There are many many sliders in this diff :o Sliders are harder than circles for new players, so use more circles. :p
00:47:617 - There is nothing for a long time here :o You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
01:02:945 (1,2) - This is confusing for a new player, please map this on white lines instead
01:48:297 - There is nothing for a long time here :o You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
02:11:210 (1,2) - Confusing again :p
02:13:738 (1,2) - ^
all fixed.

Very good map in general. Good luck!
it's so useful for me. thanks for modding and star :)
creampuff
Well, that name really threw me off.

I thought the song would be different, but it's actually catchy. Whoa. Anyway, M4M request from my queue~

  • General

  1. Good

    Easy

  2. 00:06:142 (1) Add finish to slider head

    Normal


    AR +1?
  3. 00:06:142 (1) Finish
  4. 00:57:888 ~ 00:59:785 (1,5) Using the custom claps for this part might sound better, imo
  5. 01:58:568 ~ 02:00:464 (1,3) ^

    Hard

  6. 00:06:142 (1) yeah finish
  7. 00:57:888 ~ 00:59:785 (1,5) same as normal
  8. 01:58:568 ~ 02:00:464 (1,7) ^


That's basically all I have to say about this. Very nice map! GL on rank~
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Tsusuko wrote:

Well, that name really threw me off.

I thought the song would be different, but it's actually catchy. Whoa. Anyway, M4M request from my queue~

General


good

Easy


00:06:142 (1) Add finish to slider head whistler feels good for me.

Normal


AR +1? fixed
00:06:142 (1) Finish same as Easy
00:57:888 ~ 00:59:785 (1,5) Using the custom claps for this part might sound better, imo umm, I suppose normal-clap feels better but I'll wait for another modders.
01:58:568 ~ 02:00:464 (1,3) ^ ^

Hard


00:06:142 (1) yeah finish same as Easy
00:57:888 ~ 00:59:785 (1,5) same as normal same as Normal
01:58:568 ~ 02:00:464 (1,7) ^ ^

That's basically all I have to say about this. Very nice map! GL on rank~
thanks for moddings & star~
creampuff
here have a star
CrestRising
Hi there, from my queue.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

[General:]

  • Haha the background. Nice. :P
    Nice combo colors, but I think 1 and 2 may look too similar compared too the other colors. Maybe change 1? Just a loose thought, you don't have to.


[Easy:]

  • 00:22:492 (3,4) Maybe this instead?
    00:37:346 (2) Delete maybe?


[Normal:]

  • * 00:11:083 (4,1,2,3,4) It might be better if you put it in like a flower or star shape. Maybe something like this? (Its not a perfect representation, but you should get the main picture.)
    00:19:964 (1,2,3,4) and 00:22:492 (1,2,3,4) It might be better if these two were symmetrically rhythmic ( like in 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) and 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) )
    * 01:02:945 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you followed the rhythm like the rest of the chorus. As is, this makes the drums sound weird.
    * 01:10:530 (1,2,3) ^
    01:20:643 (1) Maybe you should replace this with a spinner that starts here and ends at around 01:23:172 ?
    01:47:507 (4) Why is the tick silenced?


[Hard:]

  • OD -1?
    00:44:773 (5,1) I feel that it would be better if you took the repeat off of 5, move 1 to where 5 usually ended, and add a circle (stacked on top of 2) where 1 usually ended. (But i don't know about the spacing for 5 and 1. Maybe you could keep it the same, idk.)
    01:43:398 (1,2,3) If you can, I suggest that you stack 1 on top of 2 and 3, or stack 2 and 3 below 1.
    01:59:042 (2,3) and 01:59:990 (5,6) Maybe you could follow the same structure as 01:58:568 (1) and 01:59:516 (4)
    02:00:464 You could add a 2 beat spinner here (and just break 1 into a circle at the endpoint). Idk, just a thought.
    02:19:269 (2) Kind of like what I was suggesting in the beginning of this difficulty, you could cut the repeat off of 2, move it a 1/2 beat over (so that it ends at the same place) and add a circle here.


Sorry for the small mod. :( Take my star.
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

CrestRising wrote:

Hi there, from my queue.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

[General:]

  • Haha the background. Nice. :P
    Nice combo colors, but I think 1 and 2 may look too similar compared too the other colors. Maybe change 1? Just a loose thought, you don't have to. a bit canged


[Easy:]

  • 00:22:492 (3,4) Maybe this instead? good!
    00:37:346 (2) Delete maybe? maybe it's not difficult.


[Normal:]

  • * 00:11:083 (4,1,2,3,4) It might be better if you put it in like a flower or star shape. Maybe something like this? (Its not a perfect representation, but you should get the main picture.) fixed
    00:19:964 (1,2,3,4) and 00:22:492 (1,2,3,4) It might be better if these two were symmetrically rhythmic ( like in 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) and 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) ) keeping same patterns make player boring imo...
    * 01:02:945 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you followed the rhythm like the rest of the chorus. As is, this makes the drums sound weird. fixed
    * 01:10:530 (1,2,3) ^ fixed
    01:20:643 (1) Maybe you should replace this with a spinner that starts here and ends at around 01:23:172 ? a bit weird for me...
    01:47:507 (4) Why is the tick silenced? not backbeat here.


[Hard:]

  • OD -1? wait for other modders...
    00:44:773 (5,1) I feel that it would be better if you took the repeat off of 5, move 1 to where 5 usually ended, and add a circle (stacked on top of 2) where 1 usually ended. (But i don't know about the spacing for 5 and 1. Maybe you could keep it the same, idk.) sorry no fixed.
    01:43:398 (1,2,3) If you can, I suggest that you stack 1 on top of 2 and 3, or stack 2 and 3 below 1. maybe fixed?
    01:59:042 (2,3) and 01:59:990 (5,6) Maybe you could follow the same structure as 01:58:568 (1) and 01:59:516 (4) boring imo... but if others mention that I'll fix it
    02:00:464 You could add a 2 beat spinner here (and just break 1 into a circle at the endpoint). Idk, just a thought. music becomes silence so I feel spacing better
    02:19:269 (2) Kind of like what I was suggesting in the beginning of this difficulty, you could cut the repeat off of 2, move it a 1/2 beat over (so that it ends at the same place) and add a circle here. current rhythm seems better i suppose...

Sorry for the small mod. :( Take my star.
thanks for moddings and stars! it's useful for me :)
P o M u T a
ポルノ好きなので。以前map見ましたが指摘する点が無かったのでmodはしません。
頑張ってください 8-)
Topic Starter
kajiyatta
thanks=
Kayne
[General]
01:10:530 - Add a kiai fountain here.

[Easy]
00:11:083 (4) - Nc here and not on 00:11:789 (1)
00:19:964 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571783
00:21:228 (2) - ^
00:45:247 (1) - Make it symmetrical.
00:47:459 (4) - Replace with a slider and remove the break http://puu.sh/1OwtW
01:48:139 (2) - ^
02:18:794 (1) - The spinner should ends at 02:20:691

[Normal]
I think about 1,10x spacing is better than 1,00x for a normal.
01:58:568 (1,2,3) - Like 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5)

[Hard]
Od5.
00:54:728 (7) - Like 00:54:096 (5)
01:54:617 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571793
01:55:092 (5) - ^
02:21:323 (11) - Add new combo.
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Kiyro wrote:

[General]
01:10:530 - Add a kiai fountain here. fixed

[Easy]
00:11:083 (4) - Nc here and not on 00:11:789 (1 ) no fixed
00:19:964 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571 783 maybe current placement better imo
00:21:228 (2) - ^ ^
00:45:247 (1) - Make it symmetrical. fixed
00:47:459 (4) - Replace with a slider and remove the break http://puu.sh/1OwtW break here iscomfortable
01:48:139 (2) - ^
02:18:794 (1) - The spinner should ends at 02:20:691 umm... end at long White line seems better because this part is last of song.

[Normal]
I think about 1,10x spacing is better than 1,00x for a normal.
01:58:568 (1,2,3) - Like 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) ok

[Hard]
Od5.
00:54:728 (7) - Like 00:54:096 (5) here jumping seems better
01:54:617 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571793 I'll consider it
01:55:092 (5) - ^ ^
02:21:323 (11) - Add new combo. nope.
thanks for modding.
BounceBabe
M4M

General

Use another colour instead of purple, it doesnt fit the BG

Easy

00:39:874 (4) - 1 grid right

Normal

01:58:568 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern makes it looks like its faster as it is, space it so that the sliderds dont overlapp


Hard

00:16:024 (4,1) - Spacing, too close to each element and
00:18:068 (4,5) - are too far apart
00:34:502 (6,7) - This jump doesnt work due to it breaking the flow of the preview combo
00:37:030 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - You follow the vocal and then you just randomly make something different, change it
00:44:299 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:57:572 (7) - Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:57:572 -
01:19:537 (4) - Delete the repeat of the slider
01:20:011 (5) - NC here then
01:43:556 (2) - Delete this, nonsense circle
01:47:823 (7) - Should be 2 1/2 note stacked
01:55:724 (1) - Put a single circle here
01:56:040 (2) - Delete this slider, it doesnt go 2 to the vocal
01:58:252 (8,9,10) - Pointless and nonsense 1/4 notes
02:20:770 (7) - Delete this circle
02:20:691 (6) - NC


Good luck
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

BounceBabe wrote:

M4M

General

Use another colour instead of purple, it doesnt fit the BG I'll wait for another opinions.

Easy

00:39:874 (4) - 1 grid right

Normal

01:58:568 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern makes it looks like its faster as it is, space it so that the sliderds dont overlapp
fixed

Hard

00:16:024 (4,1) - Spacing, too close to each element and
00:18:068 (4,5) - are too far apart ^
00:34:502 (6,7) - This jump doesnt work due to it breaking the flow of the preview combo I know this jump has long distance, but it's the most difficult diff and to be symmetrical.
00:37:030 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - You follow the vocal and then you just randomly make something different, change it well, following to music I suppose in this part...
00:44:299 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:57:572 (7) - Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:57:572 - another fixed
01:19:537 (4) - Delete the repeat of the slider umm, a bit weird for me...
01:20:011 (5) - NC here then nope
01:43:556 (2) - Delete this, nonsense circle fixed
01:47:823 (7) - Should be 2 1/2 note stacked current rhythm seems better for me.
01:55:724 (1) - Put a single circle here I'll consider it, maybe other modders say that I'll fix.
01:56:040 (2) - Delete this slider, it doesnt go 2 to the vocal nope
01:58:252 (8,9,10) - Pointless and nonsense 1/4 notes deleted a note
02:20:770 (7) - Delete this circle fixed
02:20:691 (6) - NC[/color] nope

Good luck
thanks for modding
frost-b-spec
m4mありがとうございます。

譜面については言うことなしでした。
Modしてもらって申し訳ないです。

気付いているかもしれませんが、日本名タイトル、アーティストへの変更だけしておいて下さい。

+kdstar
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

frost-b-spec wrote:

m4mありがとうございます。

譜面については言うことなしでした。
Modしてもらって申し訳ないです。

気付いているかもしれませんが、日本名タイトル、アーティストへの変更だけしておいて下さい。 fixed

+kdstar
thanks for mod & star~
IntellectualBoy
Hi kajiyatta ~

From my queue :)

[Easy]

00:54:254 (1,2,3,1) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdzS change?

01:13:769 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdBF

01:40:396 (3,4) blanket please


[Normal]

00:20:675 (1,2,3) specing http://puu.sh/1ZdHR

00:30:709 (2) This is slider -> http://puu.sh/1ZdG5

00:33:237 (2,3) Straight flow of the slider is hard. -> http://puu.sh/1ZdJ7 This flow is better

00:56:308 (2,3,4,5) This pattern is recommended -> http://puu.sh/1ZdLA

01:08:002 Straight flow of the slider is hard.

01:18:115 (1) ^

01:30:915 (1,2,3,4) The flow pattern is hard

02:04:336 (1,2) blanket please


[Hard]

00:03:158 (1,2,3) This pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdQF Moving to very good.

00:35:292 (1,2,3) specing

01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) This is pattern procedure http://puu.sh/1ZdTp change?

02:00:385 (6,7) Why is the jump? Please paste notes and six times

02:02:518 (5) Ctrl+G This flow is very good.

02:07:101 (3,4,5,6) why is the jump....

02:18:636 (8,1) OMG .. why is the big jump.. change please..

Many slider straight overall.
The map looks a little stiff.
But the tempo and maps. Slider look more
Recommends that complement :)


Good Luck!
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi kajiyatta ~

From my queue :)

[Easy]

00:54:254 (1,2,3,1) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdzS change? fixed

01:13:769 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdBF fixed

01:40:396 (3,4) blanket please current seems no problem


[Normal]

00:20:675 (1,2,3) specing http://puu.sh/1ZdHR fixed

00:30:709 (2) This is slider -> http://puu.sh/1ZdG5 fixed

00:33:237 (2,3) Straight flow of the slider is hard. -> http://puu.sh/1ZdJ7 This flow is better I know your mean, but this part is consistence.

00:56:308 (2,3,4,5) This pattern is recommended -> http://puu.sh/1ZdLA none

01:08:002 Straight flow of the slider is hard. I don't think such a thing, but if other modders say same opnion, I'll change.

01:18:115 (1) ^

01:30:915 (1,2,3,4) The flow pattern is hard fixed

02:04:336 (1,2) blanket please fixed


[Hard]

00:03:158 (1,2,3) This pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdQF Moving to very good. should start at vocal I suppose.

00:35:292 (1,2,3) specing it's not wrong spacing, to be symmetrical (6,7,1,2)


01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) This is pattern procedure http://puu.sh/1ZdTp change? fixed

02:00:385 (6,7) Why is the jump? Please paste notes and six times previous same part, I did it. so alike this.

02:02:518 (5) Ctrl+G This flow is very good. non. aimming to jump

02:07:101 (3,4,5,6) why is the jump.... fixed

02:18:636 (8,1) OMG .. why is the big jump.. change please.. non, I suppose some jump need for this diff because of fun.

Many slider straight overall.
The map looks a little stiff.
But the tempo and maps. Slider look more
Recommends that complement :)


Good Luck!
thanks for modding~
Teru21
Hi XD from Mod queue

Nice song

[General]
6143 for offset is a bit late. change it into 6098 . much fitter :D

[Easy]
00:11:745 (1) - 1 grid up for better polygonal
00:19:964 (1) - if you are using this rhythm from the start, then use it untill 00:24:704 , it sounded awkward having 2 different rhythm in 1 bars
00:19:964 (1) - give this slider a curve to make it more interesting XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZGNk
00:21:228 (2) - ^
00:25:020 - the prevous rhythm was start at the first white line and end in 4th white line, its sounded awkward too.. if I could suggest you, change this 4 circles into 00:27:549 (1) - this rhythm XD
00:30:077 (1) - you should keep this slider 'straight' err.. I don't know what its called since its a long time I mod maps @A@ you put 2 same slider mirrored.. so it would be good if you just keep it straight XD http://puu.sh/1ZH1x
00:31:341 (3) - add an angle :D to fit the drum XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZH4l
00:33:870 (2) - ^
00:32:289 (4) - can't you make it like this? better imo http://puu.sh/1ZH7K
00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't it looks like this? http://puu.sh/1ZHca ; so 00:37:662 (1) - x:260 y:312 ; 00:38:610 (2) - x:440 y:352 ; 00:39:874 (4) - x:256 y:164
00:40:190 (1,2) - move this somewhere if you change ^
00:47:459 (4) - x:248 y:164? its centered with 00:45:247 (1) XD
01:10:530 (1) - I prefer you put it down here x:368 y:92 for better flow with 01:09:266 (3)
01:15:587 (1,2,3,4,1) - what pentagon is this? ;A; I'll give you a perfect pentagon =3= 01:16:219 (2) - x:76 y:224 ; 01:16:851 (3) - x:144 y:364 ; 01:17:483 (4) - x:296 y:344
01:55:724 (1) - the 2nd slider point move it 1 grid to the right XD will be more fit with the angle
02:18:162 (2) - remove clap add whistle

[Normal]
00:31:341 (3) - inconstant spacing
00:55:044 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZHsf following the vocal XD
01:09:266 (4) - second slider point move it 2 grid to the right for constant spacing and better symmrtric
02:10:577 - add clap here :D hitsound pattern (the drum also sounded like that if you hear it carefully)
02:20:691 - ^
00:38:294 - ^
00:39:558 - ^
01:09:898 - ^
01:20:011 - ^
phew XD nice flow

Nothing to comment on hard diff XD its good ;D

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o

~GoodLuck XD

~Take my star > w <)/
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Teru21 wrote:

Hi XD from Mod queue

Nice song

[General]
6143 for offset is a bit late. change it into 6098 . much fitter :DI'll wait some modders for timing. it's quite difficult

[Easy]
00:11:745 (1) - 1 grid up for better polygonal fixed
00:19:964 (1) - if you are using this rhythm from the start, then use it untill 00:24:704 , it sounded awkward having 2 different rhythm in 1 bars I know this mean but still current placement is ok.
00:19:964 (1) - give this slider a curve to make it more interesting XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZGNk cool
00:21:228 (2) - ^ ^
00:25:020 - the prevous rhythm was start at the first white line and end in 4th white line, its sounded awkward too.. if I could suggest you, change this 4 circles into 00:27:549 (1) - this rhythm XD keeping same rhythm makes bored I suppose...
00:30:077 (1) - you should keep this slider 'straight' err.. I don't know what its called since its a long time I mod maps @A@ you put 2 same slider mirrored.. so it would be good if you just keep it straight XD http://puu.sh/1ZH1x fixed
00:31:341 (3) - add an angle :D to fit the drum XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZH4l ok
00:33:870 (2) - ^ ^
00:32:289 (4) - can't you make it like this? better imo http://puu.sh/1ZH7K straight seems better i suppose
00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't it looks like this? http://puu.sh/1ZHca ; so 00:37:662 (1) - x:260 y:312 ; 00:38:610 (2) - x:440 y:352 ; 00:39:874 (4) - x:256 y:164 another fixed
00:40:190 (1,2) - move this somewhere if you change ^ ^
00:47:459 (4) - x:248 y:164? its centered with 00:45:247 (1) XD fixed
01:10:530 (1) - I prefer you put it down here x:368 y:92 for better flow with 01:09:266 (3) fixed
01:15:587 (1,2,3,4,1) - what pentagon is this? ;A; I'll give you a perfect pentagon =3= 01:16:219 (2) - x:76 y:224 ; 01:16:851 (3) - x:144 y:364 ; 01:17:483 (4) - x:296 y:344 hmm? I tried this but it's weird...?
01:55:724 (1) - the 2nd slider point move it 1 grid to the right XD will be more fit with the angle
02:18:162 (2) - remove clap add whistle fixed

[Normal]
00:31:341 (3) - inconstant spacing fixed
00:55:044 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZHsf following the vocal XD usually I follow the music not vocal in this diff for newbie.
01:09:266 (4) - second slider point move it 2 grid to the right for constant spacing and better symmrtric fixed
02:10:577 - add clap here :D hitsound pattern (the drum also sounded like that if you hear it carefully) some added
02:20:691 - ^
00:38:294 - ^
00:39:558 - ^
01:09:898 - ^
01:20:011 - ^
phew XD nice flow

Nothing to comment on hard diff XD its good ;D

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3

~GoodLuck XD

~Take my star > w <)/
thanks for modding & star, quite useful for me!
Teru21

kajiyatta wrote:

Teru21 wrote:

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3
thanks for modding & star, quite useful for me!
XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD

Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Teru21 wrote:

XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD

Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D
I checked this but awfully sorry, I don't satisfy this diff... no offence was meant.

flankly speaking I didn't have a intention of making Insane when I uploaded this map. so keeping Easy, Normal, Hard style seems ok.

but thank you for your effort and interest. if you make full mapped, I'll add it to external download link (but not official pending sorry...)
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