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Rurutia - Seirios
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Rurutia! \o/
[General]
..a Cirno background? q:
[Easy]
00:54:164 (1,2) - I'd prefer the spacing to be larger here since you can see the 2 while the 1 slider is still in play.
01:07:942 - I .. really don't think there's a need to lower the slider speed here. Everything is already super-slow and overlapping - this just makes it worse.
01:11:053 (4,1) - Spacing
01:14:164 (4,1) - Hm, maybe these are on purpose. I don't recommend you use them in an Easy difficulty.
01:41:720 (1) - New combo
01:45:275 (1) - Remove new combo
02:17:720 (2) - Same thing as earlier. Since you can see this while the 1 is in play, please increase the spacing.
02:22:164 (3) - ^
03:19:498 (1,2) - Slider ends are unsnapped
[Normal]
01:35:498 (3,1) - Too close
01:43:498 (1) - ^
02:10:164 (3) - This would look a lot better if you lined up the end of 02:09:275 (2) - with the 3 slider.
02:17:275 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too irregular here. Remember, this is a Normal.
02:34:164 (2,1) - Too large of spacing
[DNA]
01:09:275 (4,5) - You may as well use normal spacing here considering there isn't really much changing in the song. Increasing it at 01:09:720 (1,2,3) - makes more musical sense.
01:16:831 (1,2) - The flow of this jump doesn't feel very good - especially after 01:15:498 (1,2,3) -
02:21:275 (5,6,7,8) - Keep it all the same spacing here
02:45:720 (1,2) - This runs counter to the flow from 02:44:609 (2,3) -
03:32:831 (1,2,3,4) - During this entire ending section, these are the only really large jumps added in. They kind of stick out and don't fit with the rest of your patterns here. I'd prefer everything to be in a larger spaced-format during this part since it's pretty much the high-powered and emotional ending that really deserves a strong finish instead of this semi-inconsistent one.
[General]
..a Cirno background? q:
[Easy]
00:54:164 (1,2) - I'd prefer the spacing to be larger here since you can see the 2 while the 1 slider is still in play.
01:07:942 - I .. really don't think there's a need to lower the slider speed here. Everything is already super-slow and overlapping - this just makes it worse.
01:11:053 (4,1) - Spacing
01:14:164 (4,1) - Hm, maybe these are on purpose. I don't recommend you use them in an Easy difficulty.
01:41:720 (1) - New combo
01:45:275 (1) - Remove new combo
02:17:720 (2) - Same thing as earlier. Since you can see this while the 1 is in play, please increase the spacing.
02:22:164 (3) - ^
03:19:498 (1,2) - Slider ends are unsnapped
[Normal]
01:35:498 (3,1) - Too close
01:43:498 (1) - ^
02:10:164 (3) - This would look a lot better if you lined up the end of 02:09:275 (2) - with the 3 slider.
02:17:275 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too irregular here. Remember, this is a Normal.
02:34:164 (2,1) - Too large of spacing
[DNA]
01:09:275 (4,5) - You may as well use normal spacing here considering there isn't really much changing in the song. Increasing it at 01:09:720 (1,2,3) - makes more musical sense.
01:16:831 (1,2) - The flow of this jump doesn't feel very good - especially after 01:15:498 (1,2,3) -
02:21:275 (5,6,7,8) - Keep it all the same spacing here
02:45:720 (1,2) - This runs counter to the flow from 02:44:609 (2,3) -
03:32:831 (1,2,3,4) - During this entire ending section, these are the only really large jumps added in. They kind of stick out and don't fit with the rest of your patterns here. I'd prefer everything to be in a larger spaced-format during this part since it's pretty much the high-powered and emotional ending that really deserves a strong finish instead of this semi-inconsistent one.
thanks for mod ~Garven wrote:
[DNA]
01:09:275 (4,5) - You may as well use normal spacing here considering there isn't really much changing in the song. Increasing it at 01:09:720 (1,2,3) - makes more musical sense. //I use these jumps for emphasizing vocals,like I did at 02:31:053 (4,5),02:47:053 (3,4),03:02:831 (4,5).
I think they also make sense. ><
01:16:831 (1,2) - The flow of this jump doesn't feel very good - especially after 01:15:498 (1,2,3) - //fixed.
02:21:275 (5,6,7,8) - Keep it all the same spacing here //ok..
02:45:720 (1,2) - This runs counter to the flow from 02:44:609 (2,3) - //not sure what you mean.I made them smoother anyway.
03:32:831 (1,2,3,4) - During this entire ending section, these are the only really large jumps added in. They kind of stick out and don't fit with the rest of your patterns here. I'd prefer everything to be in a larger spaced-format during this part since it's pretty much the high-powered and emotional ending that really deserves a strong finish instead of this semi-inconsistent one.
//hmm yeah maybe everything to be in a larger spaced-format during this part is good,
but I want to differentiate the different spacing between kiai time and the part which is after the kiai end,since there are much more high-powered in kiai time than in this part.
so if I made everything to be in a larger spaced-format during this part,it would break what I wrote above.
and I decreased the spacing for 03:32:831 (1,2,3,4) anyway,since it doesn't fit with the rest of my patterns.
http://puu.sh/1wJEx
Topic Starter
Garven's mod~
all fix!~thx ur mod!~Garven wrote:
Rurutia! \o/
[General]
..a Cirno background? q: \o/
[Easy]
00:54:164 (1,2) - I'd prefer the spacing to be larger here since you can see the 2 while the 1 slider is still in play. fix~
01:07:942 - I .. really don't think there's a need to lower the slider speed here. Everything is already super-slow and overlapping - this just makes it worse. all change~
01:11:053 (4,1) - Spacing fix~
01:14:164 (4,1) - Hm, maybe these are on purpose. I don't recommend you use them in an Easy difficulty. fix~
01:41:720 (1) - New combo fix~
01:45:275 (1) - Remove new combo fix~
02:17:720 (2) - Same thing as earlier. Since you can see this while the 1 is in play, please increase the spacing. fix~
02:22:164 (3) - ^ ^
03:19:498 (1,2) - Slider ends are unsnapped fix~
[Normal]
01:35:498 (3,1) - Too close fix~
01:43:498 (1) - ^ ^
02:10:164 (3) - This would look a lot better if you lined up the end of 02:09:275 (2) - with the 3 slider. fix~
02:17:275 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too irregular here. Remember, this is a Normal. fix~
02:34:164 (2,1) - Too large of spacing fix~
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Just a small followup on DNA's
[DNA]
01:09:498 (5,1) - If you're emphasizing vocals strongly, it would play better to have a jump here instead of a stack
02:45:720 (1,2) - With this, the flow change was kind of weird since you were doing a circular jump with 02:44:609 (2,3,4) - but then you go for a hard-angle jump with 2:45. It's not that big of a deal, but it would be much nicer to have it more consistent.
03:32:831 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, this pattern still sticks out really bad against the flow of the rest of the section since you go against the circular flow from everything else around it.
[DNA]
01:09:498 (5,1) - If you're emphasizing vocals strongly, it would play better to have a jump here instead of a stack
02:45:720 (1,2) - With this, the flow change was kind of weird since you were doing a circular jump with 02:44:609 (2,3,4) - but then you go for a hard-angle jump with 2:45. It's not that big of a deal, but it would be much nicer to have it more consistent.
03:32:831 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, this pattern still sticks out really bad against the flow of the rest of the section since you go against the circular flow from everything else around it.
Garven wrote:
Just a small followup on DNA's
[DNA]
01:09:498 (5,1) - If you're emphasizing vocals strongly, it would play better to have a jump here instead of a stack //ok.
02:45:720 (1,2) - With this, the flow change was kind of weird since you were doing a circular jump with 02:44:609 (2,3,4) - but then you go for a hard-angle jump with 2:45. It's not that big of a deal, but it would be much nicer to have it more consistent.
//I don't know how to explain this kind of flow,it's fine to me.
03:32:831 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, this pattern still sticks out really bad against the flow of the rest of the section since you go against the circular flow from everything else around it. //I don't want to keep doing circular flow since I make jumps here.
and this is not that bad,really ..
http://puu.sh/1zJIf
lol
Sorry, lost track of this map. Have to rebubble due to the unsnapped sliders, sorry.DarknessAngel wrote:
02:45:720 (1,2) - With this, the flow change was kind of weird since you were doing a circular jump with 02:44:609 (2,3,4) - but then you go for a hard-angle jump with 2:45. It's not that big of a deal, but it would be much nicer to have it more consistent.
//I don't know how to explain this kind of flow,it's fine to me. I would call it "bad" but oh well. It's fine as it is. q:
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RANK EDIT: Welcome to tomorrow! Today! Wait, what?
Gorgeous hitsounds on D.N. btw
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nice map ! nice song!
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