1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

104,340,67318,6,0,B|52:356|-8:296|0:236,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

100,248,68107,2,0,B|172:164,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~ :3 hihi :3

mod request by in-game

[General]

●Song Setup > Storyboarding > Countdown > Turn off "Enable countdown" (Easy and Insane diff only) Ok
●Song Setup > Storyboarding > Misc. Toggles > Turn off "Letterbox during breaks" (Easy and Insane diff only) Ok

I think it would be necessary to unify

[Easy]

●00:07:947 (5) - Remove whistle of the entire. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/475706 ok
●00:09:368 (1) - Add whistle? I hear the sound better ok
●00:22:315 and 00:24:841 and 00:27:368...etc. Do you want to add a clap to these? (Drum-slidertick) I feel lonely sound is ;w; not a fan of slidertick claps
●00:52:157 (1) - Invisible D: http://puu.sh/1jwUF You will need to move a little ok
●01:12:526 (3) - Add new combo? will keep for now and think
●01:14:420 (1) - Remove new combo?
●02:08:104 (2) - Add new combo?
●02:09:999 (1) - Remove new combo?
●02:48:368 (3) - finish → whistle. Same as 01:06:999 and 02:02:578 <-- similar pattern is followed
●02:53:578 (3) - Add new combo?
●02:55:473 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Insane]

●00:47:897 (2,3,4,5) - Add new combo ? http://puu.sh/1jxz3
●00:51:529 (5) - Add new combo ok
●01:44:104 (4) - ^ ok
●01:44:736 (7) - ^ ok
●01:47:107 (5) - ^ ok
●02:08:104 (1) - Move (x:344 y:84)? ok
●02:18:844 (5) - Add new combo
●amazing map :3 thanks

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[Easy]
00:36:526 (3) - hmm..What about mine? ok

01:43:473 (2) - Stack with 01:40:947 (2) completely. sure
02:48:683 (1) - Spinner here is not so good imo. You could map here like this similar as previous pattern, keeping


[Insane]
00:27:371 (2,3) - Ctrl+G (jump fluently imo) ok
01:01:002 (7) - Why put it here? Stacking with 01:00:371 (3) may feel better. current one is good imo
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Excellent Mapset :3
GL! yay thanks!

h3k1ru wrote:

></ \><

[Easy]

00:39:368 - i think u should add note here sure

02:08:104 (2) - add whistle to the tail? similar to 01:12:526 (3) and 02:53:578 (3) oops, missed

01:27:683 (1) - whistle on tail all done
01:28:789 (2) - head
01:29:420 (3) - head
01:30:052 (1) - head&tail
01:31:315 (2) - head
01:31:947 (3) - head
01:32:578 (1) - head

[Insane]

hmm add more whistles at start? all done
00:06:368 (4) -
00:07:157 (2) - head
00:08:420 (1) - head&tail
00:09:052 (2) -

nc mod >< all done
00:33:529 (1) -
00:41:423 (1) -
02:15:529 (1) -

02:39:841 (2) - add whistle also? or remove from 02:40:473 (4) instead keeping

></ \>< thx modding~

1. No kiai time? :O

1. 00:26:265 (1,2) - wouldn't it look better if the spacing between these two object is be the same as the spacing of the remaining stream?
2. 01:40:160 (2) - I like ctrl+g more, it flows better (?). Move (3) to around x:404 x:200 then ofcourse.
3. 02:36:999 - I feel like the beat here and at 02:37:157 should be connected with a slider because of the vocals. NC here then, too.

1. 00:15:447 - even though it is oly a Hard I would consider starting the spinner already here. It fits perfectly.
2. 01:00:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these sliders start on a red tick which doesn't feel good because now you have a syncopation in the map but not in the music- It would be much better if you move all object 2 ticks to the right because you 1. solve the aforementioned problem and 2. you also connect the background drum beats with the sliders much better than before. Then you can add a new circle at 01:00:052 (with a NC). You will also have to fix the stream at 01:01:631. A possible solution might be this (current position is 01:00:841):
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:07:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - here the sliders starting on the red ticks are matching the drum beats, so everything is fine.

1. 00:25:476 (2,3,4) - (3) nearly touches the hp-bar, I know, it is still acceptable but in my opinion it is too close. What about this:
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:792 - add Circle with NC here already? Then the gap is only 1/1 beat long and not unintuitive 3/2 beats long.
3. 00:37:318 - ^
4. 01:42:844 - volume down, like 30% or 40%?
5. 01:47:739 - back to 50% volume (or maybe earlier during the spinner?)

1. 00:40:947 (3) - extend this slider to 00:41:736. The gap to the next slider feels better then and it also supports the drum.
2. 01:06:368 (3) - 3 circles would fit better

Tshemmp wrote:

[General]

1. No kiai time? :O still deciding, probably adding later

[Insane]

1. 00:26:265 (1,2) - wouldn't it look better if the spacing between these two object is be the same as the spacing of the remaining stream? couldn't notice anything but moved closer now
2. 01:40:160 (2) - I like ctrl+g more, it flows better (?). Move (3) to around x:404 x:200 then ofcourse. keeping
3. 02:36:999 - I feel like the beat here and at 02:37:157 should be connected with a slider because of the vocals. NC here then, too. wow damn, as much as I wanted to keep it, 3 people have told me this, so changed

Great map as usual oh stop it you

[Easy]

1. 00:40:947 (3) - extend this slider to 00:41:736. The gap to the next slider feels better then and it also supports the drum. yeah
2. 01:06:368 (3) - 3 circles would fit better gonna keep it this way for first chorus so that beginners can pick up more easily

One of the best and most interesting Easies (Easys?) I have seen in a long time.

Star, obviously. thanks mate

Frostmourne wrote:

Easy
00:40:631 (2) - maybe rhythm like this ? , I think it's not too hard for Easy diff here

SPOILER

01:05:736 (2,3) - only whistle here ._.? , why don't try adding more whistle in the whole chorus part ? , I see it's hard to add ._.
but those are quite empty imo , just mentioned noted, but keeping
01:14:420 (1) - add repeat here to be able to add finish at the last point ? and then move spinner forward , either 1/2 or 1/4 are ok
think not necessary, as it feels weird if i start spinner later (for easy diff)
01:30:052 (1) - whistle on the body sounds a bit strange imo mistake, fixed
01:36:368 (1) - maybe add clap at the tail ? sure
01:55:315 (1) - wow, clap on the body , why don't tail ? like this one 00:59:736 (1) - yeah
02:34:473 (2) - clap at the tail ? to be along with 02:37:631 (2) - added

Insane
01:56:423 (5) - clappp sure
02:01:473 (8) - ^ why not
02:29:262 (9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - crazy D: nooo
02:33:841 (3,1) - between this gap is quite large, add repeat on 02:33:841 (3) - would be better done

one of amazing beatmaps in this game, more star /o/ , Good luck xsrs thanks frost~ \o\

grotle09 wrote:

Easy:
Where is the kiai time?
00:35:578: The slider it could change by 3 circles one at 1/1
keeping because i want to minimize note density and use more sliders instead

Melophobia wrote:

i love kiai times so much but he hates me :<

[Mythol-dono] Eternal Melophobia ==/
00:53:423 - Finish k
01:38:423 (2) - better to avoid overlapping just in case really its fine imo
01:42:844 (1) - Finish ok
01:52:792 (4) - ^ And remove from the next slider ok
01:57:529 (5) - No need to follow 01:57:686 - imo because of no sound there and a pause here sounds great to me ok
01:59:107 (3) - Finish ok
02:11:581 - ^ ok
02:35:739 (4) - Newcombo ok
02:56:107 (1) - this was intentionally made inconsistent with 02:11:739 (1) - ? i think its better to unify i think these parts are clearly different... prefer ending here ;_;

Melophobia wrote:

i love kiai times so much but he hates me :< added

[General]
Lead-in is too long imo. 1000ms is enough fixed in all diffs

[xexexesdfaf-sama]
http://puu.sh/1kOdu fixed ;_;
1st chorus needs more finishes~ (compare to 2nd and 3rd) added
00:14:894 - Clap+Finish like others? sure
00:21:999 (1) - Finish ok
00:27:055 (8) - ^ ok
00:32:107 (6) - ^ ok
00:35:578 - Clap ok
01:02:026 - Slider end cannot be muted. 5% --> 30%
(technically it's ok but some members were saying it cannot
make it a bit more audible just in case? :/
01:15:052 - Finish ok
01:15:529 (2) - Finish here as well as 02:11:107 (2) - ok
01:16:002 - Finish ok
01:57:529 (1) - Extend this by 1/4 beat regardless of vocal like what you did for 01:01:950 (1) - ? prefer like this
02:18:055 (3) - Dont want tod o nazi mod but can you make this shape better
yeah it has been bothering me as well, but i dunno how to do sliders, tried and fixed, hope it's better now.. :<
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/479015
02:28:555 (4,1) - looks better if you switched these newcombos removed combo instead

This diff <#######333333333333 very fun! mero<#######333333333333

[Easy-sama]
Dont think blank of 2 beats after a spinner is long enough for newbies to recover, but the diff is nice as it is thus remapping isn't worth it imo (but its still best to make them easier and leave 3~4 beats empty) Tell me your decision!
removed 2 of them (the ones right before the chorus) but kept the ones in chorus.. i like them, if it's really not fine tell me :/

Gabe wrote:

Obligatory two same songs ranked in one day.

Congratz :3