[Easy]
Some of your sliders could look a lot better in terms of symmetry. Note the grid levels I moved the points in, sometimes I use 3, but sometimes it's just not perfect without 4.
EDITING THE .OSU: Go into the .osu file for this difficulty, ctrl-f the third number (e.g. 52418 for the first one), and change that line to my suggestion. I added pictures for you to check out before you make the change.
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00:52:418 (1) - Change the line to this slider:
336,140,52418,6,0,P|256:36|176:140,1,300,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
It should look like
this, which has better symmetry over the old slider.
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00:56:773 (2) - Move the last slider point up by one grid (grid level
3), for symmetry too.
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01:04:031 (1,2,3,1) - I changed these guys around so that the blanket and stacking are perfect.
148,292,64031,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,240,64515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,188,64999,2,0,L|364:140,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,65966,6,0,P|224:328|144:288,1,180
It should look like
this.
What I did01:04:031 (1) - Moved this down and right by one grid (grid level 4)
01:04:999 (3) - Moved this up and left by one grid (grid level 4)
01:05:966 (1) - Moved the entire slider to the right one grid (level 3), the middle sliderpoint left one grid (level 3), and the last slider point left one grid (level 3).
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01:48:547 (4) - Middle slider point one grid right, end slider point one grid up (level
4), so it blankets 01:47:095 (2) better.
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02:38:870 (4) - Could be blanketed so much better. My suggestion:
352,96,158870,2,0,P|268:56|192:96,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Looks like
this.
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02:42:741 (4) - Now this is what I like to see. Good work on this one. Just put in more effort on the other blankets and you're good to go.
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03:02:095 (1) - Move the middlepoint 2 grids down (level
4), to blanket 03:01:612 (3) better.
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03:03:063 (2) - Middlepoint 2 grids up, endpoint one grid down (level
4), to blanket 03:04:031 (1) better.
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[Normal]
00:56:773 (2) - Could blanket (1) better, try:
16,152,56773,2,0,P|64:92|160:96,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Looks like
this. Move the beats after this accordingly.
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01:05:966 (1) - The short unmapped part after this breaks the flow of the map, imo. I'd give this two repeats, or add another slider from 01:06:692 - 01:06:692, like how you do it later at 01:10:563 (2).
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02:44:192 - Add a beat here, to keep the flow, and be similar to 02:40:321 (6).
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[Hard]
00:27:257 (1) - Middlepoint 1 grid right, endpoint 2 grids up and 2 grids right (level
4).
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01:10:321 (5) - This, and
only this, is mapped to the beat instead of the vocals, and it is
very jarring and flow-breaking to play. I'd suggest to just map this to vocals.
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01:58:225 (1) - Middlepoint 1 grid down (level
4)
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