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BACK-ON - Chain (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 Agustus 2016 at 22:25:06

Artist: BACK-ON
Title: Chain (TV Size)
Source: Air Gear
Tags: teru21 mintong89 Arnold0 Kurosanyan
BPM: 184
Filesize: 13760kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Arnold0's Insane (3,06 stars, 273 notes)
  2. Easy (1,36 stars, 85 notes)
  3. Hard (2,89 stars, 178 notes)
  4. Kurosanyan's Taiko Muzukashii (2,83 stars, 368 notes)
  5. Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni (4,4 stars, 581 notes)
  6. mint's Taiko Oni (3,73 stars, 484 notes)
  7. Teru's Normal (1,88 stars, 112 notes)
Download: BACK-ON - Chain (TV Size)
Download: BACK-ON - Chain (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Bernkaztl , edited 81 times in total.
TrigonometrY
281 posts
Joined November 2011
TrigonometrY
Hi from #modreqs!
I hope this will be helpful for you:

Easy
1) Try to use the same distance snap on Easy
2) You use same pattern all time. Add variety to the map. Maybe, better make some sliders following the vocal (especially in the chorus)? For example:
00:33:325 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - delete this and try this:
416,256,33651,6,0,B|384:304|320:336|256:344|192:336|128:304|104:256,1,360.000003576278
104,136,36260,2,0,B|128:88|192:56|256:48|320:56|384:88|416:136,1,360.000003576278
00:39:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete and try:
488,232,38868,6,0,B|480:296|416:320,1,120.000001192093
296,344,40172,2,0,B|240:360|168:344,3,120.000001192093
96,264,42780,1,0
64,144,43432,1,0
and so on.
3) 00:54:190 (6,1,1) - too hard for beginner. Delete spinner
4) 01:29:726 - music ends here, so the last note I would put here

Normal
Too hard, a large pile of objects.
1) HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate, Overall Difficulty - ~4 (maximum 5)
2) The same as on Easy: try to stick to the same distance snap, add some variety.
3) 00:54:842 (1) - this spinner again
4) Combo: try not to exceed a value 8 for a combo

Hard
00:17:514 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
00:29:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) etc - maybe, better to avoid frequent use of such patterns?

Good luck with map!
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hi from #modreqs!
I hope this will be helpful for you:

Easy
1) Try to use the same distance snap on Easy
2) You use same pattern all time. Add variety to the map. Maybe, better make some sliders following the vocal (especially in the chorus)? For example:
00:33:325 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - delete this and try this:
416,256,33651,6,0,B|384:304|320:336|256:344|192:336|128:304|104:256,1,360.000003576278
104,136,36260,2,0,B|128:88|192:56|256:48|320:56|384:88|416:136,1,360.000003576278
00:39:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete and try:
488,232,38868,6,0,B|480:296|416:320,1,120.000001192093
296,344,40172,2,0,B|240:360|168:344,3,120.000001192093
96,264,42780,1,0
64,144,43432,1,0
and so on.
3) 00:54:190 (6,1,1) - too hard for beginner. Delete spinner
4) 01:29:726 - music ends here, so the last note I would put here

Normal
Too hard, a large pile of objects.
1) HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate, Overall Difficulty - ~4 (maximum 5)
2) The same as on Easy: try to stick to the same distance snap, add some variety.
3) 00:54:842 (1) - this spinner again
4) Combo: try not to exceed a value 8 for a combo

Hard
00:17:514 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
00:29:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) etc - maybe, better to avoid frequent use of such patterns?

Good luck with map!
I don't accept your Mod cause many problem :? :? :?
Ruta Kaguya
3 posts
Joined October 2012
Ruta Kaguya
i think it should be "TV Size" not "Tv Size"

and, i will try to make the insane XD
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Ruta Kaguya wrote:

i think it should be "TV Size" not "Tv Size"

and, i will try to make the insane XD
okay,I will waiting
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Fast mod :P

General:

-- Considering the metronome, The offset should be 14090 (No time changes are made)

Easy:

-- Where are hitsounds?

00:58:429 (4) - 1 Grid Left and down
01:00:385 (6) - 1 Grid right
01:02:993 (2) - 1 Grid Left
01:07:557 (4) - Make a line with the end of (3) (Then you'll have to edit the distance of (5), maybe 2 Grid left)
01:08:861 (6,7) - 2 Grid down
01:14:729 (6) - 1 Grid Right
01:16:686 (1) - Anti Jump with the previous note doesn't look good, imo
01:21:902 (1) - ^

Normal:

00:44:084 (1) - Mini jump with (2) doesn't look good
00:59:081 (8) - 1 Grid down
00:59:733 (9) - Uhh,, Anti jump with the previous note looks bad. Or maybe you've forgot to put a note at 00:59:407
01:14:077 (10) - NC
01:29:074 (5) - Delete Clap at the end (or delete 1 reverse)

Hard:

00:22:241 (1) - Distance
00:24:523 (5) - NC
01:08:535 (2) - Stack on (6)
01:15:055 (1) - I don't think a spinner fits here

I think you'll need more work!!
Good luck with your map~
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
SUBMIT

STILL NEED FOR GD INSANE
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Wrong submit?
Where is your normal?
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Sonnyc wrote:

Wrong submit?
Where is your normal?
arrrggg,This have been 2 times I fail in upload
but now UPDATED
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Nagisawa
From my moddinq que, hello~

  • General
  1. Rename your background. 'BG' or just 'background'

  • Easy
    00:20:937 (1) - remove whistle. it's no need, i think
    00:46:366 (3,5) - maybe it's look good, if be a symmetrically
    00:54:516 (1,1) - it's hard for easy. Either delete the spinner, or make it a long. For a novice spinner should be left after at least one tick. And here and spinner short, and after he has a right note! For a beginner it will be hell. =DDDD
    01:09:513 (7) - maybe add a cpal, i think)
    01:25:814 (3) - made exactly. http://puu.sh/1i92u

  • Normal
    00:18:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This all does not look very neat. Each note closes the previous and therefore for Normal - it's hard.
    00:22:567 (9) - slider is ugly. should fix it.
    00:45:388 (3,4) - fix distance
    00:54:842 (1) - it's hard for normal. see my recommendation in easy ^
    00:57:777 (5) - ugly slider
    In general, I bit hard modthis diff. Because it is not accurate, just as it did not worked hitsounds.

  • Hard
    00:18:655 (1) - remove nc;00:19:633 (11) - nc here; and remove nc from this 00:20:285 (1) -
    Too much of this: http://puu.sh/1i96Y And it's just hard.


I think that the map requires a lot of work!
Good luck to you!~~~
:3
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
SUBMIT
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana


General

  1. Remove 'Air Gear' from tags, it's already in the source
  2. Offset: 1046
  3. BPM: 184,000 (Resnap timing section and notes and make sure to change in all diffs)

Easy

  1. The rhythm is very monotonous... Why not add longer sliders and make some alternation?
  2. Add more hitsounds, really ._. I heard 3 whistles and 4 claps... This is definitely not enough! Read here point 4

Normal

  1. The pattern look very random. Why not form any triangles or stars?
  2. A lot of spacing mistakes. Please check your map and decide, which spacing you want to use in the whole diff ^^
  3. Hitsounds mostly are set on every second white tick. Look at this picture. I placed notes where the clap fits with the song. Just try it ^^
  4. Try to make new combo not so random. It will look better if you set new combo on every new vocal (like you did here 00:24:523 (1) but not here 00:33:977 (10)) or every long white tick
  5. A lot of overlaps that can prevented.
  6. 00:56:147 (1) - This note is too far away, place it more in the center, it's esaier for beginners o3o Or leave space after the spinner.

Hard

  1. Again, very random patterns.
  2. Spacing in Hard isn't important as Normal or Easy, but some spacing mistakes can be removed.
  3. 00:25:827 (3,4) - Spacing
  4. 00:27:783 (6) - With this pattern (5) looks like a slider with 2 repeats. Please move (6)
  5. 00:42:454 (8,9) - Spacing
  6. 01:02:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 01:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make perfect blankets (look here)
  7. 01:08:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think, this isn't a good idea to stack everything with the notes before... It's hard to read and you could form better things with it.

Okay, when you fix that, i re-check ;3
But I have to say, next friday to nxt friday (26.10.-2.11.) I am away. I will still re-check both of your maps after that ^^
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

kurohana wrote:



General

  1. Remove 'Air Gear' from tags, it's already in the source
  2. Offset: 1046
  3. BPM: 184,000 (Resnap timing section and notes and make sure to change in all diffs)

Easy

  1. The rhythm is very monotonous... Why not add longer sliders and make some alternation?
  2. Add more hitsounds, really ._. I heard 3 whistles and 4 claps... This is definitely not enough! Read here point 4

Normal

  1. The pattern look very random. Why not form any triangles or stars?
  2. A lot of spacing mistakes. Please check your map and decide, which spacing you want to use in the whole diff ^^
  3. Hitsounds mostly are set on every second white tick. Look at this picture. I placed notes where the clap fits with the song. Just try it ^^
  4. Try to make new combo not so random. It will look better if you set new combo on every new vocal (like you did here 00:24:523 (1) but not here 00:33:977 (10)) or every long white tick
  5. A lot of overlaps that can prevented.
  6. 00:56:147 (1) - This note is too far away, place it more in the center, it's esaier for beginners o3o Or leave space after the spinner.

Hard

  1. Again, very random patterns.
  2. Spacing in Hard isn't important as Normal or Easy, but some spacing mistakes can be removed.
  3. 00:25:827 (3,4) - Spacing
  4. 00:27:783 (6) - With this pattern (5) looks like a slider with 2 repeats. Please move (6)
  5. 00:42:454 (8,9) - Spacing
  6. 01:02:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 01:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make perfect blankets (look here)
  7. 01:08:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think, this isn't a good idea to stack everything with the notes before... It's hard to read and you could form better things with it.

Okay, when you fix that, i re-check ;3
But I have to say, next friday to nxt friday (26.10.-2.11.) I am away. I will still re-check both of your maps after that ^^
thx but I think i won't change BPm and Offset
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
finish: http://puu.sh/1jyNV :D

but..timing is weird: BPM:180 and Offset: 3,669
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
As requested xD Done xD

http://puu.sh/1jAaV

don't forget to put in my name on tags in all diff xD

Ganbatte neh..? xD
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

mintong89 wrote:

finish: http://puu.sh/1jyNV :D

but..timing is weird: BPM:180 and Offset: 3,669

ah ya,u re right :D
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Rotte
hey~

General

i recommand kiai time is 00:34:973 - to 00:55:842 -


Easy

HP+2 AR+2 OD+1

00:23:886 (5,1) - The 2 objects is unsnapped.
00:28:451 (4,5) - Don't stack this, it's too hard,and 4 is not beautiful.
00:33:669 (1) - spacing,it's too hard in easy diff.
00:53:886 (6) - 1 grid up.
01:07:582 (4,5) - 1 grid right.
01:07:582 (4,6) - 1 grid up.


01:03:668 (3) - remove clap.
01:04:973 - remove clap.
01:07:255 - remove clap.
01:07:908 - ^
01:08:886 (6) - remove clap.
01:17:038 (8) - NC.
01:29:755 - add finish,and add a green line to reduce volume to 5%.

13 clap sounds good,and plz check it.

Normal

00:11:495 (1,3) - Don't stack this, it's too hard.
01:06:929 (2) - ^
01:08:234 (2) - ^
01:13:451 (2,3) - ^
01:29:429 - I recomand use a 1/8 slider.


Hard

00:15:082 (4) - unsnapped
00:17:527 (3) - move to 280|280 .
00:23:886 (4) - 1 grid right.
00:27:962 (6) - NC
00:28:451 (1) - 1 grid right.
00:30:897 (1) - spacing
00:31:875 (1) - spacing
00:41:169 (6) - remove clap
00:52:255 (7) - unsnapped

please use 1 3 clap in this slider circle.
01:02:038 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:11:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:16:712 (1,1) -
01:19:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:25:190 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21

-[NYAN]- wrote:

hey~

Normal

00:11:495 (1,3) - Don't stack this, it's too hard. its not stacked.. o3o you can see them clearly
01:06:929 (2) - ^ ^ and its a pattern
01:08:234 (2) - ^ ^
01:13:451 (2,3) - ^ Okayy XD
01:29:429 - I recomand use a 1/8 slider. Nice idea XD
here XD
http://puu.sh/1mIY8

thanks nyan XD
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
i will mod this map tomorrow >w<
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video

Easy
00:33:668 Ctrl+G
00:42:473 give whistle sound
00:44:755 give finish hitsound
00:44:103 give clap sound on the head of slider
01:01:712 give clap sound
01:03:016 ^
01:03:668 and 01:04:321 give whistle sound on the head of slider and finish to the tail of slider
01:06:277 (2,3,4) same as 01:03:668

Teru's Normal
01:02:038 give clap sound
01:02:690 give whistle sound
01:18:016 (1,2,1) kalo bisa jangan dibuat numpuk
01:29:429 make this slider end in white line

Hard
make beat snap divisor become 1/4 .. need a little stream in this diff :3
00:24:538 (1) maybe make likethis
00:58:451 (9) try make this

i can't mod taiko diff sorry :(
good luck :D
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21

- M i K u - wrote:

i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video owob I dukung!! :3

Teru's Normal
01:02:038 give clap sound nope :D pattern nya yang part sana sih di garis ke 3 clap nya xD
01:02:690 give whistle sound nah... kalo pake disitu ajah kan aneh lol XD
01:18:016 (1,2,1) kalo bisa jangan dibuat numpuk okeee
01:29:429 make this slider end in white line ;A; nah.. situ ada nyobain ga? ntar ga pas sama musiknya ;-;

i can't mod taiko diff sorry :(
good luck :D
araa~ http://puu.sh/1o9tb
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
udah nyobain sih ;w;
maaf saya masih agak newbie urusan hitsound
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

- M i K u - wrote:

i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video


good luck :D
wakakakakaka


btw,napa mod q inggris tp kalo mod na teru indonesia :?:
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21

JT123 wrote:

- M i K u - wrote:

i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video


good luck :D
wakakakakaka


btw,napa mod q inggris tp kalo mod na teru indonesia :?:
because i'm special LOOOOOOOOOL!!
XD
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Hello JT123! Request from my queue! Here's a quick mod (mostly on combos)!

[Easy]
00:16:712 (4) - New Combo.
00:19:321 (6) - New Combo.
00:20:625 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:21:929 (3) - New Combo.
00:29:755 (5) - New Combo.
00:33:669 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:34:973 (2) - New Combo.
00:35:625 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:40:842 (5) - New Combo.
00:46:060 (10) - New Combo.
00:48:016 (12) - New Combo.
00:49:321 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:50:625 (3) - New Combo.
00:52:582 (5,6,1) - It would be better to replace slider 5 with a hit circle and start your spinner at 00:53:234 and ending at 00:52:582. Lastly, add a circle at 00:55:842.
00:56:495 (1) - If fixed above, add a new combo here.
01:01:060 (6,1) - Swap (Switch) these combos for consistiency.
01:04:973 (1) - Remove this combo.
01:06:277 (2,3,4) - This slider pattern is too hard for Easy difficulty. Just add hit circles. Remember, easy is for beginners.
01:08:886 (6) - New combo.
01:10:190 (1) - Remove combo.
01:11:495 (2) - New combo.
01:14:103 (5) - New combo.
01:29:103 (4) - End this slider at 01:29:592 instead.

[Teru's Normal]
-> Approach Rate 5?
00:03:669 (1,2,3) - 1 grid left.
00:32:364 (1) - Strange slider indeed.
01:18:016 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid right.
01:29:429 (4) - I lol'ed! Delete this slider and replace it with 1/2 mini slider. Also add a clap at the end of this slider.

[Hard]
00:34:973 (4) - New Combo.
00:37:582 (5) - New Combo.
00:40:190 (4) - New Combo.
00:45:408 (5) - New Combo.
00:48:016 (5) - New Combo.
00:50:951 (4) - New Combo.
00:52:908 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:53:234 (2) - New Combo.
01:03:669 (7) - New Combo.

I give up >_<
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21

BeatofIke wrote:

[Teru's Normal]
-> Approach Rate 5? okeii XD
00:03:669 (1,2,3) - 1 grid left.lol XD fix
00:32:364 (1) - Strange slider indeed. i love to make strange slider lol XD
01:18:016 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid right. Okaayy XD
01:29:429 (4) - I lol'ed! Delete this slider and replace it with 1/2 mini slider. Also add a clap at the end of this slider. nah.. its nice but i want to keep mine XD add the clap sound btw XD

I give up >_<
thanks BeatofIke XDD ily /slap XD

Code kay..? my puush acting strange.. =w=
SPOILER
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Back-On - Chain (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55821
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Chain (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Chain (TV Size)
Artist:BACK-ON
ArtistUnicode:BACK-ON
Creator:JT123
Version:Teru's Normal
Source:Air Gear
Tags:
BeatmapID:186977
BeatmapSetID:60713

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
3669,326.086956521739,4,1,0,50,1,0
55842,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
76712,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
89429,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 224,188,175
Combo2 : 148,237,174
Combo3 : 145,145,255
Combo4 : 51,255,255

[HitObjects]
84,88,3669,2,0,B|124:96|164:88|164:88|144:152|188:204,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,4647,1,2,0:0:0
328,200,4973,2,0,B|369:151|349:87|349:87|389:95|429:87,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,288,6277,6,0,B|380:324|380:324|292:336|292:336|228:372,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,336,7255,1,2,0:0:0
216,264,7582,2,0,B|168:237|168:237|80:225|80:225|36:189,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,128,8886,6,0,B|272:184|364:180|408:124,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,28,9864,1,2,0:0:0
324,80,10190,2,0,B|291:143|334:225|403:241,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,340,11495,6,0,B|276:328|300:272|284:200|216:184,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,92,12473,1,2,0:0:0
176,188,12799,2,0,B|120:200|104:272|128:328|180:340,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,276,14103,6,0,B|436:216|436:216|448:92,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,40,15082,1,8,0:0:0
348,136,15408,2,0,B|268:208,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,64,16386,1,8,0:0:0
180,40,16712,6,0,B|112:40|56:88|48:172,1,200
96,252,17690,1,8,0:0:0
188,288,18016,2,0,B|265:278|311:220|315:155,1,200
404,108,18995,1,8,0:0:0
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36,252,21929,1,0,0:0:0
88,336,22255,5,8,0:0:0
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504,184,25516,1,8,0:0:0
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312,36,26495,1,0,0:0:0
240,108,26821,1,8,0:0:0
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196,340,27799,1,0,0:0:0
196,340,28125,1,8,0:0:0
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88,140,29429,1,8,0:0:0
172,88,29755,6,0,B|196:36,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,164,30408,2,0,B|296:152,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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236,164,32364,6,0,B|292:184|304:248|304:248|312:216|328:212,2,150
276,72,33669,6,0,B|332:92|384:68,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,168,34321,2,0,B|404:148|456:172,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,256,34973,2,0,B|400:360,2,100,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,364,36277,6,0,B|176:344|124:368,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,268,36929,2,0,B|104:288|52:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,180,37582,2,0,B|108:76,2,100,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,96,38886,6,0,B|292:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,156,39538,2,0,B|384:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,96,40190,2,0,B|476:160|476:160|476:200|448:256|380:248,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,204,41495,2,0,B|196:141|196:141|196:101|232:48|292:56,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,252,42799,6,0,B|292:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,100,43451,1,8,0:0:0
376,100,44103,6,0,B|400:164|400:164|400:212,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,296,44755,1,0,0:0:0
316,360,45082,1,8,0:0:0
216,360,45408,2,0,B|112:360,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,264,46060,2,0,B|84:264,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,164,46712,6,0,B|188:164|188:164|233:181,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,152,47364,1,0,0:0:0
296,248,47690,1,8,0:0:0
316,152,48016,2,0,B|353:54,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,115,48668,2,0,B|452:62,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,212,49321,6,0,B|392:224|360:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,180,49973,2,0,B|234:221|174:209,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,132,50625,6,0,B|252:72|312:48|376:76|380:148,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,276,51929,2,0,B|248:336|308:360|372:332|376:260,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,204,53234,2,0,B|492:204,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,112,54538,6,0,B|296:112,2,150,4|0|4,0:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0
256,192,55842,12,4,58451,0:0:0
112,104,59103,6,0,B|68:148|88:220,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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148,272,61060,6,0,B|192:192|192:192|204:168|244:120|296:76|368:80,1,300
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332,296,63668,5,0,0:0:0
332,296,63995,1,0,0:0:0
240,252,64321,1,8,0:0:0
240,252,64647,5,0,0:0:0
324,196,64973,2,0,B|396:60,2,150
264,116,66277,6,0,B|216:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,288,66929,2,0,B|192:240,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,300,67582,6,0,B|312:212,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,128,68234,2,0,B|336:176,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,92,68886,6,0,B|240:52|240:52|188:16,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,120,69538,2,0,B|201:162|201:162|241:190,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,160,70190,6,0,B|376:188|420:172|420:172|452:220|448:280,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,276,71168,1,8,0:0:0
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332,104,73451,1,0,0:0:0
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368,184,74755,1,0,0:0:0
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428,300,78016,5,0,0:0:0
428,100,78668,1,0,0:0:0
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256,260,80299,1,0,0:0:0
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364,52,82908,1,0,0:0:0
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100,360,85516,1,0,0:0:0
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Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
Yessss,i Add The Video

ANd

I still need GD insane :/
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
From queue :D

just some suggestions

SPOILER
Geneal
may be Offset -10?

Easy
i think change SV in Easy is not good choice :p

01:06:929 (3) - remove this slider and increase slder's lenth by 1/1 01:08:234 (4) - and delete this
01:17:038 (1) - move slider 01:16:712 (1) - here

Teru's Normal
00:12:473 (2,3) - like this? http://puu.sh/1vyy8
00:23:886 (4) - remove slider and 00:24:049 (4) - add note here
00:36:277 (1) - add finish on start
00:38:886 (1) - ^
00:45:408 (4) - ^
00:48:016 (4) - ^
01:06:929 (2) - slider arrow is hidden imo try other location
01:08:234 (2) - ^
01:28:125 (2,3) - you may know this
01:29:429 (4) - delete this and 01:29:267 (4) - add 1/2 slider with 1 repeat here

Hard
00:37:571 (1) - add finish
00:41:158 (3) - delete clap on end and add clap on start
00:45:398 (1) - finish
00:48:006 (1) - ^
00:50:289 (3) - add finish on end
01:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you purposed to make pentagon how about make it perfectly?
01:14:103 (8,9,10) - delete these sliders and 01:14:103 (8) - add 1/1 slider , 01:14:592 (9) - add note move spinner 01:14:755 (1) - here
this rhythm is better imo
01:22:582 (2) - i think this slider's repeat arrow is hidden , try other location

Good luck! :)
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

HelloSCV wrote:

From queue :D

just some suggestions

SPOILER
Geneal
may be Offset -10?

Easy
i think change SV in Easy is not good choice :p

01:06:929 (3) - remove this slider and increase slder's lenth by 1/1 01:08:234 (4) - and delete this
01:17:038 (1) - move slider 01:16:712 (1) - here

Teru's Normal
00:12:473 (2,3) - like this? http://puu.sh/1vyy8
00:23:886 (4) - remove slider and 00:24:049 (4) - add note here
00:36:277 (1) - add finish on start
00:38:886 (1) - ^
00:45:408 (4) - ^
00:48:016 (4) - ^
01:06:929 (2) - slider arrow is hidden imo try other location
01:08:234 (2) - ^
01:28:125 (2,3) - you may know this
01:29:429 (4) - delete this and 01:29:267 (4) - add 1/2 slider with 1 repeat here

Hard
00:37:571 (1) - add finish
00:41:158 (3) - delete clap on end and add clap on start
00:45:398 (1) - finish
00:48:006 (1) - ^
00:50:289 (3) - add finish on end
01:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you purposed to make pentagon how about make it perfectly?
01:14:103 (8,9,10) - delete these sliders and 01:14:103 (8) - add 1/1 slider , 01:14:592 (9) - add note move spinner 01:14:755 (1) - here
this rhythm is better imo
01:22:582 (2) - i think this slider's repeat arrow is hidden , try other location

Good luck! :)
thx,
and i don;t want to change Offset :(
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