1. Forbidden Fruit (4,99 stars, 219 notes)
2. Holy Sliders (3,89 stars, 169 notes)
3. Sacrifice (1,02 stars, 120 notes)
4. Slaughter II (4,94 stars, 62 notes)

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi from queue, mod time~

[Sacrifice]
A nice diff for sure, most of these are only aesthetics tiny things I've found, feel free to follow what you like.

01:21:987 (2) - It looks better 2 grid down - Fixed
01:24:513 (4) - This goes 1 grid up - I don't think so
02:05:092 (3) - ^ - Fixed
02:06:987 (2) - 1 grid down - Fixed
02:34:776 - Try this rhythm pattern, the current one sounds weird as there's no sound in 02:35:092 (2)
- Done
02:57:829 (2) - This gets a bit covered by the HP bar, you can move this and the previous slider down to avoid this. - Rotated it -22 degrees, should be fine now

[Holy Sliders]
I recommend AR 5 (+1) as you have many objects and with the approach circles popping around, it could be a bit chaotic.
00:19:618 (1) - Circles invade Holy Slider's land \(°D°)/ (Yeah, no problems with it, only a comment) - This is on purpose
02:23:408 (2) - NC should be here, obviously, remove NC in 02:24:040 (1) - Fixed
02:33:513 (2) - ^ - ^

[Slaughter]
Maybe HP Drain -1 - no thanks

That's all from my part, good luck~ c:

Lou-kun wrote:

No it is, Y'know the song "Nico Nico Douga U.N Owen Was Her?" has that.

MathiasXII wrote:

Hello ! Respond to your mod request. Interesting choice of song.

General :

- The offset is not far from right but a little off... as I get horrible HORRIBLE accuracy. The offset would be around be 67 (+17ms). - Current one plays better for me, so not changing at least right now. Might ask BAT or someone for timing check later.
It seems about right, although slow songs are such a pain to time because of the length of the beats... it's harder to find a valid offset that works.

[Sacrifice]

General :
- Your notes shouldn't be so close to it's preceding spinner. If there is no way to leave a considerate amount of space between your note and your spinner without screwing up the feeling of the song (usually 1 white tick + 1 red tick OR 2 white ticks), replace these spinners with notes and sliders instead.

00:30:379 (1,3) - There are some overlaps like these in this difficulty's sliders. It's not a huge problem, but it makes your mapping look a little messy. Try avoiding overlapping sliders unless it is PURELY INTENTIONAL (like crossing sliders and sliders that are, by spacing, close to each other). - Oops, never noticed that... Fixed!

[Holy Sliders]

This difficutly needs to be remapped. Difficulties which are composed exclusively of sliders are easily frown upon and rejected. - I'll think of this later, too big choice for now

I've never seen a beatmap as of lately that has been ranked with a difficulty taht uses sliders exclusively and I don't think it's gonna happen in the near future... Sorry.

[Slaughter]

01:36:221 (2) - A better slider shape is recommended. - Better slider shape is done
02:31:642 (1) - I know you can refine this slider shape to make it look a tad better . - Should be better now

That is as far as I can go in the Hard difficulty modding since it's a tad difficult for me to pass... but I think the rest is okay !

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Well that's pretty much it for now! Good luck to ya!

This difficutly needs to be remapped. Difficulties which are composed exclusively of sliders are easily frown upon and rejected. - I'll think of this later, too big choice for now

I've never seen a beatmap as of lately that has been ranked with a difficulty taht uses sliders exclusively and I don't think it's gonna happen in the near future... Sorry.

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

Red: You have to fix it
Black: Notifications

[Sacrifice]
Seems good to me

[Sliders]

This difficutly needs to be remapped. Difficulties which are composed exclusively of sliders are easily frown upon and rejected. - I'll think of this later, too big choice for now

I've never seen a beatmap as of lately that has been ranked with a difficulty taht uses sliders exclusively and I don't think it's gonna happen in the near future... Sorry.

Don't you know Ritsuen ? But I admit it was APPROVED and not RANKED.

I also suggest you to remap it too.

[Slaughter]
That was hard to play, it's not easy to read your beatmap because of lots of weird spacing, but I think it's because you wanted it like that. - that is true~

00:47:724 (8,2) - They're overriding, try to fix it. - done
01:06:987 (4,5) - Better stack please - done
01:11:408 (3,4) - Little overriding - done
01:27:040 (4,6) - Overriding - done
01:59:408 (2,3,4) - They begin before the previous is finish. You have to fix it ! - but they don't begin so i cannot fix!
02:54:355 (1) - I think the combo that starts here is too long Why not start a new here 02:55:934 (10) ? - no thanks

GL for rank ^^

Static Noise Bird wrote:

JudgeTheDude wrote:

01:59:408 (2,3,4) - They begin before the previous is finish. You have to fix it ! - but they don't begin so i cannot fix!

Static Noise Bird wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

Hello ! Respond to your mod request. Interesting choice of song.

General :

- The offset is not far from right but a little off... as I get horrible HORRIBLE accuracy. The offset would be around be 67 (+17ms). - Current one plays better for me, so not changing at least right now. Might ask BAT or someone for timing check later.

Copy this to your beatmap folder and see for yourself hurrhurr

1. 00:25:303 (1) - Wrong spacing, it's bad in the easiest diff
2. 00:41:092 (1) - No clap here?
3. 00:53:092 (2,3) - Slider end, add clap
4. 01:01:303 - 01:05:092 - No hitsound in this part? Maybe you can add some whistle, at 01:01:303 (1,3) slider head and tail
5. 01:10:776 (1,3) - ^
6. 01:21:987 (2,4) - No, thanks. Blue tick sliders are way too hard to beat as a Easy diff.
7. 01:32:092 (2,4) - ^
8. 02:22:145 - 02:26:566 - Add some whistle would be better
9. 02:29:092 - 02:36:671 - ^
10. 02:40:145 (5) - This might be confusing, make it overlap under 02:39:197 (2,3,4) seems better
11. 02:57:513 (1) - Slider end, clap

1. 01:00:671 - 01:06:197 - Add some whistle?
2. 01:10:776 - 01:16:303 - ^
3. 02:21:513 - 02:26:566 - ^
4. 02:29:092 - 02:36:671 - ^
5. 02:40:145 (2) - Overlap under 1, looked bad, move it out would looked better

1. 00:23:408 (5) - Sudden jump, even it's playable, but still feel bad
2. 01:17:882 (6,7,8) - A sudden jump after a multi-reverse slider make it too hard to play imo, better to use usual spacing here
3. 01:20:882 - I can's say the stram part after this is wrong, but it played awkward, making me feel not that good while test :/ Spacing sometimes confuse me
4. 01:55:303 - Why drag break to here? You didn't do this in other diffs
5. 02:45:355 (3) - This one makes player easily misread to 1/2 beat space

Kin wrote:

Hi ~

From my mod queue ~

Don't forget I'm still a newbie modder ~

Sacrifice :

00:22:776 (3) - move last point one grid top, and the 4th point one grid bot, It's look better for me (nazi D:) - done
01:32:092 (2) - clic on blue snap is really strange for easy, maybe try something like this ? http://puu.sh/1iYOW - forgot to fix this part earlier woops
01:13:303 (3) - when the ball come to red point, it's a bit earlier to 1/1 http://puu.sh/1iZar done

for fix this ^

347,289,73303,2,0,B|328:248|376:200|376:200|328:152|348:112,1,200

02:35:724 (4) - red point one grid bot and left, because when the ball is on blue tick here, the ball is not really on red point : http://puu.sh/1iZp5 - it's already fine for me
02:58:776 - add clap - done

Holy slider :

Nothing found

Slaughter :

00:38:566 (3,4,1) - strange spacing (for me) - fixed, no idea why there was random 1,5 at 2,0 spacing moment
01:05:882 (2,3) - adjust blanket ? like this v - fixed a bit

this

440,84,65882,2,0,B|456:156|384:180,1,115

02:32:566 (2) - maybe ctrl+G ? - done E: actually no, it doesn't feel right

That all I can find ~

Well nice map and good luck ~

1. hitsound too loud D:
2. normal hitsound reduce by 20% will be fine.
3. if possible, rise soft hitsound to 60%.

1. 00:35:724 (2) - slider end 2 grids up(grid level 3)
2. 00:46:461 (6) - NC for spacing change
3. 01:21:987 (8) - ^
4. 01:32:566 (9) - ^
5. 02:07:303 (6) - ^
6. 02:21:513 - here to 02:41:724 - :add hitsounds plz. claps are fine.
7. 02:44:250 (1) - 2 grids down(grid level 4)
8. 02:47:882 (6) - NC for spacing change
9. 02:55:461 (7) - ^

1. 01:21:987 (2) - confusing rhythm for normal
2. 01:24:513 (2) - ^
3. 02:42:829 (2) - ^
4. 02:45:355 (2) - ^
5. 02:55:461 (2) - ^
6. 02:57:987 (2) - ^

1. 00:22:145 (2) - 1 grid left
2. 01:18:355 (1) - +clap
3. 02:27:197 (1) - not stack with 02:23:724 (1) -
4. 02:24:671 (2) - better to avoid pattern like this in easy diff. stack will confuse new players because its rhythm hard to read in low AR 0v0
5. 02:34:776 (2) - ^
6. 02:41:724 (1) - ^
7. 02:51:829 (1) - ^

1. Why no letterboxes during breaks?

1. AR2 maybe? HpDrain 2?
2. 00:22:776 (3,1) - Fix the spacing? D: Easy should have a consistent spacing.
3. 02:23:408 - Starting from there, there's suddenly 1/2 and it's stacks. You should avoid 1/2 (or at least no more than 1 in a row, and avoid stacks) for 2 good reasons: it would need at least AR3 to be playable and it makes the end oh the map way harder than the rest. Also fun fact: this part is easier (and better) in [Holy Sliders] and that totally makes no sense.
   
   Except for this part the map is perfect.

1. AR5?
2. 01:00:671 (1) - Please avoid this sudden big jump D: It's totally unexpected. Try something like this please.
   If you still want a jump here, at least make it no more than x1,75 D:
3. 01:05:724 (1,2,3) - Here the timing feels weird and it's hard to hit (3) at the right moment. I suggest to try this.
4. 01:15:829 (1,2,3) - Same here. Try this?

1. HPDrain and OD 7? 8 looks too high for 95 bpm imo D:
2. The spacing is meh for this one :I There's a lot of anti jump and random unexpected big jumps, please try to make the spacing more logic and consistent, it feels unplayble to me atm. Insane maps need jumps or it's boring and bad. But you need good and logic jumps.
3. 00:30:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh god please no. This is unplayable and shouldn't be rankable. You should make the spacing x2~x2,5. x3,25 is too high imo. And the most important 00:30:987 (5,6) - please make the spacing proportional with the previous one here. 1/2 notes should definitively not be closer to each others than 1/4.