Going to edit this when I am done modding ♥[Easy]
•00:18:170 (5) - This slider's form can be improved by making it more curved just like this v
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OR LOOK AT THE NEXT MOD.lolbruno was more fast than me. •00:21:834 (3) - Same as the previous point.
•00:45:651 (2) - This slider's form should be like the previous and next one, instead of having this one curved. Change it like
this.
•00:48:857 (1) - I really think this slider should be aligned with 00:47:483 (4) - on the same y: axis. So on x:380 y:260 will be perfect. After doing this, move the next circle because when moving the slider, the spacing after it won't be consistent.
•00:55:727 (3,5) - Both sliders are overlapping each others. Maybe moving the red dot some grid up will help. Also, move the circle (4) in the center just like
this.
•01:06:720 (1) - Make this slider's form like
this, as said on the previous point, both sliders are overlapping each others. Also, delete this slider: 01:08:552 (3) - , and copy/paste the previous slider. After that, make it like [img=http://puu.sh/1c7OD]this[/img] and then, and do "Reverse Selection", like
this.
•01:27:330 (1) - This circle is breaking the spacing consistency by 0,08x.
For the Hitsounds and New Combos, everything seems to be alright.
[Normal]
•00:09:010 (3,1) - The transition between these notes are not really good, mostly the way that the slider (1) has been made. Maybe rotating it by ~ -50 degres will look way more better.
•00:15:880 (2) - The reverse arrow here doesn't sound really good. In my opinion, deleting the reverse arrow and do something like this will sound way more better.
http://puu.sh/1c8el•00:23:514 (1) - A new combo should be added here because of the vocal.
•00:28:246 (5) - Look at your next patterns, you haven't added any combos like this one. So, delete this new combo.
•01:06:109 (3) - I do not suggest a slider placed like this one. The transition is totally not good.
[Rika]
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•00:05:651 (4,5) - When playing, I had problem to get to these circles because of the jump. Maybe making the jump more closer will be better.
•00:36:491 (7) - Delete the new combo, maybe?
•01:23:666 - Add a new combo here and also, to make a pattern with the combo, move these circles; 01:24:888 (4,5) - to x:356 y:44
Sorry for the poor mod on both Normal and Rika. They're already really good, so nothing else to say (:
I want to Bubble this so fcking much Q.Q