Crimmi wrote:

Hello~!

General

1. To avoid any problems, I suggest you change the source to just "REFLEC BEAT" because Konami sent a C&D removing all links to recent ranked beatmania IIDX maps, but in case that's not true, fix the title to "beatmania IIDX 15 DJ TROOPERS" so capitalize "DJ Troopers".
2. Your tags do need a bit of fixing, so i'll give you some tags to work with in the brackets; [Yoshitaka Nishimura 西村 宜隆 HARD RENAISSANCE]
3. You can also put the artist as "朱雀" since "Suzaku" is the romanized artist.
4. There is no preview point, set one up plz.

done

Beginner

1. 00:32:191 (2) - Move this to x:188|y:32.
2. 00:32:840 (3) - Move this to x:20|y:76.
3. 01:57:164 (1) - Move this down to x:448|y:148.
4. 02:10:786 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 02:15:651 (x)?

The other difficulties are fine to me, meh not my best mod but good luck~!

PortalLife wrote:

IRC Mod

TWO DEE ECKS

2015-09-22 22:57 ouranhshc: hi~ by chance, do you mod maps?
2015-09-22 22:58 PortalLife: i havent modded a map in a really long time
2015-09-22 22:58 PortalLife: I wonder why youre asking me
2015-09-22 22:58 PortalLife: Whats the song?
2015-09-22 22:58 ouranhshc: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/200645 Suzaku - Anisakis -somatic mutation type ''Forza''-]
2015-09-22 22:58 PortalLife: TWO DEE ECKS
2015-09-22 22:58 ouranhshc: LOL
2015-09-22 22:58 PortalLife: >Reflec beat source
2015-09-22 22:59 PortalLife: First Music Game Appearance: beatmania IIDX 15 DJ TROOPERS
2015-09-22 22:59 PortalLife: tsk tsk tsk
2015-09-22 23:01 ouranhshc: its because of the beatmania DMCA thing
2015-09-22 23:01 ouranhshc: a few months ago
2015-09-22 23:01 PortalLife: I figured
2015-09-22 23:02 PortalLife: okay so i decided to look through the anothert
2015-09-22 23:03 PortalLife: 01:24:732 (1,2,3,4) - this does not look fun, think you should use repeats here
2015-09-22 23:04 ouranhshc: okay
2015-09-22 23:05 PortalLife: 01:58:462 (1,2,1,2,1,2) the NC'ing here is pretty weird and compared the way youve used 1/4 silders in this map, the patterning here feels a bit uninspired
2015-09-22 23:05 PortalLife: given thats a high point in the song you could do more with that
2015-09-22 23:06 ouranhshc: okay
2015-09-22 23:08 PortalLife: 00:53:759 (1) The 1/4 silder feels pretty out of place
2015-09-22 23:09 PortalLife: 00:54:245 (1) So does this repeat silder, I dont understand the NC here mid stream
2015-09-22 23:10 PortalLife: 02:08:840 (1,2,3,4) Compared to the last 1/3 section in this map, you used a combo of silders and circles but you use all silders here. A silder to start to smooth the transition from the 1/4 streams is fair enough, but only using silders for this feels inconsistent
2015-09-22 23:11 PortalLife: I think from a purely mapping perspective thats my thoughts,
2015-09-22 23:12 ouranhshc:
2015-09-22 23:12 ouranhshc: 2011 mapping for the win
2015-09-22 23:13 ouranhshc: sooo, is there a chance you could post the chat log so i can give you kudosu
2015-09-22 23:13 PortalLife: Sure i'll go do that
2015-09-22 23:13 ouranhshc: \:D/

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

SPOILER

I moved 00:10:137 (2) - to (x248, y96) and 00:10:786 (1) to (x154, y129) for reference

SPOILER

For reference, the (5) is at 00:22:462

Seiga Kaku wrote:

go go rank

SPOILER

164,328,117164,6,0,B|208:372|304:376|348:304|348:192|255:192|164:192|164:80|208:8|304:12|348:56,1,560,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:

1. This map spread, Standard Hyper between big 2.20 ----> 3.82 . try SMIC's Standard more harder (2.3~2.5 SD). or you can ask QAT better.
2. Artist is '朱雀' Romanised Artist is 'Suzaku' this not fix now? other modder was modded this.
3. add tag 'beatmania IIDX 15 DJ TROOPERS' It's already fine.
4. Remove Countdown?

1. 00:10:705 - 5% sound is actually doesn't work finish sound. at least 20% volume better imo.
2. 00:22:786 (2) - add finish slider end here. cymbals part.
3. 00:30:245 (3) - ^
4. 00:32:191 (2,3) - ^ but, slider head.
5. 00:52:299 (1) - ^ but, slider end.
6. 00:48:407 (3) - spacing high this. should be 0.8x around.
7. 00:53:597 (3) - Perfect stack please, move (x:256 y:168)
8. 01:04:299 (2) - move (x:256 y:242). (1) middle seems more good.
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:18:245 (1,2,1,2) - add finish slider end.
10. 01:24:732 (3) - It's short slider and double reverse is confuse beginner imo. Please try circle→circle→1/1 slider.
11. 02:02:353 (3) - spacing high this. should be 0.8x around.
12. 01:23:272 - unsnapped green line. 01:23:281 - snap to 01:23:272
13. 01:25:948 - ^ 01:25:957 - snap to 01:25:948
14. 01:50:678 - this bit calm part, nothing hitsound. try add some whistle or finish?
15. 02:00:407 (1) - Unrankable issue here.

    I recommend to map the spinners. If you want you can also shorten them and start the new lines properly but make sure to leave ~1 measure between the spinner ending and the next note.

16. 02:08:840 (3) - same reason two reverse.
17. 02:10:380 - ^ 02:10:389 - snap to 02:10:380
18. 02:10:543 - ^ 02:10:552 - snap to 02:10:543

• 
  Nice long slider. I like it!

1. This diff high SV. I recommend AR+1. also, Normal diff AR4. need differentiation imo.
2. 00:26:353 (1,2,3) - try use same slider. seems more good. you can copy and paste. and use Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J and Ctrl+G.
3. 00:36:732 (1) - make curve? so, this reverse allow really outside. try avoid this!
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:44:516 (1) - like this slider seems easy diff, try this
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:25:705 (3) - It's should be 1/3 sound. you try this.
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:38:191 (2) - add note here. Gereral wrote, i think this diff bit more harder better. for spread.
7. 02:02:840 - add note. ^ same reason.
8. 02:04:786 - add note. ^
9. 02:10:137 - add note (x:288 y:216) ?
10. 02:15:651 - spinner end this time better. your diff only 02:15:326 - . bit early
11. 01:23:272 - unsnapped green line. 01:23:281 - snap to 01:23:272
12. 01:25:948 - ^ 01:25:957 - snap to 01:25:948
13. 02:10:380 - ^ 02:10:389 - snap to 02:10:380
14. 02:10:543 - ^ 02:10:552 - snap to 02:10:543

1. 01:37:867 (2) - add whistle slider head.

1. Normal diff finish suggest, Similarly add please.
2. 00:10:705 - 5% sound is actually doesn't work finish sound. at least 20% volume better imo.
3. 00:24:732 (5,7) - forget whistle here. piano high sound part and this part already put 00:27:326 - .
4. 00:54:894 - not reverse slider, add circle here? comfortable play imo.
5. 01:23:272 - unsnapped green line. 01:23:281 - snap to 01:23:272
6. 01:25:948 - ^ 01:25:957 - snap to 01:25:948
7. 02:10:380 - ^ 02:10:389 - snap to 02:10:380
8. 02:10:543 - ^ 02:10:552 - snap to 02:10:543

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Overall]

- I suggest to use current background in 1366 x 768 resolution: Link

[Another]
I remember your mapping style from old times and it didn't change ;D
I have only some suggestions:

00:30:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I believe this stars can be improved till perfection if you use Ctrl+Shift+D option for creating various polygons
00:51:002 (1) - the last circle marked as a new combo corrupts the stream design. Better to fix it
00:51:651 (1,2,3,4) - set hole pattern to x:484 ; x:232
01:11:110 (3) - 01:12:408 (3) - 01:13:705 (3) - etc i suggest to set 2-3 grids away from slider in such way:

SPOILER

[RLC's Hyper]

Really nice. I don't like the slider near the end at 01:57:164 (1) - it can be easily improved. Here is a code of my perfect vesrion:

164,328,117164,6,0,B|208:372|304:376|348:304|348:192|255:192|164:192|164:80|208:8|304:12|348:56,1,560,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:

Also: 02:10:624 - add a spinner?

[SMIC's Standard]
02:10:462 (1) - add a note and then start spinner

[Beginner]

I honestly do not consider this as a beginner. And would be better if you increase AR by 1 point

P o M u T a wrote:

hi #modreqs

[General]

1. This map spread, Standard Hyper between big 2.20 ----> 3.82 . try SMIC's Standard more harder (2.3~2.5 SD). or you can ask QAT better.
2. Artist is '朱雀' Romanised Artist is 'Suzaku' this not fix now? other modder was modded this.
3. add tag 'beatmania IIDX 15 DJ TROOPERS' It's already fine.
4. Remove Countdown?

[Normal]

1. 00:10:705 - 5% sound is actually doesn't work finish sound. at least 20% volume better imo. fixed
2. 00:22:786 (2) - add finish slider end here. cymbals part. fixed
3. 00:30:245 (3) - ^ fixed
4. 00:32:191 (2,3) - ^ but, slider head. fixed
5. 00:52:299 (1) - ^ but, slider end. fixed
6. 00:48:407 (3) - spacing high this. should be 0.8x around. i think its fine
7. 00:53:597 (3) - Perfect stack please, move (x:256 y:168)i think its fine, its only noticeable in the editor.
8. 01:04:299 (2) - move (x:256 y:242). (1) middle seems more good. fixed
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:18:245 (1,2,1,2) - add finish slider end. fixed
10. 01:24:732 (3) - It's short slider and double reverse is confuse beginner imo. Please try circle→circle→1/1 slider. fixed
11. 02:02:353 (3) - spacing high this. should be 0.8x around. i think its fine
12. 01:23:272 - unsnapped green line. 01:23:281 - snap to 01:23:272
13. 01:25:948 - ^ 01:25:957 - snap to 01:25:948
14. 01:50:678 - this bit calm part, nothing hitsound. try add some whistle or finish? fixed
15. 02:00:407 (1) - Unrankable issue here. fixed

    I recommend to map the spinners. If you want you can also shorten them and start the new lines properly but make sure to leave ~1 measure between the spinner ending and the next note.

16. 02:08:840 (3) - same reason two reverse. changed
17. 02:10:380 - ^ 02:10:389 - snap to 02:10:380 fixed
18. 02:10:543 - ^ 02:10:552 - snap to 02:10:543fixed

[SMIC's Standard]

• 
  Nice long slider. I like it!

1. This diff high SV. I recommend AR+1. also, Normal diff AR4. need differentiation imo.
2. 00:26:353 (1,2,3) - try use same slider. seems more good. you can copy and paste. and use Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J and Ctrl+G. no change
3. 00:36:732 (1) - make curve? so, this reverse allow really outside. try avoid this! fixed
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:44:516 (1) - like this slider seems easy diff, try this
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:25:705 (3) - It's should be 1/3 sound. you try this.fixed
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:38:191 (2) - add note here. Gereral wrote, i think this diff bit more harder better. for spread. no change
7. 02:02:840 - add note. ^ same reason. no change
8. 02:04:786 - add note. ^ no change
9. 02:10:137 - add note (x:288 y:216) ? no change
10. 02:15:651 - spinner end this time better. your diff only 02:15:326 - . bit early fixed
11. 01:23:272 - unsnapped green line. 01:23:281 - snap to 01:23:272 fixed
12. 01:25:948 - ^ 01:25:957 - snap to 01:25:948 fixed
13. 02:10:380 - ^ 02:10:389 - snap to 02:10:380 fixed
14. 02:10:543 - ^ 02:10:552 - snap to 02:10:543 fixed

[RLC's Hyper]

1. 01:37:867 (2) - add whistle slider head. fixed

[Another] fixed

1. Normal diff finish suggest, Similarly add please.
2. 00:10:705 - 5% sound is actually doesn't work finish sound. at least 20% volume better imo.
3. 00:24:732 (5,7) - forget whistle here. piano high sound part and this part already put 00:27:326 - .
4. 00:54:894 - not reverse slider, add circle here? comfortable play imo.
5. 01:23:272 - unsnapped green line. 01:23:281 - snap to 01:23:272
6. 01:25:948 - ^ 01:25:957 - snap to 01:25:948
7. 02:10:380 - ^ 02:10:389 - snap to 02:10:380
8. 02:10:543 - ^ 02:10:552 - snap to 02:10:543

that's all!! nice map.
good luck for ranking. I am very much looking forward.

Sorry I couldn't mod better. ><. I'm just getting back into mapping/modding

basic

1. Trun off Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks #your map dosent use story board

Normal

1. 00:12:083 (1) - This spinner was start here 00:11:110
2. 00:19:867 (3) - 01:17:597 (2) - 02:01:705 (2) - 02:02:353 (3) - 02:04:948 (1) - 02:07:543 (1,2) - add Whistle slider end
3. 01:16:624 (4) -02:09:813 (4) - add Whistle

Hard

1. 00:11:191 ~ 00:12:732 - add spinner

Linada wrote:

Hi ! from M4M

[Normal]
00:33:813 - Add circle ? no
00:40:624 (3) - remove whistle on slider body fixed
00:53:597 (3) - nazistack no because i don't want the osu! to stack it weirdly
01:11:435 - i think you should not skip thoses beats no change
02:05:597 - this feel really awkward if you miss thoses imo, why not delete 02:05:921 (2) - and make sliders reverse ? no change
02:09:813 (4) - slider instead ? no change

[SMIC's Standard]
00:45:489 (2) - remove whistle on tail ? sound weird fixed
00:47:110 (1) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
00:10:786 (1) - it sound weird, circle instead ? or extand it to 00:12:083 - ? no
00:18:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - AR 6.5 make it really hard to read, why not increase it to 7 or 7.5 ? increased it to 7, and changed pattern
00:25:786 (2) - why you change instrument ? i'd play really weirdly, i'd prefer to put it at red tick, OR apply it here too 00:28:299 (8) - for consistency
00:33:489 - missing piano ? didn't map it on purpose
00:33:813 - ^ didn't map it on purpose
02:08:840 (1,2,3,4) - why 1/6 ? put 1/4 for consistency with 01:42:894 (1,2,3,4) - well, its not 1/4, its 1/3

[RLC's Hyper]
00:38:678 (3) - feel strange to play, imo two 1/4 sliders would fit more no change
00:49:056 (3) - ^ no change

[Another]
00:10:786 (1) - this does not fit imo no change atm
00:25:948 (5) - even if this play good, the sound is on red tick (listen to 0.25x) no change
01:15:002 (3) - space it to 1.24 like the 3 before for consistency ? Fixed

I hope i helped =w=
Good set i can see, good luck :3

Lolipop wrote:

M4M! Click here

• Normal

  
  00:04:299 (3) - Curving this slider to the left would look better since 00:04:948 (4) below it is curved to the right. no change
  
  00:09:489 (1) - Curve this out to the left a bit since it seems like it's overlapping with 00:09:164 (2) Fixed. I manually moved the slider
  
  00:14:678 (1) - Change the angle of this slider to go into 00:15:975 (1) better? no change
  
  00:15:975 (1) - Really close to the top of the page. Not sure if this is ok.
  
  00:36:083 (2,1) - I wouldn't put 2 straight sliders in a row like this. Curve them a little bit to make it seem more dynamic if you don't mind.
  
  00:44:516 (1,2) - Same thing happens here. It's probably just your mapping style, but consider changing it in a few other parts of the map. yeahh, is kinda just my style

• SMIC's Standard

  
  01:51:651 (1,2) - A slider might go better here. no change
  
  02:10:462 (1) - Put this closer to the middle maybe moved it a little bit closer, but i don't want people to get confused
  
  Other than those two things, this map seems fine.

• Hard

  
  I didn't see anything wrong with this map

• RLC's Hyper

  
  01:19:543 (1,1) - In this break, you could place down some circles to the snares. Just a suggestion. no change
  
  02:10:137 (1) - Rotate this slider 90 degrees counterclockwise, and readjust if you want it to go straight into the spinner. Fixed

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hai! From Modding Queue

Another

• 00:20:191 (2) - Blanket no
  00:26:353 (8) - NC no
  00:29:921 (6) - Blanket no
  01:25:705 (4) - ^no
  02:03:002 (4) - ^no

Keada wrote:

Hey There o/ M4M from your modding queue

• 
  

  Another

1. 00:18:245 (3) - wouldnt it fit with a slider here instead? since I hear piano music on 00:18:407 - and it seems like youve been mapping piano all along here
2. 00:20:516 (1,2) - what about spacing them a bit more? (Im not that big a fan of kicksliders overlapping eachother D:)Didnt fit the music that much either tbh, and it looks better imo http://puu.sh/lBwhw/b127bb4fd4.jpg
3. 00:22:137 (4,5,1) - same ^
4. 00:24:732 (5,6,7,8) - this stream didnt fit the music imo
5. 00:27:326 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
6. 00:33:002 (1,2,3) - these are kind of fine, it fits more here
7. 00:34:462 (3) - space it a bit more from the slider, cause the bass in the bg is a strong note, and it fits better
8. 00:54:894 (1) - space a bit more? since strong note again
9. 01:11:353 - what about adding a note before each 1/8 slider so the player knows which part of the song it is later (1/6 part that is)
   so here 01:11:353 - 01:12:651 - 01:13:948 - 01:15:245 - That would make this part 01:18:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - easier to read imo
10. 01:23:353 - put a note here? fits the music really much
11. 01:50:678 (5) - make this a bigger jump and NC because the big white tick, and strong note here
12. 01:51:164 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - what about making this part like http://puu.sh/lBwLH/fb2fb96d37.jpg ? since the strong note is on 01:51:651 (5,1) - and it wouldve been a cool pattern imo

nty

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

#M4M

basic

1. Trun off Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks #your map dosent use story board

Normal

1. 00:12:083 (1) - This spinner was start here 00:11:110 i'm going to leave the spinner like how it is
2. 00:19:867 (3) - 01:17:597 (2) - 02:01:705 (2) - 02:02:353 (3) - 02:04:948 (1) - 02:07:543 (1,2) - add Whistle slider end fixed
3. 01:16:624 (4) -02:09:813 (4) - add Whistle fixed

Hard

1. 00:11:191 ~ 00:12:732 - add spinner fixed

sorry i cant find more ;w;

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

#M4M

basic

1. Trun off Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks #your map dosent use story board

Normal

1. 00:12:083 (1) - This spinner was start here 00:11:110
2. 00:19:867 (3) - 01:17:597 (2) - 02:01:705 (2) - 02:02:353 (3) - 02:04:948 (1) - 02:07:543 (1,2) - add Whistle slider end
3. 01:16:624 (4) -02:09:813 (4) - add Whistle

Hard

1. 00:11:191 ~ 00:12:732 - add spinner

sorry i cant find more ;w;

Mango Juice wrote:

:?

Another

02:10:137 - you missed strong as fuck beat here what is wrong with you ._.
00:10:786 (1) - what is this even
00:43:543 - You missed strong beat(s)
01:10:137 (1) - , 01:11:435 (1) - , 01:12:732 (1) - , 01:14:029 (1) - , 01:15:326 (1) - song is 1/4, and you placed unrankable 1/8 hold sliders there pls
The distance snap is not constant, fix it

Hard

00:23:435 (5,1) - Don't stack those together, it's confusing
00:33:002 (2) - useless note
01:32:516 (1,2,3,4,1) - looks ugly, it can stay, but you know, not everyone will like that
01:57:164 (1,1) - one spinner goes here jesus christ x)

Normal

00:12:083 (1) - this goes to 00:11:759 -
01:05:272 (1,1) - those 2 are kinda out of the playfield http://puu.sh/lGCYx/311debe6d1.jpg
01:20:191 (2,1) - too close http://puu.sh/lGD10/6ceab2b972.jpg

That's all, I am not touching guest diffs, sorry >.>

ouranhshc wrote:

Mango Juice wrote:

:?

Another

02:10:137 - you missed strong as fuck beat here what is wrong with you ._.
00:10:786 (1) - what is this even
00:43:543 - You missed strong beat(s)
01:10:137 (1) - , 01:11:435 (1) - , 01:12:732 (1) - , 01:14:029 (1) - , 01:15:326 (1) - song is 1/4, and you placed unrankable 1/8 hold sliders there pls
The distance snap is not constant, fix it

Hard

00:23:435 (5,1) - Don't stack those together, it's confusing
00:33:002 (2) - useless note
01:32:516 (1,2,3,4,1) - looks ugly, it can stay, but you know, not everyone will like that
01:57:164 (1,1) - one spinner goes here jesus christ x)

Normal

00:12:083 (1) - this goes to 00:11:759 -
01:05:272 (1,1) - those 2 are kinda out of the playfield http://puu.sh/lGCYx/311debe6d1.jpg
01:20:191 (2,1) - too close http://puu.sh/lGD10/6ceab2b972.jpg

That's all, I am not touching guest diffs, sorry >.>

sorry not changing anything, thanks for the mod though

Mango Juice wrote:

sorry not changing anything, thanks for the mod though

appleeaterx wrote:

Ah... seeing your name again is so cool w
from my queue!

NO KD!

:idea: General

* Clean!

Metadata

* Title: Anisakis -somatic mutation type''Forza''-
* Artist: 朱雀
* Romanized Artist: Suzaku
* Source: REFLEC BEAT or beatmania IIDX (consider using IIDX for consistency with the already ranked mapsets and moving REFLEC BEAT to the tags?)
* Tags: add '15 DJ TROOPERS'
* Link(s): http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/reflecbeat ... html#disc2
http://www.konami.jp/bemani/bm2dx/bm2dx ... sakis.html

Hmm.. it seems only the space after 'type' is different. Got this from the OST on Konami's website and on IIDX site. Ask someone else as well just to be sure?

Hard

* OD6.5? Could use 7 or 7.5 imo, you should note that the Another difficulty is OD9.

Kinda expected spread issues, but it works surprisingly well o-o

Actually, this is a really nice mapset and I can't any major issues, good job all of you.

Call me back!

Kvantuma Rozo wrote:

HE is back

ouranhshc wrote:

sorry, no changes

HappyRocket88 wrote:

ouranhshc wrote:

sorry, no changes

I'm sorry but saying "sorry no changes" regarding Mango Juice and Exa's mods isn't considered a good behaviour from a mapper. Did you at least take a look of them? Having it bubble doesn't mean it's ready to be ranked. Please, try to reply to those two mods properly and address the issues they pointed out. Will mod this later too.

Mango Juice wrote:

:?

Another

02:10:137 - you missed strong as fuck beat here what is wrong with you ._. I'm mapping to the piano, and the piano doesn't make a sound there
00:10:786 (1) - what is this even goes with the sound that is made
00:43:543 - You missed strong beat(s) what beat?
01:10:137 (1) - , 01:11:435 (1) - , 01:12:732 (1) - , 01:14:029 (1) - , 01:15:326 (1) - song is 1/4, and you placed unrankable 1/8 hold sliders there pls
The distance snap is not constant, fix it
1/8th sliders are not unrankable

Hard

00:23:435 (5,1) - Don't stack those together, it's confusing sorry no change
00:33:002 (2) - useless note no change
01:32:516 (1,2,3,4,1) - looks ugly, it can stay, but you know, not everyone will like that
01:57:164 (1,1) - one spinner goes here jesus christ x) no, one spinner for each streams

Normal

00:12:083 (1) - this goes to 00:11:759 - no change
01:05:272 (1,1) - those 2 are kinda out of the playfield http://puu.sh/lGCYx/311debe6d1.jpg
01:20:191 (2,1) - too close http://puu.sh/lGD10/6ceab2b972.jpg

thats not outside the playfield. All because the slider goes outside the grid, doesn't mean that its offscreen
That's all, I am not touching guest diffs, sorry >.>

Exa wrote:

Sorry to barge in but:

00:25:948 - There is no noticeable sound here! (I am pretty sure there is no sound at all).
00:27:407 - Nor here.
00:27:570 - Nor here.
00:29:516 - Nor here and nor in many other cases where you've placed 1/4 notes just to end up with streams or more interesting rhythms.
nty. In addtion, what map doesn't do this.
Then there are other stuff in the Another difficulty that really make me sad to see a bubble here:

00:31:705 (2) - Started this slider on a red tick and ended up not representing the huge beat on the white tick with an impactful enough object! nty
00:32:191 (4) - You've had the same result with other rhythms as well.nty
00:43:380 (1) - What stoped you from making stream instead of a 1/1 slider which STARTS and ENDS on red ticks, not mapping the white tick in the middle. "I just want to give the player a break" ~ Then use 1/4 sliders or even reverse ones but for the sake of consistency please map these sounds.nty
01:03:975 (3,4,5) - Instead of denying movement from the player on these beats (which is something you didn't do before) why not just stack 4 with 2 and 5 with one, resulting is clicking the same sounds on the same place with the same spacing. It makes sense and also creates a nice reverse movement-providing pattern. nty
01:11:326 - This is way too prominent to not be mapped! And given that this is supposed to be the hardest diff in the set, it's best to represent every sound possible that couldn't be considered "overmapping" just like in this case! nty
01:12:624 - Same goes for this.nty
01:13:921 - And this and so on and so forth. Using notes here should be the best way to go about it since they are simpler than sliders (which you use afterwards) and require less time and effort to be completed. nty
01:10:029 -Please don't deny what I suggested above by stating "I didn't do anything here so I didn't do anything on the other ones!". There is no beat here provided by the song you are mapping but there is on the other instances!
01:34:462 (1,1,1) - I don't get why you lower spacing on clearly stronger beats. "Changing direction too suddenly so I am bringing the sound out anyway" is not an excuse since I (and probably 99% of the people who play std) find sharp edges easier to play. Sadly due to the mapping area restricting me I can not think of an alternative. Also if you really decide to change it, try gradually increasing the spacing by about 1.1 of every pattern of 4 notes (your squares in this case) since the song's tension also gradually increases. nty
01:51:651 (9,1) - And you've done completely nothing to bring out the hardcore bass kicks with these notes but instead you kept steady, low spacing. It would be half-ok if the spacing was overall large but I see why you can't do that. At any rate, you should figure a way to bring out these sounds as they objectively stand out the most. once again, why should i emphasize a note with larger spacing for something i'm not following in the music.
01:52:624 (3,4) - Could be a much prettier blanket. its fine
01:53:272 (5,7,9,1) - Same goes for these as well. I would really like to know the reason you went with such minimal spacing on so hard bass kicks. The music might overall be calm in the section but looking at things from a more narrow perspective, these beats slowly add up the the heat and should in no case be left misrepresented!
02:02:597 - No sound/beat here! I know I am repeating myself but please give a closer listen at your 1/4 beats using 25% speed rate!

That's all I had to say since this mapset (map in particular) caught my attention. Although I didn't check the rest difficulties due to the short time frame that I have in my disposal for modding, I would like to let you know that almost everything stated here is meant to be taken in consideration for the rest of the mapset!

Have a nice day why should I adjust patterns to emphasize sounds that I'm not mapping.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

ouranhshc wrote:

sorry, no changes

I'm sorry but saying "sorry no changes" regarding Mango Juice and Exa's mods isn't considered a good behaviour from a mapper. Did you at least take a look of them? Having it bubble doesn't mean it's ready to be ranked. Please, try to reply to those two mods properly and address the issues they pointed out. Will mod this later too.