-Sekai- wrote:

Mod requested~ :3

first silence this spinner 01:23:164 (1) - in all diffs =w= sounds better

[Easy]
look here 00:00:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - why there is no hitsounds on them it's making me confusing for some reason o.o
and 00:06:758 (1) - here remove the new combo
00:13:321 (4) - clap at the end~
00:27:383 (1) - clap at the end
00:44:727 (4) - new combo
00:45:196 (1) - remove the new combo
01:02:071 (3) - (nazi)
01:19:883 (3) - this out of mapping grips fix it

[Normal]
same as i said in easy =.="
00:04:414 (4) - new combo
00:20:821 (4) - 2 grip right~
00:29:258 (6) - ^
00:34:883 (3) - (nazi)
00:40:039 (5) - ^
00:48:008 (5) - finish at the ending~

[Hard]
00:07:227 (8) - new combo
00:07:696 (1) - remove the new combo
00:08:164 (4) - New combo
00:18:477 (6) - ^
00:18:946 (1) - remove the new combo
00:19:414 (4) - new combo

[TuT]
00:12:383 (1) - remove the new combo
00:13:086 (10) - new combo
00:13:321 (1) - remove the new combo
00:29:961 (4) - new combo
00:30:430 (2) - ^

lol nice map o.o
good luck with it ~

FIX~Thank~(￣▽￣")

你好~
本人的中文有点怪~ 请见谅

Easy
00:05:821 (4,5) - (4)的声音量调成25%， (5)的声量调成20%??
00:33:946 (1) - 这slider来回的tick的grid是 x:376 y:280…
00:36:758 (3) - ^ x:376 y:104
00:41:446 (1) - 左一格 x:120 y:256
00:52:696 (1) - 让KIAI Time有点小空间？
00:55:977 (4) - 为什么New Combo不要从着开始呢？

Normal
00:52:696 (1) - 同EASY的说法
01:20:821 (4) - 加个New Combo?

Hard
00:54:336 (5) - 结尾加个finish
00:52:696 (1) - 同EASY的说法
00:56:446 (4) - 加个New Combo?
01:09:336 (1) - 结尾加个finish

TUT
00:30:899 (4) - 加个New Combo?
00:33:242 (6) - ^
00:34:883 (4) - ^
00:41:680 (5) - ^
00:52:696 (1) - 同EASY的说法~
00:52:930 (2) - 删掉这circle?
00:56:680 (2) - ^

----
我只能给点小意见~ 因为图作得很不错
加油~!!~!!!!
送颗小星星~！

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~
本人的中文有点怪~ 请见谅

Easy
00:05:821 (4,5) - (4)的声音量调成25%， (5)的声量调成20%??
00:33:946 (1) - 这slider来回的tick的grid是 x:376 y:280…
00:36:758 (3) - ^ x:376 y:104
00:41:446 (1) - 左一格 x:120 y:256
00:52:696 (1) - 让KIAI Time有点小空间？
00:55:977 (4) - 为什么New Combo不要从着开始呢？

Normal
00:52:696 (1) - 同EASY的说法
01:20:821 (4) - 加个New Combo?

Hard
00:54:336 (5) - 结尾加个finish
00:52:696 (1) - 同EASY的说法
00:56:446 (4) - 加个New Combo?
01:09:336 (1) - 结尾加个finish

TUT
00:30:899 (4) - 加个New Combo?
00:33:242 (6) - ^
00:34:883 (4) - ^
00:41:680 (5) - ^
00:52:696 (1) - 同EASY的说法~
00:52:930 (2) - 删掉这circle?
00:56:680 (2) - ^

----
我只能给点小意见~ 因为图作得很不错
加油~!!~!!!!
送颗小星星~！

谢谢啦!!☆⌒(*＾-゜)v
Thank you for you mod~~~~耶耶耶~

I tried to mod this, but this map seemed right to me >w<
Only suggestion:
[Hard]
00:31:602 (4) - move the end of slider a little bit, maybe like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135299
^I just think it looks better that way.
Oh, don't forget to adjusted your spacing.

燐<333333 Star for sure

Don't kds this post please.

gina91189 wrote:

I tried to mod this, but this map seemed right to me >w<
Only suggestion:
[Hard]
00:31:602 (4) - move the end of slider a little bit, maybe like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135299
^I just think it looks better that way.
Oh, don't forget to adjusted your spacing.

燐<333333 Star for sure

Don't kds this post please.

I change it
really Thank for you help <(＿　＿)>
and very Thank for you star!"o((>ω< ))o"

[General]
letterbox during breaks記得拿掉

[Easy]
00:07:696 (1) - 用finish來開始我覺得會比較好
00:55:039 (2,3,4,1) - 正方形有些歪了!

[Normal]
00:07:461 (3) - 同Easy 我認為finish比較好一些

[Hard]
AR就跟我之前說的一樣 我建議6
00:08:633 (2,3,4) - 之間的間距有些微妙的變化 看你要不要修改吧:)
00:46:133 (4,5,1) - ^

[TuT]
作的不錯阿 不過AR太高了點((對我來說是太高了一些:((

[General]

音乐有带感，图做的很不错 只是建议哦


[Easy]


00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:10:508 (5) - End point add finish.
00:47:071 (5) - Start point add finish.
00:54:102 (1) - End point add finish.
01:09:571 (1) - Start point add finish.
01:11:446 (1) - ^ (后面加了finish 怎么不一起加呢 听起来更舒服 只是建议)


[Normal]

OD+1
00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:08:164 (1) - ^
00:10:977 (5) - ^
01:09:571 (1) - ^


[Hard]

00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:10:977 (5) - ^
00:19:414 (4) - add NC.
00:20:821 (1) - Remove NC.
00:22:227 (2) - add NC.


[TuT]

00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:10:977 (1) - ^

基本没问题 加油Ranked^^

中文不好 见谅~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[General]

音乐有带感，图做的很不错 只是建议哦


[Easy]


00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:10:508 (5) - End point add finish.
00:47:071 (5) - Start point add finish.
00:54:102 (1) - End point add finish.
01:09:571 (1) - Start point add finish.
01:11:446 (1) - ^ (后面加了finish 怎么不一起加呢 听起来更舒服 只是建议)


[Normal]

OD+1
00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:08:164 (1) - ^
00:10:977 (5) - ^
01:09:571 (1) - ^


[Hard]

00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:10:977 (5) - ^
00:19:414 (4) - add NC.
00:20:821 (1) - Remove NC.
00:22:227 (2) - add NC.


[TuT]

00:00:196 (1) - add finish.
00:10:977 (1) - ^

基本没问题 加油Ranked^^

中文不好 见谅~

OK~Thank you ~

Easy:

General: You need more new combos, it's an easy :\. Set new combos on the white big tick.

00:02:071 (3) - New Combo
00:05:821 (4) - ^
00:17:071 (3) - ^
00:26:446 (4) - ^
00:30:196 (1) - Fix with this: http://puu.sh/4HMH
00:32:071 (3) - New combo and Copy->Past previous [00:29:727 (4) and 00:30:196 (1) ] and Flip Horizontally, but put first the slider and then the circle without new combo.
00:39:571 (4) - New combo
00:41:446 (1) - 1 Grid down? x: 128 y:264
00:43:321 (3) - New Combo
00:44:727 (1) - No new Combo
00:45:196 (5) - New combo
00:47:071 (4) - New combo
00:50:821 (3) - New Combo and fix the slider with this? http://puu.sh/4HOa
01:02:071 (3) - New combo
01:15:196 (2) - ^
01:17:071 (4) - ^
01:18:477 (1) - No new combo
01:18:946 (2) - Here new combo

Normal:

General: The map is very good yeah, I give you only suggestion about comboing.
You'll decide if you want to follow them

00:09:571 (3) - New combo
00:13:321 (3) - ^
00:13:321 (3) - ^
00:17:071 (4) - ^
00:20:821 (4) - ^
00:24:571 (5) - ^
00:28:321 (5) - ^
00:32:071 (3) - ^
00:39:571 (4) - ^
00:50:821 (3) - ^


Hard:

00:06:758 (3) - Add a finish?
00:16:836 - Add a circle?
00:21:992 - ^

Good map

TuT:

00:18:477 (8) - No clap imho, finishes and claps together aren't very good with the sound.
00:36:524 (2) - Suggestion: move it at x:144 y:256?
00:36:992 (2) - Again Suggestion: move it at x:0 y:256?

Good maps, good luck ~

General

--Perhaps end the kiai time at 00:52:696 or somewhere else that shortens the kiai time; it's a little long as it stands right now

TuT

--AR +1

00:21:758 (6) - perhaps you could end this slider at 00:21:992 and add a note at 00:22:110 to follow drums.
00:34:883 (4) - new combo?
01:23:164 (1) - silence spinner. or at least delete the finish, cuz it really doesn't make much sense at least imo.

Hard

--AR +1?
--HP and OD is a little low too imo

01:23:164 (1) - silence spinner.

Normal

--HP and OD +1?

00:50:821 (3) - unstack? i some reason want to put this under where combo 1 starts.
01:23:164 (1) - silence spinner.

Easy

00:22:696 (3) - new combo?
00:23:633 (1) - remove combo?
01:23:164 (1) - silence spinner.

Nice map! :3

baka 尼桑塞高

傲娇什么的._.

Easy的no.1会是我的什么的...
我怎么会是来骗kds的呢

Random mod

[General]

不把最后一个spinner调到静音吗

[NM]
HP+1
OD+1

[Hard]
00:22:227 (2,3,4) - 摆成紧贴的三角？
00:29:024 (x) - add circle?

[TuT]
这note size对我来说当真微小._.
没啥其他的._.


效率太高了你._.

Megurine Luka wrote:

baka 尼桑塞高

傲娇什么的._.

Easy的no.1会是我的什么的...
我怎么会是来骗kds的呢

[General]

不把最后一个spinner调到静音吗

[NM]
HP+1
OD+1

[Hard]
00:22:227 (2,3,4) - 摆成紧贴的三角？
00:29:024 (x) - add circle?

[TuT]
这note size对我来说当真微小._.
没啥其他的._.


效率太高了你._.

拿着这个KD，来送颗星星【slapX100】
谢啦~\(≧▽≦)/~

我们俩太心有灵犀了

XD。我刚想告诉你我直接把星丢给你了._.

果然这就是默契。

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [zsr123's Taiko].osu

for tutuhaha's req

00:03:946 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - 不建議亂數排列
00:37:696 - 速度變化太大 建議X1.2左右就好了
01:22:696 (383) - 突然的減速... 修改一下吧!!!
其他部分看起來都蠻OK的

哦哈哈 我喜欢的动画 !!

很棒啊 找不到啥问题 快快 rank 吧！！

hello.....
another solid map xD...so i'll just apply suggestion here

Easy:
00:56:446 (1) - (nazi) left 1 grid
01:11:446 (1,2) - (rythm nazi xD) add reverse in (1), remove reverse in (2) the vocals support it...

normal:
can't suggest anything here......

hard:
can't suggest anything here

insane:
00:22:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's just me or...this part seems not fit with these...maybe change them into long slider or spinner?

ah...the pattern is pretty solid xD...i can't suggest anything here, since some of my suggestion will end up messing the pattern xD
and, no kudosu . . .

Heya

[General]
Provide a better version of the video. You can ask me if you're interested.

[Easy]
Too many New Combos don't make a difficult easier or more readable.
00:32:071 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:36:758 (1) - ^.
00:39:571 (1) - ^.
00:43:321 (1) - ^.
00:47:071 (1) - ^.
01:21:758 (1) - ^.

[TuT]
Everybody knows "TuT" difficulty is an Insane one, but specify it in the information page. Like putting the name of each difficulty, and if it doens't state the difficulty between the name, you can post it next to Just to avoid nazi ones.

Good job, is this a ending for Ao no Exorcist? This makes me wanna see it :3

Index-San wrote:

hello.....
another solid map xD...so i'll just apply suggestion here

Easy:
00:56:446 (1) - (nazi) left 1 grid
01:11:446 (1,2) - (rythm nazi xD) add reverse in (1), remove reverse in (2) the vocals support it...

normal:
can't suggest anything here......

hard:
can't suggest anything here

insane:
00:22:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's just me or...this part seems not fit with these...maybe change them into long slider or spinner?

ah...the pattern is pretty solid xD...i can't suggest anything here, since some of my suggestion will end up messing the pattern xD
and, no kudosu . . .

、、、、、、、I don‘t see the no KD....and thank!!!!!!!!!!!

Mok wrote:

Heya

[General]
Provide a better version of the video. You can ask me if you're interested.

[Easy]
Too many New Combos don't make a difficult easier or more readable.
00:32:071 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:36:758 (1) - ^.
00:39:571 (1) - ^.
00:43:321 (1) - ^.
00:47:071 (1) - ^.
01:21:758 (1) - ^.

[TuT]
Everybody knows "TuT" difficulty is an Insane one, but specify it in the information page. Like putting the name of each difficulty, and if it doens't state the difficulty between the name, you can post it next to Just to avoid nazi ones.

Good job, is this a ending for Ao no Exorcist? This makes me wanna see it :3

///One modder say I need to many NC so
Thank~

spboxer3 wrote:

for tutuhaha's req

00:03:946 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - 不建議亂數排列
00:37:696 - 速度變化太大 建議X1.2左右就好了 1.35x
01:22:696 (383) - 突然的減速... 修改一下吧!!! fixed
其他部分看起來都蠻OK的

谢谢

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [zsr123's Taiko].osu

FIX↑↑↑！|(·_·) |·_·) |_·) |·) | )
short你妹妹的凸

General:

-There's too much Kiai o.o perhaps remove some of it?

Easy:

01:11:446 (1) - Add finish on start

Normal:

Fine

Hard:

00:29:258 (1,2) - Switch new combos
00:37:930 (1) - NC
00:39:102 (1) - Remove NC

zsr123's Taiko: Fine

Insane:

-CS 4?

01:10:977 (1) - Remove NC
01:11:446 (3) - Add NC
01:12:383 (1) - Remove NC

Nice map~

General:
I recommend you remove the first two kiai and keep the third kiai. It looks so ugly to see kiai in half of the map.

Easy:
Seems okay. So many NCs though. Maybe raise HP or OD +1?

Normal:
01:07:696 (1) - Add finish on slider start? I think you forgot this one.

Hard:
Eh maybe OD+1?

Insane:
Nothing really.

Eh Solid mapset. No kds.

Have a star.

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
I recommend you remove the first two kiai and keep the third kiai. It looks so ugly to see kiai in half of the map.

Easy:
Seems okay. So many NCs though. Maybe raise HP or OD +1?

Normal:
01:07:696 (1) - Add finish on slider start? I think you forgot this one.

Hard:
Eh maybe OD+1?

Insane:
Nothing really.

Eh Solid mapset. No kds.

Have a star.

very Thank you <(＿　＿)>

[zsr123's Taiko]
00:36:055 (149) - feels better as katu
00:36:289 (150) - and then this don

00:42:735 - don here
00:44:375 (193) - katu instead
00:50:235 - don here

Wow, your maps are getting very better zsr :3

Just try to use kkd more, and keep more k d k d patterns,
because parts like 00:52:696 and forward made my hand want to hit katu, but there is don..

Still good job =w=

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[zsr123's Taiko]
00:36:055 (149) - feels better as katu k
00:36:289 (150) - and then this don k

00:42:735 - don here k
00:44:375 (193) - katu instead k
00:50:235 - don here k

Wow, your maps are getting very better zsr :3

Just try to use kkd more, and keep more k d k d patterns,
because parts like 00:52:696 and forward made my hand want to hit katu, but there is don..

Still good job =w=

thank you

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [zsr123's Taiko].osu

FIX
Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.

看在你-5 KDS的份上再给你俩KDS STAR还有我回学校了来MOD一下这个图
嗯就这样

Taiko mod as requested.

00:03:946 - D:
00:07:696 - k---K d....
00:25:508 - d d k, you can find that the melody repeats as 2 beats before so putting it k k k would be odd.
00:29:258 - d


Very good for me EXCEPT that stream. Listen carefully and you will only find the k-like drum sound on the red tick only. So follow the music and you should make the stream in a regular manner, especially like 4 in a group. Here you may consider a ddkdddkd... or a spinner.

I agree with ozzy in the sense that we need more k in the 1/2 patterns in the kiai time to show the high melody in kiai than in non-kiai part.

And in general, kiai is far toooooo long and not suitable to be ranked. Start kiai at 00:52:696 or 01:00:196. Also the 1.35x in taiko is highly recommended to be started there because I don't see the climax elements from 0:36 to 0:52 so putting a 1.35x there is inappropiate. D:

6.5/10

General

• offset = 175

Easy

• 00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
  00:13:321 (4) - 去掉最后一个圈上的clap，这里不适合
  00:33:946 (1) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish

Normal

• 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
  00:07:461 (3) - new combo
  00:34:883 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish

Hard

• HP Drain Rate, Overall Diffculty + 3，AR + 1
  00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
  00:35:586 (4) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
  00:45:196 - 不加个circle么少女
  01:01:367 - 不加个circle么少女
  01:03:242 - 不加个circle么少女

Insane

• 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
  说实话这难度感觉排列有点乱，花样有点单一，不过这样也没啥问题

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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

Weiren wrote:

General

• offset = 175

Easy

• 00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
  00:13:321 (4) - 去掉最后一个圈上的clap，这里不适合
  00:33:946 (1) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish

Normal

• 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
  00:07:461 (3) - new combo
  00:34:883 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish

Hard

• HP Drain Rate, Overall Diffculty + 3，AR + 1
  00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
  00:35:586 (4) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
  00:45:196 - 不加个circle么少女
  01:01:367 - 不加个circle么少女
  01:03:242 - 不加个circle么少女

Insane

• 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
  说实话这难度感觉排列有点乱，花样有点单一，不过这样也没啥问题

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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

同学你那个off还是太快了OTL....我改成了off190.....够了
谢谢mod~阿里嘎多~

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested.

00:03:946 - D:
00:07:696 - k---K d....
00:25:508 - d d k, you can find that the melody repeats as 2 beats before so putting it k k k would be odd.
00:29:258 - d


Very good for me EXCEPT that stream. Listen carefully and you will only find the k-like drum sound on the red tick only. So follow the music and you should make the stream in a regular manner, especially like 4 in a group. Here you may consider a ddkdddkd... or a spinner.

I agree with ozzy in the sense that we need more k in the 1/2 patterns in the kiai time to show the high melody in kiai than in non-kiai part.

And in general, kiai is far toooooo long and not suitable to be ranked. Start kiai at 00:52:696 or 01:00:196. Also the 1.35x in taiko is highly recommended to be started there because I don't see the climax elements from 0:36 to 0:52 so putting a 1.35x there is inappropiate. D:

6.5/10

thanks for modding

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [zsr123's Taiko].osu

done!
Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.

Taiko-
00:08:627 - You have lots of spaces like this. Fill them in with stuff like kkd or ddk or even ddd. It sounds nice without the random pauses.
00:10:502 - ^
00:21:986 - to 00:22:455 - maybe either make it kdkdk or kkkkk.
00:23:158 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - This whole section is too easy when there's lots of room to put some more notes.
00:30:658 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - ^

Other than that, its preety good. I like the chorus. But before that, its not as good.

Backfire wrote:

Taiko-
00:08:627 - You have lots of spaces like this. Fill them in with stuff like kkd or ddk or even ddd. It sounds nice without the random pauses.
00:10:502 - ^
00:21:986 - to 00:22:455 - maybe either make it kdkdk or kkkkk.
00:23:158 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - This whole section is too easy when there's lots of room to put some more notes.
00:30:658 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - ^

Other than that, its preety good. I like the chorus. But before that, its not as good.

thanks for modding

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [zsr123's Taiko].osu

All difficulties:
- Could use some whistles, unless you really feel that they don't fit.

No notable issues otherwise. This is very solid.

Insane:

-That dark purple combo color blends with the BG on my monitor. Can you please make that color a tad lighter?

00:27:143 (1,2) - This blanket could be done better. Use (1)'s approach circle when adjust (2); this way you'll get a much better arc.

But really, I love this map. Not much I can point out that isn't just nitpicking, aside from that one combo color that I seriously can't see well. Good job! I'll probably mod the rest some other time, and will star this whenever I get some more kudosu.

Hi~

General
Awesome song *_*
I think you could start Kiai at 00:37:455 - if you really wanted to o.o?
For tags you could put the main characters' name~
Just an idea... maybe remove every second finish during Kiai? It makes it sound more effective..

Insane
00:17:885 (6) - delete
01:24:096 - end spinner here with vocal

Hard
Really easy.. OD+1
00:22:690 (4) - add clap
01:03:471 (4) - move down 3 grids to make a pretty square :3

Normal
Fine

LOL cant find anything ;_;
Good luck~

Random Question, are you a beginner mapper?

Folder:
All clean here.

General:
Your kiai time is realllllllllllly long. I know the entire part fits but its over 50% of the song is kiai, So I suggest you shorten it maybe

Easy:
00:17:065 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:23:627 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:33:940 (1) - turn on gridsnap 4 and move this to the left a little bit so that the slider tick is centered at least a little?
01:20:815 (1,2,3,4,1) - move notes 4 and 1 (the last note 1) to the left 1 grid point so your 1,2,3,4 pattern becomes symmetrically balanced.

Normal:
00:13:315 (3) - move this to the left 1 grid point so it becomes centered on the y-axis much more evenly?
00:49:643 (2,1) - im not exactly sure if a Normal player can read this or not but I'm not a normal player so I dunno ! I somewhat suggest you change this.

Hard:
00:33:940 (1) - grab the 2nd slider point for this slider and move it to the right 1 grid point to it becomes more symmetrical.
00:37:924 (1) - new combo? I only think so because it starts after the kiai.
01:02:065 (1,2,3,4) - this square shape it looks like you were trying to form is a bit mis-shapened. Try to reshape it to more square like features?

zsr123's taiko:
Note: DON and/or KAT = the big don/kat notes.
00:14:252 (63,64,65) - don don kat?
00:16:596 (73) - DON?
00:18:940 (82) - kat?
00:33:940 (136) - DON?
01:22:690 (386) - KAT?

Insane:
00:25:268 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:26:674 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:29:018 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:31:361 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:35:346 (1) - remove new combo here?
basically consider removing any new combo here that is in the pattern I listed because this would be a long list of the same stuff.

And well that is it!
Very very nice mapset you have here.
Star!