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Kyonko Hizara
:)
Faust
Nice ass.
evilblade_old
star
HakuNoKaemi
[Normal]
00:01:402 (4) - Offtime Slider, Make it start 1/2 after(00:01:560) and end in the same point
00:03:928 (4) - ^
00:06:612 (3) - Offtime Slider, make it start 1/2 after and fix the notes after

^ you used pretty many offtime slider, fix them before making me recheck...

[Cream's Hard]
00:11:823 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - cbetter if you place them in this mode ...
-Seemingly Random placing... well, you would find all this random placement if i continue...
Better if you redo the graphic ( won't find rhythmn mod with this ... )


[Lunatic]
Seems no others unwanted error for me ( but remember i can't mod Insane or difficultier diffs in a good manner ), but could say i t could be graphically better in some part

[Extra Stage]
01:11:507 (4) - Make it go up like http://puu.sh/2YqN and not make underlap a previous note of a triangle...
02:18:928 (1) - Flip Vertically
much as this, other that could be better in some parts (that parts did hit me more >.<)

Well, at least the accept the suggestions in the Hard and in the Normal...

i liked some pattern in the Insane diffs though
Topic Starter
brikel

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
00:01:402 (4) - Offtime Slider, Make it start 1/2 after(00:01:560) and end in the same point
00:03:928 (4) - ^
00:06:612 (3) - Offtime Slider, make it start 1/2 after and fix the notes after

^ you used pretty many offtime slider, fix them before making me recheck...

[Cream's Hard]
00:11:823 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - cbetter if you place them in this mode ...
-Seemingly Random placing... well, you would find all this random placement if i continue...
Better if you redo the graphic ( won't find rhythmn mod with this ... )


[Lunatic]
Seems no others unwanted error for me ( but remember i can't mod Insane or difficultier diffs in a good manner ), but could say i t could be graphically better in some part

[Extra Stage]
01:11:507 (4) - Make it go up like http://puu.sh/2YqN and not make underlap a previous note of a triangle...
02:18:928 (1) - Flip Vertically
much as this, other that could be better in some parts (that parts did hit me more >.<)

Well, at least the accept the suggestions in the Hard and in the Normal...

i liked some pattern in the Insane diffs though
I get easy guest diff so fixing will be next week
C R E A M
형 내 맵 난이도 이름 C R E A M's Hard 로 바꿔줘요 ㅋ
C R E A M
Topic Starter
brikel

C R E A M wrote:

조금 수정함.
업로드 완료

맵이 갈수록 신기해짐 ㅋ
Muya
:) :) :)
Beige
Good Luck!! :) :) :)
Kurowolfe
Hi there~
Erm, long overdue taiko modding request from Taiko Beatmap Rescue Team...

[Wmf's Taiko]
Wee, fun map to play with! But that is quite expected from wmfchris, anyway :)
At first, I wanted to comment about the SV being 1.5, but it's easier to read now that if it's 1.4, so no comment there.

I do have some suggestions, but as the name implies, you can use them if you want to =3

0'14''033 [86] - k -> d
0'14''191 [87] - d -> k
0'25''086 [162] - k -> d
0'25''244 [163] - d -> k
0'45''296 [87] - d -> k
1'44''665 [350] - d -> k
2'10''244 [514] - k -> K
2'38''191 [727] - d -> k
3'26''033 [1082] - d -> k
3'53''349 [171] - k -> d

Star~
And all the best! :)
wmfchris
YuZuKi Kenny
:)
KRZY
minyeob
일단 별 박아놓을게요
Vampiriella
:)
YaMaO04
:D :) :D



:D
Mez
The extra difficultly is great. maybe too many breaks tho.

\\\\\\\\\\\
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Offset is a bit late. I get 130ms for the offset.

Also is "Lunetic" spelled wrong on purpose? I didn't read the posts. Thought I'd ask. If it was an accident, it's spelled "Lunatic" for future reference.

Can't say I like the song much, but I really do like the mapping of Extra Stage. =3

In terms of placement, I can't really complain about anything I saw. Just needs an offset fix IMO then it's ready for bubble/rank.
wmfchris

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Offset is a bit late. I get 130ms for the offset.

Also is "Lunetic" spelled wrong on purpose? I didn't read the posts. Thought I'd ask. If it was an accident, it's spelled "Lunatic" for future reference.

Can't say I like the song much, but I really do like the mapping of Extra Stage. =3

In terms of placement, I can't really complain about anything I saw. Just needs an offset fix IMO then it's ready for bubble/rank.
Lunetic by Lunet <3
Topic Starter
brikel

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Offset is a bit late. I get 130ms for the offset.

Also is "Lunetic" spelled wrong on purpose? I didn't read the posts. Thought I'd ask. If it was an accident, it's spelled "Lunatic" for future reference.

Can't say I like the song much, but I really do like the mapping of Extra Stage. =3

In terms of placement, I can't really complain about anything I saw. Just needs an offset fix IMO then it's ready for bubble/rank.
Timing all changed ;)
Lunetic by Lunet <3. It's a funny diff name :)
arien666
[General]
Add tag 'KRZY' in every diffs :3

[KR*cough*ZY's Easy]
:3

[Normal]
:3

[C R E A M's Hard]
02:55:393 (7) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make spacing same?

[Lunet-ic]
01:20:498 (8) - Covered by slider track orz
03:04:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking confusing but whatever :3
03:21:130 (8,9) - These notes are closer than other things by 1 grid orz

[Extra Stage]
00:10:708 (3) - Try to stack on 00:10:235 (1)'s end point.

[Wmf's Taiko]
Actually, I think you can add more Kiai times on other places orz
00:17:814 (112) - Delete finish
01:44:972 - Move this Kiai start into 01:46:235
02:08:656 - Move this Kiai end into 02:06:445
04:12:919 (1) - I wonder why this LOOOOONG spinner exists ;___; Can you map with circles this part ;_;?



Yeah, Since it's some fine set I guess
But I won't bubble since I can't decide well about approval thing ;___;
Topic Starter
brikel

arien666 wrote:

[General]
Add tag 'KRZY' in every diffs :3 Oobs, that's my mistake ;_;

[KR*cough*ZY's Easy]
:3

[Normal]
:3

[C R E A M's Hard]
02:55:393 (7) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make spacing same? OK

[Lunet-ic]
01:20:498 (8) - Covered by slider track orz
03:04:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking confusing but whatever :3
03:21:130 (8,9) - These notes are closer than other things by 1 grid orz

[Extra Stage]
00:10:708 (3) - Try to stack on 00:10:235 (1)'s end point. OK

[Wmf's Taiko]
Actually, I think you can add more Kiai times on other places orz
00:17:814 (112) - Delete finish
01:44:972 - Move this Kiai start into 01:46:235
02:08:656 - Move this Kiai end into 02:06:445
04:12:919 (1) - I wonder why this LOOOOONG spinner exists ;___; Can you map with circles this part ;_;?



Yeah, Since it's some fine set I guess
But I won't bubble since I can't decide well about approval thing ;___;
wmfchris
>w<

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "fixed", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Download: Demetori - Shoujo Satori ~ Innumerable Eyes (brikel) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
ziin
i don't know what I'm talking about
nice map. <3 demetori
Topic Starter
brikel

wmfchris wrote:

>w<

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "fixed", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
Sorry :(
I'm poor at english, so I cannot send a massage naturally :o
I listen carefully your saying :D
Raging Bull

ziin wrote:

i don't know what I'm talking about
nice map. <3 demetori

Weeeeelll. You said something about their custom hit circle and slider border, hehehe.

I love this song. Good luck! *Throws imaginary star*
ziin
oops, on a second play through I found something:

[extra]
03:19:235 (2,3) - these are 1/3 snap

[cream's hard]
03:19:077 (3) - 1/3

and I am a little disappointed you put breaks in the best part of the song.
ziin

Raging Bull wrote:

Weeeeelll. You said something about their custom hit circle and slider border, hehehe.
I downloaded wrong song, using 2 computers, massive chaos.

edit:oh god I need to stop posting, sorry for double post.
Faust
Would be nice if the guitar solo were mapped.............

Some words here so that this message will be long enough.
Topic Starter
brikel

ziin wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

Weeeeelll. You said something about their custom hit circle and slider border, hehehe.
I downloaded wrong song, using 2 computers, massive chaos.

edit:oh god I need to stop posting, sorry for double post.
haha don't worry about that things :P
Topic Starter
brikel

ziin wrote:

oops, on a second play through I found something:

[extra]
03:19:235 (2,3) - these are 1/3 snap Ok

[cream's hard]
03:19:077 (3) - 1/3 same above thing

and I am a little disappointed you put breaks in the best part of the song.
Thank you for your modding :D
arien666
I just hope that this bubble would be kept :3
Whatever orz



1st bubble for approval.

ps. If there's wrong about posting+bubbling, orz
ps2. Self-denied kudosu :3
Topic Starter
brikel

arien666 wrote:

I just hope that this bubble would be kept :3
Whatever orz



1st bubble for approval.

ps. If there's wrong about posting+bubbling, orz
ps2. Self-denied kudosu :3
OH Thank you arien :D:D:D:D
DrQwerty
Dude, You ruined the BM on this last update, was better before. I am speaking about the taiko mode.
Komeiji Yuki
Satori :3

Expect ranked
hy1hy1hy
小五ロリ
good
Garven
[General]
Tick rate 2 sounds much better on this song.
Though if you do change to tick rate 2, be careful with your custom tick sounds.
Demetori - Satori ~ 3rd eyes.jpg
You may want to consider a different background (or just use the Lunet one for all diffs). I suspect this would fall into the more inappropriate-display-of-buttocks-category of wallpaper.
Add cream to tags of all difficulties

[KRZY]
00:46:235 (1) - Feels kind of soon after a spinner considering the rhythm use.
Then again, you use that rhythm for pretty much all post-spinner notes. Ah well.
A lot of the sliders could look a lot better with smoother curves etc., if you want to try and address that.

[Normal]
00:03:130 (2) - Try to position this so it isn't as covered up by 00:01:393 (4) -
Some of your sliders are really bad looking, such as 00:03:919 (4) - . If you could try and take some time to make things more presentable, it would be much appreciated.
00:55:708 (1) - extend to 00:58:235 - ?
01:13:393 (4) - I'm sure you could position this so the overlap isn't there easily enough
01:26:024 (1) - extend to 01:28:551 - ?
02:06:445 (1) - Extend to 02:08:972 - ? Apply to other spinners in this and your other difficulties that do this if you agree

[C R E A M]
00:21:603 - This gap in rhythm was awkward.
00:30:130 (5,6) - I'm not feeling this anti-jump thing here considering the fast paced nature of the mapping.
00:55:077 (1) - This feels better starting at 00:55:708 -
Hit sounding is very random feeling and incredibly inconsistent. I'm mainly looking at the custom clap usage and the seemingly random normal whistles. I recommend you look though this and find something you can stick with.
01:24:761 (1) - Starting this at 01:26:024 - and ending it at 01:28:551 - feels better
02:30:445 (8) - Try this rhythm

02:36:761 (1) - Extend to 02:39:287 -
02:45:603 (1) - Not feeling this spinner much. Also kinda blah ending the last section with a spinner and starting the new one with a spinner.
03:09:603 (1) - This slider is rather uncharacteristic of your general slider patterns.
This difficulty was kind of bland in the rhythmic department as it felt more of a 1/1/1/1 general rhythm for very large portions of the piece. There's a lot of music here that you can map to besides just the beat of the metronome. See if you can improve it to make for a better play experience!

[Taiko]
03:37:393 - Rekiai is really weird in taiko since you can see the orange flash quickly. I'd just keep it on straight through.

[Lunetic]
00:24:130 (6,1) - I didn't find this spacing to read very well at all.
00:30:603 - Strange having a rhythm gap here but you map to that guitar all along here 00:31:235 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
I would have also liked bigger spacing between each of the triples, but oh well.
00:44:972 (8,1) - Another of those awkward rhythmic gaps. Listen to the bass drum wailing away while you wait for that stacked stream.
I'm finding myself having problems following your choice of rhythm for this map. It doesn't flow naturally, strange gaps in rhythm and weird spacing between phrases leave me rather confused and kind of frustrated. You may want to get new look on this difficulty and see what you can improve. I'm just going to post a huge wall for this otherwise, and I'm sure you can improve upon this in your own way easily enough.

[Extra Stage]
00:24:919 (8) - I found this to play better stacked with the 00:23:656 (3) - earlier
00:43:708 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This spacing is really unintuitive and doesn't read well at all.
02:04:551 (3,4) - This overlap is just baad
02:05:182 (5,6,7) - If you're doing a triplet rhythm, -please- keep them equidistant.
03:16:551 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - All these rhythms like this need to be in 1/3 snap. The drums are dragging slightly and the guitar is what you can hear the easiest. Follow that. There are several of these in the map, and I messed up on every one of them since I couldn't figure out what you were trying to follow.

I think this set really needs some more modding before it hits back into the bubble arena. I'm mainly looking at the Cream/Lunet diffs, though Extra Stage felt like it really could use some better gameplay-related modding. I can't really play it well, but it didn't feel very well-constructed with some of the spacing.
lepidopodus

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
03:37:393 - Rekiai is really weird in taiko since you can see the orange flash quickly. I'd just keep it on straight through.
1 ms of gap between kiai-off and kiai-on would fix this. No one gonna notice that flash, only fountain appears.
Mallang

Mallang wrote:

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