Hi there~
Sorry for the late mod, so here you go:
[SB]
0'18''087 - If you're following the soft rapping sounds, you'll need to add another 'SB\OP effect' at this point.
0'18''559 - I think it'll look better if you move 'Lyric\Title' and 'Lyric\Patche' slowly downwards maybe until the middle of the screen before fading out.
0'22''339 - The candle light effect on 'SB\Patchouli' is a great idea, but it's hardly noticable during gameplay. Maybe move the initial position of the second 'SB\Patchouli' just a bit to the right, and make it a bit darker, for a more realistic effect?
1'03''441 - Spelling error for 'Lyric\donw'. It's 'down' not 'donw'.
1'17''614 -> 1'18''795 - The lyrics in here are not shown correctly. To fix this:
+ 1'17''614 - Please extend the Scale, Fade and Rotation timelines for 'Lyric\kowa' to end at 1'18''323, not 1'18''087.
+ 1'18''087 - Push the timelines for 'Lyric\re' here so that they start at 1'18''323 and end at 1'18''559.
+ 1'18''559 - Start the timelines for 'Lyric\so' here, and end them at 1'19''032, together with 'Lyric\u'
(I wish I could just give you the codes, but my osu! software has problems saving the changes I'd made.)
1'34''150 - End the Fade and Move timelines for 'Lyric\11' at 1'42''181, not 1'41''709.
2'04''386 - Spelling error for 'Lyric\15'. It's 'Friday', not 'Fryday'.
3'04''858 - Are the lack of any lyrics from here until the end intentional?
3'19''032 - I think the 'SB\White Effect' would look better if position close to Patchouli.
[General]
Add 'knowledge' in the tags.
[Easy]
0'25''173 - *nazi* For this slider, move the endpoint 2 grids left, level 3, for a smoother flow.
1'19''032 - Try using a finish here.
Nice diff!
[Normal]
Can't find anything major.
[Patche]
3'38''992 - Extend this slider so that it ends at 3'39''347.
3'46''551 - Same case here, extend so that it ends at 3'46''906.
[Insane]
0'45''725 - Add another stacked note here.
Love the custom hitsounds, though this image of an electric oven keeps on popping in my head. So a star for you~
All the best!
Sorry for the late mod, so here you go:
[SB]
0'18''087 - If you're following the soft rapping sounds, you'll need to add another 'SB\OP effect' at this point.
0'18''559 - I think it'll look better if you move 'Lyric\Title' and 'Lyric\Patche' slowly downwards maybe until the middle of the screen before fading out.
0'22''339 - The candle light effect on 'SB\Patchouli' is a great idea, but it's hardly noticable during gameplay. Maybe move the initial position of the second 'SB\Patchouli' just a bit to the right, and make it a bit darker, for a more realistic effect?
1'03''441 - Spelling error for 'Lyric\donw'. It's 'down' not 'donw'.
1'17''614 -> 1'18''795 - The lyrics in here are not shown correctly. To fix this:
+ 1'17''614 - Please extend the Scale, Fade and Rotation timelines for 'Lyric\kowa' to end at 1'18''323, not 1'18''087.
+ 1'18''087 - Push the timelines for 'Lyric\re' here so that they start at 1'18''323 and end at 1'18''559.
+ 1'18''559 - Start the timelines for 'Lyric\so' here, and end them at 1'19''032, together with 'Lyric\u'
(I wish I could just give you the codes, but my osu! software has problems saving the changes I'd made.)
1'34''150 - End the Fade and Move timelines for 'Lyric\11' at 1'42''181, not 1'41''709.
2'04''386 - Spelling error for 'Lyric\15'. It's 'Friday', not 'Fryday'.
3'04''858 - Are the lack of any lyrics from here until the end intentional?
3'19''032 - I think the 'SB\White Effect' would look better if position close to Patchouli.
[General]
Add 'knowledge' in the tags.
[Easy]
0'25''173 - *nazi* For this slider, move the endpoint 2 grids left, level 3, for a smoother flow.
1'19''032 - Try using a finish here.
Nice diff!
[Normal]
Can't find anything major.
[Patche]
3'38''992 - Extend this slider so that it ends at 3'39''347.
3'46''551 - Same case here, extend so that it ends at 3'46''906.
[Insane]
0'45''725 - Add another stacked note here.
Love the custom hitsounds, though this image of an electric oven keeps on popping in my head. So a star for you~
All the best!