minyeob wrote:

일단 별 찍어놓습니다. 이러지 않으면 종종 까먹어서 ㅜ

kds7769 wrote:

mp3파일이 음질이 확연히 깨지더군요 ;ㅅ;
그래서 인터넷에서 고음질 다운받아 192로 컨버팅하고
시작부분이 지금 mp3파일이랑 다르길래
정확히 컷팅했습니다 =ㅅ=
뭐 뒷부분은 손을 댈 필요가 없으니... 1분 30초로 늘어난건 신경 안쓰셔도 됨당 'ㅅ'

http://puu.sh/3R4J

송폴더에서 mp3 이걸로 바꾸고 풀업로드 해주세요~=w=/

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

General
* You need an approachcircle.png to avoid using some weird approachcircle.png (e.g. heart approachcircle)
* Can you find the better MP3? The MP3 quality is bad<<have change

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Easy
00:14:288 (5) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (47% Nazi)
00:22:798 (1) - Remove whistle
00:24:500 (3) - ^

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Normal
00:11:734 (8,1) - No jumps/huge distance in normal diff please
00:22:798 (1) - The slider is touch the HP Bar (47% Nazi)
00:28:543 (5) - This slider is having a hidden sliderbody and too much repeating slider. Please change it, or the beginner/average will go confusing

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Hard
00:05:777 (5) - Spacing error
00:14:288 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (please fix everything)
00:28:543 (9) - I'm pretty sure that the head slider is overlapped by hitburst

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Insane
00:28:543 (9) - New combo
01:02:585 (5,6,7) - The slider is touch the HP Bar (47% Nazi)

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that's all

cacipan wrote:

hi

[Insane]
00:56:628 (3) - Confused by changing the speed of the slider suddenly.
Do I somehow? (Displays speed in the storyboard, etc.)

minyeob wrote:

mp3 파일 바꾸시면서 offset이 약간 바뀐 것 같습니다
680내외로 설정하는게 좋을 것 같지만 신중하게 생각하세요 바꾸면 kiai 어쩌구도 다 바꿔야 하니까.... ㅜㅜ

그 외에 특별한 문제는 없네요 잘 만드셨어요

S o r d a wrote:

Done.
Add Tags sorda and s_o_r_d_a Please
Also maybe need this song Singer and character inTags

Magical Pokie wrote:

Easy:
到kiaitime以前都用soft。
00:02:373 (1) - 這個clap很亂。全clap把或者是全部不用clap
NC2的clap我很討厭
01:22:160 (1) - woca現在spinner流行這樣放綠線麼。。
normal
見附件


done

BakaHuang wrote:

sorry for my lazy mod
just suggestions

[Easy]
00:26:202(5)-silder换成其他更饱满点的节奏
for example:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:e2c89]432.png[/attachment:e2c89]

适当用些弯的silder..直的好难看哇<<谢谢建议~已修改~

[Normal]

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[attachment=0:e2c89]4322.png[/attachment:e2c89]

这是开头..我把(3)移到了中线上.（1,4）&（2,5）上下对称.这样修改了下排布..参考下好了~
00:14:713(5)-改成一条只折返1次的silder
<<谢谢建议~已修改~
其他难度没什么问题
一点点学会排版吧:)

abalee wrote:

Overall:
sorda的難度有1/4 circle應該是要比hard難一點，改一下難度設置讓你的hard星數少些(就是在選曲的時候你的排在sorda上面)。

insane:
00:02:373 (1) - 可以考慮將這個重疊在00:00:670 (1) - 結尾看起來整齊一點.
00:03:862 (6,1) - 個人認為jump不合適.
00:15:139 (4) - 這個結尾的地方往上一點讓spacing一致.
00:18:543 (1,2,3,4) - ，00:21:947 (9,10,11,1) - ，00:25:351 (4,5,6,7) - 我個人是是不太喜歡clap和finish和著用.
後面那一段的clap其實我是覺得不太合適，中間一段的clap就好聽得多了.

Zelos wrote:

Folder:
Clean here.

Easy:
00:28:330 (8) - move this up one so its not under the previous slider so much.

Normal:
Lower the HP Drain and the OD by 1?
nothing else wrong here.

Sorda's Hard:
Nothing wrong here.
Although its like borderline insane if you ask me.

Hard:
00:37:692 (6) - grab the 2nd slider point and move it to the right one so that the slider is symmetrical.

Insane:
Nothing wrong here either.

I would star if I could but yay disabled
So here is my support+.

kioukiou wrote:

Timing is too early, +15 ms to all offset.
Don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.
Other stuff are good.

• ●hitcircle.png不好看~ =_=（slap,仅为吐槽~只是觉得完全可以换可爱点的=。=）
  ●可以把没用的osb文件删掉，不强制
  ●sliderfollowcircle.png当前255*255，resize到256*256吧~
  ●Preview time没有统一！~（Easy和Normal是56363，其他的是56424。）
  ●spinner-circle.png好眼熟啊~ =A= （喂！） 嘛，只是觉得用在这个spin觉得稍亮了，用普通的转盘完全会比较好看~

• ●00:02:388 (1) - 你每2拍就用了次clap...有点吵呢=_= 建议只在长白线间的白线使用。
  ●00:06:643 (2) - New combo吧~ 前面那个slider太长啦。
  ●00:12:600 (4) - New combo.
  ●00:26:217 (5) - New combo.
  ●00:28:345 (8) - 遮挡难看了，建议放到7的左上侧。
  ●00:29:622 (1) - 在开头+Finish？
  ●00:33:026 (3) - New combo to consist the setting.
  ●00:40:685 (4) - ……^
  ●00:43:239 (2) - 把前面1的new combo挪到这个来。
  ●00:56:856 (1) - 在开头+Finish
  ●01:10:047 (1) - 第一个箭头处用finish
  ●01:12:175 (1) - 不要new combo.
  ●01:13:877 (3) - New combo.
  ●01:17:281 (2) - 把前面1的new combo挪到这个来~
  ●01:22:175 (1) - 开始点挪到01:22:388吧？

• ●00:05:792 (7) - New Combo.
  ●00:06:217 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●00:09:622 (5) - New Combo.
  ●00:32:600 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●00:33:026 (2) - New Combo.
  ●00:40:685 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●00:42:388 (1) - ^ Same
  ●00:43:239 (2) - New combo.
  ●00:54:303 (2,3,4) - 对normal来说，太难了。。（SLAP..我第一次玩的时候都点快了@_@
  ●00:56:856 (1) - 开头+finish
  ●00:59:834 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●01:00:260 (2) - New combo.
  ●01:03:239 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●01:03:664 (2) - New combo.
  ●And so on...懒了不全列了。。一般都是重音new combo。。也就是长白线。。抱歉=_= 可能看着头晕，虽然combo设置只是小问题但是我觉得还是蛮重要的。。下面的难度乃自己校正啦~
  ●01:10:047 (1) - 结尾+finish

• ●00:14:303 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里DS完全可以不变啊。。。
  ●00:56:856 (3) - 开头去whstle加finish
  ●01:06:217 (8) - 位置移到01:06:111打起来更舒服。或者干脆加个note在那里=。=
  ●01:10:473 (2) - 开头去whstle加finish

• ●00:12:600 (5) - New combo
  ●00:19:409 (2) - Move the new combo here to consist the combo setting.
  ●00:26:217 (2) - ^
  ●00:33:026 (2) - ^

• ●00:00:685 (1) - 难看了。。。做成弯的或者干脆放Spinner？
  ●00:06:005 (1) - 把new combo提到前面的8上。
  ●00:56:643 (3) - 结尾+finish
  ●01:10:473 (1) - Finish
  ●01:24:196 (1) - 一般来说，每个难度的结束点相同会比较好=。=
  ●喂喂。。后面变速后太鬼畜了啊。。T T

JoJo wrote:

Hi ww 我来帮忙啦 不过我是渣modder 见谅啦~

Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

• ●hitcircle.png不好看~ =_=（slap,仅为吐槽~只是觉得完全可以换可爱点的=。=）
  ●可以把没用的osb文件删掉，不强制
  ●sliderfollowcircle.png当前255*255，resize到256*256吧~
  ●Preview time没有统一！~（Easy和Normal是56363，其他的是56424。）
  ●spinner-circle.png好眼熟啊~ =A= （喂！） 嘛，只是觉得用在这个spin觉得稍亮了，用普通的转盘完全会比较好看~

[Easy]

• ●00:02:388 (1) - 你每2拍就用了次clap...有点吵呢=_= 建议只在长白线间的白线使用。
  ●00:06:643 (2) - New combo吧~ 前面那个slider太长啦。
  ●00:12:600 (4) - New combo.
  [color=#0080FF]●00:26:217 (5) - New combo.
  ●00:28:345 (8) - 遮挡难看了，建议放到7的左上侧。
  ●00:29:622 (1) - 在开头+Finish？
  ●00:33:026 (3) - New combo to consist the setting.
  ●00:40:685 (4) - ……^
  ●00:43:239 (2) - 把前面1的new combo挪到这个来。
  ●00:56:856 (1) - 在开头+Finish
  ●01:10:047 (1) - 第一个箭头处用finish
  ●01:12:175 (1) - 不要new combo.
  ●01:13:877 (3) - New combo.
  ●01:17:281 (2) - 把前面1的new combo挪到这个来~[/color]
  ●01:22:175 (1) - 开始点挪到01:22:388吧？

[Normal]

• ●00:05:792 (7) - New Combo.
  ●00:06:217 (1) - Remove new combo.
  [color=#0080FF]●00:09:622 (5) - New Combo.
  ●00:32:600 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●00:33:026 (2) - New Combo.
  ●00:40:685 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●00:42:388 (1) - ^ Same
  ●00:43:239 (2) - New combo.
  ●00:54:303 (2,3,4) - 对normal来说，太难了。。（SLAP..我第一次玩的时候都点快了@_@
  ●00:56:856 (1) - 开头+finish[/color]
  ●00:59:834 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●01:00:260 (2) - New combo.
  ●01:03:239 (1) - Remove new combo.
  ●01:03:664 (2) - New combo.
  ●And so on...懒了不全列了。。一般都是重音new combo。。也就是长白线。。抱歉=_= 可能看着头晕，虽然combo设置只是小问题但是我觉得还是蛮重要的。。下面的难度乃自己校正啦~
  [color=#0080FF]●01:10:047 (1) - 结尾+finish

[/color]

[Hard]

• ●00:14:303 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里DS完全可以不变啊。。。
  [color=#0080FF]●00:56:856 (3) - 开头去whstle加finish[/color]
  ●01:06:217 (8) - 位置移到01:06:111打起来更舒服。或者干脆加个note在那里=。=
  [color=#0080FF]●01:10:473 (2) - 开头去whstle加finish

[/color]

[baka's Hard]

• ●00:12:600 (5) - New combo
  ●00:19:409 (2) - Move the new combo here to consist the combo setting.
  ●00:26:217 (2) - ^
  ●00:33:026 (2) - ^

●Nice job sorda ~ ww

[Insane]

• ●00:00:685 (1) - 难看了。。。做成弯的或者干脆放Spinner？
  ]●00:06:005 (1) - 把new combo提到前面的8上。
  ●00:56:643 (3) - 结尾+finish
  ●01:10:473 (1) - Finish[/color][/color]
  ●01:24:196 (1) - 一般来说，每个难度的结束点相同会比较好=。=
  ●喂喂。。后面变速后太鬼畜了啊。。T T

噗，我错了。。好多combo nazi TwT
嘛嘛~现在的新人都很给力啊ww Star'd~ 继续加油~

1. 00:02:388 (1) - Avoid making sliders with a lot of repetitions, they're a bit boring. Instead of (1-x-x-x-1), you could use (1-1)(2-2)(3), for example.

1. 00:28:558 (5) - I suggest making this slider 1/2 beat snap long instead of 1/4, and lowering the repetitions from 5 to 3 (yeah, it'll be 1/2 longer than the slider you have now).
2. 00:48:345 (4,5,6,7) - 4 consecutive stacks. I suggest spliting them into 2 - 2 or de-stack all.
3. 01:21:537 (2,3) - It's better that these notes aren't overlapped by (1). It's easy to solve if you flip (1) horizontally.

1. 00:14:303 (2,3,4,5,6) - You're using 0,6x distance here. It's a bit confusing since you used a ~0,9x gap between (1) and (2), so it's better to keep that 0,9x distance.

1. No problems with this one.

1. 00:00:685 (1) - Change it into a slider, as you did in Hard.
2. 00:09:303 (2) - I suggest removing it.
3. 00:10:579 (4) - Remove it. It doesn't really fit the music.
4. 00:11:430 (1) - ^
5. 00:29:515 (x) - Add a note.
6. 00:54:941 (x) - Add a note, it would help sightreading the following jumps.
7. 01:24:196 (1) - This spinner make this diff end in a different point as the other. Consider removing it, or adding another one to the other diffs (I'm not counting the guest diff).